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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

( This )

(This )

( This )

( Or This )

The choice is urs...so u know how to end this FF 😉😉

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Mishu

@-Mishu-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

awesome...awesome...awesome...awesome...awesome...awesome...awesome...

😃

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

That was a wonderful start mady...!!!
they both hate each other...but why...???
looking forward for the story to unfold...!!
plz do update soon dear..!!
loved the update a lot..!! 😛 😳

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Lovely start. They shared a beautiful life. In times of celerabations , may it b a funeral or a wedding, parted souls always come back together.
I c alot of potential in the ss. No matter how much hatred maan wants to show, he can't hide from his ownself. Whn geet was floored, despite all the ill feelings towards her, he did carry her in his arms :)
u r good at writing death scenes. If tears is what satisfies u then u have the whole hotel to kill and a near death experience for maaneet should b fun to write.

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craziekudi

@craziekudi

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

wow maddy...

that was awesome...

please continue soon!!!

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

welcome back maanddy...

loved it...

whom to kill...?? are u planing to kill maaneet..??

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-Veritaserum-

@-Veritaserum-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Awesome start
Thanx for the PM

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Mehaaa 🤗

Kem chhe? :)

This is amazing! I love how they hate each other 😆

One request - please meri maa kisi ko maar mat dena issme! 🤣

I'm keeping super-busy right now so don't expect comments too often! Sorry! 😳

Continue soon!

xoxo

Aanya

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

great start.!!! many things to reveal . I'd want to read what are their feelings and how they'd come out of the situation that you have put them in and will this situation change them as humans that they are now!!

Amazing!!!

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-Elfin-

@-Elfin-

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

I am more than sure, there was A THIRD PARTY involved who created differences between Maaneet...If you insist on killing someone, I suggest him/her...😉

Dare you touch Maaneet Maddy...😡😡

One sentence or rather incomplete sentence in your update made me think Geet had a miscarriage for which she blames Maan and of course Devil Khurana thinks she slept with others and cheated him...😒

Great start...👏👏

Thanx for the pm hun...🤗