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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
really interesting
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: worldofdreams

Yeh lo... u didn't hurt me at all with ur comment dear!!! u r such a lovely reader and your comments can never hurt me😊 they can only enhance my thoughts and writing skills😊
and even i had the same thing in my mind , but then it would have been a complicated and a lenghty one , which would have taken ages for me to think for each and every part, phir mujhe bahut bahut kuch soch soch ke soch ke likhna padta...but i wanted to make it a lighter one , with some fun and some emotional moments , so i made the basic concept clear in the intro itself...!!!!
but still there will be some flashbacks for sure , but short ones😳😳
i know i know i'm a kaam chor but still kya karoon i wanted to write something on this so i chose to write a small and cute ss rather than a long and emotinal one


uff,,...babaji...

here i thought i will b able to make u turn this into a FF...but nahi ...u r right u r very lazy...😆

chalo it will b fun reading cute moments in the office...with geet being naughty n all...

n now that u r not upset by my comment...beware...😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
congo for new ss
awesome start
cont soon

harneet <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: jyoti_l


uff,,...babaji...

here i thought i will b able to make u turn this into a FF...but nahi ...u r right u r very lazy...😆

chalo it will b fun reading cute moments in the office...with geet being naughty n all...

n now that u r not upset by my comment...beware...😈

beware...😈
...OMG!!😲 nahi ... i take back my words i was buri tarah se zakhmi!!
just kiddin' 😆...i'm ready to accept all sorts of crticism but is poor bachi pe reham zaroor karna!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

uff,,...babaji...

here i thought i will b able to make u turn this into a FF...but nahi ...u r right u r very lazy...😆

chalo it will b fun reading cute moments in the office...with geet being naughty n all...

n now that u r not upset by my comment...beware...😈
beware...😈
...OMG!!😲 nahi ... i take back my words i was buri tarah se zakhmi!!
just kiddin' 😆...i'm ready to accept all sorts of crticism but is poor bachi pe reham zaroor karna!!!

🤣🤣

namu darling...ab kuch nahi ho sakta...😈

n i am not a critic..rather ...🤔..u will get to know...😳😆😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@jyoti di...
u r literally scaring me now...so let me prepare a list to save myself..
i'm very bad at wriiting , so spare my mistakes
I have a very tedhi soch ,so pls sopare my hopeless stories
i'm officially declared. As a crazy soul , so pls spare me!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Hey continue soon...nice idea!!!
Would luv to see how Geet convinces Maan😃
Edited by MishtiShona - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
@ namu --

🤣 🤣

aww...🤗..my sweet little sis got scared...🤗..n even prepared a list...😲

lol...dw...i know how u write...from what i have read...initially u were a sadist..😡...but later on gave us happy ending...😳...which i am very thankful for...😊

as long as maaneet r together ...u wont b getting 😡 from me...rather...u will get loads of this..🤗

n as for being a critic...i usually or rather never criticise...the author always knows best the story which they write...n i know u will do full justice to it...

n when i do not like something or have a diff opinion ...i will let u know ...just like i did today...😳

i'm very bad at wriiting , so spare my mistakes...u r not bad...rather i wud say u r evolving as a writer...

I have a very tedhi soch ,so pls sopare my hopeless stories...every1 thinks differently...so u r no exception...😆

i'm officially declared. As a crazy soul , so pls spare me!!!! ...as for sparing u...🤔...u r like my little sis...so dw...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Wow...what a fantastic start

Geet will have to work very hard

Hope u will update soon and pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats new SS
amazing concept
it looks like yu gave all info in one go
pls don't misunderstand me
love it but my opinion
wqaiting next
thnx so much
good luck dear

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