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Originally posted by: marina k

i love your fan-fic, i just read it. 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Sour Skittles

nice!!!!! is angad gonnapropose to kripa in the forest?? that b soooo awesum
luv himani

yes angad is going to propose in forest and that to ...........

surprise wait till next part to read how he proposes her

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THANKS TO ALL OF YOU 😊
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recap:
angad finds the truth
now........
a: thanks for your help josh
j: anytime buddy
josh leaves with a big smile and tears at the same time
angad gets ready and goes down stairs naina is looking at him seriously
a: kya huva mom , why are you so serious
na: angad better you don't talk to me
a: kyun maine kya kiya
na: do you know what you did last night
a: mom iam sorry, i won't drink agian
na: what happened to you angad , you were never drunk before then why did you drink last night
a: mom, oh sab kuch main badhmain bholungha , pehle mujhe bhok lag rahi hey can i have something to breakfast aur mujhe office bhi jana hey
na: tum office nahin ja rahey hey ho, you need to go out of city for a week
a: kya????????.........i mean kyun
na: tumhre dad ne tumhraliye ek kam chod ke gaye hey
a: kuan sa kam
naina gives him a file
na: tum file dekh lo main jake tum khane keliye kuch lavunghi
angad opens with disappointment that he can't meet kripa for whole week, but as soon as he studies the file he smile is back on his face
a: YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS(shouts)
naina comes out of kitchen running
na: kya huva angad tum ne ithna kyun chilaya
a: oh kuch nahin mom , bus yuhi ithni achi kam dad ne mujeh dhiye hey tho
na: hmmmm......(thinking something is wrong)
angad finishes his breakfast and calls misty
mi: bhol romeo kya bath hey
a: i want to meet you immediately
mi: kyun kya bath hey
a: phone pe nahin come to the beach
mi: iam already at the beach
a: ok i will meet you in 10 minutes
mi: ok
misty is walking at the beach suddenly strong hands are around her waist lifting her and spinning
mi: angad chodo i am feeling dizzy
atlast angad leaves
a: she loves me misty she loves me
mi:(trying not show that she already knows) sachhhhhhh tho tumne vuse propose kiya
a: nahin lakin i am going to propose her
mi: phir tumhe kaise patha ki oh tumse pyar karthi hey
a: mujeh josh ne bhola hey
mi: thinking.........josh ne means he understood what i told him, thanks josh
a: lekin mujhe darr lag raha hey
mi: kyun
a: patha nahin
mi: kaha propose karne valle ho vuse
a: jungle main
mi: shocked, kya????????????, thab tho vuse haan kehna padegha
a: confused, kyun
mi: kyun ki oh socheghi ki aghar oh na bholi tho kahi tum vuse akhele jungle main chodeghe
a: budhu oh abhi jungle main koi village main hey
mi: kya thu vuse propose karne jungle ja rahey ho kya , how sweet of you romeo
a: first stop calling me romeo, and rahi bath jungle jane ki pehle maine bhi socha ki kuch na kuch bahana banake kripa ke pass javungha lekin dad ne mujhe ek project dhi hey vohi jungle main
mi: jungle main kuan sa project
a: har sal ki tarah iss sal bhi company ek socail activity karthi hain, in which 10 people from the office staff and a head person will go and help people in various things, tho iss sal humara project jungle main village ke people ko medicines supply karna aur jo medical staff vaha ja rahi hey vunke sath milke village main camp rakhna hey , so iam going this year
mi: wow thats great, kabb ja rahey ho tum
a: ajj sham ko
mi: cool

