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Originally posted by: preethia

loved the ff...

i am sorry i read till 15t part then cudnt cont reading...

today somehow got time and read all the updates @ one go...

i just loved it...

the way u portrayed her confusion abt wat she wants then her love...her expectation...not making up the mind abt wat she wants...

@ some point even i felt that probably maan and dev r twins...

then when he called from that yamuna bank whom did she speak to...i am sure maan wud hv arranged it...

the way maan played it was awesome...

finally she realized that she loves him more than her expectation...

when she says pregnant to know the truth from him awesome...

i wud say u thought abt everything so well...

i loved this ff...

just pm me the pdf copy...

thnks for writing such a wonderful ff...

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Missed many parts but i read them now...it was such an amazing and original story! Must say very clever idea,hats off to you!! Very beautiful epilogue and ff!! Thanks 4 giving us this story!

Originally posted by: paponecon

loved the epilogue like whole ff...loved maan so much.his life style and how he changed geet with his love...a confused girl changed into a responsible mother and of course a passionate lover...all reward goes to maan...loved their dance and jungle love...but one thing...if the name would another one instead of dev i would love it more...