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Posted: 13 years ago
itna chota update maria... :( :(
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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful responce and commentsšŸ¤—šŸ¤—means a lot to mešŸ¤—šŸ¤—
Today i am going to post last part of this FF,the story gonna end on positive note,i hope u ll like it..
Maria...remember me in ur prayersšŸ¤—

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Play with Fire

"Ya Allah Meri Nupur mujhe mil jaye'"Mayank closed his eyes and prayed in his heart.

Inspector Asgar kicked the door and Mayank entered in following him, Inspector Asgar slowly moved his step looking around carefully without making noise followed by Mayank,there were three rooms in the house along with a small courtyard in the center of house, keeping their eyes on their surroundings they moved towards the room, Mayank rushed towards door to open it when Inspector Asghar signaled him to stop, "don't open it, let me check first"

He signaled few policemen to check the others rooms, keeping his pistol straight towards door Inspector Asghar kicked the door with his foot and moved inside following him Mayank too rushed towards the room but the room was empty,Mayank disappointedly looked around and a drop of tear tricked from his eyes, "we can find him Mayank"Inspector Asghar pressed his hand on Mayank's shoulder and he closed his eyes..

"sir other two rooms are also empty, I think they got clue about our arrival" a one of policeman informed him after checking the rooms, "but we have found something"

Mayank swung around and his feet glued to it place, "a torn duppata and this chain,"

Mayank rushed towards him and took the duppata in his hands, " ye duppata meri Nupur ka hai'"words barely came out from his mouth almost in whispering tone and a tear slipped from the corner of his eye which fell on duppata, "Shit!!!Its mean they were here'now its confirmed they are in this area, someone has leaked the information that's why they escaped before our arrival"he disappointedly jerked his hand, "Now we have to be careful, we should not waste our time here, we can catch them as they are still in this area, let's move"

Inspector Asghar ordered to his force and turned to look at Mayank who was still looking at duppata with hollow eyes,his heart caught in fist to see Mayank's love for Nupur, "I promise you Mayank,I will find your Nupur,tumhain tumhari Nupur sahi,salamat wapis miley gi,I promise you"he pressed his hand on Mayank's shoulder and assured him.

"we have to do something fast to save her as her life is in great danger as Malik has held Panjait to give punish to Nupur,you have to be strong Mayank for her,please Mayank compose yourself, be strong"he patted his shoulder and Mayank gulping his lupm to control his tears nodded his head, "good"Inspector Asghar gave him side hug and they moved out the room'

After unsuccessful attempt they made another strategy to catch them when Inspector Asghar's informer informs them that Malik had held the punjayat at his house and after considering her as "kari"they would kill her..

This news had snatched the earth beneath Mayank's feet, they had less time in their hands to save Nupur, Inspector Asghar called more force to catch all the people red handed who were involved in this case, with all the preparations they moved towards Malik's house.

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Karo means black man and Kari is black woman in Sindhi. Karo-Kari refers to their bad acts.

They dragged Nupur towards the courtyard where the panjayat was held and waiting for her ,her body was paining and her eyes were swollen due to continuous crying,

"ye hai Nupur,Malik Zavar ki beti"one of man made her stood in front of the people of Punjayat and she looked around to hear her parent's voice, "Nupur"they tried to come close to her when few men came forward and pushed Zavar and Zareena away and they did not let them to come close to her, "Maa,Baba" recollecting her senses she whispered barely and tears gushed down from her eyes as her eyes fell on her parents, "Malik Uday ko bulao,hamain us se sara waqaya(incident)pochna hai,"a one of member in Punjayat ordered a man and he nodded his head moved inside the room and brought him out..

"uday tum ne kyun Malik Ahsaan ke bte ko Mara?"They asked him and Nupur swung her head to look at his brother with hopeful eyes may be today he will say truth and will tell everyone his sister is innocent,Uday moved his eyes from other side to ignoring her,

"Malik sahib,Meri behen Nupur ka Malik Ahsaan ke bete ke saath na jaiz taluq tha,main ne in dono ko chup chup ke milte dekh liya tha,Koi bhi bhai aisa hi kerta apni behen ko kisi gair Admi ke saath dekh ker"he lied again and Nupur felt her feet froze at it place she looked a him with disbelief and tears came out like fluid from her eyes she could not believe her own brother had put blamed on her for that deed which she did not do, he knew his sister was innocent but to save his own life he threw her sister in fire and put all blame on her'

"Nahi'ye jhoot bol raha hai..meri beti beqasoor hai'"Zareena and Zavar screamed in helplessness and rushed towards their daughter when one of person kicked Zavar and he fell on floor, "baba"she tried to walk towards her father when a person slapped Nupur hard and she fell on floor..