back to kripa
they are going in a mini van everyone is enjoying but kripa is silent
sohan(so): kripa ji ajj app ithna chup kyun hey zara hum bhi tho jane
k:........
madhesh(md): arey yaar shayad boyfriend ka phone nahin aya
gouri(gi): stop it madhesh vuse kyun tang kar rahey ho
madhesh: arey gou tumhe kithne bar bhola ki madhesh nahin mujhe maddy bhulavo style se
gouri: and I told u many times that my name is gouri and not gou got it
rohan is reading some article not caring about whats going on
md: arey yaar rohan teri girl friend ko samjana ki maddy se panga math lena
rohan(ro): maddy aghar thu vuse panga nahin le saktha tho chup chap apna kam karle and better don't disturb me varna.......
everyone is now laughing at madhesh except kripa
they all reach the forest where they are going to leave, there are 3 small cottages, one is for boys one is for girls and the other one is for the sponsors(that is angad and co)
the watch man of the guest house says that their camp starts from next day so to take rest for today
mohith(mo): sohan ye jungle main sher(tigers) tho nahin hongey na
so: patha nahin yaar lekin maine suna ki .......
mo: suna ki
so: lions hothey hey
mo: kya ????? ....... issliye maine bhola ki main nahin avungha lekin tum log mujeh yaha laye
shakthi(sh): sohan kyun bechare ko daratha yaar chod na vuse
rahul(rl): (coming out of bathroom) kya yaar ajj ka plans
so: main bathatha hu ajj ke plans , pehle hum site seeing jayenghey phir vaha se sher, hathi se milke snacks kayenghey , phir cobra hamara guide iss jungle ko dhikhane keliye tho oh humain pura jungle gumayegha bholo kaisa hey my plan , haan bholna bulgaya bichmain lions aur tigers ke wrestling (spelling) compitetion bhi chahe tho dekh sakthey hey

now everyone is laughing except mohith, he is shivering

kripa is unpacking her stuff, harshini,anitha,pallavi and gouri are discussing something but kripa is thinking about the previous night

flashback

kripa came back from party a little early as she got phone call from harshini about the camp , so she need to pack . while kripa is packing
sa: di
k: haan bholo sakshi
sa: mujhe apse kuch bath karni hey
k: jaldhi bholo mujhe jaldhi sona hey aur kal subha hi nikhalna hey
sa: di mujhse ek badi galthi hogayi
k: let me guess tum aur tumhare friends milke disco gaye hey aur papa ko ye bath nahin patha chalna chahiye , am i correct
sa: nahin di
k: phir kya hey
sa: di mujhe patha hey angad app se kyun tik tarah bath nahin kar raha hey
k: (on listening angads name stops packingand looks at sakshi)kyun bhol
sa: kyun ki maine galthi se bhola ki app kisi aur se pyar karthey hey
kripa slaps sakshi real hard
sa: (crying) sorry di mujhe nahin patha ki app angad se pyar karthi hey, iam really sorry di
k: sakshi don't talk anymore and please leave me alone
sakshi goes to her room crying

end of flash back

everyone had their dinner they kept a camp fire in front of cottages boys and girls are singing and dancing but kripa is thinking
k(thinking): how can angad believe that i love someone , kya oh mujhe ek bar bhi puch nahin saktha , koi bhi bhole tho oh maan jayegha, maine vuse misty ke bare main pucha tho soch atleast he will get to know that i am little afraid of him having a girlfriend. lakin main kyun......
her thoughts were interrupted by harshini
ha: kripa chalna room ko chalthey hey sab log chale gaye thu akheli byti yaha pey
k: thu chal main avunghi
ha: ye jungle hey madam come on….
just then kripa feels that someone is staring at her and she turns back to see no one
as kripa gets in a body comes out from the trees and has a smile on his face, as he is walking towards one of the cottages we can slowly see his well build body then we see its angad.

