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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you so mush guys for ur likes and comments. love you all lots
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Chapter – 9

Maan was about to begin the story when he sees geets face which is full of tears.

So maan says to vikrant- Vicky i'll tell u the events of that day later on. Firstly I want to eat something.

Looking towards geet,

He says- geet wont u give me foo. Have some mercy on me yaar , I didn't have eaten anything from last some days. I hungry and u guys worried about story.

Geet – oh I m so sorry maan i'll just bring u something to eat.

Geet gets up to go, when annie says-geet u b here , i'll go n bring ,maan some soup n food.

Geet-ok as u say.

She again gets seated nearby maan, taking his hand in hers.

She says- maan please never leave me again like this. Your mishty don't know how to live without her maan. You know I died thousands death listening about your accident. Police told that you died, but my heart is not ready to accept the news. Please don't do this to me again. Your mishty will die maan, your misty will die.

Maan- placing his hand over her mouth, don't just don't you dare to utter his again,Understood. I'll never leave you. Your maan will never leave you.

Saying so maan hugs her tightly.

Annie comes back with a soup and food for maan. Taking the tray from annie geet start feeding maan soup and food.

After some time maan-plz mishty not any more . I cant eat more.

Geet- plzz maan just some bites more. Look how pale u have grown.

Vicky says- geet let it be dear. You can't make him strong again in a day. He is full.

Pinky- geet Vicky is right.

Geet making a pouting face places the plate on table and says- okay

Maan laughs at her antics.

Annie says- I think we should leave now. We will come tomorrow. Now you guys must rest.

Annie , Vicky and pinky left saying maaneet to take care of themselves………..

After they left, maan holds geets hand and pulls her over him.

Now geet is resting is lying in bed with maan with her head on his chest. She looks up to his face and smiles n says- I love you maan .

Maan smiles and relpies- I love u 2 mishty.

Then maan cups geet's face in his hand and brings it closer to his, and takes her lips in kissing her madly an passionately.they broke off smiling and hugs again .

Maan -I missed you baby. Those days in that room was a nightmare for me.

Geet places her hand on his mouth – no maan forget everything. You are here with me that what matters me the most.

With that they both went in their love land making love to each other. Pouring their sorrows and pain of separation. After an intense love making they both dozes off in each others arm.


Precap- maan telling the story of that day. Dev knowing maan escaped. What will dev do?


hey guys how are you all. hope you guys like this par. sorry for skipping the love making scene . i m bad at it ,so decided to better skip it.

heyTJ i followed your suggestion in this part. i hope its upto your expactations.


do tell me how you guys liked it.

plz click the like tab.


007jindal thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks rakhi di
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome dear...and I liked the fact that you postponed the truth to next part...sometime expressing your love and taking care of your health takes precedence over everything...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part
thnx 4 d pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yeah it was fab
do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome
thanx for pm
sorry for late comment
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it very much
Superb update dear cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Tinu dear,
Tht was just awesome...
U went above by expectations...
I told u it wud lengthen ur size of the update...
Thnkx tht u considered my suggestion...
N even Thnkx to mention abt me...
But it's u who have written it...
N u were just gr8...I loved it...
N I guess I said this at the right tym
Wen Maan's gonna tell his part of story...
Continue soon dear...waiting for the next part...
Love u loads...Thnkx a lot n keep writing...
N keep up the good work...

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