NewFF(Maneet) Mere humsafar Thrd 2 Upd pt26 pg 141 - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: soni4eva

superb update luvd it 👏

luv maan geets fights soo cute

luvd da precap i fink maan is gna b da dat gets jelous
plzz cont soon x

Hmm… yes ur guess is right Thanks dear
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gurtilover

Wow again maneet noke jhoke i like it😆
hehehehehehe

lovely update di woh kya hai na ki geet ke saat rehte rehte maan bhi use ke tarah smart ho gaya hai tabhi toh karwi chai di usne geet ko am i ryt di ab me bhi smart jo ho gaye hoon undono ke laraye dekhkar😉

bt inda precep whom goona to be jelous di???

I thought maan wen geet've complete all da work hehehehehehe

well awesome update di
love ittt
mauhhh

Adaa ur guess is half right n half wrong Thanks dear
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

awesome update!!!!

wow luved their nok jhok's...
hmm really wnt to c maan jealous..
continue soon

Aisa hi hoga dear

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maanhar

Update toh superb tha hi but I am more interested in the precapWinktoh agla update kab hai????

So sweet of u… mayb tomorrow I would b updating

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

who is J ,... let me guess .. its maan ...

Well I think ur guess is right Thanks dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 20

Geet: Dhust Danav kahike poore muh ka swaad kharab kar diya

Geet: Chaddo'inse aur umeed bhi kya ki ja sakthi hai' chal geet bahut kaam hai'kaam pe dyan de( What else can I expect from him...forget it Geet we need to do a lot of work concentrate on your work Geet)

Geet resumes her work

Khurana Mansion

Maan: Poore raat bhar akele jab kaam karna padegana tab uss chutter putter box ki akal thikane aayegi' (When she will have to work the whole night and that to all alone then she will realize her mistake)

Maan: Hmm' dekhte hai jaise zubaan chalane mein wo aval hai waise hi kya kaam ki zimeedaari utha sakthi hai ya nahi wo kal subah tak toh pata chal hi jaayega (Let me see is she really capable of doing her work or not)

Maan: Waise mujhe kya lena dena ye uska sardard hai ke wo ye files time par kaise khatam karti hai 'khair kal doodh ka doodh aur paani ka paani ho hi jaayega (it's totally her headache how she manages to complete the work...tomorrow morning everything will b crystal clear)

Maan removes a file and starts working on it

Khurana Constructions

Geet is working extremely hard with full sincerity and dedication

Geet: Hmm'bus geet thodi der aur'ab jab itna saara kaam khatm ho gaya hai toh ye toh khafi maamuli cheez hai' himmat se kaam le saara kaam yun chutki bajaate ho jaayega ( just a few files more to go geet...this should not be that difficult we can do it)

Geet was trying to encourage herself

Meanwhile

Khurana mansion

Maan (looks at his watch) khafi der ho gayi hai' geet abhi tak nahi aayi kahi maine usse kuch zyaada kaam toh nahi de diya

Maan: Aur agar uska kaam ho bhi jaata hai toh itne raat gaye wo akeli kaise aayegi' raat mein akele travel karna safe nahi hai (Even if she finishes her work how would she come back it's not safe to travel alone at this time)

Maan: Ek kaam karta hoon driver ko bhej deta hoon jaise hi uska kaam khatm hoga driver usse sahi salamat ghar le aayega. Haan yahi thik hai (I will tell the driver to pick her up once her work is complete)

Maan: Brij zara yaha aana (Brij come here)

Brij: Ji Sir

Maan: Abhi issi waqt Office jao waha pe Geet Madam kaam kar rahi hai jaise hi unka kaam khatm ho jaaye unhe sahi salamat ghar le aana (Leave for office right now and as soon as Geet finishes her work get her back safely)

Brij: Ji Sir

Maan: Aur haan unhe ye baat mat batana ke maine gadi bhijwayi hai (n don't tell her that I have told u to pick her up)

