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Posted: 13 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: srirad
Wow😊...Long update...Really enjoyed...🥳
Mindblowing update...👏
Maaneet dinner..They are feeding each other ...Nice scene😳
Maaneet nok-jhok superb...⭐️
Maaneet Store room scene fantanstic...👍🏼
Perfect pictures selection and also lines of songs matched perfectly...👍🏼
Whole update was awesome especially maaneet romantic moments loved it...😳
Precap is scary...😭
Continue soon...
Eagerly waiting for next😊

thanks alot dear on behalf of piya di...

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-knirwal-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: harshithaaa
nice update...

thanks alot dear on behalf of piya di

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-knirwal-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#673

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
awesome, lovely n romantic part!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks alot dear on behalf of piya di

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: -knirwal-

thanks alot on behalf of piya di...thanks for big comment di.

your welcome dear!!! and where's Piya?

Piya!!! DI!!😆 please Update soon DI!!!

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#675

Thank you for your constant encouragement and support.

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I forgot to mention one thing in the last update.

The song in the last update was especially dedicated to my beautiful Ritzy Di she wanted a Hum tum sequence in Mere humsafar and it was only coz of her that I included that sequence in MH. Sorry Di mujhe ye last update mein mention karna chahiye tha but u know na aapki chothi behen kitni buddu hai😳

This update is for my friends Khushi (knirwal) and Silky. I love both of u thank you for being such good friends

Here is the next part hope you all enjoy reading it

love-Piya

PART 37

Next day

Khurana Constructions

Dev: Lagta hai bro aur Geet puri raat bhar kaam kar rahe the

Adi: Bechari Geet Maan Sir k chakkar mein usse bhi jagran karna pada

Dev: Ye toh hai Bro ek baar kaam karne k liye bait jaate hai toh unhe din hai k raat kuch bhi samaj nahi aata

Adi: Chaliye Sir hum jaakar unn dono ko yaad diladete hai k subah ho gayi hai aur kuch der k liye hi sahi unhe ghar jaakar aaram kar lena chahiye

Dev: Haan ye baat toh bilkul sahi kahi tumne chalo Bro aur Geet k paas jaate hai

They enter the room

Adi: Dev Sir yaha toh koi bhi nahi hai

Dev: Haan Adi main bhi yahi soch raha hoon Bro aur Geet ko toh yahi kaam karna chahiye tha aur jaha tak main Bro ko jaanta hoon wo issi room ko prefer karte

Adi: Sir ek kaam karta hoon main Maan Sir ko phone karke puch letha hoon k wo dono kaha hai

Dev: Haan ye thik rahega

Adi dials his number

Maan's mobile starts ringing

Dev: Mobile ki aawaz toh isi room se aa rahi hai

Dev: Bro ka mobile toh yahi hai

Adi: Aur Geet ka bhi Sir ye dekhiye

Dev: Mobile yahi hai toh iska matlab hai k dono kaam toh yahi par kar rahe the magar ab sawal ye uththa hai k dono gaye kaha?

Adi: Sir mujhe lagta hai k humhe unhe dhundna chahiye

Dev: Haan Adi chalo office ka har ek room check karte hai

Meanwhile,

Storeroom

Maan wakes up and finds Geet besides him

He starts recollecting the romantic moments that both of them had shared the previous night

Maan (thinking): Ye mujhe kal kya ho gaya tha jab bhi geet mere kareeb hothi hai toh main apna aapa kaise kho detha hoon

Maan: ye ladki mujhe wakai mein ek din paagal kar degi

Maan: Meri aisi haalat karke khud dekho kaise aaram se so rahi hai'chehre pe muskurahat toh dekho ab soothe waqt bhi koi muskurata hai kya?

Maan: Khud toh paagal hai hi iske saath rehthe rehthe main bhi iske biradari mein shamil ho jaayunga

Maan carefully removes a hair that was disturbing his view to see Geet's angelic face

Geet's smile widened when she felt Maan's warm hands on her face

She was still half asleep

She encircled her arms around Maan and hugged him tightly

Maan: Geet itne kareeb mat aaya karo kuch kuch hone lagta hai

Maan: Ye main kaisi baate kar raha hoon'MSK waqt rehthe samal jaa warna lene k dene pad jaayenge

Maan: Chalab isse pehle k koi aa jaaye aur humhe iss halat mein dekh le mujhe Geet ko jagana hoga

Geet in her sleep tightens the hug

He starts admiring her

Maan : Magar soothe hue kitni pyari lag rahi hai isse uthane ka mann nahi kar raha

Maan: Maan ye kya bol raha hai tu soothe waqt tho har koi pyara lagta hai magar ye zaruri nahi k wo asliyat mein bhi aisa hi ho aur rahi baat Geet kitoh jab bhi dekho wo tujhse ladthi rehthi hai aur aisi ladki tujhe pyari lag rahi hai

