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Posted: 13 years ago
Its been more than a month now!! Where are u sisiii???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I miss u & ur updatesss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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Posted: 13 years ago
update yr wat happened no updates since one month?????
update soon...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago


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peachgirl, TANVI_SEXY, Kriti_rox, Amona, Jyo_Ksg, araja1234, KaJen_addiction, teenorchid, samades, AR_LOVER, XxDeansChickxX...thanks a lot dear for your lovely comments...so sorry for late..but promise for ud regularly..love ...


note -- hey friends,sorry..but the reason is one of my blog sis is very ill..she has stomach cancer...i come in IF mostly at night time for reading ff and updating too...but now i do chatting with her ,to make her happy,to realize her we (blog friends) love her so much...to inspire her..to share her pain..we can't give her physical support but mental surely..when i got to know about her condition,she was in hospital from 2-3 months but now she has came home..a bit well...so please pray to god for cure her disease...thanks a lot...


"kabhi kabhi dawa se jyada dua kaam karti hai..mai usey khona nahi chahati,bahut choti si cute si hai,sirf 18 ki..please bhagwanji se kam se kam ek baar pray karen ki usey thik kar den ,koi aisa chamatkar ho ki wah thik ho jaye...sab milkar pray karenge to bhagwanji jarur sunenge...please..."

i will read all of yours ff but please give me some time...don't get angry on me...


now the next part...chapter --18


recap :


Dr.sashank : "yes ma,hum sab ke liye isse bari khushi ka din koi nahi,mujhe meri riddhima wapas mill gayi. Aur haan ,wo dr. arman hai kahan? I want to talk to him something important…...

now :






Sashank's house

"welcome dr. arman…..come come…"dr.sashank welcomed him in his room..


He was called arman to say something important. No one had any idea about it. So all were worried ….they knew that dr. sashank didn't like arman at all.



Dr. sashank was not well from a long time , so he was in bed rest.



"khade keun hain? Please sit down …" dr. sashank looked at him saying this.



Arman sat on the sofa bowed his head down . his heart was beating faster……"kya aaj bhi dr. sashank usey khali hath wapas bhej denge? Kya ab bhi wo usse nafrat karte hain? Kya uski basket usey nahi milegi?"


Someone knocked at the door…arman lifted his eyes…it was basket! His life…his love! She was dressed in aasmani churidar..her silky soft hairs were opened…a cute little smile was playing on her lips but she seemed a bit nervous…she was looking as much beautiful as she was 8 years back…arman's heart was saying to engulf her in his arms and to make a lot love…but he at once controlled his feelings….…


"aao riddhima,mai kuch tum dono se kahne chata hun,jo kahe bina mujhe chain nahi milega..aao mere paas baitho."



Riddhima sat beside her papa stealing her glances at arman……she didn't know what papa was going to say but she was sure about that papa will not keep away her from arman.


"haan,to dr. arman…kya aap jante hain,mai is duniya mein sabse jyada kisey pyar karta hun?"


" shayad apni betion ko…arman said gently and looked at riddhima.


"ya,but betion nahi,meri choti beti riddhima ko..mai apni patni samriti ke baad sabse jyada riddhima ko pyar kiya, jab samriti chali gayi jab anji aur riddhima around 7-8 saal ke they…mai bahut tut chuka tha,us time mujhe sabse bada sahara riddhima ne diya. Itni si bachchi thi par kabhi mujhe udas nahi hone deti thi,mere har jarurat ka khyal rakhti thi. anjali bhi mujhe bahut pyar karti thi par wo thori differant thi,apni duniya mein mast rahne wali." Sashank stopped to take a breathe.


Arman and riddhima both were kept silence.


" phir riddhima ki jindagi mein aap aaye, aur wo badal gayi. Jiski good morning aur good night papa ke naam se hoti thi,ab wahan dr. arman mallick ne le liya. Mai apni pyari si,nasamajh beti ko miss karne laga ,jo har problem mein papa ke paas douri aati thi,ab wo dr. arman ke paas jane lagi ….aur mai apni beti ko khona nahi chahta tha, mujhe nafrat ho gayi usse jisne meri beti cheen li."



Arman was going to protest but riddhima stopped him through her eyes.



Dr. sashank continued …."phir jab dr. arman ne mujhse kaha ki riddhima uski hai aur wo usey apna banakar hi rahega to dr. sashank ke liye wo challenge ban gaya. Maine puri koshish ki usey aapse alag karun,socha dr. siddhant se saadi ke baad wo aapko bhul jayegi….par mai kabhi samajh hi nahi paya ki kabhi kabhi jyada pyar..kisi par jyada adhikar dikhana bhi galat hota hai,jo maine apni beti riddhima ke sath kiya.



