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Posted: 13 years ago
#31


Fiza Api...
sryyy for spamming...😳
bt i had to...
VALLIYAH Api...
app yeha ress kar rahi hain...
n mere update ka kya???????hmm??????
pata hain main kabse wait kar rahi hoon apke update ka...
plzzz update...its ur turn na!!!!!!!
plzzz update API...

again sryyy Fizu Api...😳
bt i know u r my Api na!!!
so u wont mind...hain na!!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
awesome update API...
loved it lodsss...
"EID MUBARAK" once again...
u know api i was expecting another EID wala update like last EID mein apne kiya tha na waisa wala...
i sooo loved dat...
as it was first time i was reading abt MAYUR dat too on EID...
so i want another EID-UL-AZHA wala part...
awww...
my Mayank is sooo caring hain na!!!!!!
i loved him so much...
Samrat is nice as a devar bt i dont like dis Gunjan...*hmph*
i hope mere Mayank ki sari problems jald hi solve ho jaye...plzzz
i want my happy,loving MAYUR back...asap!!!!!
loved it lodsss...
beautiful update as alwaysss...
love u API lodsss...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

Hmm..hum mantay hain Nupur is waqt sab ko kafi bhooli bhali balky shayd Allah miya ki gay lag rahi hai, per kya apko nhi lgata us ki khamoshi us k ek mazboot insaan hony ki sab se bari daalil hai'.

Is waqt us k deemgh mein kya tha, woh ankareeb ap sab ko pata chaly ga'

Lol'emails'kay yaad dil diya apny'is kahani k shoro mein hum ny bhi nhi socha tha yeah is tarha se yaha asy aay gi

Sukriya..yaha aany ka..aur is ko pasand kerny ka..

Baray dino baad kisi ny hum se urdu mein baat ki acha laga

PS..apko yaad hai apbhi shayd kcuh likh rahin thi...aur kitna intezar keray gi...plss.update



Haan... yeh toh sach hain. Kabhi kabhi khamosh rehna parhta hai, kyunke uss waqt khamoshi he sab ki balai hain. Par haan hamesha khamosh rehna nuqsaan de ho sakta hain. Jahan bolna zaruri hain wahan Nupur ko bolna chahiye. Kyunke Gunjan toh phir bhi ghar k ek hissa hai, Nupur ko istmeaal bhi kar rahi hain, phir ghar k ek fard hain. Aise log bhi Nupur k zindagi main aa sakte hain, jho Gunjan ne aaj kiya uss say ziada nuqsaan koi aur Nupur ko de sakta hain. Khamoshi kabhi aapki sab say achcha dost ban sakti hain aur kabhi aap ki dushman. Bas itna pata ho k kab khamosh rehna hai aur kab bolna hai tab theek hain. Nahi toh log iss k fayda uthaa kar aapko nuqsaan de sakte hain. Gunjan say kahin ziada.

Haan par kahin na kahin Nupur ka yeh bhoolapan mujhe kaafi pasand hain. Yeh shayad us ka bhoolapan he hai jis k liye Nuput itni cute hai... Masoom hain. Aur Mayank us par fidaa hain... 😳

Haan.. pehle socha english main likkhti hoon.. par phir pata nahi kyun urdu main likh diya. Har roz english yah norwegian main likkhti hoon. Socha thora change hojaye.. :) Aur iss forum main koi aur hai bhi toh nahi jis say urdu main baat kar sakun. :)

Arrey matt yaad dilao... 🥱 Abhi agla updat k socha bhi nahin, aur agar ab uss thread main gaiy toh jhoote parhy ghe... 😆 Abhi kahin mera FF chupa hua hain, use wahin rehne dijiye. Kisi ko mil gaya na, toh kher nahi meri.. 😆 Aap mera choriye, aur apne FF update karein. 😳

