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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
Wow!!
Couldn't stop mysslf from commenting!

I just LOVED the installment!
Made me go "Awww..."
And nw i'll comment when the chapter is updated! :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Hey Shruti, an installment!! yayyy!!1 n we're not complaining at all, i swear!! lol!!!

this is so awesome, love it!!!!! aww our Peanuts sooo caring n Riddhima well so drama queen, wanna be pampered huh???
go on...n u're not gonna tell Armaan it's alrite cuz seriously it's not, but he'll have to do something for it, n i think sweetly...can't see our Peanuts suffer rite!!! n aww when Riddhima said dad of my unbron children...n
"William Devil! Cruella Devil's brother! Or son.. How old do you think Cruella Devil is?" 🤣
this girl...

Cont soon
n lage raho with the installments cuz u really don't need to keep your words abt 'No updates till November!!!' lol...


Tc n get well soon!!!
🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
hey,CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!
If u continue giving us such amazing updates and spammers ki spamming ur thread soon u'll reach to 10th thread and will complete more than 50 chapters!!!
The update was amazing, glad to see old caring, loving and sweet armaan back!
Its going to be treat for the readers if Riddhima reads Armaan's personal notes 'coz u r writing story from Riddhima's perspective so armaan's thoughtes, emotions everything is a mystery for the readers.
cont soon!!
GET WELL SOON!
Love,
aila
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett


I could finish just one today, Neha's, I'll get to your's next, so it'll come by this weekend I suppose.. A part of it if not anything! 😕

And are you crazy? Save it till November? That's worse, I'll have a million other things to comment on!


LMAO okay, do them whenever you want to 😆

Goodnight Shru <3 <3

Get well soon 🤗

xoxo
Aanya

P.S - Just watched 90210 S3 E21...I am in love with Raj and Ivy! And is it me or is Raj just SO friggin' cuteee? :D <3
Edited by Aanya_taanu4evr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
That was such an amazing update

L
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: SurrealFantasy

Reserved😳 *Edited*

I'm back'AGAIN!!😆

I just joined IF and I'm going crazy commenting on AWOTB!! I don't even recollect how many comments I've made!! Either I'm on a roll(I'm always on a roll!!) or you have some evil magical powers to glue us to our lappy screens waiting for your updates!!🤣
*cough cough*
Here's my speech. Read it and weep!(punny?? I meant weep in the tears of happiness way!😆) It's like giving out this lifetime achievement award to you😳🤣

Sabse pehle toh 🤗

Congratulations!!
I have been absolutely crazily deeply addicted to your ff. After DMG turned out rotten😔, AWOTB came as a healing touch😃. No kidding, it's easier to relate to Munchkins and Peanuts, than AR.
Let me start with the characters. Starting from their pet names to their crazy love, everyone about them is adorable!! Armaan Peanuts Mallik is like 'PERFECT!😳! There's no other way to describe him. He's handsome (strikingly handsome'too hot be to alive😆), he's funny, he's caring and most of all he's madly in love with his Munchkins😳. No one in this effing universe fakes his engagement or his dating for three years or wears gay clothes in public or ignores his own love'just to please his lady love😆!!
We all know that such guys do not exist, but when I read AWOTB, it seems real, he seems real!! That's what it has given me: I CAN dream about my Prince Charming now.😳 And my checklist will have all the characteristics of Peanuts. I soo want a clone of Armaan as my love🤣'.that's how much AWOTB has affected me.😊
But wait a split second. It's not just Peanuts who makes AWOTB special. Munchkin is as special too.😊 If Armaan is "oh-so-perfect-to-be-true", Munchkin is the realistic prat. She's sarcastic, lame, funny and a "galtiyon ka pitara" as I call her🤣. But she's true'.true with her love. I hated(ok, not hate but you know what I mean ryt?) her sooo much when she was confused about her feelings for Peanuts, and moment she realized I wanted to go and have a midnight Maggi with her.🤣 From her insecurities to her randomness to her crackpot behavior😆, she makes AWOTB real. She's 24*7 high on her mood and most of all she cracks me up!! 😆I <3 how she has matured throughout AWOTB, from being childish to becoming patient and adorable''perhaps that's how love changes people.☺️

And then there's Rhea, she reminds me of my fighting sibling who lives far away.😭 The way she takes "pangas" with Armaan makes me feel so "Violently in love with my sis".😆 And even Nikki, she's such a true friend man. The way she and Riddhima talk about anything and everything under the universe makes me go Awww. Love lives, Armaan-ia, Mindy, the biatch😆 and everything, it feels as if I was there, sitting in front of them and eating popcorn enjoying their funny talks. 😆M-P's relationship with their parents is soo cool too. They can talk to their parents and even their in-laws so coolly, that it takes my mind off the family dramas my mom, unfortunately, watches!!

