finally i m able to comment on this ff .
awesome work loved it
it is so dam funny , :D
i was on floor imagning maan in knee length slip,...
& maan teasing geet was so cute
loved the way maan saved geet
thanx for the pm
love ARUSHI
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Welcome back dear 🤗Originally posted by: arushi_05
hey madhu
finally i m able to comment on this ff .
awesome work loved it
it is so dam funny , :D
i was on floor imagning maan in knee length slip,...
& maan teasing geet was so cute
loved the way maan saved geet
thanx for the pmlove ARUSHI
So good to see you...😃
Hi frnz...
So finally its all over...for a new beginning hopefully 😳
And thank U all for your support and for putting up with my "mood swings" 😛 😳 😳 😆 😆 😆
My FFs wont end and i will definitely start new ones once the current ones end...
This particular update , i would like to dedicate to our fav show...which is binding us all together...
I dont know if its worth...but this is all that i could do...
"Love you Maaneet...but wont miss U as you live in our hearts"
Here we go...
PART 8
Maan was working out in his gym.He didn't know why but he felt so miserable.May be its due to the rage that he,MSK,was suspended bcoz of a girl or his heated arguement with mom regarding his suspension or may be due to the fact that he wont be able to see her for the next 15 days... He stood under the shower trying to calm down his mind...
Yash could sense that a storm had just passed through Khurana mansion as soon as he entered.
Chitra: Yash! Hum jantey he ki ap Maan ko shabashi dene aye he
Yash:nhe mom,aisa nhe he.
Chitra: rehne do.Its all my fault. I shouldn't have let him study there when he doesn't want to..
Yash:no mom its not like that.Don't worry i will talk to him. Aisey to nhe chalega na!
Chitra: Yash,i know u very well.
Yash:mom..lekin..
Chitra: Maan apney kamre me he.Go and meet him.
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Maan was goin through some important files of KC's new project.Well his mind was wandering somewhere else.He wasn't able to concentrate.Yet he made a vain attempt to divert his mind from those weird thots.Frustrated he threw away his laptop which fell in front of Yash's feet.
Yash:woah! Watch out angry young man. Ghayal sher! But lion should get wounded by another lion not a deer!
Yash grinned foolishly as a ferocious Maan stared at him.
Maan: dekho Yash aj me bilkul bhi tumhare bakwaas ke mood me nhe hu. Isliye us Geet ka naam dobara lene ka sochna bhi mat. Ek to uske waja se suspend hua aur upar se mom..
Yash: lekin Maan mene to uska naam nhe liya.
Maan lukd startled.Now,he started blurting out letting others read MSK's mind! Great goin Maan!
Maan:ha to me keh rha tha ki tum..i mean..Just shut up Yash.. f*** off!
Yash: gaali dena hi he dost,to mujhe nhe us ladki ko do. Kya naam tha uska..haaa Geet. I know that girl. Bohat bhav khati he.
Maan: wat rubbish?
Yash:no Maan,u will feel better.I sware! Mene ek movie me dekha he.
Maan: Yash wat r u..
Yash: Maan just give it a try. Kuch achi wali gaali do usey ki wo zindagi bhar yaad rakhe
Maan: Really?
Yash: just go for it.
Yash picked Maan's mobile and gave it to him.
Yash:cal her Maan!
Maan dialled her number.
Geet was sleeping in her cute nite dress when a sudden call disturbed her. Sleepy,she attended the call.It took sometime to get her back to reality as he started scolding her right away.
Maan: Samaj kya rakha he tumne apne apko..U bi*** u shameless creature...
The color of her cute face changed from pink..to red in rage. Soon she was back in form.
Geet(shouting):oye..khote,kamine,ullu ke pathe,tharky,nalayak,besharam...suar,ghadhe...
Maan didn't even get a split of second to open his mouth as the HP xpress went on and on... Yash could almost hear her screaming on the phone.
Suddenly dadima entered his room.
Dadi: Maan bete
Maan cuts the call.
Dadi:kya baat he bete? Ap theek to he na?
Maan:ji dadima
Dadi: phir apke chehre ka rang aise utar kyu gaya jaise apney sarey sheher ke 'hari mirch' kha liye
Yash couldn't control his laughter but quickly became quiet as he was already so dead.
Dadi:hum ye kehne aye the ki Adi apko bohat der se call kar rhe the. Your phone seems to be engaged
Maan:some network problem.
At that moment his phone started ringing. He gulped as he saw Geet's numbr.
Dadi: make sure you talk to Adi. Gud nite
Maan/Yash: gud nite dadima.
After she left,
Maan cut the call.
Maan(sheepishly): dar gayi he. May be she wants to ask sorry!
Yash:ha..ha bilkul,uski majaal!
