one shot:The fun begins..;)Imp note:pg123 by kathi - Page 96

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Posted: 13 years ago
Deepa me whole day at home dear i get up by 10 sleep lil in afternoon also i can stay awake for longer only if i am gettin update..where is muskan di she could have done an update..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

@simi - dear kathie has updated the first page na then why combine together? or u mean in the new ' deed' thread?

@sana - shreya darl update soon...my patience is wearing out...no pressures par aaj pata nahi why less writers' presence...sigh...

@reni - kahan chal diye? sone chali gayi kya?

me will be online for some more mins dearies...so in advance good night and sweet Maaneet dreams lovely ladies...


Deepa I mean for the new thread...have all the updates combined on the first page...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kathie_berns

Note: This thread is getting out of hand... Chicks go crazy...lol... Since we all want along sr and the thread is almost at an end, we will only have foreplay till the end of this thread. The next entire thread will be dedicated to the deed.. What say guys? All set for the longest deed in the history of GF comprising of tremendously talented utterly besharam maneetian writers? Each and every writer will give you a memorable and exotic description of the deed..What say guys?😉😉😆

waiting 😆😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
@reni ... am from UAE and am working
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dont kill me pls..if its crap..

"Huh?" she looks lost...Maan takes out his apron..Geet gulps seeing his manhood. He smirks...the cake was ready. He takes out the cake from the oven...and starts putting on chocolate frosting, getting his hand dirty...Geet looks at his every move.

Part 37

Geet was in a daze still staring at her husband. Maan had no vest on. He was only in his boxers and seeing him covered in chocolate made her weak in knees. Oh how she wanted to lick that chocolate off his chest.

Maan saw his wife staring at him covered in chocolate. He looked at her covered in nothing in but a skimpy bathrobe that did nothing to cover her. Her wet breasts were visible through the bathrobe with the buds being more prominent over the soft material she was holding into.

He so wanted her. He grinned mischievously as he thought of having her. He brought a chocolate sauce bottle from the fridge and held it on to the cake. He didn't press it which didn't let the chocolate flow out.

Dekho Na geet isme se choclate nikal he nahi rahi hai..he pouted staring at her barely clad form. He shook the chocolate sauce bottle up and down in pretense of trying to take out chocolate sauce from it, and brought it near her and pressed it hard when it was near her robe.

The chocolate splattered on geets robe.

He immediately kept the bottle on the shelf and touched her chest to wipe the sauce. Geet who had been a silent observer of all this hissed as she felt maan touch her chest above the gown. She was holding the robe from its knot but when he touched her, she let go of the knot making her hand into a tight fist.

The robe immediately revealing her chest to his hungry eyes. He knew his time was now. He could devour it and geet wouldnt be able to stop him.

He put his chocolate covered hands on her chest making it all chocolaty.

Maan..she hissed when she felt the cool sauce touching her chest, right abover her swelled buds.

Oh i am so sorry geet..i shll help u..Just give me a minute.

He bent down and started licking her chest with his tongue slowly. He moved his tongue in circles around the swelled area wiping the chocolate and making it wet with his saliva.

He then bit it and blew on the area. Geet held on to him for support. He loved to see his wife crumbling before him.

He lifted geet and carried her to the sofa in the drawing room. He lay her down gently and kissed her lips before she could react to it. She gave into the kiss her hands romaing around his body..

Kiss me Maan..pls..

He lifted his head to see the desire in her eyes. He thought of quenching his thirst first before teaching her a lesson for messing with Maan Singh Khurana.

Where Jaan...guide me na..while he rubbed his chest on her and his hands on her navel..

Oh so sorry Jaan..u are covered in chocolate again..he smirked.

Give me minute. She nodded and closed her eyes.

He walked into the kitched and brought the bottle of sauce and pured it all over her slowly making her covered in chocolate.

He so loved his chocolate wife.

Jaan..where to clean u fromm..u are covered in chocolate..

She opened her eyes to see that she was really more chocolaty than she knew she could be.

Its ok i will clean u..u lie back...

She liad back down when she felt his lips on her navel. He wiped the chocolate on her navel and stomach and bit her navel hard making her scream in pain and pleasure. He moved down to her panty line and kept licking and biting her until he had recahed her thighs.

She parted her legs to feel his hands and mouth. He smirked. No jaan there is not much chocolate there, only a bit..give a minute. He bent down and took her feminine core into her mouth sucking and pleasuring her and enjoying the ministrations he was playing with her body.

He moved up to her throat and kissed her on the collar bone before licking off the chocolate and proceeding to her neck, kissing biting and licking it.

She titled her neck to give him better access. He kissed her neck and moved to bite her earlobe sharply making her hiss in pain.

Maan..not there..

He kissed her collar bone..here..

No down..he moved to her shoulder..kissing her..

Here.. No..she shook her head..

Jaan...guide me properly..

Down..

He kept trailing kisses on her neck slowly moving down and kept looking at her. When he reached her cleavage she nodded yes..

He smiled and licked her breasts and her nipple before biting it hard and taking i in his mouth sucking at it gently and then hungrily while his other hand messaged her other one. He lifted his head to see geet smiling and to notice that the one in his mouth for so long had become pink.

He moved to the other, not wanting to ignore the other. He licked the chocolate covered on it and took the nipple in his mouth sucking like a starved man. He couldn't get enough of her breasts ever. He had always indulged himself with them more than ever and he knew geet loved the pleasure he gave her too, and this one week he wanted to suck on them whole night.

Jaan do u mind more..

She shook her head and without wasting a moment he brought both the breasts together with his hands and took one of them in his mouth sucking on the nipple while his whole weight now rested on her. He kept moving from one to another till he was tired of sucking. He had won, she wanted him and he was not ready to give into yet.

Jaan u are clean now..u can go..

He got up and moved away while his body still wanted to feast on her and her breasts.

Geet opened her eyes to see that she lying there with her chest exposed and her husband had just sucked on her and moved away without letting her have him.

She now needed to teach him what she could do.

She tied up her gown and moved to her room while a smile played on her lips.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Shreya the brave one i am waiting dear..will read and then go..i need a shut eye..
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Posted: 13 years ago
@simi - oh that ok that would be like easy catch...why am i being wicked, let them come to this thread and see the fun we had...

@reni - me from India dear, Tamil Nadu, Chennai...u from Mumbai right...me get up late and roam inside the house and come to my world that is IF...all day i spend my time here...addicted like anything and cant stay away from here for a day...
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear lord ... that was smoking HOT ... am dazed ... I was ☺️ all the time reading it ...
so who's next 😃
Edited by sindu555 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnks sana..wht no one else liked it.. :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shreya what did u write..such a fab one..now me gonna dream such things in ma sleep.. *Reni bows down to you..* it was yummy.. Maan made an awesome come back..who is up with geet now..

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