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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Punam! Awesome part! Thanks for the PM! :) Looking forward to the next update.. Do continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part. Don't make ridhima leave again. Hope armaan stops her. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
oops phr se dooorie. Kb hatam hnge ye fasle.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey punam
mujhe itne din pm nahi mile
so i thought u were not updating
n i went to the blog n read the whole story😛
i liked n loved it so much
pls pm me for all ur ff's yaar
i want to read them very badly
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Posted: 13 years ago
The following 9 member(s) liked the last post:


TANVI_SEXY, peachgirl, Kriti_rox, araja1234, hotKaJen, crazy4KASH_AR, teenorchid, samades, AR_LOVER and dharmita...thanks a lot dear for your precious comments..hope you will like this part too...



and dharmita dear..sorry so sorry for forgetting you to pm...and yes ,i saw that you visits dmg blog for my story...and truely says,this is my reward...that you like my story in this way ..thanks a lot dear...actually dmg blog is my 2nd home,so i active there more than IF...and most welcome in my dmg blog family dharmta,love you...



CLARIFICATION ABOUT ARMAN'S SECOND MARRIAGE AND RIDDHIMA'S MISUNDERSTAND...



hey friends.in last part when anjali said to armina/rishima that tumhare mummy -pappa..it means arman and riddhima, but riddhima misunderstood it ..and when anjali said arman to give the phone to nikki,and said her to come soon...riddhima misunderstood and thought arman got married and anjali talked with his wife.




secondly riddhima had always considered herself as arman's wife..so she wrote "riddhima arman mallick"...



and she always thought that they were married,she is arman's wife..so i wrote arman's second marriage.




now the chapter --16



Gunahon ka Dewta




"riddhima didi,aap andhere me keun baithi hain? light jala dun?"saying this anita switched on the light. She noticed that riddhima's eyes were full of tears. She was sitting on the bed holding lovingly someone's photo in her hand .


"arey! Aap ro rahi hain?" anita asked .(anita was a staff of that orphange,where riddhima was staying)



"nahi,wo actually …riddhima wiped her tears.

"mai janti hun aapko orphange ki yaad aa rahi hai na? aapko un bachchon se bahut pyar tha na? anita said and seeing the pic in her hand asked…"ye bachchiyan to bari pyari hai…orphange ke hain na? hey ,bhagwanji,itne pyare bachchon ko keun anaath (orphan) kar dete ho!...




Riddhima at once cut her words, " aisa mat bolo anita..yeh anath nahi hain…inke mummy-papa to inse bahut pyar karte hain…" saying this she caressed the photo of armina and angel.



"Riddhima didi,mai kahti hun,aap wapas chali jao …bachche aapke bina bahut akele honge…."anita said.


Riddhima mumbled…" hmmm…mai bhi nahi rah sakti..wo ab tak mumbai lout gaye honge….. par wahan rahungi to unki yaden mere jeene ka sahara banegi…mujhe wapas jana hai…




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seeing riddhima returned to orphange ,children ran towards her and encircled .all of them now started to complain her…."riddhima didi,aap kahan chale gaye they? hume bilkul achcha nahi lag raha tha. Hum aap par gussa hain."



Riddhima held her ears…"sorry,ab nahi jaungi…

A girl :" pata hai didi,princess aur angel aayi thi aapko birthday ke liye invite karne aur unhe pata chala ki aap chale gaye to princess bahut roi…bahut bahut jyada…usne apna birthday bhi celebrate nahi kiya…



another girl : " aur pata hai,next day angel ki mummy,papa aur princess ke papa aaye they. sab sad they…princess ke papa itne roye..itne roye…itneee ansoo nikle unke aankhon se!!!!!"she stretched her little hands as well as her eyes too, like she had never imagined this type of crying..…



A boy :" haan,aur angel ki mummy bhi itniii roi…..sab ro rahe they."


Riddhima's eyes started to raining…she wiped her tears and said…"aur princess ki mummy?



Kaki entered.." wo bhi ro rahi hai na,mere samne…


She turned to the children and said…"bachchon jao abhi,riddhima didi ko rest karne do…

Children left …


Riddhima : " mai nahi kaki,arman ki patni…


Kaki : " haan ,to mai bhi wahi kah rahi hun na. dr.riddhima arman mallick hi dr.arman mallick ki patni hai aur princess ki mummy..


Riddhima sighed : " nahi kaki,usne dusri sadi kar li hai…

Kaki : " kisne kaha? Wo tumhare siwa kisi se sadi nahi kar sakta,abhi bhi tumse hi pyar karta hai,bepanah!!…wo tujhe lene aaya tha. princess,angel,dr.anjali,dr.atul,dr.nikita..sab aaye they…



Riddhima was shocked : "kaki!! Ye aap kya kah rahi hain!!kya princess ko mere baare me pata hai!!!


Kaki : " haan,unhe pata hai,isliye to wo apni mummy se milne aati thi..

Riddhima looked at her with a great surprise…...


Kaki :" sorry riddhima,mujhe sab pata tha. tumhari di anji se,dr.atul se,sab se mai mili thi,wo bahut achche hain..


Riddhima : "kaki!! Apko pata tha!!


Kaki : "hmmm…meri pyari si armina,kitni bari aur samjhdar ho gayi hai..mujhse kaha tha.."kaki mai apni mumma ko wapas lekar jaungi..mai to kisi tarah unke bina ji rahi hun,par papa shayad nahi ji payen,hardam unki yaad mein rote rahte hain,mai apne birthday par mumma ko hi mang lungi to wo inkar nahi kar payengi."


