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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats for new thread
I read all part
fabulous
loved it
pls cont
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update...👏
Geet and pari competition nice😆😆
Precap interesting...Sam and geet confrontation😲..
Can't wait...continue soon..Eagerly waiting for next part😊


Congratulations for new thread...⭐️
Edited by srirad - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry for not updating! Will post the next part either tonight ( Indian time) or Tomorrow..
Sorry, I've been busy! Tomorrow is my sister's birthday and I am planning a party for her! Sorry!!
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thnks u so much. atlst we got an update. where were u r????????? nd cn we get daily updates 4m nw on?... jst 4 curosity
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wow congrats for the new thread !!! got to read the update !!! its jst awsome !!! waiting for the next one
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PART 17
Geet and Maan had breakfast in bed. There were blueberry muffins, scarmbled eggs, waffles, toast and orange juice.
Geet and Maan after that got ready and went shopping. Geet and Maan went to the best stores possible and even found an Indian store, in which Geet bought more sarees. Geet's eyes fell on a sexy white and purple saree, a total backless blouse with just a small strap, sleeveless and a see through lace saree.
It was absolutely gorgeous.
Geet- Mujhe yeh hi chahiye!
Maan- Geet! There are alot of sarees in Delhi, what's the point of buying one from here?
Geet- Kaha na yeh hi chahiye to bas yeh hi chahiye!
The store owner then came.
Owner- Madam, sorry, but someone else has taken this saree.
Geet- Who?
Owner- Vo jo piche aaurat hain, yellow dress mein, usne.
Geet turned around and saw what she couldn't believe, who was standing in front of her, her sister, the person who betrayed her and Maan, the person who thought of herself and left an amazing man at the Mandap, it was none other than Sameera Handa. Yes, Sameera Handa, Geet's sister.
Geet had tears in her eyes and was furious. Sameera was looking at Geet and also had tears in her eyes but not tears of sadness or joy, it was tears of betrayl and hatred. Geet got flashbacks of the wedding day, how selfish this woman was.
Sameera walked up to Geet and Maan was looking at Sameera in fury. How dare she? Sameera was wearing sindoor and a mangal sutra and red chuda. She was definately married to Shekhar. Shekhar was standing there, looking at Geet and Maan, scared about what was going to happen next.
Sameera walked up to Geet to hug her but instead, Geet slapped her.
Sameera held her cheek and looked at Geet innocently while Geet looked at her with fury as well as Maan.
Maan- Tum yahan?
Geet- Ek minute Maan! Pehle mujhe bolne dijeye! Yeh meri so called Behn hain, lekin aaj main yeh rishta tutkar hi jaongi.
Maan nodded.
Geet- Tum, vo hi Sameera, jiske saath maine apna saara bachpan bitaya. Vo hi Sameera, jo meri role model thi. Vo hi Sameera, jise main har cheez ki advice leti thi. Vo hi Sameera, jise main apne se bhi jyaada pyaar karti thi.
Geet looked at Shekhar.
Geet- Fir ek din, Shekhar tumhari jindagi mein aaya, tumhe vo sab khushiyan di, tumhe sapne dikhaye, tumse vaada kiya ke vo 7 janamon ke liye tumhare saath rahega. Fir ek din aachanak, tumhe chodkar chala gaya. Kabhi vapas nahi aaya. Aap marne lage the.
Geet- Fir, Maan tumhari jindagi mein aaya. Tumhe ek nayi jindagi di. Tumhe jeene ka hak diya. Tumse vaade kiye aur vo vaade nibhaye. Pyaar ho gaya tha. Sab kuch theek tha.
Geet bursted out crying and grabbed Sameera's shoulders.
Geet- MAIN BHI KHUSH THI! MAIN BHI KISE SE PYAAR KARTI THI!! YEH TUM BHI JANTI THI!! Lekin...lekin tumne kya kiya? Apne khushi ke liye, apna behn ko dhoka diya, Maan ko dhoka diya, apne pure parivaar ko dhoka diya! Aapne ek baar nahi socha ke aapke bhagne se sab ka kya hoga? Meri shaadi MAAN se ho gayi thi!! Apne ghar ko badnaam hone se bachane ke liye!
Sameera was shocked.
Geet- Mujhe apne pyaar ko chodna para, Maan ke liye! Aasan nahi tha! Aasan nahi tha, us samein mein, us hi waqt kisi ko chodna aur kisi aur se shaadi karna! Lekin karna pada!
Sameera felt guilty and looked down.
Geet- Meri shaadi ko hone ko kitne mehne ho chuke hain! EK BAAR, ek baar bhi Maa aur Papa ne mujhe phone nahi kiya! Mere paas nahi aaye! Ek baar bhi mere baare mein nahi pucha! Yeh sab tumhari vajase hua Sam!
Maan felt bad for Geet, Shekhar was just quiet but smirking.
Sameera- I'm sorry.
Geet- Sorry? Sorry kehne se yeh sab theek thodi na ho jayega! Sorry kehne se meri jindagi vapas to nahi jud sakta! Sorry kehne se Maan to nahi theek hoga! Sorry kehne se Maa aur Paa mujhe phone thodi na karenge ja vapas aayenge!
Sameera- To main aur kya karoon?
Geet- Kuch bhi nahi! Main bas tumhe isliye batana chahti thi ke tumne sabko kitna dukh puhanchaya! Ta ki tumhare dimaag mein thodi se akal aa jaye aur samajhdhari.
Geet held Maan's hand.
Geet- Maan chaliye yahan se.
Maan- Ek minute.
Maan looked at Sameera in disgust.
Maan- I just wanted to say...I hate you. May you go to hell. As well as you Shekhar.
Maan held Geet's hand tightly and left from there.

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Precap- Maan distances himself from Geet
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Loved It... :)
it was well worth waiting for...
Edited by Nazmaa - 14 years ago
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awesome update now what has happened that maan has decided to distance from geet
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