next day morning every one went to the village the tents were already kept and the medical group started testing people and giving them medicines
kripa is checking a lady
k: harshini can u give me that flu injection
harshini was about to give when someone takes the injection from harshini's hand and gives a red rose to kripa , kripa without seeing who it is takes the rose thinking it as injection
kripa then sees that it's a rose but not injection so she turns back and gets shocked to see angad standing in front of her

a: hi kripa
kripa ignores him takes the injection and gives it to the lady
a: kripa
k:.......
k: harshini can u come with me till cottage i want to take some rest
ha: about to say ok but angad signals her to say no, sorry yaar mujhe yah ape abhi kam hey i think ……. angad can come with you , facing angad can you go with her
a: ya sure not a problem, anyway main bhi cottage ko jane vala tha
ha: chalo kripa you go with angad i will meet you in the evening
a: tho chale kripa
k: harshini i think i can stay here

all the time angad is just following kripa until they go to their own cottages

in girls cottage
pallavi(pa): arey yaar ajj tho mujhe lagtha hey ki iam in love
anitha,harshini,gouri: 51
pa: 51 !!!!!, whats that number for
ha: tujhe pichle 4 saal main 50 times
pa: oh tho sirf attraction yaar lekin this time i think its true love
gi: pehle ye bhol ki iss bar kuan hey oh
pa: oh vuss 3rd cottage main aye hey sponsor hey na
an: ek sponsor hi nahin aya vuske office main work karne vale bhi aye hey so can you tell us the name
pa: (trying to feel shy) angad khanna
just then kripa comes out of the bathroom and hears angad's name and left in her own thoughts

angad comes to the boys cottage, everyone is busy with their own things so angad knocks on the door
sh: without looking who it is , come in
ma: hey you are Mr. Angad khanna right
a: ya iam angad
sh: oh app iam sorry maine so cha oh watch man chayi lekhey aya hey
a: oh that's ok
everyone introduces themselves to angad
rl: app yahape kya kar rahey hey , i mean you are big business tycoon
a: ya right but i am here for this medical camp, we are the sponsors for this
so: oh maine socha ki app apne girlfriend ko manane aye hey , oh kay hey na kripa dho dhin se bahuth hi moody hey and we can't see her like that
a: mujhe pata hey oh kisliye naraz hey and don't worry she will be back to normal again
by tomorrow
mo: arey yaar bathey karthey rahoghey ya kuch aur bhi karoghey mujeh tho bahuth jorr se bukh lag rahi hey
a: hey guys i need some help
md: bholiye
a: oh hum pure 10 members aye hey so its really hard to share a cottage with them can i share the cottage with you people , if at all you don't ahev any problem
sh: with pleasure
ro: not a problem for us
a: thanks

in girls cottage
k: harshini kya sub log anti-flu ka shot le liye
ha: hum sub tho kal subha hi leliye na
k: main humare bare main nahin sponsors ke bare main puch rahi hu
ha: angad ka mujeh patha nahin lekin bakhi log leliye
k: can you find out whether angad took the shot or not
ha: sorry yaar you need to do that by yourself
k: leave it, iam feeling sleepy good night
ha: good night
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Posted: 19 years ago
hope you guys like the part
next part will be posted in few hours
don't forget to write comments
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recap:

angad meets kripa

now..........

angad and kripa both are not able to sleep angad plans a surprise for kripa and goes to sleep after a lot of tossing

next day

at the camp

everyone is busy in treating and testing people

k: shakthi

sh: haan bholo kripa

k: kya angad ne anti-flu ka shot le liya

sh: mujeh patha nahin kripa i think u should ask sohan or rahul

k: ok thanks

sohan and rahul are in the same tent , sohan is giving medicines and rahul is writing some record

k: hey guys

so: atlast you are talking, from todays we thought that there is some problem with your throat

rl: ya me too

k: come on stop it, mujeh ek help chahiye

so: tumhe bhi

k: tumhe bhi ka kya mathlab

so: leave it

k: ya what ever , i just wanted to know a small information

rl: angad ne anti-flu ka shot nahin li hey

k: hey how do you ...... i mean main kyun vuske bare main puchunghi

so: kyun ki jab tum shakthi se puch rahi thi thab hum log tumhare piche tey

k: ok ok angad ..........

