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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Baby🤗

Really love the update

AR and Rytham

Too cute

Love their family moments😃

Unko toh mazza ayya saath mein hume bhi😆

Ohh no

Ab sid ko kya chahiyee😡

I hate him

Hope Armaan apne aap ko blame na karein

Do continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey Baby🤗

Really love the update

AR and Rytham

Too cute

Love their family moments😃

Unko toh mazza ayya saath mein hume bhi😆

Ohh no

Ab sid ko kya chahiyee😡

I hate him

Hope Armaan apne aap ko blame na karein

Do continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

love u mommy
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priyanka52

Hey gr8 update write next part soon but why are u ending so early u know i am in love with this ff :-(.and i really sid.;->

awweee i hv tooo😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshilksg

awesome part.

Armaan is such a nautanki and his son is no less...
loved their family moments.
why sid is doing this...😡
OMG! what happend to Armaan...
cont soon.

thanksss😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello ppl shocked naa itni jaldi mai fir se..yupp m here wo kya hai na my vacation just about to finish in two three day and I wanted to finish this one b4 it'.jeezz kabse plane ker ri this to finish it off at last'first of all m very sorry to those readers who dsnt wanted me to finish the story but I dnt have further concept so I have to , I dnt wana spoil the beauty of emotions by dragging it' so as it is d last part plzz I beg u comment long

And very sent writing last part so m gona write full drama emotion, craziness on its peak'.muhaaa

Recap -

Part ' 13

Last part😭

Imp plz read- as this story was continued in flash back, for reference see the part -4 so in this part flash back is gona end and present part will be continued..

She came inside the house changed rhythms cloths first, who was sleeping as if not slept for long'.with that cute smile'

She was looking at the cupboard with cute frown ..." what should I wear'(her eyes twinkled) yup this sauce wala red sari '." She blushed thinking about armaan.

Ri.." emm jab tak armaan nahi ata mai kya karu.." she made cute face tapping her cheek with her index finger '

She placed sleeping rhythm on the big swing and sat next to him'with a book it's a love story I found in armaan's drower wink'she covered rhythms face with her rupatta'.she smiled thinking about a special liking of her ruppta from d father son duo both loves her ruppta too much '..

Settling comfortably she opened the book and found a envelop in it'writer.." to my dear biwi.." she smiled and opened the smiley packet 'it was honeymoon tickets to lass vogues with a small letter'she was quit shocked seeing honeymoon tickets that to in lass vogues'.

She read the letter'" hyee my basket u couldn't controle ur hands na I knew tum ye book jarur churaogi'smirk.."

She pouted '"Haw maine chori nahi it my house so sab kuch mera hi toh hai.." she smiled shyly '

Letter'"stop pouting and blushing read further , I know u r shocked to see tickets to lass vogues but mujhe kissi very very special person ki wish puri kerni thi na'wink, so u have a week to do as much shopping u can..p.s.s thore paise waha ke liye bhi chor dena

And till den mai hospital ka work bind up ker lunga fir all four will go for long holiday'"

She made a confused face'" four.."

Letter.." oh ho basket me u , our prince and rosy.."

Her eyes widened.." rosy with us on honeymoon.."

Letter'" hahahaaha basket stop visualizing it hilarious '.i know u can take care of rhythm but some times hume helf ki jarurat toh hogi na u knoww'grin**'. I mean riddu ko uske kuku aur chu chu se toh rosy hi milati hai na'hahahaha'"

Chalo need to rush ab chittiya hi likhta rahunga to hum ghumne kab jaynge ..love u muhaa

She closed her eyes hugging that letter, a beautiful smile playing on her lips enhancing her beauty in the moon light '.she never thought her life will take such beautiful turn 'she will get armaan's love back

Mobile's shrill sound broke her Terence '..She hurriedly picked the call wishing it be armaan seeing sanjeevni flashing on the screen '

Ri.." hello armaan .."

