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Posted: 13 years ago
me waiting ...
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Mahsoos...
Part 6


He locked the door, heartbeat was in train speed, god knows what she just have done to him but everything about her was so inviting, he wanted to imagine but noting came in his head except the feeling that she left. It was still black, just black. The warmth, he couldn't, how can he portrayed the warmth, what does it look like? The touch, a chill went passed by his spine when she touched him, touch? Why does her touch feel so special? His pounding heart showed no sign of calmness only the noise. He never felt this special, never felt this special with anyone's touch... She had magic, the mahsoos brought a unexpected happiness, new goal in his life...

Geet was far more embarrassed then the first day in her school. She took the jewelry off and then changed quickly as possible before maan open the bathroom door... When he walked out, she was back to bed, sleeping. He came by, the whole bed was his before, now he needs to share and annoyingly he wasn't sure what side she prefers, left or the right. He couldn't even see which side she possibly be but luckily she was still wake, a cough cached his attention. "which side you want to take?"
Geet twisted her lips, wearing a sexy short nighty, mostly everything was see through from the bra to nickers... "apki gaude me..." she almost mumbled. Who wouldn't dream of sleeping on her husband arm, where they are one, relaxed enjoying every possible second, and here they are, 2 separate person... "which side do you sleep usually?"
"right to middle"
"then I will do that to"
She twisted her lips again, curling the edge of the nighty, toe pointed, maybe another go to seduce him... She rather felt annoyed how he wasn't looking at her... She looked sexy, actually really sexy then...
"i will take the left then..." geet looked at him with big eyes. Rather annoyed now..
"per I meant I- you- oh..." she worriedly looked everywhere now. Lost her words what exactly to say... She gave up, annoyingly took the left side, turned off the light and hide her self under the spread. "so much for a sexy wedding night." she was cursing anjali for giving her false hope.
Maan stood in the dark, like it mattered, he thought she was sleeping on the right, he walked around to the left and sat down. Geet felt the pressure on the bed, giving her another false hope. She pepped over the spread as he laid just few inches way. The heat was sending goose bump around the slim body. She starred at him from the side, smiling... Blushing.. Unknown when her eyes gave way...

Maan felt a soft arm laying over his chest, her whole body cuddled up on one side, the leg twisted between his. Her warm skin sending another new feeling down his body. He didn't complain, rather enjoying her close proximity. She was compressing her self closer and closer and he had no space to go on either side...

Suddenly his long hand rests on her waist, bare waist. The thin layer of dress went up, he could feel a pile of cloths just under her curve. He tried to move way, as he did it brushed along the bony stomach, he feared to even feel what lies below. Maan quickly twists round only find how ready was his hardening, another surprise...

Early morning sun ray gave geet a new hope. She slowly open her eyes with little light letting in her eyes, her normal beating heart sounded calm and sirens. She inhaled fresh air, refueling the tired lungs. For a verify moment geet almost forgot that she is married and have husband and yesterday was her sr which was completely a digested. She felt her left side of the bed but it was empty, the spread roughly lying with many creas. She sat up, feeling extremely sigh with the nakedness. She barely wore anything. Geet took a long robe from the side, covering her nude body with a smile.
Suddenly she hard noise of rapid breathing, there was three door that leads from there bedroom, one to the bathroom, one to the balcony and another... She wondered. Geet picks her self up, opening the last door, only to find her husband doing push up, he wore nothing except a Tracy. Sweets crawling down his golden skin. The red face made her sigh, she almost could imagine her self below him making love. The golden payel was still on as she took few step maan stops in mid air, he concentrated on the direction of the door. He knew well it was geet, his wife. Last night she gave enough hint with the smell and the many jewleary she had on.
"geet?"
He stands up instantly... The light covered the room. There bedroom was on the top floor, it's a circular room. With a door and a mirror going across the wall. The door leads to balcony, Chile wind passing from each direction and mirror reflecting light...
Geet cane close and stood just behind, her eyes looked at there reflection from each direction, then the desgine that laied above. It was guessable that it's 100s odd year expensive desgine. They are from royal family after all.
"it's beautiful..." she whispered... That's the second time he heard the word beauty. He wondered what is beuty? What exactly beauty looked like.
Geets eyes gazed from everything to maans bare back, he have been working out so much that each muscle with out contraction was visible. The abs, the trouser laied just under the belly button, actually very low... She was wishing it never to be there so her eyes can observe him with every details. She came close unwillingly and rests the cheek against his back.
Maas heart skipped several beat, the hardening became clearly visible over the Tracy... She stroked her one chick to another, Hugging him from the back. Her hand came around and felt all the 8 pack, traveling it's way down around his belly button then below. Gently messaging his abdomen. Maan stood there like a statue but inside he was going wild, she somewhere knew to make him crazy, yet he couldn't imagine where this was leading towards...

A loud knock brought both back to sense. Geet jumped taking few step back, holding the robe around her tightly, after she was barely wearing anything. It's maans personal servant, the one who look after all his need yet he always like to do everything by him self, all capable.
"I will see," geet suggested. She hurriedly walked out, leaving shocking maan in middle of the big room. His bare foot felt the floor and knew well which direction to go. He came out, when geet opens the door.

"good morning mam!" the girl smiled. A well educated smart girl, seems like a carere. She had White nurse suit which made geet curious. "I am here to check if sits every day object is in place."
Geet again made a face. "why?"
"ah mam we have to keep everything where it should be na. Well only few more days then it's all up to you. He is your husband and your responsibility after all."
"what?" geet ignored her words and walked towards the cupboard. Extremely embarrassed, first morning and welcomed by a unwanted guest.
"merra, please leave!" maans strong hard voice came out from the other side. Geet spines around hearing her husband voice. Shocked. Like he could almost feel how embarrassed she is."
"per.."
"merra leave!"
Merra didn't utter another word as she disappeared. He concentrated on the opening and closing of the cupboard and guessed it will be no other then geet it self.
"I am sorry... au"
He spines around and heds towards the bathroom.
"sunye..."
"bolo..."
"your cloths."
Maan Tills his head towards the floor a little as a thank you and takes it...



sorry in very hurry allot of mistake :(
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yipeee... me first nw... let me read nw...
Edited by Acharya10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me second yay...thank you so much Safi...me tooo greedy now..you see its tooo short ..what will geet's reaction be when she finally comes to know about him...please dont make her feel cheated she must know maan wanted to tell her..this one FF please let it be without MUs..please it is an unconventional FF...i want to enjoy it through mahsoos not normal MUs and all that ugly reality...please only mahsoos...here
Edited by sansheen99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊wowww but yeh confussion kab khatam hoga
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update dear
but i am afraid wat will happen when geet will learn the truth about maan
i'll keep my finger cross and hope she will accept the fact even though i think it will be a bit difficult for geet to accept the truth and how her family hide the truth from her
oufff i hope every thing will be gud as this ff has become really close to my heart
plz continue
i want to know more and wat will happen
Edited by 080588 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...when will she know maan is blind😊...maan in future u will know what is beauty...geet will show u 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part.
Maan is feeling the heat too.
I feel so bad for Geet.
She is in such a state of confusion with this enigmatic man who doesnt even look at her when she is dressed only for him.
She is not able to control her feelings even when there is no reciprocation.
Maan is in kind of same state too struggling with his new found feelings.
Wonder when Geet is going to get to know
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome
just waitiing whn will geet realise
n seeing hw perfect maan is...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
but when will geet come to know the truth
maan is beginning to expect from her though a very little but starting it don't want him to get embarrassed & let down or feel humiliated after

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