Khushi is Kidnapped Updated Part 19 Page 82 - Page 49

Hey, its Josh again.

I think I'm getting where this story is going, but your work is so far removed from what I see with subtitles, that I wonder why I should watch the show, when your writing makes the viewer's satisfaction level go through the roof.

You clearly know your characters, and it seems that you have hones them to perfection.

The Nani character...you have breathed new life in to a stale character.

And what you have done with the Shyam character, well, all I'll say is that if I was playing the role, I'd be glad my characterization is in your worthy hands.

One more thing, Shyam is supposed to be the bad guy, but you've added a classiness to him, that the screen character lacks.

You've given him finesse and have handled him with care and also given him power.

You give him power, then yank it away just when we think he's gonna do something horrific with it.

You're playing with your characters and seems like you're having fun.

If you did this professionally, you'd get paid a pretty penny for your enormous talent.

I don't see this kind of writing every day...but I love the way you write.

Keep writing, I enjoy your edgy, fierce, pathos-filled plotlines...pretty gripping...

I'd like to read more of what you write as its so different from what is shown in the actual serial...

Your writing style transports the reader to a far off place, you've designed the characters beautifully and sculpted each one very well.

I'll stay tuned.

Awesome stuff, the best on this forum and I've read the others too.

No comparison...you are up there, the best of the very best.

Cheers,

Josh

Originally posted by: tina_1234

nyc part...inlove shyam's inmate

Hi tina,

So glad you liked part 16 of the story. Yes, the inmate is an original character I created you won't find him on the show :). Thanks for reading tina.

Take care,

KF

Originally posted by: moon_mine

m jst hating this nani too much!!!!

pls either let shyam die...or let nani die!!!!

they r jst too much!!!!!

mama is too nice...m so happy he thought abt khushi also n personally came to inform the Gupta's about his mother's deeds...that's too sweet of him!!!!!

loved the arnav-payal convo also!!!!!

both r in the same convo...n they needed to hv a heart to heart talk...loved that scene!!!!!

at the end...i hope shyam is dying...pls let him die!!!!!!

n hope we gt a arnav khushi convo in the nxt part...pls do update soon!!!!

Hi moon_mine,

I love reading your thoughts on what I've written in the story in part 16. Such a great perspective you have as a reader which I'm sure many others share. It gives me a fresh look at where the story is and where it could go. Thanks for your feedback. I hope you enjoyed reading this part.

Take care,

KF

Originally posted by: zafi

Hate Nani but love Mamaji 👏and also the inmates beating Shyam.😆.

Thanks for the PM.😉 Loved this update.😃

Hi zafi,

You are welcome for the PM. Thanks for interest in this story and Part 16. I'm glad you liked reading it. Thanks for taking the time to write your thoughts. Appreciate it.

Take care,

KF

Originally posted by: sanash

Nani has gone crazy what is wrong with her- poor khushi and good fpr anjali's uncle cant wait for the next part.

Hi sanash,

Thank you for your feedback. I hope you liked reading Part 16. Thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts on this part of the story.

Take care,

KF

Originally posted by: mirnalini

Totally loved it!

Loved the poetic justice being meted out to Shyam at the prison...as they say,what goes around, comes around👏

Update soon😃

Mirna⭐️

Hi Mirna,

I am glad you like the scenes with Shyam and the inmate. Very karmic. Yes I will try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for your feedback. Love reading your thoughts on Part 16.

Take care,

KF

Originally posted by: prerna1

i just read this fic and its awesome dear
loved it
Nani is getting mad with age
plz continue soon and add me in your pm list

Hi prerna,

Thank you for your generous comments about this story. I'm glad you liked Part 16. Yes, I think I might start on Part 17 tomorrow and yes I have added you to the PM list. Thank you for your interest in this story. I appreciate you taking the time to put down your thoughts on Part 16.

Best wishes,

KF

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

Great updates. I wish nani could understand what she is doing and thinking is completely wron. I'm glad shyam is tortured as well though; he caused everyone, especially khushi, anjali, and arnav, so much pain

Hi bmtdluver,

I'm glad you liked Part 16 of the story. Your thoughts on the part are very interesting to read it helps me understand which parts are crucial to the story as it goes on and which parts are not according to the readers. Thank you for taking the time to put down your thoughts.

Take care,

KF