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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anukrati

really sorry for late reply dear

my like button is not working i like it
superb update 👏
love abhay pia convo as well their sweet interaction. hey season first end with pia memory lost and abhay want to give his soul right so take leap in season2?
nice update love season 1 but reading this season 2,it also intresting
update soon
thanks 4 pm (like my long reply)

i understand yaar exams are going on !!you must me busy these days!!me too ...absolutly right chalo koi toh esa jise samaj anyways my most of the readers are confused about this haha😆...i will try to update soon !!hope your exams will be good !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update,loved it soo much.
wow awesome update,loved it soo much.
wow awesome update,loved it soo much.
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Posted: 13 years ago

First of All I M REALLY SORRY for late reply yaar😭 Actually mera system kharab ho gaya tha isiliye achha feedback nahi de paayi😭.😭...

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Ab to maaf kar de na PLEASE...
Dear I Have No words I m Speechless...
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😊tou fir MULAHIZA kijiye... TUTA PHUTA... FEED BACK😊😆
👏👏⭐️⭐️Its MindBlowing👏👏⭐️⭐️
👏u deserve a gr8...👏
But why sad ending???😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

First of All I M REALLY SORRY for late reply yaar😭 Actually mera system kharab ho gaya tha isiliye achha feedback nahi de paayi😭.😭...

4 being LATE
SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY
Ab to maaf kar de na PLEASE...
Dear I Have No words I m Speechless...
😉😉
😊tou fir MULAHIZA kijiye... TUTA PHUTA... FEED BACK😊😆
⭐️Its MindBlowing⭐️
👏u deserve a gr8...👏
But why sad ending???😭😭
👏
😃Love Abhiya😃
update...
⭐️the LOVE😳 The Friendship n PLOT WRAPUP is OUTCLASS⭐️
my friend !
😳Abhiya are jus😳
😊a small TREAT😊
😊SUMTHIN' 4 U😊
😊And my last request ...
PLEASE PM me When you Start ur Sequel yaar😊 ...
UR WORK IS...
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[ THANKU SO MUCH DEAR,I AM GLAD THAT YOU LIKED MY UP DATE BUT I HAVE ALREADY UPDATED TWO CHAPTERS OF MY SEQUEL YOU DID NOT SEEM TO READ THEM !!HAHA NO PROBLEM JUST CHECK THE INDEX AND READ YOU WILL GOING TO LOVED THEM !!ALRIGHT AND THANKU SO MUCH FOR THIS BEHANA 😆I LOVED IT !!HAHA ,AGAIN THANKU SO MUCH !!!AND OFF COURSE READ THOSE CHAPTERS !ANYWYAS FROM MY SID TO YOU AND THANKU SO MUCH FOR THE JADDO KI JPI AND THIS IS FROM MY SID TO MY DEAR FRIEND HAHA QUOTE
Edited by vampireking - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanku so much
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

wow awesome update,loved it soo much.

wow awesome update,loved it soo much.
wow awesome update,loved it soo much.

thanku so much arunsunita ,i am glad that you liked my update !!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
I like seaon 2 more for some reason!! do update soon prerna! tum toh pkyek forum me aate hi nahi. And btw, sorry for commenting so late. I didnt know you had started with seaon 2. My inboz was so full, I didnt see your pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali.K

I like seaon 2 more for some reason!! do update soon prerna! tum toh pkyek forum me aate hi nahi. And btw, sorry for commenting so late. I didnt know you had started with seaon 2. My inboz was so full, I didnt see your pm.

haha ,thanku so much even i am also liking season 2 only !!! actually i know what the reason but take it as a secret 😆mein pkyk forum iseliye nahi aati coz my exams are going on and when i like someone ff i started reading his or her ff @the particular time only !!!so avoid time wastage i did not visit pkyk forum !!!!!!haha 😆 so tumare exam nahi chall rahe hai kiya ??😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello guys ,i am updating my ff i am very happy that you all are liking my ff as i will going to take this ff as a new story line coz most of you are liking season 1 only and i am also liking season 2 only 😆
chapter -12 (party till you drop )
the flight is landing off .they both of decided that this will be last meeting .they both were moving in the opposite nor abhay nor piya is looking behind to seen each other as this about their respect how can they looked first !!this willbe their disrespect !!😆.they both were dying to see each other again they want to just look back but as they both has decided that will not going to see each other face again .
(in the office )
abhay is having a meeting he finished that .aah i should leave otherwise sid will go into the depression again in the memories of nargis .he leaved the place and when he is in the airport .he is booking his ticket in the ticket country .suddenly some one keep his shoulder on abhay's shoulder !!!!!!!!
abhay looked behind and hugged
.abhay :sid what are you doing here ??
sid : actually there is another meeting also and you are picking up the call !!!abhay :acctually i am on the airplane !!that is why so cant pick up the phone !!sid :no problem abhay !!lets go !!abhay
:where ??


sid :abhay we already have enjoyed with the England girls now its time to enjoy with american girls or anything there is a bachelor party also !!so whats say should we go ??plzz plzz abahy :alright !!