After Uday,few more witnesses had given their statements against Nupur,they lied as they were Uday's friend..After hearing all this,Jury(Panjayat) had declared Nupur as "Kari..Nupur said many times she was innocent but they did not pay attention on her words,her pleads .After listening the decision Zareena got unconscious while Zavar pleaded infront of anyone to save his daughter but they did not listen him..

Panjayat "jury" ordered to kill Nupur,they ordered few men to take her in field and cut her head as she did not deserve to live,she was Kari ,a bad women..

Decision had to be taken and they had been taken Nupur to kill her and All the panjayat of the members were ready to go back their houses.. "Malik sahib ab hum chalet hain"one of member got up from his seat followed by other members when their feet glued at their places to listen D.I G voice,

"itni jaldi bhi kya hai..hamain apni mehman nawazi ka mauqa toh dain"he said sarcastically and signaled his force to arrest them,Malik sahib and Uday tried to escaped but they could not succeeded..

Then they got news that some people had been taken Nupur few minutes before Mayank ran from there towards field followed by Inspector Asghar and few policemen..

They threw Nupur on the grass and smiled evilly, "ab tujhe kaun bachaye ga"one of person laughed evilly showing her axe, "Mera Allah jo Asmaan ,zameen ka malik hai..."Nupur whispered and looked at sky with teary eyes,they laughed more loudly after listening her words ,she closed her eyes and her parents and Mayank face flashed in front of her eyes, she heard a painful shriek and opened her eyes, a person who was holding an axe was now lying on floor blood coming out from his mouth,Mayank gave him another kick on his face and he turned to see Nupur who was looking at him with teary eyes still could not belief her Mayank was in front of her, "Mayank"a whispered escaped from her lips tears gushed down from her eyes, "Nupur"Mayank rushed towards her and gathered her in his arms, finally he had got his Nupur,he had saved her, they both cried out their heart in each other arms,Mayank pulled back and cupped her face, "Nupur'tum theek ho na?"His voice barely came out from his lips almost in whispering tone due to tears and she nodded her head cupping his face to assure herself she was not dreaming and a smile spread on her lips while tears fell down on her cheeks, "Nupur'."Mayank patted her cheek as she had been got unconscious in his arms..

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Mayank removed the curtains of the window and rays of sun entered in lightened the room, he welcomed a new day of their lives and swung his head to look at Nupur who was still sleeping due to effect of medicine, stepping closed to bed he beside her on bed and leaning his face he kissed her forehead, "Nupur"he caressed her cheek lovingly and she opened her eyes slowly and her lips curled into smile to see Mayank .she raising her hand touched his face and Mayank held her and kissed them, "Naye subaha,naye din aur hamari naye zindagi ka aghaz ho gaya hai Nupur aur main promise kerta hoon tumahari zindagi khushion se bhar doon ga,gham ko tumhare pass bhi nahi ane doon ga,bohat pyaar kerta hoon tum se,Kya tum apni zindagi main mujhe shamil karo gi?"She smiled widely to hear his confession and nodded her head she pulled him in her arms and Mayank crawling up his arms around her waist gathered her in his arms, "hum ap se bohat pyaar kerte ain Mayank ap ke bina is zindagi ka Tassawur bhi nahi ker sakte.."she confessed hiding her face in his neck. "Thank you loving me back soon to be Mrs Mayank Ahmed".he teased her and smiled and blushing at his words she squezzed herself in his arms..

Exactly After three week they got married and finally she became Nupur Mayank Ahmed..

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The End

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Finally the story ended on positive note,When i had started this story i did not axpect that much responce from my readers but Thank u so much everyone for liking this concept and accepting the characters,the story line the way it was..šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
My main aim to raise this topic to show the cruel and inhuman face of society where still women suffering due to these type of customs,they still could not get their rights and they abused ,treated inhumanly,get killed in the name of honour..
At the end of this story i just want to ask few questions from you all and will wait for your answers on them...
1..how can we stop this injustice with women?
2..how can we save innocent life?
3..is it right to keep quite after seeing injustice,inhuman behaviour?
please share your views about this story...
Love Maria..Always remember me in your prayers..
Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww u ended it,it was the most beautiful story i have ever read,based on reality,you did full justice to this story,i will miss it..
about your questions i just want to say,it will be cruelty from our side too if we stay keep quite after seeing injustice infront of our eyes..
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautifuly written and nice endingšŸ‘
congo 4 becoming sizzler🄳
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Posted: 13 years ago
A,azing and beautiful ending
loved Mayur in this FF
loved it,i ll miss it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was amazing update dear
wonderfully written and perfect ending
it was most realistic story i have read..loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful ending
loved Mayur most they were so innocent
beautifully written
you did justice to this story
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it was beautiful update and amazing ending
i loved Mayank in this FF,he was gem,i wana appreciate to raise this topic..
really will miss this FF

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