Voice.." dr. riddhima mai sister lovely hu jee'"

She smiled .." oh yaah sister lovely kehiye naa'"

Lo.." wo ojji riddhima jee..mai'" Lovely stammered which made riddhima panic

Ri.." sister lovely kya hua armaan kaha hai plzzz tell me.."

Lovely filled riddhima with all happened between sid and armaan 'now she was horrified tears streaming out uncontrollably '

Ri'" plzz tell me armaan kaha hai plzzz for god sake'"

Lo.." jee wo abhi abhi kuch log unhe hospital laaye hai unka accident ho gaya hai'"

Mobile fell from riddhima's hand and she slumped down on the floor with a thud '.she was numb ..her mind wasn't working anymore all she could hear her electric heart beats'which were louder enough to be heard by a deaf '

Bi came ask about dinner and was shocked seeing riddhima's condition she was sitting like a statue staring the vacuum'.bi sat next to her a shook her..

Bi.." riddhima beta kya huaa tum aise kyu'"

Riddhima mechanically looked at bi as if there was no life in her'.and whispered.." armaaannn"

Bi shook her vigorously '" kya hua armaan ko riddhima hossh me aao hume armaan ke pass jana hoga na kaha hai ho'"

It put some senses into her .." haan mujhe jana hoga mere armaan ke pass he needed me'haan bi mujhe jana hoga'" she walked towards d door half numb 'when something stopped her

She turned and found her saari ka pallu in rhythms hands , he was sleeping holding it tightly'she ran to him and hugged him tight'.." bi app ishka khyal rakhna mai armaan ko lene ja rahi hu thik hai..fir hum sab sath me dinner karenge.."

Handling rhythm safely she ran towards main door. Bi shouted from behind'"riddhima armaan kaha hai beta u cant drive properly riddhimaaa'."

But she didn't heard ..she ran bare footed '.she just knew he had to reach sanjeevni to her armaan'bi was miserable seeing all this she again went to the backyard holding rhythm tight and picked riddhima's phone she again dialed sanjeevni and got to know the reason of riddhima's condition'she closed her eyes'" plzz baba ji mere ammy ki rakhcha kerna abhi abhi toh uski jindagi me khushiya aayi hai'plz mere bacho ki paak mohabat ki izzat ab apke hantho me hai'"

Riddhima was driving like a manic '.in her mind the images of all those times when when she almost lost armaan were playing '..her heart was sinking'

( imagine in background this song plzz are I told u na I will reach the peak of emotions link')

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa
Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa
Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa

almost banging her car 2 times She reached sanjeevni '..she ran out of car leaving the door ajar ..

all were shocked seeing her condition 'her blood shoot eyes 'tear stain face'.she ran to reception'

ri.." armaannn kaha hai'"

the nurse was horrified seeing her like this she kept staring her'and she screamed..

ri.." I said armaan kaha hai'.."

nurse stammered '" he is in OT.."

and she again she ran like crazy towards operation theatre '

Kya Maine Pa Liya Hai Kya Maine Kho Diya Hai
Shayad Yeh Soch Kar Hi Dil Aaj Ro Diya Hai
Tu Hi To Tha Mera Apna Kaise Phir Yeh Toota Sapna
To Jo Mil Ke Kho Jaayega Jeena Mushkil Ho Jaayega
Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

where as in operation theater '.dr. kirti and dr. shashank were operation armaan 'he had major blood lose and several injuries '.

Dr. kirti'" patient is sinking dr'"

Shashank literally shivered hearing this'" armaan be with us armaan plzz hum tumhe kuch nahi hone denge.."

Dr. kirti placed a hand on shashank's shoulder ...tears tickled out of his eyes'" agar isse kuch ho gaya toh meri beti mar jaygi (and he again tuned to armaan ) armaan u have to be with us tumhari basket ke liye tum dono ke rhythm ke liye'.

Dr. kirti screamed.." dr. shashank ap bhul rahe hai u r a dr. agar ap aise emotional honge I have to send u out of OT '(to a nurse dekho dr. shubhanker aaye ya nahi get him fast.."

