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Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#871

Hi...just read this ff in one go...i loved it..if u could plzzz...pm me the last part...plz

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Damnmyass

@Waymaker

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#872

Where do i start Hacker?☺️ despite the change in username..you are forever my Hacker😳

damn its been eons since iv wrote a comment on your FF🤣

Iv lost the essence of writing but for you...i shall write..YOU DESERVE A COMMENT FROM ME ;)) let's see how long it goes and am writing such a long crap before so that it appears long 🤣 🤣

Ok me start from before the last part

ArSh engagement ceremony...I very much kept grinning during the whole teasing scenes of this part..whether it was Armaan-Rahul's convos or Armaan whining that he cant meet Shilpa until the rituals are over🤣 u have any idea wht scenes am talking abt? 🤔

and everything was going on fine..even the after engagement party..ArSh sexy moments in the corner☺️

i was like dont challenge him Shilpa..bahut badi padegi tereko ;O lekin dont we want her to pay afterall/?😈 we are infact Armaan's team in this matter..and we know what was her saaza🤪🤣

[Good going Virina, the comment looks long🤣]

saali kameeni...everything was going on fine until ARJUN Guy tapak aaye story main..saala kaun hai..ek hi episode main villain banta hai saala🤬

AT THE BACK of my mind[as u knw how it predicts so well] ok make Armaan heartbroken..it just intensify the moment of what shall come next😎 and saala woh itch huwa☺️ OMG...The rain seq, the pain, the intensity of their emotions were just so perfect for a love making scene☺️

But Hacker ;o i hope there were no one on the road when Armaan pulled down her blouse ;O am pretty audience conscious :O

saali..tune road pe hi romance shuru kardiya *TMI*

I was so engrossed at this part..tht i ddnt realise part was over

and last update main...UFF☺️ *Mouth open* *eyes fixed on each words you wrote* *taking deep breaths* *shouting in my mind-HACKER IS HOT ;O* *HACKER-No one is like you* *HACKER U R ONLY MINE* :| Dude, everything you wrote is so flawless and so perfect :$ Nobody is your number 1 fan other than me you are just simply a novel writer :| and while reading...i was like..just a novel type scene🤪 THAT WAS THE HOTTEST PART SCENE EVER DELIVERED ON ANY ArSh ff til date :$ am so proud of you! :$

Car concept was a mindblwing idea☺️ main thori pareshaan thi ki aise adjust hogein dono car main☺️ lekin Armaan is experienced 😎 🤣 Poor Shilpa..SHE DESERVED IT🤣 But shit ;O she was so desperate :O abla nari nahin hai :O how she was arousing him :O and the way u wrote abt Armaan's feeling of control about the moment..was amazingly written..i could feel it😳

and they drove home...and they did it again...and i was so disappoited about no continuity of counter scene 😳

HAVE U REALISED THAT U NEVER GAVE ME ANY COUNTER SCENE OF ARSH :@ :@

That has to be one the intense and hot fiery FF ever :$

Now write the epiloguewaiting <3 LOVE YOU HACKERRR!!!!!!!!!!!! Muah :-*

YOU.ARE.THE.BEST (;

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swetha

@bary

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#873

Oh My...i almost forgot the effect your writing have on me...
i read it late coz i cant wait so many days after reading one part...so i made my best to ignore it long...lol
now i understand the BTLOO-2 prologue
plzz send me pm
or any one who has pm part send it to me,i soo wanna read it
thanks for pm
swetha

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kunabz

@kunabz

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#874

Any one can give me a pm part plz

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Rida

@FleetingWishes.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#875

HELLO READERS,

Okay, I have been getting shits loads of pms for the chapter, even though I said it Im not going to give a pm to everyone, I think Il have to give it out now with the ammount of pms I am getting.

PLEASE, you need to understand I am human, and a busy one, and I dont come online everyday, neither do I have time to reply everyone personally. AND readers who dont give a damn bout even dropping a comment, I also feel like giving a damn to what they say.

ANYWAY, since its the last chapter to the FF, I think it would be rather cruel and would leave the FF incomplete, though its nothing but a sex scene, but yeah, as I cant provide everyone with pms, Ive converted it into a pdf file. So you can maybe download it and read it. It'l take 2 mins?

And maybe then drop a comment if youre generous enough to recognise my efforts?

ANOTHER NOTE!

Do you people really want the epilogue? The thing is Im done with writing BTLOO'S SEQUEL that is "Beyond the limits of darkness" 's prologue, not posted though. SO am going to write the epilogue, ONLY IF You dont read BTLOD. Since its going to be a continuation to this, however whoever wants to end it with BTLOO, since Arsh ends over here, can have the epilogue, which I havent typed, and the epilogue will have nothing to do with BTLOD. You read it coz you dont read BTLOD.

SO yeah tell me :P