-SilentPrincess-


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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
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BY GOD ye kya hogaya
ye gunjan tou wakei bahut bara tamsha khara kar di...
thanx GOD sam ne use daata- nehi tou had se bahutjaida bar gayi thi
how could she insult nupur????
it was too much re- i really hate gunjan here...
el prud for nupur-itna kuch hone ki baad bhi wo jis tarah se gunjan ko samjhya- it was just amazing.. hats off to her

hey ALLAH a\b tum gunjan ko thoda akal de do...
very nice update
weldone fiza
loved it loads
do update next part soon



Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: 18anila1

awesome update API...
i loved it...
i loved it lodsss...
i loved it to d coreee...By God!!!😳
after such a long time i was feeling sooo relieved reading dis part...🤗
finally ALLAH ka sukar hain ke apne sab thik kar diya...😆😳😆
sooo...Thank U...😳
i love dis MayUr more dan any other ff i hv evr read...😳
dey r sooo "Perfect"😍😍😍 mashALLAH!!!😳
i love dem lodsss...😳
n as u know i love Mayank in dis ff d mosttt...😍😍
he is d "Bestest Hubby" any one can evr get...😍
i love him sooo much...By God!!!
i wish!!! 😍 u know ri8😉😳😆
i sooo loved it...😳
specially d Muslim background of dis ff is my d most fav thing...
i loved it wen Mayank kissed her eyes n said dat line...😍😍😍
i was feeling sooo gr88888!!!!!!!!
it actually touched my heart...😍
i sooo love dem...😳
dis Mayank is such a nice person...😍😍😍
i sooo loved dat d way he gave her importance in his life n care for her n love her...its sooo wonderful...😍😳😍
HATS OFF TO U API...⭐️
for writing such characters n d concept too...👏👍🏼👏
i loved it to d coreee...😳
i evn cant describe my actual feeling for dis ff...sigh!!!.😍😍😍
i sooo love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Thank u sooo much API...🤗
m actually thanking u woh bhi purey "DIL SE"
for writing dis ff...🤗
May ALLAH alwaysss bless u API...😳
waiting eagerly for d next part...
n spcly for d "Honeymoon"...😍😳😍
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗




is ladki n khenko liye kuch baki rakha jo main bolu??
anila ne sab bol diya
so mere comment karne ki koi matalb he nehi hai
just wanna say mind blowing, super-duper, fantastic part
loved it to the core..

muahhh jani


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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: -Faria-




is ladki n khenko liye kuch baki rakha jo main bolu??
anila ne sab bol diya
so mere comment karne ki koi matalb he nehi hai
just wanna say mind blowing, super-duper, fantastic part
loved it to the core..

muahhh jani


teri tuuu
manhoos tu ny coment quote kiya
exams ki wajaha se maaf kiya hai sach mein warna tu gai thi
thnsk aloot dear
lov ya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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SIGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"WALKING WITH YOU"...😍😍😍

It is my most fav ff...as u know it very well...😳
its like a dream journey i had wid "WALKING WITH YOU"...😍❤️😍
it was a journey of MAYANK n NUPUR...
n it was a journey of US...wid dis MAYANK n NUPUR...😳
An "ARRANGE MARRIAGE" can't b better dan dis...😍😍😍
from d begining...to its ending...it was d best journey i had wid any ff...
so i was all in...for a serious crying SESSION...:'(
bt d last part didn't let me do sooo...😳
as it was sooo wonderful dat soothed my heart more dan anything...😍❤️😍
m really glad wid its ending at dis sweet moment...bt will missed it alwaysss...
STILL I WILL RMMBR DIS FF THROUGHOUT MY LIFE...sigh!!!