Shashank took a deep breath and again started his work'

Armaan found himself lot in immense darkness, no signs of light anywhere, he was scared 'scared of this darckness as if it was eating him slowly slowly '.he screamed .." basket'" he saw his basket there running away from him, he stretched his hand to stop her but she didn't stopped he ran behind her..

Yeh Ishq Ki Hai Raah Mein Jin Pe Chal Raha Hoon
Is Aag Mein Na Jaane Kab Se Main Jal Raha Hoon
Main To Hoon Tera Deewana Tune Mujhko Na Pehchaana
Dilbar Mere Aisa Na Kar Chahat Mein Tu Ruswa Na Kar
Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa
Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Mat Jaa
Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa
Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa

Riddhima stopped in front of OT, where whole gang was standing, she looked inside from a small glass whole and saw armaan lying like a lifeless body covered with blood, dr. kirti and shashank tring to control the bleeding '.she fainted, whole gang ran toward her and made her sit on bench ..anji ran and got water'.they all were crying too ..mushki sprinkled some water on ridz face'she opened her eyes weakly '

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Dr. shubhanker entered the OT '..

Dr. shu.." what the condition dr. kirti '"

Dr. kirti looked him with a worried face'" he isn't responding as I think he is in cardiac arrest him mind isn't supporting his body'"

Dr. shu.." oh god but we will try till last '"

Dr. kirti.." yaah dr. shashank is operating him and trying to clear all the blood patches formed in his head '"

Dr. shu.." we have to try to get him in his senses 'let go.."

*******

Ri.." di woo woo armaan diii use kuch hoga toh nahi na'" she spoke between hiccups

Anji hugged her trying to sooth .." yaah baby kuch nahi hoga armaan ko wo tujhe chor ke ja sakta hai kya nahi na'."

Riddhima nodded like a small kid'

Mushki and niki sat with ridz hugging her as she was panicking in every few minutes'.anji was running between OT and ridz while the boys almost ready to drill siddhant to wall '

Abhimanu took the charge '" maine mana kiya tha tumhe sid, m ashamed of u'agar armaan ko kuch hua toh bhul jana ki iss duniya mai koi tumhara bhai bhi hai.."

Rahul punched him and sid fell on ground '..he pleaded'" guys listen to me once plzz I never'" but rahul didn't let his sentence completed he pulled him by his collars and was about to hit him again when atul stopped him..

At.." controle rahul ye hospital hai koi ring nahi aur armaan ke liye dua mangne ke bajaye hum ishke sath kyu khare hai.."

Abhi just turned his back to siddhant '.

Ra.." but atul coz of him humara armaan ajj iss halat me hai'" atul consoled him

At.." I know but isse hum baad me bhi nipat lenge abhi ridzi ko humari jarurat hai let go'"

Riddhima heard some voices she mechanically moved towards it..girls tried to stop her but she didn't responded to them..

Rahul hugged atul crying, abhimanu to hugged them '..siddhant was standing in a corner with his head down ..he felt some one standing in front of him he looked and found riddhima standing there with no expression'

He tried to speak'" wo mai ridd'." He received a tight slap on his cheek , his cheeked burned the intensity of slap '

Armaan ran behind riddhima '" basket ruko'."'..but she wasn't listening she was just running towards a tunnel 'it was so dark around him..he was scared now so he just followed her'

After few minutes he saw a ray of light.. he walked towards it and came out of that dark gloomy tunnel'

He looked around it was such a beautiful place ..greenery everywhere, sent of flowers mild with air..so many blocks covered with flowers. A fountain in a middle, birds singing their sweet song ..it was such a pleasant place '.he would come with riddhima and rhythm here 'he thought admiring the beauty, it reminded him of riddhima and he started looking for her and he was following her'he reached to a beautiful lake side'.the view from there was breathtaking 'it was covered with shades of big trees '.he saw a girl sitting on the sore in a white gown'.he mumbled smiling '" riddhimaaa'"

He went towards her ..sitting next to her silently he placed his palm on her shoulders which made her turn he gasped '." Shillpaaa'."

