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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOMMEE. ARWWWHH RIDDHIMA ISS EVERYONEE'S PRINCESS. <3 LOVEE THEIIR BONNND. YESSS ARMAAN'S ENTRRYY NEXT PART UPDATE SOOON
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey looks interesting update soon n add me to ur pm list :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start

thanx for pm

continue very soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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when will u be updating dear?
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Hi nikki, interesting story. Cant wait for ar to meet. Will add your new id for the pm. Pls update soon if u can
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hey! congrats for new FF . .. nice plot!
the update was awesome..cnt soon :D

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Hey! Just read this one and it's very good! Love it a lot! Please update soon and do PM me.

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Sindoor
AR FF
Part 2

A person was checking his patient when his phone rang and he smiled seeing the caller showing his dimpled smile but before he answer the call

P:''u r fine Major Singh just take these medicines and ur pain will subsided and if u face any problem come to me.''

M.S.:"yea thanks doc I will take ur leave now and u please take the call, the person other side seems to be impatient fellow''

He said while pointing to his cell phone which was buzzing from so many times and he smiled and when it buzzed again

M.S.:''I guess doc its ur girlfriend may be women and their impatience''

Major Singh could not help but to tease this young and handsome doc and he smiled

D:''well major I agree women and impatience but this is not my girlfriend officially yet my girlfriend as its my choti maa's call as in my beloved chachi my girlfriend

M.S.:''ok then doc I will take ur leave now u attend ur call and soon next time its may be ur official girlfriend's call or may be ur wifey''

And he winked to him while the doctor laughed

D:''well major that time is still way too far''

M.S.:''well doc u never knew what destiny has stored for u.''

D:''well major let us see''

M.S.'' yea sure and if u get married don't forgot to invite me''

D:''for sure major but at least let me find a doctor for myself''

He said with a dimpled smile

M.S:''Doctor?''

He asked confusingly

D:''well u see''

But he is cut short by the ring of his cell phone again

M.S.:''well may be some other doc u now have to attend ur choti maa's call, so I will take ur leave now thanks bye''

D:''yea off course bye and major do eat ur medicines regularly''

M.S.:''yea doc for sure''

And he leaves and finally the handsome doctor picked the phone and before he speak the lady from another side start speaking

L:''armaan tu phone kyoon nahin ootha rahaa tha? Emergency meiin tha kya? Aur kaisa hai?''

Yes it was famous, charming, doctor, Dr.Armaan Mallik and he showed his dimpled smile when he was showered with so many questions

A:''relax choti mom mai theek hun, vo I was checking my patient to phone nahin oothaya.''

L:''ohk armaan maine tujhe disturb kiyya''

A:'' come on girlfriend u know naa mai aapni beautiful girlfriend ke liyye humesha free hotaa hun''

L:''yea I know tabhie to itnee din se merii yad nahin ayi tujhe?''

She said with a fake anger

A:''I am so sorry girl friend but u know naa I am bit busy here''

L:''ohk u r forgiven''

A:''thanks beautiful so kaise hai merii girlfriend''

Before the lady replied some man from another side replied

M:''oye armaan sharam nahin ati tujhe aapni chachi se flirt kar rahaa hai yeh sirff meraa right hai''

And hearing his possessiveness armaan chuckled

A:''oh my my some one is obsessive kyoon girlfriend''

M:''chl oye chupp kar tu''

L:''sumeet stop it tum bhi naa chupp ho jao mujhe oos se bat karne do.''

Su:''par kumkum?''