Geet: Hmm' ye kaun itne zoro se baat kar raha hai tum jobhi ho dekh nahi sakthe k main so rahi hoon meri neend kharab mat karo chup baitho mujhe sone do

Maan: Lo abhi tak aadhe neend mein hai tab bhi mujhe order de rahi hai kehthi hai chup baitho mujhe sona hai

Geet: Ofho tum phir se shuru ho gaye lagta hai tumhe ek baar kehne par baat samajthi nahi issiliye bakbak kiye jaa rahe ho waise bhi kitne dino k baad itna achha pillow mila hai itni pyari neend mujhe aaj tak nahi aayi

Maan: Achaji toh mera haath inhe pillow lag raha hai abhi toh tum sone se rahi

Maan: Geet..utho Geet dekho seedhe tarike se uth jau warna

Geet: Shh' dheere se kahi mere Maan Sir ne sun liya na k tum mujhe dhamki de rahe ho toh tumhari shamat aa jaayegi

Maan: Mere Maan Sir (smiles) Achha ye batau tumhare Maan Sir mera kya bigad lenge

Geet: Wo toh jab main Maan Sir se tumhari complain karungi na toh tumhe khud pata chal jaayega

Maan: Tumhe uss ghamandi insaan pe itna bharosa hai?

Geet: Khabardaar agar tumne unhe kisi bhi galat naam se pukara toh

Maan (smiles) : Magar tum bhi toh usse ajeeb o gareeb naamo se bulathi ho jaise k'

Geet: Dhust Danav

Maan: Haan Dhust Danav

Geet: Haan Dhust danav toh wo hai magar'

Maan: Magar kya?

Geet: Magar wo nariyal hai

Maan (shocked): Kya? Toh ab isne mujhe nariyal bhi kehna shuru kar diya

Geet: haan nariyal bahar se sakht aur andar se narm

Maan was happy to hear this

Maan: Achha aur batau tum apne Maan Sir k baare mein aur kya mehsoos karti ho?

Geet: Mere Maan Sir kabhi kabhi karele ki tarah kadwe hai toh kabhi gud ki tarah meethe jaante ho wo toh main hoon jo unke saare nakre bardasht kar rahi hoon mere jagah agar koi aur ladki hothi na toh wo kabka naukri chodkar chali jaathi

Maan: Toh tumne naukri kyun nahi chodi kahi uss dho saal k contract ki wajah se toh nahi?

Geet: Contract? Wo toh main kabki bhool chuki hoon main toh yaha unke liye rukhi hoon

Maan: Unke liye tum kiski baat kar rahi ho kahi Dadima kitoh nahi?

Geet: Haan Dadima, Annie, Dev ye sab toh hai hi magar sabse zyaada toh main unke liye hi yaha rukhi hoon kya karu unse dur jaane ka mann hi nahi karta najaane unhe dekhthe hi kya ho jaata hai mujhe

Maan: Saaf saaf kaho tum kiski baat kar rahi ho?

Geet: Tum abhi bhi nahi samjhe aur kiski baat karungi main toh apne Maan Sir ki baat kar rahi thi

Maan was extremely happy to hear this he himself was not sure why he was happy

Maan: Hmm'.Maan Sir

Geet: Haan mere Maan

Maan: Geet main tumse kuch puchna chahtha tha

Geet: Nahi main tumhare kisi bhi sawal ka jawab nahi dungi waise wo bhi kabhi mere sawalo ka jawab nahi dethe jab bhi dekho baat taal jaathe hai abhi tak unhone mujhe ye nahi bataya k unhone mujhe kiss kyun kiya tha?

Maan: Tumhe wo kiss achha nahi laga

She starts blushing in her sleep

Maan: Bolona Geet

Geet: Bahut achha laga

Maan: Geet main tumhe kuch kehna chahtha tha'

Geet: Nahi mujhe nahi sunna mujhe sirf Maan ki baate pasand hai

Maan: Ye baat tumhare Maan sir hi tumse kehna chahthe hai

Geet: Aisa hai toh kaho

Maan was about to say something when Adi and Dev arrive

Adi opens the door

While entering the room

Dev: Adi I hope Bro aur Geet humhe yahi mil jaaye baaki saare rooms toh humne dekh liye

Adi: Chabi yahi hai toh unn dono ko bhi yahi hona chahiye

On hearing Dev and Adi's voice Maan pretended to sleep

Adi: Ye lijiye ye dono toh yahi hai

Dev: Haan dono so rahe hai lagta hai kisi kaam se storeroom mein aaye the aur lock ho gaye

Adi starts laughing

Dev: Adi tum hass kyun rahe ho?

