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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

awesome update dear...

PriNi...too romantic...

but sanjay, renuka & devika...hmmm...what r these people planning??

plz update soon dear...

Thanks sweetie...will try and update soon...😊i am still working on the update...not sure if i will post it today...
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏I am seriously your Fan. This FF is so beautifully written. Hats off to you writer. I was looking for RTMC and i came across this beautiful FF. This is the first FF i have read. You describe so nicely and make it interesting. I am waiting for your next update. I love your character Prithvi, the way you described him is just awesome. ClapClap
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Edited by kittywu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi dhanvi...u didn't update today😭maybe u didn't get enough time...no problem...plz update tomorrow dear plz plz plz...😊
Edited by prahelika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
first sorry for being late...that's couz i m not feeling well from last 3 days...so i m not able to read any of the fff...
n now to the update...
awesome update...👏
too hot...☺️
well i can't say anything...instead of this...

''Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan
Dhadkan Bani Zubaan

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan
Dhadkan Bani Zubaan
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan

Khulte Badn Hote Labhon Ki Ye Ankahi
Khulte Badn Hote Labhon Ki Ye Ankahi
Mujhse Keh Rahi Hai Ki Badhne De Bekhudi
Mil Yoon Ki Daud Jaayein Nas Nas Mein Bijliyaan

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan
Dhadkan Bani Zubaan
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan

Aasmaan Ko Bhi Ye Haseen Raaz Hai Pasand
Aasmaan Ko Bhi Ye Haseen Raaz Hai Pasand
Uljhi Uljhi Saanson Ki Aawaaz Hai Pasand
Moti Luta Rahi Hai Saawan Ki Badliyaan

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan
Dhadkan Bani Zubaan
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan .
update soon...luv u...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 40

Richa "but why didn't you call me for so many days??"

Sneha "Richa if i tell you what all happened...then you will be shocked...atlast his parents are convinced...i am getting engaged to Piyush"

Richa "i am so happy for you...finally you are victorious"

Sneha "now you and Angad have to come to Mumbai...alright"

Richa "fine we will be there...but we are flying to Chicago next Sunday"

Sneha "oh...What?? can you delay for some more days...please"

Richa "ok let me talk to Angad...i will inform you"

Sneha "ok but I want a positive answer"

Richa "sure...will call you...take care"
____*****

Nandini woke up and looked for her clothes around...she took a sheet and got off the bed to take shower...as soon as she stepped in the tub...Prithvi came right in front of her.

Nandini "Prithvi...you scared me" and quickly wrapped the sheet around her body...

Prithvi gazed at her and came closer "why do you wrap??"

Nandini blushed...she couldn't say anything... "Please Prithvi...let me have shower"

Prithvi "how can i leave you alone??"

Nandini puzzled "then should i bath in front of you??"

Prithvi "no...we can enjoy the shower together"

Nandini smiled shyly..."no don't...please go Prithvi"

Prithvi would not budge a inch...instead he came more closer...unwrapped the sheet around her nervous body and hugged her tightly...then turn on the shower...he kissed her on her cheeks while sucking the drops of water on her skin...Nandini felt his hard body against her...she could feel him so close...every part of her body was in love with his part...her eyes were closed...she embraced him tightly...he kissed her sore lips again...then touched her soft skin all around her body...every time her body made him go frenzy and he made love to her.



_____*******



After few hours...

Prithvi "yes Sneha ...how are you??'

Sneha "Prithvi I am getting engaged and I want you and Nandini to please come to Mumbai"

Prithvi "oh...so you are getting engaged to ass..." he laughed

Sneha smiled "yes your old ass...but now he's improved..."

Prithvi "congrats Sneha...i am happy for you...we will come"

He gave the phone to Nandini who was chatting with Sneha when a car stopped outside the drive way... Prithvi heard the door bell...he went downstairs...it was his Mom...his aunt and his Dad...

He was happy to meet his Mother after many days...

Renuka "so how are you..."

Prithvi "i am good...how are you"

Renuka looked carefully at Prithvi...she could notice the smile that had gone missing from her Son's face was back...he was more than happy...she could easily make out the change in him...she smiled and asked about Nandini...

Prithvi was happy when his mother asked for Nandini...

