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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
OMGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!WHAT WAS THAT?
guys this part is based on the track when our "babloo" comes in mumbai and wants to see nupur
n-guys ab kya hoga?
s-relax nupur tumhari bui bhi na ab yeh koi waqt hai tumhari shaadi karwaane ka
g-i know di ko abhi aur padhna hai
n-ha mai ek writter banna chahti hu
d-pata hai babes!literature tumhara passion hai🥱
b-🥱 ha jo btw bahut boring hai
n-shut up benji ek to mai upset hu ki bui ne yeh kaunsa namuna bheja hai mujhse milne ke liye
u-babloo!
g-oofo uday bhaiya !yeh to hume pata hai
u-dekho gunjan samrat,ya deedz mujhe iss tarahse insult kare ya daante to mujhe chalega par tum to meri fav. sister ho na tum kyu aisa kar rahi ho?
jao mai baat nahi karta😭
s-yeh kya kiya tumne chashmish!😲 uday ko rula diya?bechara?
g-oh i am sorry uday bhaiya dil se and she holds her ears
u-its ok
n-koi bhi dil se sorry mat bolo
b-to kya pairo se bole
s-umm.. tumhari baaton se experience aur yaad ki khushboo aa rahi hai😉
n-wo.. ha kuch ab yeh sab choro wo babloo kabhi bhi aata hoga
su-ek idea!!
n-kya?😛
su-dekho bui ne tum sab ke baare mei uss babloo ko info. diya hai ki tum kitne ho ek group mei, kitne gals n kitne boyz etc..
n-ha to?😕
su-par photo to nahi bataya na ?
n-nahi atleast bui e kaha to nahi
su-iska matlab uss babloo ko nupur kaun hai yeh pata nahi hai n mai tum logo ke group mei nayi aayi hu
s-suhani recap ke liye thanx
su-oofo bhai baat to puri suniye(guys iss os mei suhani NRI hai par samrat n she are at good terms)
g-ek min. suhani tum kehan kya chati ho?
su-matlab yeh ki mai uss babloo ke saamne nupur bankar jaungi aur usse bahut torture karungi ,nakhre dikhaungi and wo mujhse darke bhag jaega how's that?
n-awesome suhani lekin yeh kaam mai bhi to kar sakti hu na
b-ha ha bilkul nakhre dikhane mei to expert hai miss bhushan!
n-😡 benji!!
su-well dear wo isliye kyunki agar galtise bhi uss babloo ne tumhe dekh liya to tumhari acting ki yeh asliyat bui ko pata lag jaegi mujhpe koi shak nahi karega
n-ha right!!!!!!!!!!
g-par agar uss babloo ne di ka naam pucha
s-to hum suhani bata denge
d-gr8 idea guys
u-guys mere pass ek question hai
s,d,gn,su,b-kya?
u-ki kya kisi exchange offer mei samrat n mayank ne apne brains exchange kar liye the i mean suhani tum bilkul mayank ki behen lag rahi ho
samrat glares at him😡
suddenly nupur becomes sad ,and lost somewhere
g-mayank ki yaad aa rahi hai di
n-ha😭 woh kab waapas aayega i know wo ek workshop ke liye gaya hai(not banglore ha)par uske phone calls bhi kam ho gaye hai
d-don't worry nupur tum mayank ko call karlo
mayu on phone now:
m-ha nupur bolo mujhe ab break mil gaya hai
n-ha wo actually i was missing you
m-awwe ❤️mera shona mujhe miss kar raha hai?
n-hmm..
m-don't worry jaan mai kuch din mei wapas aane wala hu
n-ha par tumhare bina i feel lonely
m-pata hai mujhe miss nautanki bhushan😆
n-nahi hone waali mrs. nautanki sharma
m-well someone sounds flirty
n-nope but this someone's words sounded perfect just perfect
m-😊 ya i agree chalo ab mujhe lunch karna hai
n-ok then i'll keep the phone
m-suno jaan love u,miss u
n-i love you too bye now
everyone-ohhh😉
m-what gang tumhare pass hai?
n-ha woh mai to bhul hi gayi thi anyways mai ab rakhti hu
she cuts the call
n-now guys lets focus abhi chidhane ka waqt nahi hai
everyone-ya
s-par babloo ke jaane ke baad to hum tease karenge😉
n-ha chalega😳
chacko(ch)-guys there is a new guy asking for nupur
everyone is tensed😲 but suhani passes an assuring smile to nupur
su-usse yaha bhejo
ch-ok
su-nupur tum bilkul bahar mat aana ok
n-ha thik hai
suddenly she gets bui's call so nupur went to attend that away from gang
n-hello ha bui...
suddenly she dashes with a young,tall boy and both of them fall down(apart from each other)
n-oh i am sorry,takes the cell mai apse baat mei baat karti hu bye
boy-that's alright!
n-aapko lagi to nahi
boy-nahi btw i am adiraj
n-oh hello i am..
suddenly she notices a boy insulting a maid
n-ek min. hu
and she goes there
n-kya hua
maid-yeh sahab mujhe aise hi daant rahe hai maine maafi bhi mangi
boy-aise hi ka kya matlab i was walking and got slipped itna paani daalte ho tum log😡 aur maafi mangne se galti kam thodi hoti hai
n-look mister inki koi galti nahi hai galti aapki hai aapne thik se dekhar chalna chaiye tha agar yeh paani nahi daalti to phir humara hi college ganda hota and galti na hote hue bhi she is apologising so please yeh financially aapke jitni acchi nahi hai iska matlab yeh nahi you have any right to insult anyone!😡
boy-ya you are right i am sorry
maid-koi baat nahi
and nupur goes from there totally forgetting that adiraj was standing there observing everything
a-kitni alag ladki hai so sweet,yet firm 😊 kuch to baat hai isme
hey adi tujhe ho kya raha hai nupur ke baare mei soch!par isne apna naam nahi bataya she was so beautiful!!!!!!!!