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The rest of the days were not very eventful for both Maan and Geet. Maan got too busy with work.Even Chitranjali was surprised by Maan's ability and authority. Things were all goin well,but not so good as the 'cease-fire' was on.
Maan was in KC discussing some important project details when dadima called him on phone.
Dadi: Maan kal ki date yaad he?
Maan:kal? Umm.. dadima 12th dec kyu?
Dadi: wah! Hum to dar hi gaye the bete,kayi apko yaad to nhe? Lekin har saal ki tarah iss saal bhi ap apne mom ka bday successfully bhul chukey he.
Maan shut his eyes tightly.
Maan:ha dadima..wo mujhe..dhyan tha..umm me to bas
Dadi:uffo Maan bahane banane nhe atey to rehne dijiye. Aur ha atey waqt koi acha sa gift leke ana.
Maan: ok dadima.
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GIP Noida,
Pinky: oye Geet chal na pizza hut jatey he
Geet:ati hu baba.Bas ek achi si kurti to dhund lu.
Pinky: uffo Geet adey ghantey se ghum rahe he ek bhi dress select nhe kiya. Jaldi karna
Geet: dekh rhe hu.Lekin yeha mere type ka koi cool design nhe mil rha na!
Pinky sighed.
Pinky: Geet, hum 'Haunted house' chaley?
Geet: tu decide kar pizza hut ya haunted house?
Pinky:pehle Pizza hut phir Haunted house!
Geet:ok
As Geet and Pinky move to Pizza Hut opposite to the shop, Maan reaches there to buy a gift for his mom.
Maan was busy shopping when Pinky spotted him.
Pinky: oye teri.. Geet DD!
Geet: DD? Arey wo dusht danav? Kaha?
Pinky:wo us lady's wear showroom me
Geet:dhat..tharky saala..lady's college me padega,shopping bhi lady's showroom me! Had he yaar!
Pinky: what would he buy from there?
Geet: full-slip!
Pinky and Geet hi-five giggling
Geet: chal darshan karke aye?
Pinky: no way Geet! Ye college nhe he
Geet:to? Tumhe kya lagta he college ke bahar me us Maan Singh Khurana se darti hu? Ye Geet Handa he,kabhi himat nhe harti!
Pinky:himat ke barey me pata karna he to abhi chalo mere sath 'Haunted house'
Geet: done!
By then Maan was leaving from the shop when he saw Geet.
Maan: Oh no! Now if she saw me with this saree,that would be the next hot topic in the college. Man! How girly? Its better i dont bump into her!
Maan walked away fastly but it seemed like they were following him.Finally he found a safe hideout ' The Haunted house'
He got in through the EXIT and hid himself.
The girls reached the ticket counter.
Pinky: tu yehi rukh. Me tickets leke ati hu.
Geet:ok
Thats when she heard two people talking,
A: Wats so special in this 'Haunted House'
B: Nothing! Its pitch dark inside.There is one volunteer
ghost with a scary mask.He will flash a tiny light with which u can move forward and another ghost will be chasing you from behind.
A:crazy!
Geet didn't hear a word after pitch dark!
Geet(self-thot): dark? Ab Pinky ko to nhe bata sakti na that i am scared of darkness! Babaji kya karu?Chalo yeha se bhag jati hu.
Meanwhile Maan was about to step out of the house when he saw her.
Maan:ye Geet abhi tak yehi he?
He hid back again. Geet went downstairs when she heard an announcement: Attention everyone,we request all the customers to evacuate immediately due to security reasons.The mall will be closed in another 5 minutes.
Geet asked a sales-boy: arey bhaiya koi problem he?
Sales-boy: bomb-threat.Dont stand here move out!
Geet(self-talk):ye Pinky kaha reh gayi? Phone karti hu. Par phone to mere wallet me he jo uskey paas he. Chalo khud chalke dekti hu.
When Geet went back to the entrance of Haunted house there was no one.
A lady,'why are u standing here?
Geet:meri friend Haunted house me he.
Lady:andar jakey bula lo. They cant hear the announcement.
The lady went away and Geet got in.The manager closed the Haunted house and soon the mall was sealed.
Maan was getting restless as the door wasn't opening from a long time.He kicked the door in anger.
Maan:lagta he bahar se lockd he. Let me go to the entrance & this place is so dark.huh! Is Geet ke chakar me kaha phas gaya!
'Aaa...'
Just then Maan heard a girl screaming at the other end of the room.
He moved towards that direction. The Haunted house is a narrow dark passage with two doors.The passage is a zig-zag one to get that eerie feeling. Maan tried to find a way with his phone but in the darkness it hit somewhere and fell away leaving him alone.
Again he heard the voice of a girl,' Koi he...anyone dere? Help me plzz'
Maan moved ahead.