Prithvi "she's upstairs... I will call her"

Renuka asked her sister to settle down...

Prithvi pulled the phone and disconnected the call...

Nandini "Prithvi??? why did you disconnected..."

Prithvi "my mother is downstairs...she's asked for you...please get ready and come downstairs."

Nandini "i am ready..."

Prithvi "like this??" he looked from top to bottom...she was wearing a simple chudidaar...he walked towards the wardrobe and took red color suit and asked her to wear this as red is his mom's favorite color.

Nandini smiled "alright...i will wear this"

Prithvi came downstairs "mom she was talking on the phone...will come..."

Renuka while sipping coffee "it seems you are more nervous" and smiled...

Rajveer "of course he will be...he's waiting for your answer"

Devika "don't worry Prithvi, I am sure Renu will like your Nandini"

As they were laughing ...Nandini came down nervously... she glanced around as she was walking...

Prithvi saw her "mom...this is Nandini"

Renuka got up and walked towards Nandini...she looked at her top to bottom carefully without giving any expression...then looked at Prithvi...everyone's smile vanished as she seriously looked at Nandini as if something was wrong...

Rajveer came towards Renuka...

Renuka said "Prithvi how come you find such an adorable daughter in law for me." and smiled '..Prithvi smiled back "mom you made me nervous"

Renuka kissed Nandini's forehead "beta, thanks for making my Son a smily person"

Devika came forward and gave a huge diamond necklace to Nandini as a gift...since she met her first time...

Rajveer kept his hand on her head "God bless" every one was happy...

Renuka "now we should have a grand celebration...since you both married before...we can have a big party"

Nandini surprisingly looked at Prithvi "married??"

Prithvi "oh yes mom...sure"

Nandini didn't wanted to lie about marriage and thought of telling the truth to his family...

Nandini "no Aunty...we are not married yet"

there was silence...Renuka looked at Nandini then at Prithvi...

Prithvi stared angrily at Nandini for telling the truth...

Renuka smiled "that is even better...we will have two big functions...I think Rajveer we should start preparing now"

Rajveer "sure..."

Prithvi smiled and hugged his mother "thanks mom"

Renuka "i was in that doubt before...but I like Nandini's honesty"

Devika "congrats now...you both will get married soon" hugged Prithvi and Nandini.


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Mumbai

Sanjay Oberoi "well done Varmani...you may leave"

Sanjay looked at Prithvi's file "Prithvi, you are the most successful businessman but you won't be any longer"

Sanjay knew Prithvi was more efficient than him...Prithvi's mind was far more intelligent than Sanjay but Sanjay wanted to overcome Prithvi with any way possible...

Alok entered "sir you called me??"

Sanjay "yes Alok...how many shares do we have??"

Alok "sir fifty percent"

Sanjay "more...get more...i have to reach my goal"

Varmani "sir I have got latest information about Prithvi"

Sanjay "what??"

Varmani "Sir Prithvi is getting married"

Sanjay smirkingly smiled... "he must be very happy indeed..."

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Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

super

loved it
so happy for the love birds
thank god renu accepted nandini
finally they're getting married
just hope this sanjay wont do anything now
awesome dear
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Simran_14

super

loved it
so happy for the love birds
thank god renu accepted nandini
finally they're getting married
just hope this sanjay wont do anything now
awesome dear
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm

Hi Sim...Thanks for such lovely comments...will update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
very lovely update yaar...:)
i hope sanjay wont create any mess now in prithvi and nandu's life
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg 😲...awesome update dear...positively shocking ...

we were worried about renuka's reaction...& prithvi was more nervous than nandini 😆...but she accepted nandini seeing how happy her son is...that is great...devika also liked nandini...

& nandini told them truth...she is so innocent & honest...so now we r having marriage celebration of PriNi...looking forward to it...

i am happy for piyush & sneha...so she changed him 😆...good...

but i hope sanjay does not create problem in marriage...plz we want to celebrate it fully...after that PriNi can face problems together...

plz plz update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update...bt last update was awsom nd sooo hot...i hope no any barriers come in there marriage...ye oberoy kuch thik nahi lag raha hai...so finally sneha engaged with ass...waiting for next part..luv u

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