Riddhima caught dr. sashank's hand gently …"papa, ab rahne dijiye….


Dr.sashank's voice trembled : " nahi riddhima beta,mujhe aaj kahne do…sabke dill mein yahi sawal hoga ki mai dr. arman se itna nafrat keun karta hun. Mai chahta hun wo baat at least tum dono ko pata chale."


Arman : "sorry sir,but mujhe batane ki jarurat nahi,I know…jab apni pyari cheez cheen jati hai to cheenne wala hi dushman ban jata hai. but sir, maine kabhi nahi chaha ki riddhima aapse jyada mujhe chahe."


Riddhima :"yes papa,arman ka naam to aapke baad aata hai..mai sabse jyada aapse hi pyar karti hun,pahle mai aapki pyari beti riddhima hun aur phir arman ki"………riddhima left her words incomplete.


"aur uske baad aap dr. riddhima arman mallick ho…I mean ,ab ye rista ban jana chahiye"…dr. sashank completed riddhima's sentence and smiled.


Riddhima hugged dr. sashank…" love you papa…..


Dr. sashank : "hmmm…toh dr. arman,jaiye ab jaldi se sadi ki taiyari kijiye…mai apni beti ko dulhan banakar aapke ghar bhejna chata hun…maine pandit ji se baat kar li hai,next month mein date fix kiya hai…


Arman got up and moved towards the door.."ok,sir…


As he reached at the doorstep ,suddenly dr. sashank called …"wait! Dr. arman…


Arman stopped and turned…" ji sir….


Dr. sashank : " aap to meri pyari beti ko mujhse le jaoge,par mujhe bhi kuch chaiye iske badle mein..

Arman : "jo aap kahen sir…

Dr. sashank smiled…" aapki beti…

Arman shocked.."sir!!..meri rishima!!


Dr. sashank nodded.."yes!! aapko bhi pata chale beti cheen jaye to kaisa lagta hai…


Arman :" sir,aapki beti matured hokar bhi nasamajh thi jo dr. arman se milkar samajhdar ban gayi thi, but dr. arman ki beti choti hote hue bhi samajhdar hai,and I don't want to impose my opinion on her…plz. Ask her,she is smart enough.. I will send her ."saying these arman left the room.



Dr. sashank : "beta riddhima ,jao arman ko gate tak chor aao…"


Riddhima nodded her head and got up at once to say bye to arman…


Arman started his bike ,just then he heard riddhima's sweet voice calling his name...….he saw that riddhima was running towards him hurriedly…….


He went off from the bike,riddhima was panting heavily because of running fast…sweat was emerged on her forehead and face became more red …and again arman was mesmerized to see her basket!! he was looking at her without blinking his eyelids,which made riddhima blush.


Riddhima waved her hands in front of arman's eyes : "kya hua? Kya dekh rahe ho?"


Arman moved forward and wrapped his hands around her waist and said…"apni dulhan ko…


He desired to cling her in his strong arm but perhaps riddhima was not in that mood,she wanted to say something to arman.


Riddhima : "ruko arman,mujhe tumse baat karni hai……

Arman (romantically) : " bolo basket…

Riddhima (in a serious tone) :" tumne rishima ko yahan chodne ki baat keun ki? Wo kya sochegi humare baare mein?


Arman made his hold more stronger and and peeped in her almond eyes…..now his voice was more romantic…"bataun maine aisa keun kiya?"


Riddhima nodded her head in yes…..

He pulled her more close ….took his lips to her ears and whispered huskily…"sadi ke baad mujhe kuch din apni basket ke sath rahna hai…akele…sirf mai aur meri dulhan….ish duniya se bekhabar….


Riddhima rounded her eyes.."you selfish man ! Tum aise to nahi they arman…armina kya sochegi?


Arman touched the tip of her nose lovingly …"kuch nahi sochegi…wo bahut matured hai..usne hi kaha ki wo kuch din apne nana-nani ke sath rahna chati hai…next week hum mumbai shift ho rahe hain….


Now Riddhima put her soft arms around his neck and asked in a dreaming voice …" next month kab aayega arman? Ab tumhari basket tumse dur nahi rah sakti….


Arman nuzzled on her neck…"bas,aur kuch din…phir dilwala arman apni pyari si ,duniya ki sabse khubsurat ladki ,apni dulhan ko lekar jayega aur kabhi apne se dur nahi karega….



Riddhima uttered under her breathe : "love you arman….love you more than anything in this world…


Arman : "love you basket…arman loves riddhima….forever….

