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awesome updates...Maan made love to Geet but in anger and he will repent it...

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Part 9
Maan awoke the next morning and realised what he did. He turned to his right and saw Geet's broken bangles her earings and blood. He had made love to her aggresively. He knew that he should have been gentle with her seeing it is her first time. He was hurt and so was she. He needed answers and so did she. He regretted what he did to her. Was this marriage really a sham? Did she love him or not. If she didn't then why did she say she did. Why did she respond to him last night. Maan realised he had to apologise to Geet. He knocked at the bathroom door thinking she was there.
'Geet' he asked. No answer. He walked inside and saw it was empty.
He then walked downstairs and looked around the whole house and saw she was not there.
'She left me' Maan thought. And 'why wouldnt she after what I did to her last night' He thought.
Just then his mobile rang...
'Hello' he answered.
'Maan, Maan' Geet was crying to him on the phone.
'Geet whats wrong why are you crying' He asked.
'Stay away from me Devvv...' And the phone cut off.
'Geet Geet hello' He frantically called into the phone.
'Sir' The driver ran in. he was Geet's driver.
'Sir..Geet madam' Maan looked at him wanting to know more.
'Dev Sir kidnapped her. I was returning with Geet madam from Anjali n Atul Joshi's house and... Dev Sir came and caused an accident and I woke up and and saw Geet madam stuggling to get away from him' the driver said. Maan was shocked.
'Mr Khurana,' A voice said. Maan turned to the door and saw Anjali and Atul.
'Do I know you' he asked.
'No But I know you. Your our Geet's husband' Atul replied.
'Your Geet'
'Yes. My wife Anjali... ' Maan realised who Anjali was.
'Aaap..' He stuttered.
'Yes and last night Geet was talking to me and Atul. '
Maan regretted as Anjali told him the conversation was between them. Geet wasnt playing with his feelings but she really loved him.
'Geet asked us for help to make you see the truth' He said.
'What truth'
'Here' Atul said.
Maan was shocked. He saw evidence of Dev n Archana phone calls recorded. And cCTV of Dev pushing Dadima. Archana and Dadima conversation.
'Oh my God Geet was telling the truth' Maan exclaimed.
'Yes she was' A voice said from the back. Maan was shocked.
'Ma you' He said.
'Yes beta me.. I know you probably hate me about now but what can I do.. now beta sign these papers' She said shvoing property papers infront of him,
'First tell me where is Geet' He asked angrily.
'Where she is meant to be.. with my son riding her aganist her will but if it makes him happy thats all I want' She smirked.
'ARCHANAAA' Maan roared. At that point Atul n Anjali had asked the police to come and had Archana arrested.
All Maan now had to do was to find Geet before Dev did something horrible with her,..
PART 10..
Coming in a few hours x
Maan frantically drove along the highway. The last sighting as per the police commisoner of Geet was near the highway. The last phone signal was just off the second junction. Maan realised that Dev had an old bike shed there which he used to use during his college times. He drove to the bike garage and heard a scream.
Geet awoke feeling uncomfortable. She tried to strech her hands but she could not. She opened her eyes and realised what happened earlier. She left early morning at 6 to meet Atul and Anjali to be back before 8 before Maan wakes up. When she was returning she had an accident. Dev was there. Geet tried to run and rang Maan but her leg was injured in the crash and he caught up with her and made her unconcious.
'aah so your awake' Dev said looking at a tied up Geet on the bed with her hands tied to the bed posts. Geet looked at him disgusted.
'Get away from me you bas***d' She screamed.
'Geet Geet Geet now why don't you understand I Love you' He said sitting next to her. He offered her a bottle
'Water' He asked. Geet looked away angrily.
'When Maan gets here' She started.
'Darling your Maan is dead by now. Mum must have killed him' He stated. 'after signing property to us at least' He smriekd.
Geet was shocked. Tears started to form as she started to remember her moments with Maan.
