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Siona

@.m.a.r.y.s.i.o.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

nicely written yaar...how can u say u bore us with ur interesting topic

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

first of all, thanks for the PM! secondly, THE STORY ROCKS DUDE!!! I MEAN SERIOUSLYY!! ITS AWESOME, FANTASTIC AND SIMPLY BRILLIANT! Love the way Arnav's possessive bout Khushi!!!

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

1st part was awesome. I wonder how will khushi when comes to know abt the truth. Thanx for pm. Do countinue.

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Davi

@Davi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Awesome dear

Great start

Looking forward to the rest.

Love your update. don't be late cause will be waiting ...lol

Thanks for the PM.

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priya

@pooh_91

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

LOVED IT!! 😊

loved arnavs retorts at shyam 😊 the dialogues were hot and more so when you think of barun delivering them 😉

i was thinkng about the fight yesterday..arnav bashing up all the goons and was thinking of wat state he would make of the slime 🤢 considering he meddled with his sis's and his kushi's 😉 lives...

but loved your take on the situation

pm me when your putting up the update.

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

this was too good.very nice

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

aww this is just beautifulll!!! please do write the next part soon!! i can't wait to know what happens next!!!

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Badra

@SublimeSanaya

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

hi dr ... simply amazing😉

sorry for the late comments was busy with exams and still is ...

omg i am totally in love with ur SS ...

btw .. wonderful name .. Aranav the bodyguard 😉 ...

looking forward to find out wht u have in store for us ... inside the room 😉 ...

btw prefect conversations btwn all character .. i dont think it is wrong to say that u have outdone urself dr ... i hate tht snake alottt ... i was waiting for Aranv to punch him straight in the face and all the right place 😆... oh even i have no idea of the extend to which is hate tht scum bag , good for nothing two timer (imho) ... anyways lets leave tht aside ... i know tht it is too early to beat him in ur ff ... right ... but couldnt help from exploring my imagination ... replacing sham with a goon from the previous episode ... anyways i am having my fingers crossed until tht faithful day 😉 ...

love the part tht u made La vanish without too much drama ... wait without any drama at all ... and also loved the fact tht u cut to the chase with the first part itself .. straight to the body guard ...

and pls do continue sharing ur wonderful idea and imagination .. looking forward to read more and more of ur updates .. and thanx a bunch for the pm and pls keep sending them 😊

"and any updates over the week mite be just out of my pure excitement to write! " --- i wish tht ur excitement be at the peak ensuring us more updates 😉 ...

so see u around ..

- -badra