(in the bachelor party )
abhay wears this dress
sid wears this dress
the party is _:

and the sexy girls are doing pole dancing and one by one beautiful pole dancers are removing their clothes .then first of all they removed their shirt then pant while dancing .open her hairs .and now they are looking looking super hot and the boys are looking at them with gooo gooo eyes !!😳just one boy who is not looking at him is abhay raichand .the girl come to abhay and started kissing him !!!they both were get lost in passion .
suddenly ,girls done the gatecrashing by getting bored in their party actually 😆 when piya entered with the girls he seen abhay with that pole dancer in a very good position .they both were upon each other !!!piya goes to abhay and said :abhay learn some manners while piya arrow to the other boys they were getting beated by their girlfriends ..abhay :excuse me !!!piya this is a bachelor party so this is all normal i know you cant be like this !!piya :haa *without knowing what she is saying *ohh i am really i mean i don't want to be like her i just want you will get some manners !!!!abhay taking out his lead from his ears *did you say something *piya :you are disgusting .she leaved ..abhay :i will take it as a compliment thanku piya !!!(leaning towards the bar )
(in the bar )
all the boys decided to play truth and dare .first chance come on sam .sid :so you have to go to the most beautiful girl in this place asked for the number !!!!alright !!!go ahead !!!!sam goes to piya which is sitting on the couch and asked hey ,kya tum mujhe aapna phone number dogi ??piya :why ?tumare paas apna phone number nahi hai kiya ??
everyone started laughing and sam feel embarrassed by piya 's reply .
piya dress
abhay :daammm she is looking so hottt after seeing piya !!so the next turn is of abhay .aryan :so abhay you have to kissed a girl in front of everyone !!!if she will be anybody ok !!!abhay :yaa sure !!
abhay seen that girls are fighting over him to pass through the gate pass through misha has holding someoanne hair and the next girl is holding someone hand and next girl is holding her leg !!!!!!they were all fighting with each .after some time jenna enteredd abhay kissed her passionately .they both were bitting each other lips jenna is allover on abhay !!!then piya gets angry and started drinking continually !!she has already taken 2 or 3 packs after that some boys come and hold piya and holding her from the hip dancing with .piya is trying hard to loose from their grip .then suddenly abhay entered .go away otherwise i will show you the way of heaven !!!the boys leaved .and ahay carries piya while carring piya is murmurring that abhay ' s wears red underwear .hehe then piya run away from abhay 's arms and reached to the swimming pool and jumped off !!piya please come out please *abhay requested *piya :alright mere shona !!shonsa !!meine aa rahi huu bahar par ek shirt pein !!!abhay :bahar toh aahoo when piya come out !!abhay cant take out his eyes from piya her drees is now transparent !!piya (like a baby )abbhy ,i will get sick !!please remove my top !!and pant !!!abhay :no way !!piya ;so thik mein bhi nahi jaungi !!abhay *aah piya first of all if i will remove all this i dont think i have enough power to fight with your sexy body !!!piya is sitting .abhay :ok come !!abhay removed her shirt and piya gives a puch to abhay and then piya also jump on pool and then they both stated kissing each other !abhay get removed from lips *this is it alright lets leave !!!!!!.
piya :plesheh abhay dont be so closed with jenna !!!i am feeling like killing those bitches who will going to snatch you from me !!then piya suddenly get hungry and tearing and opeing abhay shirt .piya ;open this pant abhay !!!right now ...abhay :calmed down piya !!!!!
precap :lust take over on love !!

note :i know guys this update is not too good coz i updated it from my self phone !!!please do comments as they appreciate me to write good .
i am missing abhiya 😭😭




Edited by vampireking - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update dear. I am missing abhiya too. All the dresses were nice. Waiting for the next one. Thanks for the pm.

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