Each and every character in AWOTB, be it Siddhant, Andresha or Mrs. Chaddha, they just make the entire story more cute!! Armaan's white shirts' fetish, the charm band, Midnight Maggis, Riddhima's photos'.everything has made AWOTB one of the favorite reads I've had in a pretty long time. Kudos on that!!👏

Okay coming back to beginning, the first time I ever started reading this ff, what made me read the entire 4 threads was'..the title.😊 Initially, it seemed like some "Jaane tu ya Jaane na" story, but the title kept me going. And I'm so happy it did coz otherwise I would have missed something any reader would never want to!!😳😃 "A walk on the beach", it seems so poetically symbolic that I JUST HAD TO read the story. One of my favorite books, the hushy-mushy kind, is called Along For A Ride by Sarah Dessen. I <3 the book and this title just seemed so similar to the book, and so I started reading. And today, tbh, AWOTB is closer to my heart than AFAR😊.

And your language' you don't actually emulate any known author but the way you write gets you readers. The story is from Riddhima's point of view, and I love her sarcastic retort kind of way of speaking😆 and your writing. Sometimes I do wish I had an eagle view of the story coz MY Armaan seems have become a mystery😆 but then again this suspense ( not the Sherlock Holmes kinda intense, cuter) just makes the story more delectable.

More evidently, you use proper English!! No seriously, I've read several FFs (no offence to anyone) and they just use wrong English!! You know the "What did happened" kind!!😲🤣 And probably it's because I've been surrounded by an insanely huge number of English speakers from childhood, I detest that.😳 But YOU, missy, hit the nail on the head each time you write!!! ILY for that 👍🏼

Out of the extremely long list called "Why I <3 AWOTB",😆 another reason is that it's so easily relatable. I don't know about you, but I have this habit of just trying to dream before I go to sleep. 😳You know when you're lying on the mattress and wondering what would happen if my crush asks me out on a date, if I win Who wants to be a Millionaire, if I magically become a great cook and win Masterchef, if I have the kind of magic Sabrina, the teenage witch had'the list is non-ending😎. The point is, when I'm trying to sleep, from the time I started reading AWOTB, I try to wonder what would happen if Riddhima knew about her love before, if Armaan really loved Andresha, if M & P would get married, and on and on!!🤣 That's how much I'm into AWOTB.

Let's talk about the writer now🤔'..Muahahaha!! I'm so loving this😆. You are such an adorable person to talk to.🤗 I love just commenting crazily long Mahabharata and Ramayana type comments for your ff just because I know that you value them.

I know that you would have a wide grin on your face when you read it. And if you can give us Peanuts and Munchkins and help us keep AR alive as an adorable couple in our conscience, my insane comments is such a small return gift to you.😊 I remember that in the middle of the fifth thread you wanted to discontinue the ff..😭..I was just staying awake and have clearly no idea how many times I commented and stalked you just to dissuade you!!😕 And I'm sooo happy that you didn't stop writing the story!! See, now you've opened the next thread!!😆🥳
Lastly, I crazily adore writing and entertaining you with my comments. Because you are someone a person as crazy and un-modest as me can relate to!!🤣
I've known you for about a month now, and in the small period of time, I've found you as such an encouraging, funny and sarcastic person, that if you would have been a guy, probably you would have been my soul mate!! ROFLMAO🤣🤣🤣

I wish you have many many many* infinity threads to come😊... and I fall intensely deeper into the pit called "AWOTB"!! I Love You (uh-oh took me just a month to realize, unlike Riddhima's 3 years...Daffod😎🤣) and I love myself too!!😆

Bisous,

Neha

P.S.: I am damn sure you are still smiling reading the insanely long comment... * Shru wipes off the grin from her face*, keep reading the comment and save it coz it's not everyday I praise anyone except for myself!🤣! And now come down from the air where you're floating at the moment...consider the next statement as a needle I just pricked into your inflated self-esteem 🤣

"Update Karo Jaldi Jaldi se abse... and reply karo meri "AWOTB/Shru ki Thesis statement" ka "😆

And yeah Finally... Kick the board examiners' ass by giving effing genius🤓 like exams!🤣! Good Luck!!