Love you all
punam

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Posted: 13 years ago
oyyeee welcome backkk... We missed u nd ths ff sooo much... I wish and pray that ur friend gets well soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey my cutey pie sisi.. first of all u dnt need to be sorry yaar.. I completely understand.. & plzz take care of ur sis.. thts very sad to knw abt her health.. hope she gets well soon..Amin.

Secondly, about the update...
OMG! what an ossum part dear! Just loved AR cute moments..👏
& finally they are getting married! Yipiie! Thanks for the amazing update sisi! Love u always!❤️
& take ur time for the next update.. no hurry! 😉 muaaah! tkcr.. 🤗 & most of all BE HAPPY ALWAYS! 😃

Ur sis,
Jyoti Janu..😳
Edited by Jyo_Ksg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey Punam! glad 2 c u back after so long! i'll pray 4 ur frnd! hope she gets well soon!
superb updt!
loved AR scene! want some more AR moments! eagerly waiting 4 their wedding! cont asap
thnx 4 pm

love
Sunita :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME PART
PLZZ PLZZ CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing part Punam.
I just loved it.
You have Shanky's point of view so well dear.
He was insecure about his daughter's love for him.
I'm glad that AR are finaly getting married.
AR scene was soo romantic.
you are a wonderful writer dear.
Plz update the next part soonest..
I'm sorry for the delay in comments.
love ya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awh the delay is ok! :) Hope your friend is better now & praying she gets completely fine soon!! :)
And lovely update again!! Thanks for the PM!! Do cont soon! Looking forward!! :)
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hey peachgirl, TANVI_SEXY, crazy4KASH_AR, Amona, KaJen_addiction, Jyo_Ksg, teenorchid and sam..thanks a lot for your lovely comments..hope you will like this part...love...take care...

chapter --19










"hmmm..to nanu,ab tak aapko meri yaad nahi aayi?"


Dr. sashank looked at this cute girl ,what would have he answered of this innocent question!…he just replied ."sorry beta, mujhe maaf kar do."


"ok,maaf kiya..rishima told in a serious tone..."par ek sart par."


"aap jo kahoge mai maanunga…kaan pakadkar khada ho jaun? "Dr.sashank pleaded holding his ears.


"no, aap promise karo new sanjiwani ke head mere papa ko banaoge..its your punishment. Aapne mujhe itne dino tak aapse,meri nani amma aur bari amma se dur rakha na.."rishima uttered with a choked voice.



"arey! ye to maine sochkar hi rakha hai..ye unko meri taraf se gift hoga..but aap apne papa or mumma ko batayenge nahi..it's a surprise gift.. ."



dr.sashank carresed her silky hair and said in heart.."bilkul meri riddhima jaisi ..waisi hi baaten,waisi hi aankhen..ab mai kabhi isey apne se alag nahi karunga."



He heard that rishima was saying.."ok,done! sorry nanu, mai mumma ke paas jaun? Bas thori der ke liye."



Dr.sashank.." haan beta,par aapki mumma hai kahan? Kya kar rahi hai? "


Rishima made her face…"kya pata,jarur dr.arman ke sapne dekh rahi hai..uff!mai to paressan ho gayi is ladki se..jab dekho arman ke baare mein sochti rahti….sach kahun nanu,ab aapki riddhima ka kuch nahi hone wala. Uska future to gol hai.."she made a round image using her fingers.


Dr.sashank laughed at her attitude…"yes beta,I know..isliye maine socha hai ki usey dr. arman ke ghar hi bhej dun.."



Rishima.."haan,don't worry, mai yahan hun aapke paas….


Dr.sashank : "promise..


Rishima : "promise baba…aur aapko bhi koi kaam nahi kya? Jao ,apni beti ki saadi ki taiyari karo, mai bhi dekhun sab kahan hain!.."


just then Dr.sashank's phone rang….angel was on other side…."namaste nanu,aap kaise ho?"


Dr.sashank : " mai thik hun beta, aap kaise ho,mummy –papa kaise hain?"



Angel : " hum sab thik hain nanu..mumma-papa to duty gaye hain..aur mai abhi school se aayi.. bittu hai kya wahan?"


Dr.sashank : "yes beta,but aap kab aaoge? I am missing you beta…"


Angel : " me too nanu….mai Sunday ko aaungi..aap rishima ko phone do na..please….


Dr. sashank gave the phone to rishima…..


Angel : "bittu,aaj mumma mere school mein aayi thi,principal se baat kar li hai..tujhe kal aana hai admission ke liye."


Rishima jumped with joy.."wow! that's great news! Mai ab apni angel di ke sath school jaungi…yupeee!!!! I'm very happy!!!!!!!!!!!


Angel : "me too bittu..but tu wahan kya kar rahi hai? arman masa ji kahan hain?"