I LOVED IT...❤️
I LOVED IT...❤️❤️
I LOVED IT LODSSS...❤️❤️❤️
I LOVED IT TO D COREEE...😍❤️😍

Wht i loved d most in dis ff was d sweet n pure n adorable relationship of MAYANK n NUPUR... of..."MayUr"...😍
d way dey were wid each other...WALKING WITH EACH OTHER...is d best thing in dis ff...😍😳😍
as u know...I LOVE DIS MAYANK D MOST!!!!!!!!!!!!😍☺️😍
DIS MAYANK IS MY MOST FAV MAYANK FROM ANY OTHER FF I HV EVR READ...😍❤️😍
I SOOO WANT SOMEONE LIKE HIM...SIGH!!!😍😍😍
N DIS NUPUR...SHE IS ALSO D BEST...😳
I LOVED DIS MAYUR SOOO MUCH...❤️😳❤️

D way der story started...
Humey bilkul nhi pasand ke koi kese kisi se bina puche uski shadi tey kar dete hain...so i didn't like it at all...bt slowly jese Mayank made sure ke Nupur unhe janey...unki atleast photo hi dekh le...n jaise unhoney har baat par unki sehmati li...unka nazariya pucha...unhe IZZAT di...i dont think isse behtar koi apne shoohor ke liye wish kar sakte hain...HE IS D BEST...

n Nupur jaise unhoney itni dafa try kiya ke unki raza-mandi li jaye ya unko bhi samjha jaye...n e-mail chatting ke time jaise unhone apne parents ko izzat dene ko kaha Mayank se...phir unhone jis tarha shadi ke baad APNE GHAR ko sambhala...she actually can b an "IDOL"...as SHE IS ALSO D BEST...

In dis ff...we not only saw d most beautiful relationship of a hubby n wifey...bt also d BEAUTIFUL RELATIONSHIP of...SISTERS...BROTHER-IN-LAWs...MOTHER...MOTHER-IN-LAW n FATHER-IN-LAW TOO...

Dia api ka pyar n parwa Nupur ke liye n Nupur ka apni api ke liye...Adiraj jaise jija cum BHAI ka apni sali cum BEHEN ke liye...Samrat jaise DEWAAR ka apni BHABI ke liye...Samrat ka Mayank ke liye n Mayank ka Samrat ke liye...Mayank ka Nupur ke ammi n Dia Api ke liye...n Nupur ka apne SAAS-SASUR n apne DEWAR ke liye...n evn Gunjan ke liye bhi n last mein Gunjan ka unke n apne parivar ke liye...n MAYUR ka unke BETE...MUHAMMAD KE LIYE...SAB...EACH n EVERYONE n EVERYTHING WAS TOO PERFECT N NOT TOO FORGET TOO "REALISTIC"...

n mostly it was a learning experience also...😳
i got to know may things whc evn i dont know d meaning of my own religion...like wht is "ISTAYGARA"...well...i still dont know hw to do it...bt i now i know abt it...n why Walima is done...n many more things like dis...😳 n hw life cant be always a fairy tale...n we have to live in a reality...n we evn got to see...TWO DIFFERENT KIND OF MARRIAGES...1.ARRANGEED...whc with time became more dan a beautiful LOVE MARRIAGE...n 2.LOVE MARRIAGE...whc became a total mess for some reasons...or some misconceptions...

as i told u many times earlier dat i loved d Muslim background very much of dis ff...i always wamted to read something like dis...A proper Muslim Family...another thing is URDU language..pehle toh samjh ne mein thori si mushkil huyi humey...bt ab adat ho gayi hain...n khass karke unka ek dusre ko app bolna humey bhttt accha lagta hain...n iss ff ki aur ek khass baat hain ke iss ff ke har ek couple apne apne partners ki bht izzat n pyar karte hain n utna hi bishwas bhi karte hain...i think in every relationship dis is d most important thing...n i loved it...😍😍😍