****

Riddhima screamed on the top of her lungs '." How dare u sid tumhari himmat kaise hui mere armaan se iss tarah baat kerne ki, use itna dard pahuchane ki'"

Sid under the rock of guilt .." riddhima m sor'"

Again a tight slap '." Naam mat lo mera apni iss gandi juban se'"

( yo aaj mai pura badla le lungi hahaha I always wanted that sid beaten..wink')

More tears tickled down her eyes'." Tum mujhe mujhe pana chate they'chiii'."

She made disgust face ''" uss wakt maine tumhe chuna sirf unn vachno ki izzat rakhne ke liye jo maine uss agni ko sakchi man ke liye the'..but u broke all of them u made me leave '.koi haq nahi hai tumhara mujh pe '.wo rishta khatam ho chukka hai..yaa wo rista kabhi tha hi nahi majboori thi tumhari bhi aur meri bhi'"

Atul, rahul, abhi all were staring ridz'she was looking to firm all of sudden, so strong'

She spoke'" mai armaan se pyar kerti thi, kerti hu aur akhri sans tak sirf ussi se pyar karungi aur uske baad bhi'aura b armaan mera pyar bhi hai aur patti bhi so I want u leave this place right now'"

A tear rolled from sid's eyes too'he left murmuring.." m sorry'"

Riddhima sat on floor and cried some more '.girls took her back to the beach outside the OT'

Bi came with a cranky rhythm who was crying with all his might's as if he guessed something is wrong'

Atul moved to her'" bi app isse kyu le aayi yaha'"

Bi.." kya kerti beta rosy ghar pet hi nahi aur uska phone bhi nahi lag raha tha ..mujhese raha nahi gaya..aur ye itne ro raha hai mujhe toh kuch sajh nahi aa raha 'she cried helplessly seeing rhythm

Anji ran towards bi '." Laiye bi isse mujhe de dijiye he is little familiar to me'"

She tried to hold rhythm but he was almost jumping from her hold crying '." Mumummm"

Anji looked the direction rhythm was stretching his little hand '.he saw riddhima there'so he was trying to jump on floor so the he can crawl to her'"mummmumm'"

Riddhima looked above and saw rhythm ..she stud up and came to anji'..rhythm almost jumped on her'..she carefully wrapped her arms around him..he hugged her tight trying to hid himself in her neck'she sat with him in her arms'rhythm arched his face backward to see why his mamma was crying 'he stared her with frown '.her eyes were red and tears continuously flowing down'rhythm places his mouth on her cheeks as if sucking her tears '" mummmaaa"

His cute gesture made some more tears roll down'"mumaaa ddaddaaa cmmm'" she kissed his forehead '" yaaah baby dady abhi thori der me aa jaynge u sleep '" she touched his tummy 'she knew he was hungry'"muski could u manage some milk he is hungry that is why crying like this"

Muski nodded with a slight smile'.the women who was so worn out a moment ago was turned in a determinant, strong women a mother..'.

*****

Shilpa smiled brightly seeing him and the frowned '." Armaan u r so stupid idiot '."

Armaan was so shocked seeing her that he was just staring her with no response. Shilpa splashed some water on his face '.he murmured with wide eyes'"tu yaha kaise'"

She smiled '" mai yahi rehti hu abb'it's a beautiful place na '" he nodded still dazed

Shilpa.." but m angry with u armaan tum idiot ho, meri sari mehnat berbad ker di tumhe.." she pouted cutely 'he made a confused face.." huuhhh.."

Sh.." han stupid pata hai maine god se kitni ladayi ki thi'"

Ar.." kyuu.."

