*Mayur FF Play with Fire*Last part on pg 118 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Awesom update Maria
i am addicting to this FF.its really very unique and i loving it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Mindblowing update and you wrote it beautifully
very interesting last part.i hope Mayank will save her
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
awesome update
poor nupur...how can uday do this!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
wonderful😊
continue soon..thnx for pm..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
nice updt maria
waiting for the next updt..cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Writer Note
Thank you so much all of u for appreciating and liking the concept🤗🤗really means a lot to me i m so glad to see ur appreciation for my small effort..
Love
Maria.remember me in ur prayers
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

Play with fire

It was darkness around everywhere as it was quite late night, the roads were empty and in this chilled cold whether people preferred to stayed home..

"Who could be there? May be someone needs my help? Thinking in his mind he stepped towards that person who was standing at few steps away from him and waving hand towards him as Mayank went nearer to her and was shocked to see a girl there.

"She is girl? But what she is doing here?"he thought coming nearer to her..she was looking extremely scared ,he could not see her face clearly but her eyes were wide open due to fear and she was wrapping herself in shawl, her body was shivering badly..

"Kaun hain ap???aur'."as He came nearer her to ask her who was she and why was she was standing alone in darkness in this empty road but she got unconscious and about to fell when he held her by shoulder'

"suniye?"Mayank shook her shoulder but she was not responding'.

"She get unconscious" Mayank slightly patted her cheek but getting no response he muttered, her eyes were closed but her face was showing tiredness, sadness and he did not know why but he was feeling as he knew her for so long..

Mayank placed her arms around her to give her support as her whole body weight was on him and picked her up in his arms and went towards his car, he tightened his gripped around her with his one hand while with other he opened the door of back seat and carefully lied down her on seat, he picked up his coat from the front seat and placed it under her head carefully and adjusted her head in comfort position..

Some of strains of her hairs were falling on her face firstly he thought to let them on her face but did not know why he could not control himself to removed them from her face, he slightly touched her face and felt something strange, keeping her strain of her hair behind her ear he saw her face clearly which was showing immense pain which she was going through..

"I don't know who are you???and where are you live? But I can't leave you here alone" He said slowly'.

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"Bare Malik sahib Malik zavar ne apni beti ko kahin bhaga diya hai"A man entered in a big room and informed the other man who was sitting in the chair middle of the big room while others people were sitting on floor around him..

Malik Sahib who was thinking himself the owner of that area and the owner of people lives too,he had power of money,he was landlor and everyone was scared of him and obeyed his each and every ordered.

"kya kaha?""he groaned while standing up from his chair in anger and the others were too stood up

To heard his loud groaned..

"Us ki himmat kaise hue"he said in quite loud voice and others were got scared..

"dhoond ke lao us larki ko"he ordered them and the three of men between them stood up holding their pistols..

"jo jukum Malik Sahib"they said and went out the room

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Mayank sat on driving seat and started drove the car towards her home as he heard it was not safe area to stayed and beside all that she was unconscious and he had to reached back home as soon as possible..

But during the whole way he made sure she would not hurt due to jumps of rough roads..

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Someone knocked the door and shilpa went towards the main door as she knew Mayank would be there.

"Mayank!!who is she??"Shilpa asked worriedly seeing him picking up a girl in his arms who was seemed to be unconscious..

"Please Maa don't ask anything right now..i will tell you later but now she needs a doctor..please call Shah uncle" he said as he entered in house with Nupur is in his arms

Shah was their family doctor and moreover he could not trust anyone except him..

Shilpa dialed Shah's number and said him to came their house as there was an emergency..

"Bhaiya Lied her here" Gunjan said Mayank while helping him to lied her on his bed..Mayank carefully lied down on bed and Gunjan adjusted pillow under her head Nupur was still unconscious. Mayank pulled the comforter and about to gave her when he noticed blood on her foot,he carefully held her foot and removed the bold with his finger there was a deep wound, his heart arched to see her wound he did not know why he was feeling her pain,he slightly rubbed his fingers on her foot and went up to his cupboard and grabbed out the first aid box..

"what are you doing Mayank"shilpa asked to see him cleaning her foot with cotton..

"Maa there is a deep wound on her foot"he cleaned the wound and slightly applied ointment on her foot while Shilpa and Gunjan went towards kitchen to made something for her..

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here is next update.i hope u ll liked it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
i loved it...😳
awesome update SIS...👏👏
m glad ke Mayank Nupur ko apne sath le gaya...😳
waise yeh toh hona hi tha hain na...😉
i loved d connection Mayank felt for Nupur...😳
so Mayank called d doctor whom he can rely on...😉
i really love d way he take care of Nupur...😳
waiting eagerly for d next update...😳
i know Mayank will protect his Nupur from dis evil ppl...😉
Beuatifully written sis...
love u sis...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
mariii
ye kya hai
itna chota sa update???????????????:( :( :(
anyway the update was superb
maaynk was very caring and helpful...
loved mayu and his family- thanx GOD nups is now safe
mari plzzz next time try to update a longer part...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Nice update..
Nupur is in safe hands now..
hope that noone tracks her down
cont soon

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