MG MY 1st FF(Re-incarnation)(Note on Pg 140) - Page 66

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part 29
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As soon as they reached the beach Geet ran towards the Sea . Maan was shocked but happy to see that Geet was fine & had totally forgotten about last evening . No one wanted to remember that incidence . Geet was innocently playing in water . Everyone too joined her as now Geet was perfectly fine .

Ronak : Maan thank God ab Geet theek lag rahi hai .

Maan : Haan yaar ab toh aisa lag raha hai jaise kuch hua hi nahi .

Veer : Mein toh sach mein darr gaya tha .

But mujhe Mummy se baat karni padegi .

Maan : Veer rehene do . Nahi toh Aunty yunhi pareshan ho jayengi .

Veer : Mein toh sirf poochne wala tha .

Maan : I think ab yeh topic yahan close kar dete hain .

Veer : Maan theek jo tum Kaho . Waise bhi Geet ab tumahri zimedari hai .

I trust you for whatever you decide for Geet .

There was no further discussion about Geet anymore . It was lunch time . Maan did not had his food since last evening and was not feeling like having it now also , So he went to his room to take rest . Whole Staff was talking that Maan sir did not have anything to eat for 24 hrs . Geet hears it & gets worried . She thinks about what is wrong with Maan & why has he not had his food . Geet asks Staff to give Maan's Lunch Plate to her . Staff people gives her Lunch plate . They were very happy that their Maan Sir was going to get loveable Life Partner . They all liked Geet . Geet takes Maan's Lunch to his room . Geet knocks the door ,But there was no reply .Geet goes inside . Maan was not in his room . But then suddenly she sees Maan in Balcony . She goes near him .


Geet : Maan Hiii .

Aap yahan ho mein aapko sab jagah dhoondh ke aayee .

Maan : Haan Geet mera mann nahi karr raha tha neeche baithne ko ,

isiliye mein apne kamre mein chala aaya .

Geet : Aapka mann kyun nahi hai ?

Maan : Geet mujhe akele baithna tha .

Geet : Woh sab toh theek hai par aapne Khanna kyun nahi khaaya .

Maan : Geet nahi mujhe nahi khana .

Geet : Aaha yeh sab mere saath nahi chalega .

Ab aapne iss balla ke saath rishta jod liya hai toh yeh sab nahi chalega .

Maan : Geet tum mere liye balla nahi ho .

Geet : Ok agar aapne khana nahi khaya to aapka aur

mera jagda ho jayega samje aap .

Toh sab cheez chodiye aur chup chap khana kha lijiye.

Maan : Shaadi ke pehele yeh roop dekhkar mein toh darr gaya Geet .

Geet : Maan dubara soch lijiye aapko kya kya jhelna padega .

Abhi bhi samay hai Shaadi ke baare mein sochne ka .

Maan : Geet mein bohot khushnaseeb hoon ki tum meri Zindagi mein aayee .

Tumhare aane ke pehele mein bilkul akela tha .

Mere saath baat karne ke liye bhi koi nahi tha .

Nahi mere saath Khanna khane ke liye koi tha .

Par tumahre aane se yeh khalipan door hogaya hai .

Tumhe nahi pata Geet tum mere liye kya ho .

Mein tumhari kisi bhi baat ka bura nahi manta hoon .

Geet jab hum peheli baar Restaurant gaye the tab se

mein tumhe pasand karta hoon .

Par tumhe shaadi se problem thi isiliye meinne tumhe kuch nahi bataya .

Par ab mein chup nahi rehe sakta .

Geet : Maan bhale hi mein aap se pyaar nahi karti

par mein aapki bohot respect karti hoon .

Aap bohot acche ho .

Mein Babaji ka shukriya manti hoon ki unhone mujhe aap jaisa

Dost diya hai .

Mein aapse wada karti hoon ki jabhi bhi hum saath honge tab

hum hamesha saath hi khanna khayenge .

Aap ke saath batein karungi . Humesha aapke saath rahungi .

Ab bohot baatein hogayee chaliye ab Khanna kha lijiye .

Maan : Ok Baba . Mein khanna khata hoon .

Par tumne khanna khaya ki nahi ?

Geet : Abhi toh kaha aapko maine ki hum jab saath honge tab

humesha saath hi khanna khayenge .

Maan : Ok ok . Lekin tumhari plate kahan hai ?

Geet : Aap khaa lijiye mein baad mein khaa lungi .

Maan : Yeh galat baat hai . Ruko mein abhi tumhari plate mangwata hoon .

Geet : Theek hai .

Maan calls the staff & asks them to get another plate of Lunch for Geet madam . Maan has smile on his face . He feels as most lucky person .

Maan : Geet tumhe yahan aake kaisa laga ?

Geet : Maan bohot mazza aara hai . Hum shaadi ke baad every weekend yahan par zaroor ayenge .

Maan : Ji mere sarkar . Aap jaisa kahe hum waisa hi karenge .
Geet : Very Good 😛

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Both Maan & Geet were talking with each other . Staff brought Geet's plate too . Both were having their lunch . Suddenly Geet thought about the question she had in her mind . She had come to ask Maan that why he was upset .

Geet : Maan main ek baat poochna toh Bhool gayee .

Maan : Poocho Geet .

Geet : Maan mujhe yeh poochna tha ki aap ne kal se Khanna kyun nahi khaya ?