Brij: Ji Sir

Brij leaves immediately

Maan: Waise Geet ne kuch khaya bhi nahi hoga'(Geet must not have eaten anything)

Maan goes to the kitchen

Maan: Nakul khana garam karke Outhouse mein thodi der baad rakh aana (nakul after a while go and keep the food in the outhouse)

Nakul: Ok Sir

Maan: Chalo ab main bhi zara aaram kar letha hoon

He tries to sleep but is unable to do so

Khurana Constructions

Geet: Thank you baabji aapki meher se saara kaam waqt rehte khatm ho gaya' (Thank you Babaji finally I have completed the work)

Geet is extremely tired

Geet: Pehle ye saare documents aur files sahi tareke se arrange karke rakh dethi hoon taaki kal koi problem na ho ( Ok first let me keep all these documents safely)

She arranges everything

She looks at her watch

Geet: hey babaji itni raat ho gayi ab main ghar kaise jau'itne raat gaye koi taxi ya rickshaw bhi milna mushkil hai' ( o God how am I supposed to reach home now...at this time there won't b any rickshaw or taxi available)

Geet: Ab jobhi ho main puri raat yaha bait bhi nahi sakthi kal itna important presentation hai usmein actively participate karne k liye mujhe bhi toh thodi aaram ki zaroorat hai (Whatever the case I can't stay here the whole night... I need some rest if I have to actively participate in tomorrow's presentation)

Geet: Chal geet neeche jaakar dekthe hai'koi na koi sawari mil hi jaayegi

Geet comes out

Brij: Geet madam aap aa gayi chaliye main aapko ghar le jaane k liye aaya hoon (Geet madam I m here to take u back home)

Geet(thinking) lagta hai Dadima ne gadi bhijwayi hai'O Dadima aap kitni sweet ho (Dadima must have done this she is so sweet)

Geet: Chaliye

Geet sits in the car

Khurana Mansion

Maan: Ye logh abhi tak aaye kyun nahi?

Just then he notices a car entering KM

Geet gets down

Geet: Thanks bhaiya

Maan is happy that Geet is safe and she is back

Geet enters the outhouse

Geet switches on the light

Geet: Chalo aakirkaar ghar pauch hi gaye'par lagtha hai aaj bhooke hi sona padega'chalo koi gal nahi' (So finally I m here but it seems that today I won't b getting anything to eat)

Geet was about to sleep when she notices the food that Nakul had kept in her room

Geet: (very happy) Dadima tussi great ho' aapne pehle se hi mera khana ready rakha ' (Dadima is a sweetheart she has already kept the food)

Geet: Chalo pehle peth puja ho jaaye

Geet starts eating

Maan is observing her through his window

The excitement with which Geet was eating and relishing the food brought a smile on his face

Maan: kitni maasum si muskurahat hai iski' (She has an innocent smile)

In between Geet was busy talking to herself

Maan: Koi mila nahi isliye khud se hi baate kiye jaa rahi hai'

Geet finished her food

Maan: Chalo khana toh kha liya ab thik hai waise bhi Tej ne kaha tha k isse apne khane peene ke mamle mein koi laparwahi nahi karni chahiye'

Geet then goes to sleep

Maan: lagta hai ab khud se baate karke bhi bor ho chuki hai isliye sone jaa rahi hai'chalo achha hai'main bhi thoda aaram kar letha hoon

