New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 26

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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 dr... abhay is very protective about pia... cool yr... cant wait 4 next part update soon n thanks 4 pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsm update dear ...
i reli felt very bad 4 pia ... bt nw abhay is wid her
update soon... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Tanzie !
Superb update!
aww loved the scene between abhay-pia-aryan!
The trio rocked. .
Piya has 2 hansome guys, looking after her . . Or may be 3. . Jeh is also there ! Hehe . . Wow !!

Jeh is a sweetheart !
So, he fell for pia . . I really feel bad for him becoz at the end . . Piya to sirf abhay ki hai !

Pia ne to already abhay k dil-o-demag pe qabza kar liya hai! That was so much fun - and I loved how you described the flashbacks. . She has been thru so much!
Abhay n Aryan were like boiling to get their hands on Prabeen. . He is so dead. . Haha. . Cant wait

thanks for the pm. . Sweety
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update beautifuly written👏loved every bit of it😊so it seems that abhay hs a painful fa0past jst lik pia😕precap sounds interesting. cnt wait...plz update soon.thx for the pm. and dnt forget to pm me nxt timea big hug.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!!!!!i have no words to say abt this beautiful post...i really loved the last part...i must tell u dat u express everything in such deep way which is really loving
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow tanzie awesome part.Sorry dear 4 late rply wht 2 do I m not well since so many days so I go 2 bed very early + I m busy wid mt 12th studies.But tanzie this part was very touching mujhe aryan ka idea zyada better laga tha thn Abhay's hahah😉😆.Chalo continue😳 LUV U🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

awasome update dear👏loved it

thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

finally u did d honour of posting it!!😉😉 sorry for the delay swty 😳

gosh itna lamba inteezar!!!😉😆
bt patience pays off n u proved it right!!
dat was damn gud update👏 Thank u 😳
frm where should i start, frm jeh only...although i don't want to do this, bt his character made me say this, dat he is aving a heart of gold!! i don't love him as pia's finace bt as a human being i adore his character!! n d last line when manish said " dat she is reli pretty n dat made him fall for her n then jay's reply"...dat was reli beautiful!! Jeh has fallen for Piya which is out of his nature but more thn that, he feels responsible as a fiance. even in the show, we hav seen how responsible Jeh is towards his family. his mom, Alina and same goes here. will build up his other characteristics slowly 😊
nw coming to ofcourse d best part "aryan n abhay", gosh their bond amazes me!!
n i must say tanz , this time u av something reli different n interesting in ur mind, i m just head over heals in love , d way u r bringing them close wid every passing situation n then playing well wid nt letting them get closed to each other so easily!! aryan's heart n abhay's mind a perfect combo!!!
aryan is such a sweetheart n abhay is aving such a hot attitude!!
dat spellbind scene was well written Now, abhay and Piya are soulmates na and their journey is not meant to be easy 😳 and as u know...its not my nature to bring romance so easily 🤣 honestly bcoz i don blv in it.. i blv it takes time to build up a relationship n thts exactly wat im gonna write 😆
i felt reli bad looking tears in aryan's eyes😭😭😭, bt abhay-aryan r each other strength!!
so nw abhay's knw who is prabeen jaiswal!! prabeen should start counting his days nw n i loved d way u showed d fear in aryan's eyes for prabeen!! everyone loves Aryan n his ideas...thankuu 😆 and abhay will strike on Prabeen but not so soon.
nw i would depirately waiting for only one thing, pia's re-gaining her conciousness!!
do update soon Next update will focus on Piya's conscious mind and what she does after gaining conscious. and it's time to update Beautiful stranger 😆
loadsss of love n a big hug tanz🤗 bear hug to u too 🤗
p.s n do comment on my update...bahut lamba reservation hogya😆 sorry sorry...ker diya 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sunu123

hey tanzie😃

awesome update dear👏👏👏... Thanks sunita and sry mayb i cudnt reply your last comment 🤗i loved the bond betw abhay n aryan... the speellbind is well written👏... im glad you liked it...😳abhay ka dimaag hamasha ek kadam aage chalta hai...first jab aryan ne pia ko hug karne ke liye kaha...isne mana kar diya😆😆😆...aur jab blood exchange karne ka liye kaha...tabhi bhi mana kar diya😆😆...pata nahi iske dimaag mein ye ideas kaha aatahai😆😆😆...lekin bachu ek na ek toh tu jarur pasega😆😆😆...
ohh i love aryan...kya dimaag paya hai😆😆😆... 🤣 u jus wait n watch..ek sher to dushra sawa-sher 😆 and offcourse abhay raichand k dimag ko koi beat ker sakta hai kya? 😃 but enjoy writin Aryan.. he makes me laugh 😃
now abhay knows that who is praween jaishwal...now praween shd start counting his days😆😆😆... not so soon... abhi to bohut kuch hona baki hai...
ohh i loved that how abhay promise pia that he will take care of her😉... he's soo gonna regret it... 😆
plz update soon
hav a nice day
luv u 🤗
sunita

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Nice update tanzie thanks for the pm


Thanku Rashu... 😳

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