But she glared at him and he shut his mouth

Ku:''to armaan maine tujhe yeh kehna tha kii humare yahan chota sa function hai aur tujhe ana hai beta tera koi excuse nahin soonugi mai samjha''

(yes it was sumeet and kumkum mallik our riddhima's uncle and bua and armaan's chachu and choti maa)

A:''theek hai beautiful vaise I will try I guess koi crisis to nahin hai to leave to mill jaayega aasani se to I will make sure kii mai aaonn jaise hii programme final hotaa hai I will tell u''

Ku:''han armaan theek rahega bachaa vaise bhi tujhe almost 2 sal se nahin dekha I am missing u''

She said little bit emotionally but before armaan speak sumeet again butted in

Su:''kal rat ko hii to dekha tha''

Ku:''shut up sumeet vo skype par vo koi dekhna tha aapne bache ko gale bhi naa lagaa pao''

A:''yes chachu choti maa is right so choti maa mai aaonga aap jee bhar kar dekhna''

Ku:''han armaan achaa chl aab mai rakhti hun''

A:''jii give my love to abhie and angad love u see u soon''

Ku:''love u too bachaa bye''

A:''bye choti maa''

And smilingly he hung up, it was feeling so good to hear her choti maa's voice and he so wants to met his family, he was missing them terribly, while they visit him in between 2 years but still he did not go to his house from past almost 2 years,this is the only side affect being working as Doctor in Millitary, but he loved working there. But right now he so wants to go his home met his family, his parents, his siblings, his dadii he was missing them and now tou his choti maa called him and he has to go at any cost, he can never say ''no'' to his choti maa, he respects her and loved her as his mother. So he went to the higher authorities for applying the leave so it will sanction as soon as possible.

In evening armaan was in the cabin of colonel of base for his leave

Co:''so doctor armaan u need leave that too for 15 days everything all right?''

He asked while signaling him to sit down

A:''yes colonel everything is fine thank you, its just some function in my house.''

Co:''oh that's good so our handsome doc is getting married''

He said happily while armaan was taken back with this marriage topic, from morning everyone was asking this marriage thing, as if he is seriously go to his house and will come with bride, he chuckled at his own thought but

A:''no sir nothing like that its just family function, I am still single and no hurry in marriage''

Co:''well I guess u r waiting for ur right partner, anyways all the best for that doc and as far ur leave is concerned its sanctioned, as u did not take leave from almost 2 years back''

A:''thanks so much sir.''

Co:''ur welcome see u soon enjoy ur vacation''

He said while handling him his leave letter after signing it and after a final shake hand with him armaan leaves.

And after that armaan immediately went to his best friend Rahul Grewal's place, he is doctor himself with him in military and when he rushed in his house seeing rahul and muskaan in each-other's arms, he

A:''oye to yeh hai teraa jaruri kam jiske liyye tune leave lit hi?''

He asked while sitting comfortably on couch and rahul-muskaan come out from the hug and they were flabbergasted seeing him and muskaan went inside with a blush appear on her cheeks

Ra:''sharam nahin ati tujhe jab dekho binaa knock kiyye aisee hi aaa jaata hai aandar besharam kahin kaa''

He said with a frown on his face, cursing him to disturb his moment and armaan

A:''aagar itnaa hai to door khulla kyoon chodta hai band kiyya kar''

Armaan retorted back

Ra:''armaan u r such a shameless creature''

A:''yea romance karne ko chutii li tune aur shameless creature mai''

He said scrasctiacally but before rahul can say anything

Mu:''to girlfriend ko time denaa galti hai?''

She asked while coming with coffee for herself which armaan snatched

A:''nahin galat nahin hai par u know muskii darling door khulla chodd ke romance karna ahemm ahemm u know what I meant''

He said with a wink and rahul smacked him while muskaan blushed

Ra:''yea right ekk bar tujhe pyaar honee de fir poochta hun''

He said while hugging muskaan side ways

A:''in ur dreams raoool vaise bhi u know mujhe aapne liyye ekk doctor chahiye yar''

Mu:''oye tujhe shaadi karni hai ya aapna ilaaz karana hai''

She said while laughing in her own style while armaan makes a face

A:''no muskii par actually tujhe pta hai pyaar vyaar mere bas kii bat nahin hai, its such a complicated thing, yeh tum log hii sambhalo, han par shaadi karni ha to ekk doctor se''

He replied while sipping coffee

Mu:''par armaan terii is bat ka kya reason hai kii tujhe doctor se hi shaadi karni chahiye y not an another educated girl?''