But before closing the window he observes her for the last time

Maan: Good night Geet

Next Day
Geet: Chal Geet aaj tera pehla presentation hai...aur tujhe puri koshish karni hai k ye deal humhe hi mile... ye project Maan Sir k liye kafi important hai ( ok Geet this is ur first presentation and u have to try ur level best to make it a success...this project is really very important for Maan Sir)
Geet: Haan magar office jaane se pehle mujhe Dadima ko thanks kehna chahiye unhone kal mera kitna khayal rakha (But before going to office I need to thank Dadima)
Geet enters KM
Maan was having his breakfast
Geet: Good morning Dadima. Good Morning Maan Sir
Maan: Jis sin ki shuruwat tumhari shakal dekhne se hui ho wo subah good kaise ho sakthi hai Geet (How do u expect my day to b good when I have just seen ur face)
Dadima: Maan bete ye aap kaisi baate kar rahe hai (Maan is this the way to talk)
Maan: Dadima main apni secretary se baat kar raha hoon...Geet tum ek baat jaan lo mujhe mere employees ka kisi bhi tarah se personal hona pasand nahi hai... kya sochkar tum itne subah subah mere ghar yu muh utha kar chali aayi (Dadima I m talking to my secretary..Geet I don't like any of my employees getting personal)
Geet: Main aapse milne nahi aayi thi sir...mujhe dadima se kuch kaam tha (I had some work with Dadima hence I m here)
Maan: Wajah chahe kuch bhi ho geet ek baat yaad rakho mere rehte mere ghar mein meri izzajat k bagair tum nahi aayogi... (Whatever the reason geet remember one thing u r not going to enter my house henceforth without my permission)
Dadima: Maan bete Geet aapki secretary office mein hongi yaha pe wo humari beti hai aur unka pura haqh banta hai k wo apni dadima se jab ji chahe milne aa sakti hai...usse koi nahi rokh saktha aap bhi nahi (Maan Geet is your secretary in the office here she is my daughter and she can come to meet me whenever she feels like U can't stop her)
Geet: nahi Dadima rehne dijiye...Maan sir main agle baar iss baat ka dhyan rahungi ( It's okay dadima ...maan Sir I will keep this in mind the next time)
Maan: Good...waise geet I hope tumne presentation ki taiyaari kar li hai
Geet: Ji Sir
Maan: Thik hai chalo office k liye nikalthe hai
Geet: No thanks Sir main office khud aa jaungi aapko takleef karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai
Maan: Mujhe bhi tumhara driver banne ka koi shaukh nahi hai...samjhi tum...maine tumhe pehle bhi kaha hai k iss deal mein main koi bhi gadbad nahi chahtha...tumhare paas tho sau bahane honge office late pauchane ke magar main koi risk lena nahi chahta (Even I m not interested to be ur driver I don't want any mistakes in this presentation n u always come late in the office I simply don't want to take any risk)
Maan: Presentation waqt par start hona chahiye...iss liye main tumhe apne saath aane ko keh raha hoon...warna tumhe toh main ek pal bhi bardassh nahi kar saktha (I want the presentation to start on time this isthe only reason I want u to come with me...otherwise I can't tolerate u even for a second)
Geet: Same here Sir mujhe bhi aapke saath waqt bitane ka koi shaukh nahi hai...magar main nahi chahti k meri wajah se iss project mein koi problem aaye issliye main aapke saath chalne k liye taiyaar hoon ( Same here sir even I am least interested to spend my time with u...but since the presentation is important I will surely come with u)
Maan: Good jaldi se bahar aau hum abhi nikal rahe hai
Maan leaves
Dadima: Geet bete aap kuch kehne aayi thi
Geet: Haan dadima main aapko thanks kehna chahti thi woh kal aapne mere liye gadi bhijwayi aur mere kamre mein khana bhi rakhwaya na issliye (Yes Dadima i wanted to thank you for the car and the food)
Dadima: Ye aap kaisi baat kar rahe hai bete humhe toh ye bhi nahi pata tha k kal aap der raat tak kaam kar rahi thi...toh gadi bhijwaana aur khana rakhna toh dur ki baat hai...humne ye sab nahi kiya (Geet u need not thank me...I was totally unaware that u were working in the office for such a long time...I have not done anything)