Mayank ka woh pehla E-MAIL...uff!!! YA ALLAH!!!😍☺️😍
hum kabhi bhi nhi bhulenge...wen i saw his pic in dat part...
i was actually BLUSHING LIKE ANYTHING...☺️☺️☺️
i wish yaar mujhe bhi plzzz koi asa e-mail karne wala mil jata...BY GOD!!!
bt...sigh!!! ab Mayank toh sirf Nupur ka hi hain na..n upar se meri family itni strict bhi nhi hain ke humey e-mail se baat karna parein...😳😆
bt i sooo loved dos e-mail convo of MayUr...BY GOD!!!!!!
dos were d most memorable...lovable n ADORABLE MOMENTS of dis ff...😍😍😍
as long as i will b alive i will always cherish dis memories...😳
jese Mayank ne Nupur ko khud ko janne ka... Tasvir hi sahi par dekhne ka mauka diya n jis tarha unhone kuch bhi lene se mana kar diya...n har baat chahe woh dress ya unke room ki decoration ho har baat par jis tarha unki SEHMATI li...DAT WAS JST AWESOME...har ladki yehi toh chahti hain ke unhe koi samjhe...unki izzat karein...unka n unke family ka khayal rakhe...unhe pyar karein...unki raay le...unn par bharosa karein...so MAYANK of dis ff IS D BESTEST HUBBY EVERRR...BY GOD!!!!!!😍☺️😍
i wish sabko unke jesa hi koi miley...inshALLAH...AMEEN!!!😳

dis ff can be a best example of hw to CONVERT AN "ARRANGE MARRIAGE" INTO A "LOVE MARRIAGE"...

Nupur of dis ff is an IDEAL WOMAN...who can b a perfect daughter...daughter-in-law...sister...sister-in-law...a PERFECT WIFE...n even a perfect mom...i loved her too in dis ff very much...all d characters of dis ff were jst PERFECT YET TOO REALISTIC...

N d most important thing is dat i nvr NOTICED dat dey nvr Verbally Expressed dat dey both LOVE EACH OTHER...coz evn B4 marriage d way dey both felt for each other n d way dey used to express sooo much LOVE n PASSION for each other through der EYES...n evn der simple lines...like HAMARE JINDEGI KA HISSA BANNE KE LIYE...HAMARA SATH NIBHANE KE LIYE...HUM PAR BHAROSA KARNE KE LIYE APKA SHUKRIYAN...i think dis simple line hold sooo much dat der was no need to say "I LOVE U" for dem...n i think ke kisi ka kehna ke..."HAMARE ZINDEGI MEIN ANE KE LIYE APKA SHUKRIYAN" ya... "APKE BINA HUM APNI ZINDEGI KE BARE MEIN SOCH BHI NHI SAKTE" yeh sare batein 100bar "I LOVE U" bolne se jyada mayne rakhta hain...apka kisi ke zindegi mein hona agar unke liye shukarguzar ki baat hoon toh isse jyada kisi ko aur kya chahiye ke ap jiski zindegi mein hoon unke liye yeh KHUDA KI REHMAT se kam na hoon n uske liye woh KHUDA ka SHUKARGUZAR hoon...

OK!!!!!!!!!! i guess hum ne bhttt bari bari batein karli hain toh abhi kuch normal batein karte hain...

THANK U...THANK U SOOO VERY MUCH FIZU API FOR WRITING DIS FF..."WALKING WITH YOU"...
i can't say how much i love u for writing dis ff...😳
Love u lodsss API...*dil se*...
dis MayUr r d bestest i have ever read...n known...n loved...
i love dis Mayank n Nupur "THE MOST"...
DIS FF HAS D MOST SPECIAL PLACE IN MY HEART......
I WILL ALWAYSSS LOVE DIS FF...