Adi: Agar pinky yaha hothi na toh wo kehne lagti k uski aakhein kharab ho gayi hai

Dev understands what Adi was trying to tell

Dev: Dono kitne ache lag rahe hai na

Adi: Yes Sir

Dev: Chalo Bro ko uthathe hai aur unhi se keh denge k Geet ko bhi jaga de warna hum dono ko yaha dekhkar shayad Geet embarrass ho jaayegi

Adi: Ji Sir yahi thik rahega

Maan was listening to their conversation

He opens his eyes

Maan: Are Dev, Adi tum dono yaha thank God wo actually hum dono yaha lock ho gaye the aur humhare mobiles bhi room mein reh gaye the

Dev: Aapko kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hai Bro hum samajhthe hai aap bus Geet ko jaga dijiye hum yaha se jaate hai

Maan: Thik hai Dev

Dev and Adi leave

Maan: Inn dono ki timing humesha galat waqt par hi hothi hai

Maan: Geet utho Geet

Maan: Ye aise nahi maanegi

Maan kisses her forehead

Geet: Maan'

Geet opens her eyes

Geet: Maan aapne mujhe abhi

Maan: Haan maine tumhe tumhari shahi neend se jagaya

Geet: Nahi main ye nahi keh rahi thi

Maan: Geet tumhe jobhi kehna hai baadmein kehna filhaal hum ghar jaa rahe hai

Geet: Ghar ?

Maan: haan Geet ghar

Geet: Wow toh iska matlab aaj chutthi

Maan: Itna khush hone ki zarurat nahi hai hum ghar jaa rahe hai taaki hum fresh ho sakhe phir uske baad hum office wapas bhi aa rahe hai

Geet: Aapse aur umeed bhi kya ki jaa sakthi hai

Maan: Geet ab tumhe mujhe jo kuch bhi kehna hai car mein baitkar kehna ab chalo

Geet: Aap mujhe order de rahe ho nahi main nahi aati kya kar lenge aap?

Maan: Kuch nahi main toh bus

Saying so he lifts her in his arms

Maan: Tumhe pure office staff k saamne apne baho mein uthakar le jaaunga

He starts walking

Geet: Galti ho gayi achha main chalthi hoon par aap pls mujhe neeche uthariye

Maan: Hmm' bahut jaldi samaj gayi

Geet: Maan pls utariye na

Maan: Thik hai

Maan: Ab chale

Geet: Aur koi chara bacha hai?

Maan: Kya kaha tumne?

Geet: kuch bhi toh nahi main toh keh rahi thi k humhe chalna chahiye haina?

Maan: Hmm'

PRECAP 1: Geet: Aapka chehra apni aakhon mein khaid kar rahi hoon kya pata dubara aapko dekhne ka mauka mile ya nahi 😭😭😭

PRECAP 2: Geet meets Arjun

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Love-Piya

Part 38: Page 134

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1766282/newff-maneet-mere-humsafar-thrd3-upd-prt-39-pg143

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#676

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me first yiepeee
loved the update
maan is falling for geet but...samajne mein time lagta hai...!!
loved geet's half asleep convo...maan ko aadha kya pura sach bol dia..."mere maan"
loved it
ye adi or dev bhi galat time pe aa gaye yar...
aaj maan mushkil se to bolne laga tha...bevkuf kahin ke

or ye precap aisa kyu?????
arjun ne geet ko blackmail kia hai kya???
continue soon yar
awesome update

ant thanks for the lovely dedication my dear...!!!!
luv u for that...🤗

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago

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-knirwal-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#677

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first of all sorry di ki me thanks posts complete nahi kar pai..😭.

and thanks alot for this update for me...

ap to her update me aur bi acha likti hai...confuse kar deti hai ke kon update jyada acha hai...

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

ache writters ki yehi kasiat hoti hai...😊

ab update pe ate hai...like always super mindblowing...

mosttt most lovely beautiful awesome mindblowing geet ki half neend me maan se bate😳..

thats is to much superb...

i personaallly love their conver. how geet maan ki tareef kar rahi thi and our munda apne taref sunkar has raha tha..use khud ko nahi pata ke vo kyu has raha hai😆

wase dev adi ki entry humesha galat time pe hoti hai...

precap...😭

cont soon

aur humesha hume muje aur silky di ko ase hi surprise dete rehna...

love u alot...

xxx

Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#678

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yay!!! me third!!!!!! great part!!!! aww Geet blurting out while sleeping... I love her so much!!!! and then Maan's reactions were perfect and apt!!! woah...!!! loved the line when she said... jab mere Maan sir aayenge... aww!! Maan so happy to hear 'Mere Maan Sir' uff Adi-Dev ki galat timing... abhi to Maneet enjoy kar rahe the... suddenly dono tapak pade... Kabab mein haddi!!!!

jis tarah se Maan ne geet ko jagaya was super romantic...!! Precap one... and two! interesting...waiting for them... Update soon!! and please PM me!!!

luv ya loads,

shivu!

Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 13 years ago