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pkyeklover2

@pkyeklover2

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: cuteteddy
it was really good ! luved pia is angry wid arnab coz i m totally annoyed of him now ! ok fine if i will start discussing on him i will keep on bashing him so its better that i don't ! dear it was really good n luvly update . thanks for the pm n waiting for the next update please continue soon!

M also very much angry with arnad...woh abhay ke piche haath dhokar paar gaya hai...n a little bit annoyed with piya also...c dsnt trusts abhay...what c saw, c believed it

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pkyeklover2

@pkyeklover2

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Thanks guys 4 such lovely comments...the next chapter will be full of abhiya...abhiya n abhiya...and soon an shocking thing will happen 2 then...dats a suspense 4 u all🤪

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Nice update! Abhay and Piya's dance was cute! I hope Arnab won't create problems between Abhiya! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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pkyeklover2

@pkyeklover2

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Chapter 3
The night

Before sometime back t had made a hole in the tyres of abhay's car...c wanted piya n abhay 2 be in problem becuz abhay had ditched her choosen piya...c wanted to take revenge...c knew that it was very to stay dangerous near jungles...asthere are werewolves n many other wild animals in this jungles
There as abhay and piya left the the dobriyal's house...big thunderbolts started...they both sat on the car n abhay started driving...

then piya putting her head on abhay's shoulder said: jab mein tumhare saath hutahu...tab everything is so right and perfect...i love u abhay...mujhe kabhi chor kar mat jaana
Abhay: Piya mei tumhe kabhi chor kar nahi jaunga...u r my life, mein tumhare bina nahi reh sakta hu
And Abhay took piya's hand and kissed it...piya was still putting her head on abhay's shoulder
Then suddenly the car got jerked n stoped...
Piya asked Abhay: Abhay why did u stopped the car
Abhay: Piya, meine gari bandth nahi kiii...the car stopped itself
Piya: Lets go n check
Abhay: kkk piya...dnt worry
And then as soon as abhay and piya stepped out of the car it started heavily
N both of them hurriedly got inside the car
Piya: Abhay tum to ek vampire ho...u r so powerful...car kharab ho gayi hai to kya...tum mujhe uthakar le ja sakte ho
Abhay: i cn do it piya but tum puri tarahse bhig jaogi...
as abhay said this word...a wolf's howling sound came frm the jungle...piya got...n abhay a little bit...becuz he was wit piya
He thought to himself: Agar mein akele hota to alag baat thi par mein piya ke saath hu...so i ant take anyrisk with piya's life
Abhay: Piya its too dangerous to do that...dekho waha ek chota sa ghar hai...aaj raat wahi rukte hai
Piya: lekin abhay
Abhay: no lekin wekin...lets go there
And this time piya nodded
They reached the house n knocked at the door...an old man opened the door...
Abhay : Uncle kya aaj raat hum yaha ruk sakte hai???
Old man: Par iss ghar mein to sirf do hi kamre hai...ek mei me rehta hu aur ek mein mera bhai rehta tha...ab mere paas sirf ek hi room hai
Piya: okay unkle
Old mn: Kya tum dono ki shaadi ho gayi hai
Piya: no uncle...
Old mn: tumhari marji
Then the old man takes abhiya to the room...it was quite cold there...there was a bed, a fireplace, a mirror n many candles lit up
Abhay was sitting on the bed...
piya went to the ald man n asked: unkle kya aapke paas towel hoga???(c wanted this becuz her hair wsa wet)
oLD MN: rUKU EK MIN...
then he broughtes a towel n goves to piya
Piya then dries her hair with the towel...abhay was passionately luking at her...then suddenly a huge thunderbolt strucked...it made piya scared n c grabbed tightly...the light went off and now the room ha only its light source from the candles
Abhay started to loose his contol...his lips was slowly moiving 2wards piya n they first shared theit first lip kiss...
But this ni8 they made luv ...n this ni8 they came so close 4 the first time

End of this chapter...hope u like it...plz plz comment

Edited by pkyeklover2 - 13 years ago

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

wow lovely update next update lots abhiya scene.

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pkyeklover2

@pkyeklover2

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Nice update! Abhay and Piya's dance was cute! I hope Arnab won't create problems between Abhiya! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

In this ff arnab is going 2 be a villan...i will update soon😆😆😆😆😆😆😆