n der is another bt MOST IMPORTANT THING ABT DIS FF IS...WHILE WALKING WITH ""WALKING WITH YOU""...I GOT MY 1st ""API"" HERE...I GOT TO KNOW U...INTERECT WITH U...SOOO DIS IS VERY VERY VERY SPECIAL FF AS IT GIVES ME MY ""FIZU API""...
SO THANK U VERY MUCH API...🤗
LOVE U LODSSS...*actually* LOT MORE THAN A LOOOTTT...TILL *INFINITY*...🤗🤗🤗
May ALLAH ALWAYSSS BLESS MY FIZU API N SHOWER HER WITH ALL D HAPPINESS N SUCCESS OF DIS WORLD...AMEEN!!!🤗

n lastly abt ur "EPILOGUE"...😍😍😍
HATS OFF API...⭐️⭐️⭐️
I JST LOVED IT...😍😳😍
U SAID EVERYTHING SUCH NICELY DAT M SURE DIS WUD GONNA HELP MANY GIRLS OUT HERE...😳
awww...ME TOO WANT GUYS TO READ DIS FF...😳 AS DEY CAN ALSO LEARN MANY THINGS FROM OUR MAYANK OF "WALKING WITH YOU"... ;)

YOU DID A MINDBLOWING JOB...🤗
I LOVED N "LIVED" DIS JOURNEY WITH DIS "MAYUR" OF "WALKING WITH YOU"😍😍😍
HATS OFF TO U API...⭐️⭐️⭐️

LOVE U API...ALWAYSSS *PUREY DIL SE* 🤗🤗🤗

Anila... urs...ANU...😳
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
wow new thread? congrats. mindblowing
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
yyyaaayyy 🥳CONGRATULATIONS API...🥳
for d 2nd thread of my fav ff..."WALKING WITH YOU"
i sooo wish ke yeh ff kabhi end na hota...😳
accha ek baat!!!!!!! apko kisine complaint kiya hain kya ke hum 30parts se jyada nhi parhna chahte...😳
i guess all will agree wid me as we all want it to complete another thread...😉
bt i know ke u dont wanna drag it bt plzzz atleast 30 se 3/4 update jyada toh likhdo plzzz😊😳😊

now abt d update...😊
awww...it was d most cutest "MAYUR" part of dis ff.😳😳😳
i was totally awww wid dis chapter...😳❤️😳
i loved it...😳
i loved it lodsss...🤗
n i love u API...😳
dis part was damn cute...😳
i was so tensed abt dis part bt u gv me hope dat everything will b fine woh bhi jaldi...😳😉😃
uss Boss ko toh main uski itni himmat mere...mere Mayank ko fasaya!!!!!!!!😡😡
n u were ri8 mere thoughts Mayank ko le kar updates mein jaroor change huye bt for Nupur m alwaysss d same...😳😉😳
n u know wht d Nupur of dis ff is d "BESTEST"...😳😃😳
she is nt only an ideal Bahu bt also an ideal BIWI...😳😉
n yayyy i also agree wid Nupur dat my MAYANK is back...😳😃😳
as d same IDEAL Hubby...hayyy😍😍😍
i love him to d core...😍😳😍
dis ff is d most dearest n closest to my heart...😳
i sooo love dis ff...❤️😳❤️
n i dont know wht will happen to me wen it will end...😒😭😒
Nupur is a sweetheart...😳
i loved d way she cheer him up...😳
n d line "Shadi hain... apki nhi hain"...🤣🤣🤣
dat was damn cute n baba is also sooo sweet na abhi hum hain yeh unka dlg hain...😆🤣😆
i loved it...sigh😳
dat was awesome n cutest update...😳☺️😳
n hayyy meri perfect Biwi Beauty wid brains han!!!!!!!😳😉
n upar se caring bhi...😉
hayyy...mar jawa main iss Bold Nupur par...😉
i loved it d most...😳
n i love U lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
waiting eagerly for d next update...😳
May ALLAH alwaysss bless u...😳
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratulationsss...!

awesome update... this tough phase actually strengthened their bond more...with this they took a step ahead in their relationship...very simply but beautifully u portrayed the most important phase of a real married life...
Edited by valliyah - 13 years ago

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