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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh god very very very scary end
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Hey when are you updating?
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Originally posted by: Kriyanshlover

Hey when are you updating?




Weekend busy with my family...I'll update tomorrow...
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Originally posted by: alamuabi




Weekend busy with my family...I'll update tomorrow...




Ok, will be wating
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update plz valli😳...
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Part 12

Aaj mei..kal geet didi..didi ko bachao..it was written in blood by chunni..

Maan was shocked to see those words'According to this geet is in danger..Munshiji told that all of them love her..But who hates her..Who could harm her..Only police can find this..He called police station..and said what he had seen ..They told they will be there in few minutes...

He now drive into the village..It seemed empty. In the middle of the village he saw the people with worried face including munshiji,geets mummy,papa..some more were joining them... He thought it is panchayat..He parked his jeep n noticed wats going on..He didn't get down..nor the securities..


He saw a man and a women heading towards the crowd crying loudly'


chunni..hume chodke tum kese jaa sakthiho..


The crowd gave them space to let in' Then only maan noticed Chunni covered by white cloth..that means she is dead'


He got out of the jeep and walked towards the crowd'Now ,he could see chunnis face.She may be around 15 or 16 yrs...her face had some bruises that showed..she was hitten..and her swollen lips ..,he could understand what would have happened'


But,I was watching them..How,I failed to notice there was someone else'Shayad if I have noticed,I would have save this child..He felt guilty..


Chunnis mother and father was crying.The villagers tried to pacify them..even knowing its not easy to do so..they asked them..

humari phoolsi bachi ko kisne katil kiya...kaun hei wo ..mei Ill kill him..'No one answered..

Maan said..Only Geet knows the answer..

They saw him how do you know?

I saw them both playing there'

aap wahan thi

No.I was viewing the sight of the village from top of the mountain'I saw them from there'

The villagers said..geet bohut derse chillarahithi'jab humne poocha..She said..Chunni tried to kill herself..'

Kya'ye kese hosakthahai'this girl was playing with her'how could she attempt suicide without any reason...Dont you all see the bruises on her face'She was slapped by some one..it must b a murder...

Chunnis mother whipping her tears asked ,Geet kahan hain

They pointed Dr. lakshmi's house..Uska tho bura haal hai' Ro roke bihosh hogayi..She ran towards the house..geets mummy went with her..

Maan babu pehle betiye..They made him sit on a chair..

Maan babu..we all agree with you.. But,we all know that geet never tells lies'

Phir aap unse ye poochiye..kaun use thapad mara'

We asked her 'she is not telling anything.. .aur uparse wo bohut darihuithi..we cant force her...

Now he is totally mad.He was fuming in anger'

Muje jutese nafrath hain and who support it too'They are equally responsible for this'yahaan geet b itnahi zimmadar hain ..chunniki moth ka gunegar ka naam na bathakar...Aap jis ladki ko apne sar pe rakkar Pyaar karthe ho'wo aap logon se sach chuparahi hai..sach chupana b joot ki barabar hai.. aur aap uski support karrahiho..Kya hogaya aaplogonko..You are supporting a girl,who never wants to say the name of the culprit ,who has to be punished..Ye kesa nyay hai..

The villagers had no words to offend him..he is saying the fact..none other than geet could say wat happened..But they have to wait till she speaks'all tried their best to make speak but she never said what happened'even to her mummy papa..

Chunnis mother came running'She grabbed Maan's collar'Maans securities came running to protect him'He stopped them by showing his hands and get back to their cars..


How dare you speak about geet'what do you know about geet.bachi hai wo...sach k alava kuch nehi bolthi wo...


Are you mad..mein aapki betiki moth ka zimmader ko saza dilwana chaatha hoon..aur aap ab b us geet ki side lerahi ho..jo us insaan ka naam nehi batharahi hai'

Haan..She screamed in pain.


GEET,Humari izaat bachaane keliye chup rahi'Iska mathlab ye nehi Geet joot bolrahi hai..Geet apni kasamki pakki hai..Chunni made her promise that she will never tell any one what happened..But u forced me to tell this..

She explained what happened'


While geet and chunni were playing Ramnath was drinking inside the hut..when he saw geet and chunni playing outside their farm,, he cannot stop himself from nearing geet''He shut her mouth from back and took into the hut.. she tried her most to escape from him..but he was too strong .she struggled to release but he slapped her till she fell unconscious' He failed to see it is not geet, but chunni.he kissed her madly n forcefully intimated with her'.When he got a little conscious out of the drunken state and saw its chunni..she was also getting her conscious'.he said koi bath nehi aaj nehi tho kal geet meri hogi. He left her there and walked out...chunni cried looking herself in that position'she came out of the hut wearing her dress...she could not walk...(How can I face the world now..ek ladki k liye izadki zaada kuch nehi hei'ab mei wo ho chuki hoon'kya kahoon ma bapu ko) She took a sharp wooden piece of the tree and tried to kill herself'Then only geet saw her.. She said geet, she was raped by Ramnath..who mistook her for geet' she made her promise .,she will say the reason to me only..she don't want us to let our pride before all..

