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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nosi

y this sepretion boss

exaactly

y this kolaveri bosss😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update..,...
waiting for the next...,..
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for the delay. do comment or i will not update any more. i will finish this up.

Part 57:

i love you too. just blv me. you are my life. i will come back to get you. to be with you . dont blv what ppl tell you i will come back i love you.
look geet itne andhere k baad subah hori hai. a new beginning we will have a new beginning too. just keep my geet save for me. promise me you will keep yourself safe promise me you will wait for me. promise me
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She could very well remember the last parting dialogue. She just sat there dumbfounded. Everyone was busy preparing for the last ritual of Maan. Last week they had received the news that the plane in which he was traveling to come back home to surprise geet had crashed. No one survived as it was a hilly area. Even the remains could not be found. The only things found were personal items of his luggage . Initially they had hope that maybe he survived.but their last hope died too when they found a broken wrist watch near some remains of a body. Geet hadn't accepted his death and initially they hadn't forced her as they somewhere themselves were hoping for geet to be true.but yesterday's eveidence was enugh for them to open their eyes.. so today they were all gathered to bless his soul for the last time. Geet too was sitting there looking at maan's picture lost in her thoughts the words still echoing in her mind. And then savitri devi got up to put the mala on his photo and geet stirred for the first time in the whole week. She pulled away the garland.

Who dare put this on his photo he is alive. She shouted while crying.

Geet putar baat sun ye bachpana chor ab sachai ko accept ker le maan tujhe chor k bohat door ja chukka hai

Nahi he is alive. She cried.he himself told me that night in dargah that he will come back. Everyone exchanged nervous glances so now she is hallucinating too it wasn't good for her. Dev tried next

Geet listen to me bro is gone he is no more . that night you must have imagined. He was dead long before that.

She slapped him hard. And fell down on her knees crying

he is alive.koi mere baaat sunta q nahi hai . vickey tum to blv karo mera geet was shouting now as she got up and ran towards vickey.she shook him but he stood there weeping nodding no

she fell in his feet crying and then her eyes fell on the luggage they had received from the aviation department.

All his luggage was there except the scarf that united them forst. Maan always kept it with him when he was away from geet. She broke into a smile and then a hysteric laugh. She was right her maan was alive and will come back.

Everyone was staring at her. She stood up and tried going near the photo again but got dizzy and fell.

3 Months later.

They were all gathered in the handa's mansion.

Rano started crying mujhe to samjh nahi ata akhir kab tak ye sab chale ga. Doc k khne pe hum sab ne geet k samne maan ki death ko discuss krna chor diya magar kab tak aisa chale ga. Geet kab tak khud ko aise hi dhoka daiti rahe gi. Kab tak maan ka intizar kare gi.wo kisi ko maan k kmre tak me jane nahi daiti. Sara sara din maan k room me bhaiti rhti hai uski cheezo se baat krti rhti hai

Everyone was worried about this but no body was voicing it out cuz of the critical situation geet was in. after that outburst in maan's last ritual she had gone into coma for a month. The doctors had strictly forbidden them to bring up the topic again till she comes out of her delusion herself. So they had stooped hanging the garland on his photo and stopped mentioning his death at all. They wd just nod in affirmative when she wd tell them about maan.

Geet's brother finally said.

I think we should get her married. She will get busy in her new life and will forget all this nonsense. I talked to the doctor too. He agreed with me and said that we should politely keep on pushing her for marriage.

Rano said. You are right magar kon kare ga geet se shadi. Uski halat daikhi hai wo pagal ho chuki hai. No body's gona come forward.

I am ready to marry her agar ap logo ko aitraz na ho. Dev finally spoke

Everyone looked up at him.

I had always liked her and we were best friends. I will take real good care of her.

Savitri devi got up and hugged him. Thankyous o much baite hum kab se ap se ye khan chhte they magar darte they k kahi app pressure me a ker shadi na kare. . to theek hai rano ab geet ko manae ki zimadari apki.

Kis cheez k liye manana. Geet cacme down.

Wo geet . rano said hum sab apki shadi ka soch re they. Dev k sath

Everyone got up ready for her out burst

I will get married on the 25th of this month. App log apni tayariya ker le.

They were all stunned.

Per us din to tumhari aur maan ki rano started saying but held back when saitri held her hand

Ha maan wanted to get married on that day our wedding anniversary. Again with all rituals. So yes I will get married to him on the same date. I will fulfill his dreams.i will do all he wanted me to do on our wedding day.