hey guys i know exams hai par assignments submit ho gaye hai finally i am a bit tension free to socha treat ke taur pe kuch special de du!
and plus mera birthday hai 6th ko so thought that iss special day pe mai i-f pe khamosh rahu not fair!!!!!!!!!!!
thanx for your feedback and comments guys
you really motivate me!!!!!!
ok mujhe peethna mat mayank aayega don't worry
2nd part mei till that time enjoy reading
love you all!🤗
love nuckts!!!
---------------------------------------------------------------------------exams tum mujhe chain se jeene kyu nahi dete?😭😭😭








Edited by nuckts - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
nice one to adhiraj ko nakli nupur ki jagh asli nupur pasand aa gai.

whel dear if you want then you can turn it into short story really liked this concept.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
i loved it...
u changed it...
u know main na mjht mein yehi dekhna chahti thi ke adi ko asli Nupur pasand a jaye ...😆
thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Beautiful update
loved Mayur in it...continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
that was really very sweet😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
beautiful start
fabulous
loved it sooo much
do write next part soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Adhiraj ko nupur kaise pasand aa sakti hai? no plz mayur ko milao
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Oye ye bablo to her ladki pa lato hona ko tayar ha
Mayank ko jaldi sa bolao
Lovely story
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
OMGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!WHAT WAS THAT? part 2
and nupur goes from there totally forgetting that adiraj was standing there observing everything
a-kitni alag ladki hai so sweet,yet firm 😊 kuch to baat hai isme
hey adi tujhe ho kya raha hai nupur ke baare mei soch!par isne apna naam nahi bataya she was so beautiful!!!!!!!!anyways dude tujhe nupur ko dhundna chahiye
and he goes from there and he sees some random girls gawking at him
they were passing flirtious smiles,giggling,blushing etc..
a-lagta hai yaha pe log mujhe pehle se hi jaante hai,par adiraj kisiko itni aasani se attention nahi deta
now he goes towards those girls
a-hey girls
g-hi
a-kya aap mujhe bata sakte hai ki miss nupur bhushan kaha milegi?
girls look at him with shock😲 and anger 😡 as they were jealous
but before they could answer diya who was passing by the same area heard his q. she was shocked that babloo was not some random guy from village but a very stylish,trendy,and dude kinda boy this increased her worry as she thought it would not be easy to deal with such boy but then she thought that those girls should not tell anything about nupur to him so ran towards him
d-mai batati hu
a-ji aapki taareef?
d-hi mai diya hu
a-diya?😕
d-i m nupur's cousin
a-oh ok😊
d-aap bab.. her sentence was cut by adiraj
a-adiraj
d-ok lets go
she takes him somewhere inside the college where the gang was waiting for him
d-so kaisa laga humara college?
a-remembering nupur accha laga college aur yaha ke log bhi
d-cool(in mind ab humari nupur aapse milegi tab pata chalega na ki college kaisa laga aur yaha ke log😈)
they reach that area
s-hey dude hi i m samrat
a-hi i m
b-babloo!!!!
adiraj glares at him😡 this scares the gang as it was just first meeting
a-never call me that
d-par hume to yahi naam bataya tha bui ne
a-😕 yeh baba bhi na mera asli naam batana chahiye tha na bui ko
listen guys mujhe kuch bhi bulao par yeh nahi
gang smiles evilly 😈
s-ok adiraj
a-waise nupur kaha hai?
g-badi jaldi hai di se milne ki
a-ha gunjan ji mai yaha isiliye to aaya hu
now enters suhani with a spagetti top and three forths and a cap on her head
su-hey dude!!!!!
a-tum kaun
su-mai nupur hu
a-oh ok waise bui ne kaha tha tum salwaar kameez pehnna pasand karti ho
su-wo to morena mai par mumbai mai issi tarah ka fashion hai
a-ok
su-kya hum kahi aur chalkar baat kare
a-oh sure
gang suppresses their laughs.. and both of them sit in canteen
su-waise dude jab maine shaadi se man kiya tha to tum yaha aaye kyu ho?