'aah Geet don't cry i'm here now' He said trying to wipe her tears.
'now let me fulfill my wish and our union' He said. He pulled her down making her properly lie down.
'so fun to ride you and tame you down' He smirked as he removed his shirt .Geet was struggling to get free and squirming. Dev was about to get on top of her when he was shoved harshly aganist the wall. Geet looked up and saw Maan and cried tears of happiness.
'Maan' She whispered.
'Geet don't worry I'm here now'
Dev got up and punched Maan. Both were fighting when Maan didnt realise Dev had produced a knife and stabbed him,
'MAAAN' Geet screamed. Maan fell back.
'Now watch me Maan BHAI make love to your wife infront of you' He stated as he got up and went towards Geet again. But Maan got strenght as he realised his love for Geet was stronger than any pain. Just as Dev had ripped Geet clothes off leaving her in her bare essentials. Maan got up and hit him with a rock making him unconcious on the head. Geet cried as Maan untied her. The police and ambulance arrived.
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One week later.
'Its all your fault. I told you to stay in bed but no you never listen. You just had to get up didn't you' Geet argued with Maan. 'you moron'
'Jungli billi.. A person could starve around here. I'm so hungry and your so busy watching drashti hue sabse parayi instead of caring for your husband who by thee way was stabbed a few days back and is bed ridden for a week' Maan replied back.
'Uff Maan i said to ring the bell I'll come'
'Ring the bell am i some cow or a sheep or a old man'
'you might as well be' Geet muttered.
'What...'
'Now who will clean this mess up' Geet asked. Maan was waiting for his dinner which Geet said she will get but it took her lmost an hour and Maan was hungry and he went to get dinner himself when he dropped everything on Geet who was walking towards him.and another tiff began.
'IDIOT' Geet said.
'DUMBO'
'STUPID'
'PAAGAL'
'DONKEY'
'MONKEY'
'UFF MAAN you better not be calling me these names infront of our son' Geet said.
'Excuse me?' He asked raising his eyebrow.
'Yes Maan our son I'm pregnant' She gleamed.
'what' Maan yelled. 'OH MY GOD' Maan picked her up and swirled her around not caring for his injuries. Geet laughed.
'by the way its going to be a girl you duffer'
'No you moron a boy' Geet said.
9 months later
'MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA ALL THIS PAIN IM GOING THROUGH IS ALL YOUR FAULT' Geet screamed.
'GEET breath'
'I AM BLOODY BREATHING YOU MORON'
'Maam Just one final push a big one' The doctor said.
'WHAT DO YOU THINK I'M DOING I AM BLOODY PUSHING'
'should have got a birthing pool'
'I'M NOT GIVNG BIRTH TO FISH' Geet yelled. She squeezed Maan's hand tighter.
A wailing noise came a Geet gave birth to a girl.
'OWWW' She screamed.
'oh my god another one' Maan screamed.
'YES MR BLOODY KHURANA ITS YOUR BLEEDING FAULT I HAVE TWO IN ME'
Geet then gave birth to a boy.
RECOVERY ward.
Geet lay with her children. A boy and girl.
'So Maan.. its all your fault that we have a girl and a boy and a perfect little family'
'Names?' asked Yash n Meera who came
'Sneha and Sharvan' Geet smiled.
'ITs there fault your in this world with your crazy parents' said Yash n Meera to the new borns.
...THE END!!!
Edited by sweetysumaiya - 13 years ago
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awsem finally archana dev truth come out do next soon and pleae save geet and please add me to your buddy and pm list pleaseee
Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan shld find where geet is... or may be in knwng all d truth he is late...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
so final the truth comes out comes out now maan will have find geet and hopeful that scum bag dev has gotten a chance to hurt her love the ending they had twins
Edited by dumas - 13 years ago
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awesome!!!!!!!!!
waiting for more !!!!!!
hope dev dsnt do anyfing bad to geet

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