They all sighed in relief. Finally geet had come to term. And immediately started to discuss the arrangements.

You don't have to do arrangements. Maan arranged everything already. All bookings and stuff are done. You guys just have to arrange for your own clothes and convaince to reach the venue on time.

Everyone was so happy and celebrating that nobody noticed when vickey left the hall and went outside.

Vickey was sitting on the stairs

Geet came and sat next to him.

Congrats vickey said dully. Y r u out here you might catch cold. Go in there there is only 2 wks left before wedding you wd have to do stuff.

Geet smiled.

You are sad cuz I moved on and forgot your brother.vivkey looked up at her she was staring far away smiling

You are happy cuz I am finally coming out of my cazyness.

You are mad cuz I am insensitive enough to use maan' arrangements to marry someone else.

You are annoyed cuz I am using maan's dreams as a stepping stone to reach my dreams.

Vickey looked at her silently weeping.

I always knew you were wrong but somewhere I believed in you I hoped for your believe to come true. But today that hope broke too as even you had come to terms now. You are not wrong you picked the right choice. You are right I m sad that my final connection to bro has broken too. I m mad cuz I cdnt fulfill bro's dreams. He had so many plans I had to help him fulfill them but he never gave us the chance he left up before that.. I m anooyed cuz its dev bro and not maan bro who is maarying you. But all these emotions are very mild as comapared to the happiness I m feeling for you that you have moved on. Aaj bro bhi bohat khush hoge.

Geet laughed . bus itna hi jan pae ho tum aj tak mujhe?

Matlab

I will marry maan. I still firmly believe that he is alive. Bus bohat hogya. Now he has to come back. And he will come back. 25th ko sirf mere shadi hi nahi mere pyar ka imtehan bhi hoga.

Bhabhi?

Just promise me you weill do all things as maan had planned. Just imagine that he is away for some work and you have to carry on hi dreams. Plz is bar mera sath mat chorna. Promise me you will help me through this , you will wait with me for bro.

She put her hand forward.

Vickey thot for a while and shook her hand. I promise. Cuz I believe in you and your love. We will give this last chance but you have to promise me one thing too. If he doesnt come back you will marry dev bro and will start afresh.

I promise. But you will loose cuz maan will return.

I hope so too.

PRECAP:

Mehndi ceremony.

i m serious if i dnt get adequate comments i will stop writing.

Edited by ssch - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago





Okay ithni dair say update

Lekin Mujay Update Milgaya That great

Okay I never Thot Maan Ki U Wud Do Such Thing Maan

Why Did You Do This

Maan Is No More

Still Cant Belive It

I See Geet's Love For Maan

She Has Worsen Her Condition More Just For Her Love Maan

The Thing Which We Love To See Ya In U R writings Is



In Putting Up The Emotions ...

























Edited by Thabs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
please don't stop writing. Loved the update. so sad.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing update boss ji
but what the hell is she marrying dev?
i hope for a tulsi-mehir type milan of maaneet in ur ff yaar
remember when mehir was declared death tulsi was going to marry anupam but mihir reached the mandap some way
so i m hoping for such a track

loved the update
although it was a sad one but still it was written beautifully

and
i m serious if i dnt get adequate comments i will stop writing
ye kis type ki dhamki hai boss ji?
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!! Geet is determined to bring back her Maan, hope he will reach on time!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Thabs






Okay ithni dair say update

Lekin Mujay Update Milgaya That great

Okay I never Thot Maan Ki U Wud Do Such Thing Maan

Why Did You Do This

Maan Is No More

Still Cant Belive It

I See Geet's Love For Maan

She Has Worsen Her Condition More Just For Her Love Maan

The Thing Which We Love To See Ya In U R writings Is



In Putting Up The Emotions ...

























thanx buddy . your comment made my day.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ana56

wow amazing update boss ji
but what the hell is she marrying dev?
i hope for a tulsi-mehir type milan of maaneet in ur ff yaar
remember when mehir was declared death tulsi was going to marry anupam but mihir reached the mandap some way
so i m hoping for such a track

loved the update
although it was a sad one but still it was written beautifully

and
i m serious if i dnt get adequate comments i will stop writing
ye kis type ki dhamki hai boss ji?

yeah you reach this point jab aap extreme busy shedule me se time nikal ker update karo or koi acknowledge bhi na kare.
thanx for likin
and i have no idea about tulsi maheer never watched that show
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aminagatoen

please don't stop writing. Loved the update. so sad.

thanx🤗

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