Listening it,riddhima hid her face into her palm and started to cry….she said in her sob…"mai bahut buri Hun na kaki…mai ab kaise jaun unke paas!!….mujhe unke paas jana hai,mujhe apni armina chahiye, di chahiye,angel chahiye,mere friends chahiye."



Kaki : "hmmm…dr.arman ne kaha tha mujhse ki kaki meri basket bahut jiddi hai,apne dill ki baat kabhi nahi batayegi…to wahi dekh rahi hun,sabka naam li aur arman ko chod diya!!,kya tumhe arman nahi chahiye riddhima,abhi bhi usse naraj ho?


Riddhima lowered her head and uttered like a whisper…"mujhe uske paas jana hai…


Kaki : "to abhi jao unke paas riddhima,wo abhi bhi yahin hain,armina ne apna birthday celebrate nahi kiya hai aur kaha hai jab tak tum wapas nahi aaogi,wo nahi jayenge..jao,riddhima..apni beti,apna ghar,apne arman ke paas jao,wahin tumhari manzil hai,wahi tumhari duniya hai.jindagi baar baar mouka nahi deti,jab mile usey kashkar pakad lo."





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Riddhima stopped into the garden. Only a dim light was lightening outside the house.a gross darkness was scattered all around. the darkness was scattered inside the house too. Riddhima shievered with this thought …" kya wo sab chale gaye? Kya wo riddhima ka intzaar karke thuk (tired)gaye?"





She pushed the door gently, it opened…she peeped inside quietly….and found that there was a thick darkness all around,like her life…an everlasting darkness….…she was breathing hardly imagined it……" sab usey chodkar chale gaye..arman bhi…shayad uski kismat mein yahi hai,phir se andhera!!!!!…'


She kept her 1st step inside the room and suddenly the lights were switched on all around,like thousands stars started to twinkle…and she heard the welcome song……



She looked surprisingly!!!…the whole house was decorated..with lights,ballons,flowers,coloured ribbons…. all were singing welcome song…….di,atul,muskan,rahul,nikki,armina,angel …all were singing,clapping ….




Riddhima whispered…"armina….


Armina ran towards her and jumped into her arm….."mai janti thi,aap aaoge mumma…aap mujhe chorkar nahi rah sakti"….…


Riddhima caught her tightly and kissed her…"shona,meri princess…

Angel , who came and stood close to her , complained…"achcha! Aur mai kuch bhi nahi! Apni beti ko pakar..

Riddhima pulled her in arm…"angel beta…

Anjali (with choked voice) : "ridhzi,apne di ke galey nahi milegi?


Riddhima turned and hugged her tightly…"di….


Anjali : "keun tune aisa kiya ridhzi? Apno se koi is tarah bhagta hai kya?"



Riddhima (in her sob) : "yahi meri saza thi di…


Anjali : "nahi ridhzi,tumne sirf khud ko nahi,hum sab ko punish kiya..tujhe pata hai,mai aaj 7 saal ho gaye sashank house nahi gayi,promise kiya tha tujhe lekar loutungi…papa tere bina itne dukhi hain ki sanjiwani hi chod diya. Mom ,nani hardam roti rahti hai..aur tumhare friends,sab dukhi rahte hain….



Riddhima : "sorry di…


Anji : " mujhse nahi ridhzi,sorry kahna hai to apni beti armina se kah,arman se kah,jinki jindagi tumhare bina adhuri hai…


Nikki came…"riddhima,mujhse gale nahi milegi? Mai mumbai se sirf tumhare liye aayi hun…


Riddhima hugged her.." nikki, love you…missed you a lot…

Muskan touched her hands lovingly…riddhima stretched her arm and hugged her tightly…


Atul : " ridhs ,koi bahut der se…bahut dino se ,salon se or shayd janmon se tumhara intzaar kar raha hai,uske gale nahi milogi?




Riddhima lifted her wet eyes and looked at arman , who stood at a distance…whose swollen eyes were proving of his unlimited cry...…he was waiting quietly for his basket…may be he was afraid of that it was a pleasant dream,which will shatter if he opens his eyes!!!!…….


Anji told everyone through her eyes to leave the room….





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Riddhima lifted her eyes to see her jaan,who was standing a bit far from her.riddhima saw that arman's eyes were full of tears…his lips were trembling to say something…..



She whispered like a breathe…."armaan!! basket love you !!…


Without saying a word ,he stretched his arms towards her basket….inviting her to enter in his life….. And in a while,they were in each other arms, wrapping tightly,caressing each others with their lips……





love you all
punam
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Posted: 13 years ago
mai nai karo gi comment:(
ak to itna late update or phir itna chota sa:(😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Edited by Riarai2346 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved the update and thanks for the pm :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just don't have enough words to appreciate you Punam.
This part is simply outstanding.
Starting from Riddhima's realization and returning back to finally deciding to go back to her love and family,everything was just mind-blowing.
I was simply fascinated while reading the part.
Armina finally succeeded in bringing her mama and her papa's love back in her family..
The re-union was so emotional thar my eyes got wet.
Armaan and Riddhima kissing each other at the end and pouring down al the pains from years of separation was marvelous...
I loved this part sooo much.
Thanks for the pm and plz don't apologize for the delay in comments in my ff.I understand dear that you are quite busy.I look forward to your comments always as I know that you'll leave your views as soon as you get time...
You are a wonderful writer and a great friend...
Plz update the next part soonest...
Love ya
Take care!!
Muah!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey punam di 🤗

so sorry for not commenting on some parts. exams mein attac gayi thi n dont be sry i truly love this story so much n especially this part is very very nice loved to read it ridhima ki realization n every thing was awesome so far loved it to the core

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❤️dharmitha
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Posted: 13 years ago
mjhe pm nai mila.
Bt the part was awesum. Finally they r together. Cant wait to read more family moments

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