ILY, Je t'aime!!🤣



Awww...! 🤗

That's one of the best comments I've received in all the 6 threads put together! 😃 <3

And again, your completely modest comment had me ROFLMFAO! 😆

And lifetime achievement? 😲 Abbe, oyye, I'm just 17, kahe ka LA? I still have all my teeth, haven't got a hump, and I walk straight! 😆

And, OMG, so many people telling me they can relate to MP more than AR, I'm even surprised that people have actually started treating MP like another parallel couple! 😃 Obviously, that just feeds my ego, but at the same time, I'm just grateful to everyone, including you, because of whom I was able to grow as a writer in the first place, in such a way, that I was able to give MP a different identity from AR! Honestly, I just picture KSG playing Armaan Peanuts Mallik, I never picture any of the 3 Riddhima's in this story! And honestly, I haven't adopted any of the traits the actual AR had, except for probably Armaan's looks, and his love towards Riddhima, I think the similarities end there! And I'm glad! 😃

And I know man, dudes like Armaan aren't manufactured anymore, maybe we should send a complaint letter to God and list all the defects and errors he's made in guys today! Such jerks! But well, Armaan helps me get over that.. Sometimes its better to live in fantasies than in reality, I completely agree!

And oh, Munchkin is completely the prat. Because I'm a prat too! 🤣 She's just as self-obsessed, lame, cheesy, romantic, needy, annoying and sarcastic as I normally am! 😳

Thank you for liking the small small details of Maggi, the Charm bracelet, Armaan's fetish for white shirts, and Riddhima's photographs.. You make my heart go 'Weee'.

I was honestly scared people might take this story as a spin-off of MJHT or JTYJN, but thankfully, or so I hope, I was able to drive AWOTB away from the similarities!
Along For A Ride? Thank you, I need a good book.. I just finished Jill Mansell's An Offer You Can't Refuse last night (in a world-breaking record of a mere 6 hours!), I started it last night, and just couldn't sleep until I finished. That, and partly because I was so sick, it wouldn't let me sleep. LOL! But OMG, you liked AWOTB better than AFAR?! I'm going to be honest - I'm flattered, and honestly, you've boosted my confidence way too much this time! Thank you! <3

And I've written AWOTB in first person, because Riddhima's more of a spin-off of my own personality, and I've given her the same traits I possess. So I can easily relate to every situation she (read: I) puts herself in. And of course the plus point I have is that Armaan remains an enigma!

And oh, yeah, I have a fetish for good use of English, can you believe, when I started writing and realized how addicted I was to the language and its use, I even stopped using SMS language! I use proper rules of grammar, correct spellings, everything, even when I'm texting someone! 🤣 And yeah, even I can't read stories which don't use proper English.. (No offence to anyone, honestly!). So we have similarities (and may I just say, LOADS of them?).

And YAY, I haunt you before you go into dreamland! Do tell me if you ever dream about AWOTB, that'd be REAL COOL! 😃

And aww... thank you so much for ALL the compliments! *Blush Blush* See, I can be modest and shy. Or try to anyway!

And dude, you honestly thought I'd stop smiling? I haven't stopped smiling since the time I started reading your comment to finishing this long reply! ILY <3

Thank you so much, and I'm so glad you stuck through MP's side! I always look forward to your comments, they make me so happy! 😃

*A trillion bear hugs!*

ILY

<3
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr


LMAO okay, do them whenever you want to 😆

Goodnight Shru <3 <3

Get well soon 🤗

xoxo
Aanya

P.S - Just watched 90210 S3 E21...I am in love with Raj and Ivy! And is it me or is Raj just SO friggin' cuteee? :D <3


My heart's reserved for Liam. My cute baby! He's adorable.. I wonder what will happen to Liam-Annie.. Sigh..

Have you reached RI's wedding yet? Honestly, they showed an Indian wedding, and didn't even light the fire when they were taking pheras. How stupid.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
Amazing part. Loved armaan pampering ridz. Complete it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
thank god u didnt keep ur words about not to update till nov

awww ridz is sick but it feel good to see loving armaan

complete it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow ... this came as a pleasant surprise. And please do take care of your self.
Waise Shru (I saw many referring you that way, so hope you don't mind), I seriously thought you wouldn't update till Nov. So I started reading AWOTB again from start. Haha ... I was so lost in Armaan proposing to Riddhima part when I saw you have updated this. So now am switching back to the older update as have read this one.
I too love falling ill. People do fuss a lot, and the ones we want to seriously do. Glad that Mr Peanuts is in lover boy role and not angry young man any more.
Have fun and take care and study well!!!
Cheers,
Suvarna

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