Sh'" dumbooo taki iss duniya ki greatest love story me juddai ka season khatam ho aur I can be a part of it again'"

Without understanding her words'he softly said.." sorryyy'.shilpaa'"

She made him look at her'." I told u na u r stupid, armaan agar tumhare aur di ke baad kisi ne tum dono ke milne ki sabse jyada dua mangi hogi toh wo mai thi'.how could u think u didn't done justice with me'.armaan u gave me everything I could wish for I agree I wanted u to love me but I never wished u to love me like u did to riddhima di'co agar tum aisa kerte na toh sachhe pyar se bharosa uth jata mera '..u made me believe love stories sirf kahaniyo me nahi hoti 'sach pyar ajj bhi kaynat ko jhukka sakta hai'."

He smiled hearing her'." Thank u.."

Sh.." but I hate u, how dare u spoil my plains yaar'."

Ar.." kyaaa'"

In OT'..

Shashank screamed '" shock ki tayari karo he is sinking'."

The monitor was showing his broken heart beat and with loud beep it stoped'.

Shashank, kirti, shubhanker were staring him like a statue '.

Kirti give him shock shubh right now''

******

Sh.." yes why u came here go back to di, to rhythm armaan ajj jab khudda bhi tumhari mohabat kea age jhuk gaya hai toh tum uss pe shak ker ke use chota kyu ker rahe ho'go back and I will join u soon mujhe bhi meri di ka pyar chahiye family chahiye '." She winked and giggled loud b4 vanishing from there

Armaan just stared with shock'

*******

Breathing hard'." Its our last try dr. shashank'."

They gave him shock'.his body flew in air and then came on bed with a thud'."aaa"

There were tears of joy in there eyes'.the monitor again started his heart beats '.

They all three hugged each other'.

The red bulb of OT got off'.riddhima stud up breathing hard she placed sleeping rhythm in niki's lap and ran inside'.she stared all three of them holding her breath after a moment she saw a smile on their faces 'she smiled more brightly '..they gave her way towards armaan'.she just hugged him crying her heart out let all the bad thoughts wash out with the tears '.

Armaan opened her eyes slowly slowly'." Basskkeettt 'm soo"

She placed her palm to stop him'." No armaan mujhe mera armaan wapas mil gaya bus promise me u wont leave me ever'"

She smiled with pain'" yaah how could I leave abhi lass vogues bi jana hai na hume'mere special someone ki request hai"

Ri'" yaah yaah I know'."

They both smiled hugging each other'

*****

Five years latter

Sanjeevni garden was decorated beautifully 'sanjeevni gona held there

In malik mention riddhima was getting ready '.a strong pair of arms crawled over her waist ..she smiled

ri.." armaan romance baad me ker lena pahle get ready '"

he didn't paid attention to her as he was bust nuzzling his nose on her neck, she shivered with his touch, which made him smile. She still flinch with his mere touch ..he kissed her softly devouring the moment ..

some noise got the out of their love land'

ri.." armaan choro mujhe rhythm ne rosy ko nani yaad dila rakhi hai cant u hear her pleads poor soul'"

armaan laughed .." hahahaha kya kare son ki like dady '"

she pushed him and towards rhythm '.there he was running and rosy behind him'

her mouth left open'" god baby why r u running naked '." He stopped on his track and rosy too to get her breath back

ro.." thank god u came ..ur devil tell me how do I dress him is he runs this'"

she smiled and turned to rhythm how gave her his dimples'.she sat on her knees'on took hold of him..

rh'" maama dress rhythm '"

ri.." yup mamma will but tell me app rosy ko tang kyu ker re the dekho bechari kitna thak gayi'"

rhythm made a cute face and looked down'" rosy snatched my towel maama how could rhythm go sham shame in front of a girl'."

She giggled loud'" ooo to mere prince ko sharam aa ri thi'"

He nodded cutely 'she kissed her cheeks mean while dressing him '.

Ri'" maama se sharm nahi aati maamma bhi toh girl hai na'" she smiled mischievously

Rh'" mamma girl thori hai mamma toh maamma hai bus'"

Ri.." oohhh " she laughed on her son's cute antics '

They reached the venue'..