Rishima : " papa is busy in shifting arrangement ,next week yahan join karenge…."…and in a complaning tone…"aur mai to tired ho gayi inko sambhalte hue.dr. riddhima to dr.arman ke khyalon mein khoyi rahti hai aur ye dr. sashank ne apni beti ke sadi ki kuch bhi preparation nahi ki,sab mujhe dekhna parta hai.."


Dr. sashank giggled at her innocent talk…..


Angel assured her.."don't be tensed bittu, next week meri chutti hai,hum dono milkar sab kuch kar lenge.."


Rishima : "that's great!…bye di..


She hung up the phone and turned to dr. sashank…"ab aapko chinta karne ki koi jarurat nahi,mai aur di milkar sab sambhal lenge..kya abhi mai mumma ke paas ja sakti hun?"


Dr.sashank smiled.." sure beta,aur apni mumma se kahna agar dr. arman ke khaylon se time miley to apne papa ke paas aayen…"


Rishima kissed dr.sashank's cheek.."sure nanu..love you..


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Riddhima was getting ready ,di,atul and angel were coming in a short while… nani had called them for the preparation of wedding…dr.sashank wanted a grand wedding ceremony of her daughter ,so called them to discuss about it. they had to go for shopping after their lunch. Arman will come today evening, now he will join mumbai sanjiwani and riddhima too. riddhima smiled….this was the life she desired of… for it, she waited a lot…she folded her hands closing eyes and prayed .."thanks bhagwanji ,ab mujhse ye khushi cheen mat lena."



Suddenly she remembered the last night conversation with rishima. She was lying beside riddhima and blabbering as usual…and riddhima was lost in thought of arman…"bilkul arman jaisi aankhen! dimples! waisi hi antics banaker baten karti hai.."

Suddenly she heard rishima 's words..."pata hai,papa ko yaad kar rahi ho na? "


Riddhima pulled her in arm and cuddled…"ya, missing him,busy hain,phone bhi nahi kiya.."


Rishima sighed.." me too missing pappa…aur phir sadi ke baad mujhe bilkul bhul jayenge..i know.."


Riddhima squeezed her in chest…"no beta,aap to unki angel ho..jindagi ho..


Rishima smiled.."aur aapki?


Riddhima : "aap meri princess ho….but beta aapne hi nanu ke paas rahne ki jid ki,aisa keun?


Rishima : " wo aapko bahut miss karenge na,to mai unke paas rahungi.. do you know mumma,aapke pappa bahut achche hain..i like him."



Riddhima smiled.."and aapke papa bhi..i like him."


Rishima glared .."only like !"


Riddhima held her ears..: " cholly! love him…love him a lot."



Rishima rounded her eyes and giggled..…"mumma!!!!


And both started to laugh hugging each other….


Riddhima smiled remembering those beautiful moments ,suddenly she felt two strong arms grabbed her slim waist from back and kissed her hair.


Riddhima smiled.."saitani gayi nahi..bilkul bhi nahi badla mera arman."


Arman nuzzled on her neck…"tumhe kaise pata chala mai hun? Mai to socha tha dar jaogi..


Riddhima gave her a tender glance.. : "dr. armaan mallick! Mai dr.riddhima mallick hun,mujhe tumhari har aahat and harkat pata hai..


Arman 's lips touched her neck…"abhi dr.riddhima mallick hui nahi..


Riddhima tried to free from his grip…"wo to us raat hi ho chuki….


Arman turned her face towards him and blinked eyes in an innocent way..…"kis raat? zara khulkar batana…actually mujhe kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai...


Riddhima made a smack on his cheek…"rishima isliye itni saitan hai ab samajh me aaya…


Suddenly they heard rishima's voice…."uff! jab dekho suru ho jate hain ye dono!!….



They turned at the door and got that rishima was standing there closing her eyes.


Arman :"hmmm,saitan ka naam liya aur aa gayi!..aur aapne ye aankhen keun band rakhi hai?



Rishima (with closing eyes) :" kuch to sharam karo papa,beti bari ho rahi hai.."



Riddhima at once freed her from arman ,she was blushing heavily to hear rishima's words.


Rishima giggled.."pappa ,your basket is blushing!…her cheeks became red tint…"



Arman glanced his basket from the corner of his eyes and lost himself in her angelic beauty!..." She is getting more beautiful day by day…oyye hoyye basket!"



But rishima's words pulled out him from this trance..…"basket jo sharmai! Pappa ne jaan lutai! Oyye hoyye basket !!"



And the next scene was there , Arman was chasing rishima to drag her ears and she was running away to save herself yelling with a high volume……."nanu,save me!!..your great enemy dr.arman was trying to kill your rishima!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



love you all
punam

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