Hey
Firstly
for the PMand now coming to the update.
u have got good writing skills yaar."..And his ego its even bigger then sky.. " that dialogue was 👏👏👏
wow Adi was so sweet... the way he was defending Maan was 👍🏼👍🏼
"don't let anger.. ego.. anything come in between"well said yaar. we sould not let ego & anger come between any relationship.good sentence.
Geet is guilty. well written poem on her guilt. 👍🏼
"Has Meera gone mad..Is she having some sort of amnesia attack.. these are not my things"
🤣nice dialogues yaar.
"Geet relax yaar.. I am doing you a big time favour.. and you are blaming me.."
🤣🤣🤣very funny."What am I suppose to do yaar.. you are gone again with your kidnapper..No your irresistible kidnapper.. all to vow him back.. what do you expect me to make out from this..?
The ff titile fit into this sentence well. good job.👍🏼
I am doing you a favour.. you would be thanking me for this one day.. she announced proudly.."
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well done buddy. thanks for those dialogs. "Acha you are doing everything.. and I am not even allowed to think.." ohh..now I don't have words to use. I used all my words already...pls some one help me by lending some words to describe this.
opps...no one is helping me yaar...
anyway good dialogs buddy...well done..👍🏼
"Hi angel..! missing me na..? rishi winked"
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"Hi Rishi the great..obviously I was missing you.."
again funny...nice dialoge
"she answered smiling.."
here u should have used some other word instead smiling yaar.may be winking😉 or something like that. no offense dear it is only my opinion your other readers might have loved it.
wow so sweet... Geet requesting Maan and he is agreeing with out words... the understanding levels was just

"Precap:
Rishi: save me' I am hallucunating..! I mean BRO getting intimate' I mean bro kissi.."
wow nice precap yaar. this Rishi character is dam good. funny.
overall awesome update.


&I enjoyed reading.

I always enjoying reading this kind of updates. funny, with out double meaning dialogs with simple comedy. thanks again.
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Edited by harshdb - 14 years ago