before she could finish her sentence

rl: angad shot thab legha jab tum kudh vuse dhoghi

k: where is

so: he is in your tent ........i mean jaha tum patients ko treat kar rahi ho vaha

k: th......

rl&so(together) : thanks bholne ki jarrurath nahin hey

k: bye(angry tone)

kripa is going to her tent

so: liya bechaini ka jog

laga laga laga ra , laga laga laga re, laga laga laga re

laga prem rog

laga laga laga ra , laga laga laga re, laga laga laga re

laga prem rog ...................

k: SHUT UP

sohan and rahul giggle

in kripa's tent angad is helping pallavi with a patient , pallavi is all lovy dovey with angad , on seeing kripa angad starts the same thing with pallavi

k: (angry tone) Mr. Angad Khanna

a: oh hi kripa tum kabb ayi

k: i need to talk to you

a: ya

k: app ko anti-flu leni hey

a: i don't want to

k: sorry but you need to take it

a: you need the reason why i had not taken till now , so..........

k: just go and take your shot Mr.Angad Khanna

a: sorry , turning towards pallavi and harshini bye girls

pa: bye angad

ha: bye

k: (mumbling) what he thinks of himself

harshini giggles

angad goes gives a high-five to shakthi

a: thanks man plan is working

sh: its ok yaar dosthi kit ho help karna hi padegha na

in the evening

gi: kripa kya sub log anti-flu shots le liye kya

k: mujhe patha nahin

gi: can you ask everyone , because the disease is spreading very fastly

in boys cottage

rl: inteha ho gayi intezaar ki aayi na kuchh khabar mere yaar kiyeh hamein hai yakeen bewafaa woh nahin phir wajah kya hui intezaar ki (sohna joins rahul) inteha ho gayi intezaar ki aayi na kuchh khabar mere yaar kiyeh hamein hai yakeen bewafaa woh nahin phir wajah kya hui intezaar ki(shakthi also joins)baat jo hai uss mein baat woh yahaan kahin nahin kissi meinwoh hai meri bas hai meri shor hai yahi gali gali meinsaath saath hai woh mere gham mein meri har khushi meinzindagi mein woh nahin toh kuchh nahin hai meri zindagi mein bujh na jaaye yeh shama aitbaar kiinteha ho gayi intezaar ki aayi na kuchh khabar mere yaar kiyeh hamein hai yakeen bewafaa woh nahin phir wajah kya hui intezaar ki a: SHUT UP

so: arey yaar kya ajj dhono premiyone shut up bhol ne ki vrath li kya subha se dekh raha hu

a: whatever

and he goes to take a shower

back in girls cottage

kripa gets worried , she takes shower and wears a white shalwar kameez with silver earrings and silver bangles, takes out her medical kit and goes towards boys cottage

seeing kripa coming towards the cottage, when kripa is near the door, madhesh starts singing a song so that kripa can hear

ma: tere dar par sanam chale aaye

too naa aayaa to hum chale aaye

been tere koee aas bhee naa rahee

itane tarase ke pyaas bhee naa rahee

ladakhadaye kadam chale aaye

k: SHUT UP

sh: hey kripa kya huva, tum iss waqt yaha

rl: (naughty tone) kya kripa tum hamain kuch karoghi nahin na

k: oh shut up rahul

so: alo phir se aur ek shut up

ro: arey yaar chodo na vuse , kyun vus bechari ko thang karthey ho

k: thanks rohan

ro: its ok, angad went to take a shower

k: (angry tone) rohan

ro: arey abb maine kya kiye ki tum ko mujhpe gussa aya , tum angad ke liye ayi thi tho maine bhola

k: SHUT UP maine kab angad ke bare main pucha tum logo se

ma: dekh rohan ya tumhe bhi shut up bholdhi hey , shayad shut up ki isske pass thoda jayadha hi stock hey