Geet: Aapne nahi kiya toh phir ye sab kisne kiya hoga... (If it wasn't u then...)
Dadima: Bete iske baare mein hum shaamko baat karte hai filhaal aap office jaayiye warna aaj aapko dubara daat sunni hogi
Geet: Ji Dadima
Geet comes out
Nakul was passing by
Geet: Nakul kal tumne mere kamre mein khana rakha tha na kiske kehne par tumne ye kiya?
Nakul: Maan Sir k kehne par
Geet: kya? Maan sir?
Nakul: haan Maan Sir
Geet: Thik hai Nakul tum jaao
Geet: (thinking) Unhone mera itna khayal rakha par aaj subah dubara dust danav ban gaye...Hmm lagta hai inhe koi split personality disorder hai...andar se kuch aur hai aur bahar se kuch aur... (He was so concerned about me...but in the morning once again he started shouting at me...I think he has some split personality disorder)
Maan: Aa gayi tum...yaha waha ki baate karke fursat mil gayi
Geet: Sir mujhe jobhi kehna hota hai wo main bejijak keh deti hoon..warna aise bhi kayi logh iss duniya mein hai jo k kisi ka khayal toh rakthe hai par accept karne ki himmat nahi karte
Maan: Mujhe tumhare lecture mein koi interest nahi hai...tum gadi mein baitho hum office jaa rahe hai
Geet sits in the car
Both of them were silent throughout the journey
Geet: (thinking) Kya karu unhe thanks keh du ya nahi... nahi geet rehne de pata nahi unhe kis baat par gussa aa jaaye...waise bhi wo ye nahi chahate the ke tujhe iss baat ka pata chale k unhone teri madat ki thi...
They reach the office
Maan: Geet...tum ye seediyon se kaha jaa rahi ho
Geet: Sir wo kya hai na kuch din pehle ye lift kaam nahi kar raha tha kya pata abhi bhi chalte chalte bannd pad jaaye...mujhe koi risk nahi lena
Maan: Taane maar rahi ho... apne boss k saamne zabaan chalate hue tumhe dar nahi lagta
Geet: Eh lo...maine kaun sa galat kaam kiya hai jo mujhe darr lage
Maan: Geet apni bakbak bannd karo aur chupchap lift mein chalo
Geet: Thik hai Sir
They get into the lift
Again none of them felt the need to speak
But then suddenly the lift got stuck in the middle
Lift mein poori tarah se andhera cha jaata hai
Geet is scared
Maan holds her hand
Maan: Ghabrao mat Geet... main hoon na...tumhare zindagi k har andhere ko dur karne k liye
Mahi...Mahi...
Geet is shocked to hear this but wants to believe his words
Geet bhi Maan k haatho ko kaske pakad lethi hai
Both of them stand silently...but very close to each other
Somewhere or the other none of them wanted the lights to return
But then lights wapas aa gayi n the lift started working
Both of them moved back
Maan: Ye sab tumhari wajah se hua hai
Geet: maine kya kiya
Maan: Tumhi ne toh kaha tha na k lift beech mein rukh sakthi hai issliye humhe seediyon se chalna chahiye
Geet: Wo toh maine aise hi keh diya tha...ab sachmuch mein aisa ho gaya toh ismein meri kya galti hai
Maan: nahi agar tum aisa nahi kehthi toh aisa nahi hota
Geet: Achha toh kya mere zabaan mein koi divyavaani hai kya k main jobhi kahu woh sach ho jaaye
Maan: Tum toh humesha hi ladne k liye taiyaar baithi rehthi ho
Geet: Ladai maine shuru ki ya aapne...boliye
Geet Maan ki taraf gusse se badthi hai.
Her leg slips and Maan geet ko apni baho mein pakad letha hai
Maneet eyelock...
Mahi... Mahi...
they remain in this position till the door of the lift opens
Adi: huh huh huh huh...
Maan and Geet finally break their eyelock
Maan: Adi main tumhe yaha hasne k paise nahi detha samjhe tum...
Geet is silent
Maan: Geet jaldi se wo saare documents lekar mere cabin mein aao
Geet: ji Sir
Precap: Arjun: "I hope u don't mind me calling u Geet"
Jealous Maan😆😆😆
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Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow..superb update.
love it.
cute geet.
cant wait for the nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
update soon
want to see maan J
pls dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update...
maan jealous...precap sounds very interesting...
please continue soon...

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