Armaan got best doctor award 'armaan kissed her cheeks and she flushed red in front of all

Now it was time for a new award that was super doctor and it was gona be by public vote'

Some took armaan's name, some dr. kirti's and dr. shashank and others so all in all there a big fight started that who should win this award'.

Shashank hold his head seeing all crazy ppl around '.armaan and gage were laughing

Riddhima stud and took hold of mike reaching the stage '" okk ppl calm down I knew ye award kise milna chahiye'.."

All went silent and looked towards the stage '

Ri.." ye award dr. armaan, dr. shashank, dr. kirti or dr. shabhanker and all others me se'."

She took a pause and looked the crowd which was staring her holding their breaths 'she smiled

Ri.." inme se kisi ko bhi nahi'."

All'" toh fir'"

Ri.." I think ye award dr. riddhima yani ki mujhe milna chahiye'.(armaan smiled brightly ) coz m the real super doctor'.i handle all my patients here and three armaan's at home don't u all think its daredevil task '"

All giggled and she continued with a mischievous smile '" yup I have three armaan's to handle one large size one medium and one small size and believe me any of them can freak u out alone and I handle them alone '."

She turned to armaan's direction'" see here the bigger on is sitting laughing m sure planning some prank in his mind 'with my smallest one my baby girl bulbul armaan malik my shona who is right on jumping in her dadda's lap ...she is just 9 ,months but isske size pe mat jana she can make even halk cry'"

And then her eyes wondered rhythm who was sitting with his dad a moment ago licking his ice cream'.

She covered her her mouth with palm and then bit her tongue '." And my son rhythm armaan malik who just placed his half eaten ice cream in dr. shubhanker's coat '."

She laughed lil embarrassed all turned to shubhanker's side and shubhanker to his pocket he made a ewuuu face seeing hi pocket and rhythm who was little shocked with a attention he was getting looked around with the cutest face which was half covered with chocolate '

All laughed loud '..along with armaan riddhima and rhythm just stared all with cute pout'

****

THE end😭😃

Few I hope I didn't disappointed any one if I did m sorry'pout

Plzzz it the last part so do comment long, and I hope I didn't spoiled the story in the end

Lots of love ishka

And special thanku to my readers who make this story complete thanku all

Mommy, behna, niki, pumkin, rashi'love u so much

Edited by LilApple - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hilarious endd bunny ...
pehle senti pat phir itna funny end...
great combr and transiction...


rythm is so cute he put half ice cream in shubhankar pocket as he wasn't able to eat it...
and the way he is jumping in ridhima's arms and asking for armaan ..

superb...
loved it...truly
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Posted: 12 years ago
It wad n awrsum end..d bst...ejole ff eas awedum..luvd ...u r a gr8 eritr..plz continue writng..n fk pm me ur otht wrk wich u'll writr in fiture..wil luv 2 read dat...thnks 4 pm..sad its ended bt..it was a beajyifl ff..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mishs

hilarious endd bunny ...

pehle senti pat phir itna funny end...
great combr and transiction...


rythm is so cute he put half ice cream in shubhankar pocket as he wasn't able to eat it...
and the way he is jumping in ridhima's arms and asking for armaan ..

superb...
loved it...truly


pumkin like b karte h pout
hehehe yaah I dsnt wanted ppl finish reading with sad face
it should give a smile which should last long
thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

It wad n awrsum end..d bst...ejole ff eas awedum..luvd ...u r a gr8 eritr..plz continue writng..n fk pm me ur otht wrk wich u'll writr in fiture..wil luv 2 read dat...thnks 4 pm..sad its ended bt..it was a beajyifl ff..


u r a wonderful read tabhi to u recognized how. good I m werna yaha toh kisi ko meri kadar hi nahi
yup now I will update my other ffs and will start a new one on asya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing crazy part with cute lovey dovey chemistry between rythm and armaan ridhima . I m gonna miss your story a lot and thanx for the pm plz if u start any new story do pm me for that i hope u start something new :)

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