a-well wo isiliye kyunki mai dekhna chahta tha ki kis ladki ne MUJHE reject kiya hai
su-kyu tum me aisa kya khass hai?
a0kya khass hai matlab i m good looking,intelligent,smart...
su-wo wo wo please itna attitude accha nahi hota 😡
a-oh really ab yeh mujhe tumse sikhna padega😡
su-ha to she sees a boy passing by
su-hey rohan can u plz give me cigaratee?
ro-sure su.
su-hey hey sutta shabd nahi kehte cheap sound karta hai call it dhua(confusing na par ab usne su word bol diya tha and she wanted to divert the topic)
ro-huh?😕
su-u give me one cigaratte na
ro-oh ok take
su-thanx and she lightens the cigarrate and smokes a bit shocking adiraj's eyes😲
a-tum cigarrate peeti ho?
su-ya so that's really cool na
a-par yeh acchi baat nahi hai
su-really tum ladke karo to sahi and hum kare to galat?😡 maine sahi decision liya tha tumhare baare mei kitne narrow minded ho tum
a-excuseme!!!!!mind your language
su-you!... and she keeps on blabbering finally adiraj gets out from there in anger at that time only he sees some early teen boys smoking secretly he didn't pay much attention but then he heard some voice.. he turns and sees its nupur(original) who was scolding them
n-kya kar rahe the tum log tumhe pata hai tumhare parents kitna pyaar karte hai tumse aur tum ho ki isstarah smoking karke unko hurt karte ho unhe bahut accha lagega na yeh jaankar ki unke baccho ko cigaratte addiction hua hai bahut proud feel karenge na!nahi unhe bahut dukh pauchega aur tum smoking karke sirf khud ke lungs ko hi nahi,yeh hawa,ye trees, aur sabke logo lungs ko affect kar rahe ho passive smoking se unke lungs bhi inflaame hote hai aur phir agar aage jaakar cancer ho gaya to by god!!!!!
kids-sorry didi hume laga cool banne ke liye yeh karna chahiye
n-smiles at their innocence nahi baccho yeh sab karke koi cool nahi banta aur agar ban bhi jaaye to bimaariyo se bach nahi pata ok!
k-ok didi!and they go
kitni sweet soch hai iski😳 ek yeh hai 😊aur ek wo nupur hai😡 jisse cool banna ke liye cigarrate peena pasand hai chee..
but till the time he realises to go & talk to her she's out of sight
a-kaha kho jaati hai yeh? atleast iska naam to mai kal tak pata lagake hi rahunga
on the other hand:
nupur was working on her books suddenly she feels a pair of hand around her waist she turns and looks it was mayu
n-tum what a pleasant surprise
m-ha jaan aana hi tha
and they hug each other
m-aur kya chal raha hai?
now nupur tells him everything about babloo coming and what gang and she know
m-tumne usse dekha hai?
n-nahi par dia bata rahi thi ki wo handsome hai says innocently
m-hey not fair !mere saamne mere competition ki taareef and he folds his hands in a stubborn manner like a kid
n-mayank tum bhi na adds mischieviously waise i wonder how he looks
m-😲 miss nautanki bhushan
n-correction would be mrs. nautanki sharma
m-yes would be mrs nautanki sharma don't you dare cheat one me warna
n-warna kya huh?
as soon as she said that
she felt against her lips as his mouth came down and took hers. His hands fell from her face to grasp her around the waist, pulling her body against his as he deepened the kiss. His tongue invaded her mouth as it had earlier that day, exploring her, tasting her. she responded ,trying to mimic his action, swirling her tongue around his.In response, he pressed her even closer with a groan. She had brought her hands up to rest on his shoulders, and now they moved, her fingers caressing the smooth skin of his throat . Eventually, they settled at the back of his neck, pulling his head even closer to hers, deepening the kiss even more.
soon they broke the kiss and she looked at him
n-mayank
m-hm..
n-tumhara koi competition nahi ho sakta
m-😊 i know that sweetheart
n-i love you
m-i love you too!!!!!
ok guys here was the 2nd part
see i brought mayank back
uff.. hands are paining
nyways enjoy reading.
love ya🤗
love nuckts!!!!!!!😊








Edited by nuckts - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice so it has more then two parts good . really liked it.

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