Geet was in a state of frenzy.She had this strange phobia for darkness which she wont even prefer to disclose to her dad. But now,she felt nauseating..dead..all alone in the darkness.She was hell-scared and was sweating profusely.At a moment,when she felt she could no longer bear with this she saw a tall well-built figure moving in the darkness.
Geet ran to him quickly and hugged him tightly.
Maan didn't know wat divine force is driving him! He felt so complete as the girl hugged him.Being a 'Khurana' brand many times he had to face girls who are just crazy to touch him or to attract him. But this girl,whoever she is, is so pure,innocent scared as a lamb.
Maan:kya hua? Tum itni khabrayi(scared) hui kyu ho?
Geet(still hugging him):wo mujhe andhere se dar lagta he.
Though in dark she could feel him smiling to himself.
Geet: U see emm.. Mr.ghost,isme hasnewali koi baat to nhe he,samjhe ap!
Maan was surprised,'Mr.ghost' ye ladki bhi na!
Maan: emm.. Ms.??
Geet(self-thot): agar naam bata du to isey malum pad jayega(he will come to know) ki me, Geet Handa andhere(darkness) se darti hu! (to Maan) mera naam Chutki he.
Maan: oh! Ms.Chutki i think we should get out through that door.
Geet:u have the keys?
Maan:wat keys?
Geet: ha..that door is also locked.
'dammit!',Maan banged his hand on the wall.Due to his force a hidden skeleton suddenly opened and closed.Geet tripped on Maan due to sudden shock and fell on top of him.
Since the passage was narrow they couldn't even move and tried in vain several times to get up. In the attempt,Geet was moving to and fro on top of him.Maan squeezed her waist in excitement.He could feel her erect ni***** brushing against his broad chest.He didn't know why this felt so special. Her tender body,her voice it all felt so familiar yet special that he couldn't resist himself.Same was with Geet.His intoxicating masculine smell was driving her crazy and for the first time in her life,she felt meek that too in front of a guy,some ghost guy! May be their genes were working overtime, the XXs and XYs to create the X effect!
Geet clutched the opened end of his shirt as she felt his hardness.Their breaths became faster and faster... It was a moment completely out of their control...the darkness, their weird positions and above all the strong attraction that they felt for each other was breaking all the limits. Geet tilted her head slightly near his lips. Maan dipped his fingers in the dense forest of her golden brown hair and took her lips inside him..the heat was on..and the strawberry flavour of her lips was driving him crazy.He pressed her more to himself and kept on nibbling her lips.
Geet couldn't just resist this seduction and she gave in herself to his will kissing him back.His hand roamed wildly around her back ignoring her nails digging into his arms.In between he stopped for a fraction of second for breath,Geet kissed him back ferociously rubbing herself against his hardness arousing the beast in him.Soon his hands slid into her kurti feeling her bare skin making her moan.They were about to climax when his legs hit the narrow wall with a thud.
Geet(hugging): BOMB!!
Maan(blushing):wat..do u mean?
Geet realised wat she was doin and quickly got off him.Maan felt awkward.He tried to hold her in his embrace making her fall on his chest.
Geet:leave me U ghost,otherwise both of us will become real ghosts!
Maan was now sure,this girl has lost it!
Maan:wat?
Geet:dekhiye,hume bahar nikalna chahiye kyuki..yeha bomb he!
Maan:aur tum ab bata rhe ho?
Geet:me to tabse isiliye madad(help) ke liye chilla rhe the lekin ap..i mean...
Maan:okk..now lets get out of this bloody place.
Geet walked behind him holding his hand tightly.
Geet: don't u have the key? After all u work here,he na Mr.ghost!
Maan(irritated): dekho chutki, i don't have keys! I don't work here aur sabse important i am not a ghost! I am..
Geet:okk who ever u are,find a way out!
He could feel that the girl just stomped turning away.Such an adamant girl! He gritted his teeth and held her by hand.He pinned her to the wall,'ab jab tak hum bahar nhe jayenge ek aur laphz(word) nhe bologi,samjhi tum?
Geet nodded.
Maan kicked the door and it opened in no time. Meanwhile everything was restored in the mall within a few minutes as the call was a fake one! The volunteer was all dressed up in the ghost costume when he heard a loud noise
Maaneet:aaa...
The ghost ran towards them.He was surprised as the two people in front of him were not scared of his mask but each other.
Geet: Maan! Tum?
Maan: tum? (smirking) chutki?
Geet lukd away.
Ghost: hey guys! How did u get in?
Maan and Geet couldn't react as it was too hard for them to believe that they actually spent time with each other.
Geet: don't u dare tell anyone about this,huh!
As she walked away angrily, Maan seductively touched his lips with a faint smile leaving behind a confused ghost!
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