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Posted: 19 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: amneetkaur_24

CONTINUE SOON! I like this one! Make kripa not too indianish and mannered. she should be somewhat down to earth. lol. u started this fan fic awesomly. Cant wait for the next part!

well i will try that this fan fic won't make u bore

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Posted: 19 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: khushi19

oh thanks for telling me.anyways can't wait till angad and kripa meet😆

really so it is an info that they wud meet in next part

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Posted: 19 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: vallanki

wow..nice fan-fic..continue plz

thnx😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: cutest_angel

hey Saniya! how r u??

well i just read the intro n the 1st epi n its amazing!! i m already loving it!! n i really cant wait till u continue!! so do it fast!!! 😡......................... ok joke tha! 😉 😆 😆 😆

continue when u can! n take ur time if u need! 😆 😆 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

ok so i will cont after a decade wat say??? 😆😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#35

Character analyzing

Suryabaan: owner of Sharma constructions handles most of the orders of khanna's. Best friend of Dilip and was a classmate for years. Very disciplined liking person love his kids and gave all the best facilities.

Gayatri: wife of Suryabaan.

Josh: first kid of Suryabaan and gayatri and mostly interested in business. He loves his both sis and mom dad. And was good frnd of angad…. 23 yrs old as angad


Kripa: 2nd kid. daughter of Suryabaan and gayatri. Very sweet and mannered girl. Never defies anyone. Very well in playing chess, but looser in ludo most of the time. She is really beautiful and has an attractive personality. She is very childish. love playing cricket.
20 years old


Aaliyah: youngest child and most naughty and mischievous and loves kripa but bugs her most of the time. luck is always wid her in ludo. 18 years old.




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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
YEH DIL MAANGE MORE MORE MORE MORE
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: kuch kuch hota

YEH DIL MAANGE MORE MORE MORE MORE

sabr a phal meeta hota hai....

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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
Part Three

A: mom I think that it is unfair to that girl.

N: at least u will care about her. I m not forcing u to accept ur relation wid her. but be friends.

A: if u say so I will marry but I won't met her before that coz I can't hide the truth. Especially this one.

Saying this he leaves.

D: do u think I shud talk to him if angad….

N: he won't do anything. He is my son and I know him.

D: if he won't go… so wat they will think.

N: nothing say he was busy in work. And he shud go to office and now he shud be responsible.

D: ya true. I will tell kartik to teach him everything while we go and meet Suryabaan.

He calls Suryabaan and tells him that he want his daughter to be his daughter-in-law. Suryabaan was really happy.

D: to hum aaj baat paki krne ayein.

S: zaroor.

D: acha aaj angad nahi aye ga.

S: kyon

D: uski office mein kaam hai

S: to usse ke wo aa jaye aur phir kripa ko dekhne ke baad chala jaye. Ab phir milna wilna to hota rahe ga.

D: theek hai main kuch karta hoon.

Dilip goes to angad room and tells him to come and he dun have to say anything. He will leave as soon as he wants.

Next Day
Sharma residence

All were happy to have khanna's coz their sweet kripa was getting married there. They all sat down and chatted.

N: bhai sahib ab jaldi se humari hone wali bahu ko samne laiye

S: ji zaroor.

G: Alia kripa ko le aao.

Alia: par mujhe sunna hai.

G: kia

AA: baatein.

G: kripa ko le aao phir hum baatein karein ge.

Then camera zooms to kitchen. We see alia talking to a girl standing and we can't see her face.

AA: di chalo

Girl: I m afraid.

AA: aisa keh rahi ho jaise haunted house ja rahe hain ab chalo aur chai le aao.

G: hmm

The girl steps forward and we can see all the khanna mesmerized except angad. He hated all this. Then we can see it was kripa. She touched the feet of naina and dilip and served tea and cookies she made. After a lil chat angad left.

D: bhai humari bahu yehi hai ab Suryabaan tyaari karna shuru karo2 din baad sangeet phir shaadi.

N: haan

S: itni jaldi

N: wo hum yahan nahi rehte aur ……

G: bhai Koi baat nahi. Hum saari tyaariyan karlien ge.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
very nice!!!!
grrr8 job 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Vandu4ever

very nice!!!!
grrr8 job 👏

thnx😳

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