k: stop it now

just then angad comes out side without shirt and he is wearing a jeans, angad sees kripa and is mesmerized by her beauty, they both stare at each other after a while they both come out of trans as rohan singing a song

ro: tumhe aaj maine jo dekha

ho tumhe aaj maine jo dekha

tumhe aaj maine jo dekha

chamka hai kismet ka tara

badli naseeb ki rekha

tumhe aaj maine jo dekha

tumhe aaj maien jo dekha

chamka hai kismet ka tara

badli naseeb ki reakha

tumhe aaj maine jo dekha

tum ishq mere tum khwaab mere

tum jaan mere tum pyar mere

dildar mere dil raina.........

k&a: SHUT UP

ro: arey main mere lover keliye ghana gah raha that ho bhi tum logo ko problem hey

just then gouri comes from behind kripa

k&a: oops sorry

ro: that's ok

k: angad i need to talk to you

a: one minute i will be back

angad comes back wearing a transparent black shirt

a: chale

angad and kripa goes out side

rohan and gouri exchange high-fives and they both also go out in another direction

angad and kripa are walking in silence

a: kripa i thought you have some thing to talk to me

k: yes i need to talk to you

a: carry on

k: tumne i mean app ne anti-flu shot kyun nahin li

a: mujeh nahin chahiye , nothing will happen to me

k: angad tum samjthey kyun nahin disease is spreading , you need to take the shot

a: on one condition

k: whats that

a: first you need to forgive me

k: angad tum injection loghey ya nahin

a: will you forgive me

k: angad

a: kripa

k: angad there is nothing to forgive

a: first tell me that you forgiven me then i will tell whats that for

k: ok fine i accept your apology, come on now take the injection

a: kripa mujeh injection nahin lena hey

k: maine tho tumhe maaf kar dhiya na

a: phir bhi

k: angad you need to and that's final

a: kripa mujeh injection se dar laghtha hey, kya main koi pill nahin le saktha and he makes a puppy face

kripa can't stop laughing

a: iss main hassne vali kya bath hey

k: angad tum bhilkul bache ki tarah behave kar rahey ho

kripa sees a rock and sits on it

a: kya huva

k: iam tired lets sit here for a while

a: can i share the seat with you

k: sure

kripa moves a little, it's a small if anyone to any side the other will fall down, just imagine how they sit, kripa takes the injection

a: no kripa , i don't need a injection see how fit iam

k: angad shut up

a: kripa please

k: angad mujeh jabardhasthi dhena padegha

a: you can't

k: yes I can

a: no way

k: laghi sharth

a: ok

k: aghar tum har gaye tho

a: hey angad khanna never looses

k: aghar

a: jo tum manghogey oh dhungha, lekin tum har agyi tho

k: main bhi jot um manghogey oh dhunghi

a: done

k: angad oh kuan si bird hey

angad looks at the direction where kripa is pointing towards kripa , kripa gives him a kiss on his cheek, angad is shocked, he just stares at kripa it's a full moon day and the moon light is falling on kripas face from the gap of huge tree branches, she is looking more beautiful now, kripa gives injection to angad.

(imagine the whole scene just angad and kripa in the middle of the forest at night on a full moon day, moon light falling on them from the tree braches as if the moon is trying to see angad and kripa hiding in the braches)

a: ouchhhhhhhh and he holds his hand

k: dekha hogayi na ithni choti si bath keliye tum tho......

a: kripa this is cheating

k: no

a: yes

k: no

a: yes

k: yes

a: no

k: correct

a: what? you cheated again

k: anything is fair in love and war

preview: angad and kripa all alone in forest

that's all for today

hope you guys like the part

luv

sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago
that was a MINBLOWING PART! U did an awesome job! Plz cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
continue soon its great 😃
Edited by unum ali - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 great part plz plz plz cn. soon it's so funny about the songs and s word 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
THANKS TO EVERYONE FOR WRITTING COMMENTS
i will continue may be later in the day
luv
sweety

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