A-K After Marriage-last part pg.32:( - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
hey!

nice story but just one question - where in the real story is this taken from - when A&K get married this time>? Becoz they hated each other so -----?? :S

sorry just a bit confused ...

Chandini (",)
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
pleseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi chandni

i said the people are the same but the story line is differ so they hate each other in the drama but in mine the characters are the same but the story is different!!

kimi
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
nice story
good luck in ur test
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
Part # 3
sorry if its a little boring
and there are 3 new characters

kripa's friend : sanjana who is 22 yrs old
angad friend: rohit who is older than him he is 30 yrs old
angad's friends smaller sister kajol who is 20 yrs old

okay lets start.!!!

it starts with a-k get up the next morning.
kripa gets up and goes to the bathroom and quickly gets ready and then comes out and wakes up angad.

k: angad get up

a: kya hua

k:its morning

a: oh

he gets up and tell kripa that they are gonig to the beach today

k: okay then you get ready

angad gets ready and then they both go down holding each other's hand!! 😃

a: mom me and kripa are going to the beach okay

naina: okay bata have a good time

then they arrive and gets out of the car

a: kripa kya tum ice cream kahogi

k: okay angad

angad goes to get 2 ice creams and kripa is staning pretty far away when angad walks to her and by acident trips over a rock and falls on kripa.

they both are blushing 😳

the ice creams fell on both of kripa's cheeks

and angad licks off the ice cream
then angad almost kisses kripa when she turns around her head.

k: angad.........

and they both laugh

they get up and start walking when kripa laughs

a: why are u laughing

k: angad u should have seen your face jab tum fall kiya tha (and laughs again)

later on

k: angad kya tum jante ho ke kya hota hai jab 2 insaan ek doosere se pyar karte hai

a: wellll the wife gets pregnant

k: angaddddddd (and lighty hits him on his shoulder.

k: woh 2 insaan ke doosere se aur pyar aur dosti bhi ho jati hai

k: and u know woh 2 insaan onlyeach other ko nazaar ati hai

then kripa remambers somthing and says

k: angad main apni friend sanjana ko kuch give karna tha

a: okay then lets go




at the hotel sanjana is at

k: angad main jati hoon tum yahan sit karo

a: okay my sweet heart i love u

when kripa comes back out she sees angad hug this other girl

kripa goes to him and says angad lets go

a: okay

the whole way they dont talk to each other and angad thinks in his head" kya hua kripa ko"

when they arrive home kripa goes to her room and angad follows her

a: kripa kya hua and tries to hug her

kripa pushes him back

k: angad maine socha tha ke tum aise insaan nehi ho par tum

a: kripa wait maine

kripa cuts him off

k: no angad ab main talk karogi .
tum koi aur larki ko hug kiya jab tum mere saat shadi ki thi

and she leaves to go to the bathroom and in her mind the song:

zindigi mein aye khabhi aye na rabba............

and angad says in his head " mein kaise usko kahaon ke woh larki mere dost rohit ki choti sister hai par woh listen nahi karti."

then kripa comes out and says" angad tum bed pe sleep karo yah tum zameen pe"

a: mein zameen pe sleep karta hoon.

kripa sleeps on the bed and angad sings in his head

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh huzoor
tera tera tera surroor

meri baatein meri yaadein thanha raatein
tera tera tera surror ..........

and it ends there

sorry it was quite long but i wanted it to end with something for you to think of.

kimi 😃
Edited by kyph great fan - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
hey fantastic part lol....continue sooon...dont take to long to cont plz!! i cant wait!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
i will cont maybe sometime today okay!!!!!!!!

happy you like it!!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
sorry guys but this but this is going to be extermly short because i did this in 2 min

short part # 4

angad wakes up the next mroning and sees that kripa is on the bed sound asleep. but he goes near her and then gets an idea.

later......................

angad looks at the room he had decorated it beautiful and it had signs of im sorry and i love u. but then he noticed kripa was not there.

he runs down.

a: mom kripa kahan hai.

naina: woh hotel apni friend ka pas hai.

a: okay im oing

in the car. and thinks.
a: kya kripa mujhe nafrat karti hai???? 😭


when he gets there kripa is still inside .

kripa sees inside the same girl angad hugged.

ahe goes and asks: who are you
she says: kripa tum angad ki wife ho na
k: yes
she says: maine hoon rohits sister and is soo nice!!

kripa relizes that angad is not bad!!!
she is sad.



but angad was scared and went back home incase kripa does some drama outside so he sits in his room.

kripa was sad and then runa to her car and drives home. thinking what she said to him..

she reaches home!!!!!!!!

the end!!!!

i hoped you enjoyed it!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sorry guys i emailed you by saying:
just to let you know i wrote the 4th part
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=178863&PN=1& TPN=4
i think it is on this page!!!

i didnt let you know about what!!!
sorry!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
so nice plzzzzzzzzzz continue as soon as possible

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