Ra:''rehne de muskii kis se pooch rahii hai yeh to hai hii pagal aur iskii har bat meiin koi stupid sii logic hotaa hai''

Mu:''tu chupp reh kankhjure mujhe aaj is hero se janna hai kii iskaa kya reason hai han to bol hero''

She said to rahul and asked armaan to give her answers

A:''well muskii answer is simple, mai ekk doctor hun aur mujhe yeh lagta hai kii ekk doctor hii mujhe samjah paayegi aur mere saath nibha payegi kyonki vo khudd doctor hogii to vo merii responsibilities samjhegi that's y.''

He completed while muskaan frowned

Mu:''u know hero that is really ridiculous, ek dam bakwas reason hai tu aisee kaise keh sakta hai ekk doctor hii tujhe aur terii responsibilities ko samjhegi, fir to tere hisab se mai bhi rahul ko nahin samjhti naa''

She asked and

Ra:''areey muskii baby yeh to crack hai aur hum kahan se aye is bat meiin?''

Mu:''nahin rahul tub hi to doctor hai aur mai fashion designer so yeh theory hum par bhi apply hotii hai naa''

A:''nahin muskii yar because tumhare liyye yeh love marriage hogii isliyye tum par theory nahin ati kyonki pyaar meiin to insan ekk-doosre ko har haalat meiin samjhta hai aur merii arrange marriage hogii so my case is totally different, is liyye madam muskaan aapni muskaan dijiye aapne aapko mere saath compare mat kariye''

He said while taking her in side-hug

Mu:''par armaan mai abhie bhi tujhe yehii kahungi kii tu aapni yeh sochh badal kyonki yeh jaruri nahin hai kii jo aap chaho vo mille''

But before armaan can say anything rahul butted in

Ra:''vaise armaan tujhe koi important kam tha jo tumne humara moment disturb kiyya''

A:''very funny raool par han I want to tell u mai gharr jaa rahaa hun 15 days ke liyye choti maa ne bulaya hai''

Ra:''vaoww that's superb kab jaa rahaa hai''

A:''aaj rat ko socha tujhe aur muskii se mill lun tu hospital nahin milla naa aaj.''

Mu:''han hero vaise we will miss u terii packing ho gayyi''

A:''hmm almost chalo guys der ho rahii hai abhie chalta hun''

Ra:''han chl bye give my regards to everyone bye see u soon man''

And they hugged each-other

Mu:''hmm hero mine too and take care of urself bye''

A:''u too muskii aur kam ladiyoo tum 2ono''

He said jokingly and they smiled and armaan leaves from there.

Next Day At Mumbai airport


Riddhima was at airport waiting for abhie to pick her up as she reached Mumbai and abhie was coming to pick her up and she was looking here and there while dialing abhie's number when she bumped in someone and the hot coffee fell on her shoulder and she looked at the person who did this, she saw a pair of blue-greay eyes looking at her and seeing him

Ri:''what the hell dekhh kar nahin chal sake kya aap? Mere saare kapre kharab akr diyye? Aapne?''

She asked while wiping the coffee from her shoulder and the person

P:''look miss I did not deliberately, here get this tissues(passing her tissues) wipe ur dress''

Riddhima took them

P:''and I am sorry and yea please as soon as u reached to ur place don't forgot to put ice-cubs on ur shoulder, otherwise the burns will be there, now I have to go bye once again sorry''

And he after giving her dimpled smile leaves, riddhima was surprised with his sweet behavior while she was actually was ready to burst at him.





Well here is next part friends hope u like it, i know there is no AR again in this part but as u have to see the two different personalities so that's y hope u enjoyed and get to know something about AR.

Precap_ Finally AR's First Met?

Now in which circumstances AR met?

Will Riddhima still Able to get marry to Sid?

Riddhima comes to know about armaan?

Armaan comes to know about riddhima being engaged?

''Cut it out yar she is not of my type'' Who is saying this and to whom?

Please do comment or hit like tab if u like the part friends,

With lots of love
Nikita


Edited by niki.5 - 13 years ago
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Hey update sooon yaar
Edited by prachi_mjht - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow nice concept...pl continue soon !!

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