Maan : Geet actually mujhe mann nahi kar raha tha Khanne ka .

Geet : Maan aise kaise mann nahi kar raha tha aapko .

Maan : Haan sacchi Geet .

Geet : Maan aap mujhse kuch chupa rahe ho na ?

Maan : Nahi Geet , mujhe sach main mann nahi kar raha tha Khanne ka .

Geet : Theek hai aap mujhse share nahi karna chahte na apni problem .

I think aap mujhe apna dost nahi mante .

Shaayad main aapke dosti ke layak nahi hoon .

Maan : Geet aisa mat socho .

Tumhe nahi pata tum mere liye kya maine rakhti ho .

Main tumse kuch nahi chuppa raha hoon .

Tum itna mat socho . Main theek hoon .

Main abhi toh khanna khaa raha hoon na .

Geet : Maan sachi koi baat nahi hai na?

Maan : Haan Geet sachi .

Agar mujhe kuch problem hogi toh main tumse jaroor share karunga .

Geet : Pakka ?

Maan : Haan Geet Pakka .

Geet : Theek ab Lunch finish kar lijiye .

Maan : Haan Geet theek hai .

After Lunch hum thoda rest karke Ghar Jane ke liye nikalenge .

Geet : Maan sach kahoon mujhe yahan par bohot accha lag raha hai .

Ghar jane ka mann hi nahi kar raha hai .

Maan : Koi baat nahi Geet hum dubara yahan par ayenge .

Geet : Theek hai .

Geet & Maan finished their Lunch .

Maan : Geet tum sabko jaake bolo jisko rest karna ho kar le .

Aur jisko rest nahi karna woh Movie bhi dekh sakta hai .

Maine Movie ka intazaam kiya hai .

Maan went to freshen up & Geet went to the living area . She informed everyone that they will leave in 3 hrs time . She asked everyone to take rest if they want to . She even asked everyone if they wanted to see Movie Maan had arranged that in the projector room . Few people went to rest & some went to see Movie . Some were chatting in living room .

Geet was about to go to Living area as Maan was sitting there . She again received a phone call . Geet said hello , but no one replied .Geet was little worried now as BLANK CALLS were increasing . She decided that if the phone comes again then she will discuss about this to someone .

It was 5.00 pm . Maan asked everyone to come in the living area as it was time to leave . Everyone were enjoying so no one wanted to leave . Maan saw that & he promised everyone that he will plan another Trip within 3 months time . Everyone agreed with Maan . After everyone came in living area All went & sat in the Bus . This time Maan did not sit first he let Geet sit first & then he went & sat besides her .

Geet was happy that Maan himself came & sat near her .

Geet : Thanks Maan .

Maan : Thanks Kis liye ?

Geet : Aise hi . Mera mann kiya bolne ke liye .

Maan : Aaj kal tumhara mann bohot kuch keheta hai .

Aur kya keheta hai tumhara mann ?

Geet : Maan aap bhi na . Aapne fir se mazak shuru kar diya .

Maan : Ok ok Ab gussa matt hona .

Ab hum sirf thode time ke liye saath hain .

Baad mein apne apne Ghar jana hai .

Geet : Nahi main gussa nahi hoon .

Maan : Geet main bohot khush hoon ki tumhe mazza aayaa Beach House par .

Geet : Woh toh hai .

Maan : Geet main aaj raat tumhe call karunga .

Geet : Ok Maan i will wait for your call .

Maan : Geet kal tumhara College kitne baje hai ?

Geet : Kal mujhe 9.00 a.m ka Lecture attend karna hai .

Maan : Ok main tumhe Ghar se pick karke College chode dunga .

Geet : Maan nahi iski koi jaroorat nahi hai . Main akeli chali jaungi .

Maan : Geet Ok agar tumhe pasand nahi toh main nahi aunga Pick up karne .

Geet : Maan aisi koi baat nahi hai . Aapka khamakha time waste hojayega .

Maan : O thats no problem .

Pehele tumhe College chodunga fir main Office chala jaunga .

Geet : Theek hai Maan .



Everyone started singing songs one after other . All were enjoying . Bus reached the destination . It was Dinner time . Maan decided to take everyone for Dinner . So everyone agreed & went to Restaurant to have Dinner .

Ayesha : Geet teri toh nikal padi .

Geet : Ayesha matlab ?

Ayesha : Geet tujhe acche , Loving , caring , Handsome ,

understanding Life Partner mila hai .

Aur usse bhi acchi baat hai ki woh Tere saath hume bhi enjoy karwa rahe hain .

Geet : Woh toh hai Maan is a very nice Human Being .

Maan : Ayeshaaa

Ayesha : Sach Jiju . I am very happy for Geet that you have come in her Life .

Maan : Ayesha abhi bohot hua mujhe chadana ab chup chap

Dinner finish karo bohot late hogaya hai .

Aap sabko Ghar bhi chodna hai .

Ayesha : Ok Jiju .

After they finished having their Dinner , Maan decided to leave everyone to their respective house . He dropped everyone Home . Then they reached Sikand House . As Geet was leaving Avantika asked Geet & Maan to come to their House to have Dinner together . Maan saw towards Geet . Geet nodded yes & Maan said yes to Avantika that they will come tomorrow together .

Geet , Veer , Priya & Dev said Bye to all .Maan left Ronak & Avantika then went to Munjal Mansion .


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