Even now I am proud of chunni'meri ek betine doosri betiki maan aur jaan bachayi...Do you know what is the last word she said to geet..Muje ab b ek khushi hai didi..aaj meri wajase aap bajgaya'.chunni was like a sister to geet'very close to her..Aur aap such jaane bna geetko chunni ka mothka zimmadar tehradiya..Chunnis mother bursted into a loud cry...



Allof them are crying'no words were left to speak their emotions..There was a mere silence between them ,that are unspoken...but all can feel,how the little one would have suffered...


The villagers got angry..we will get ramnath and produce before the panchayat'we will punish him cruel than death for what he did'They all went insearch of Ramnath..

But poor maan feeling guilty...to make them force to

expose the bitter truth..



PRECAP:police investigation...Page:12


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Edited by alamuabi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
haan tho valli i was riyte
it was the moron indeed dear!!!
hmm so geet s next
god save her !!!and
and precap is pretty gud dear!!!
poor maan feeling sorry for maan!!!
im really looking forward for it dear!!!!
nice update thanks for updating dear!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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:O who's the killer
what's going on?
i LOVED it
thanks for the pm
sorry for the late reply couldn't access the internet for a week
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was sooo sad!
pfft Maan deserves to feel guilty
thanks for the pm
cont soon

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Thanks for all my friends,who are encouraging me...and thanks for all of them who liked
my updates...

Part 13

Maan was numb..he expected that chunni must have been misbehaved or raped by some one...but he never expected geet was not telling the truth to keep her promise'What words I didn't tell her..He was angry with himself'He felt guilty for forcing them to tell the bitter truthwhich chunni tried to hidefrom the people..

I am sorry.. I wanted only the truth to b revealed ..and the culprit to be punished..But I never wanted you all to get hurt'.

The police came..Panchayat ko mera namaskar' (According to panchayat police should not interfere in their village problems'they will solve their problems themselves.)

The sarpanch said.,namaste'Aaplog achanak yahaan.. Its good that you are here'we thought of calling you'

we got a call from here that some girl is in trouble'We need the permission from you to investigate..

We also needed help regarding that only.. But,Who called you?

I Only called them..

Aap.

Maan..Maan singh Khurana..

They shook hands..

Do you know the girl,who you said about?

Maan pointed his finger towards chunni's body

The police men saw the body their..

What happened?

Somebody has'. He didn't complete..They understood..

Wo 'We feel very sorry..shayad we are tooo late..

Do you suspect any one'He asked the villagers..

It is Ramnath'son of Dayalnathji..

Who is geet?

Geet is the main witness of this incident.She was with her .At present she will be in shock.(why I doesn't want police to investigate her now.How I know she will not be out of shock'hmm..)

Oh.thankyou. Mr. Maan. We will talk to her later.Because of ur phone we reached the spot soon' we have enough proof .We have collected the finger prints,blood samples and many proofs .so,he will be soon behind the bars...We have took the photos of the wordings...as per it geetko saavdaan rehna chahiye..untill we arrest of him..

What wordings'The villagers asked.

U all didn't see it.That girl has written..aaj mei Kal geet didi..didiko bachao...That girl wanted to save Geet even when her death was nearing her.. All of their eyes are filled with tears

Geet ko hum ifazath karengi'No one can near her..without our permission.Aaj se hum mei se koi humesha uska saath rahega...the sarpanch said'

Any other formalities inspector..

Chunni's ma aur papako Ek complaint lik kar dena hoga

Maan wrote the complaint and chunnis parents signed it..(thumb impression..unpud hain..)

kya hum dead body ko postmortem keliye lejasakthe hain..

Nehi..we will not let you take her ..

The police man know handling uneducated villagers is hard,presently at this situation.He asked maan to help him..as without the pm report they could not prove ,Ramnath as a rapist...He rubbed his temple..and asked '

Is there any Dr. here'pls call..

They called for Dr.lakshmi..

Maan took her aside and talked to her'she agreed to him..

Dr.lakshmi talked to her parents'and made them agree..According to them,she will take some tests..But actually she will do the post mortem.. With the help of some people Dr.lakshmi took chunnis body to the hospital saying she will send the report soon..


The villagers came with Dayalnath..

Where is Ramnath.?why have you brought his father instead of him..

We searched all over HP.But we cannot find him.he has hidden somewhere.We thought only his father can say,where he is..So we brought him before the panchayat.

Dayalnathji.,where is your son.?ur son has committed a sin as noone has did this before in this village..

I don't know..suba se meine use deka thak nehi..and I will never agree he has done anything wrong.Its all u r making stories'

No.We have proofs against him. If you try to help ur son.. You can also be punished do U know..

You can do whatever u want I don't mind..If I saw him also I'll not say about his whereabouts.But I will do anything to save my son..

The police men went near the sarpanch and whispered in his ears..Let Dayalnath go now'I will make watch him closely by my men..Im sure he will try to contact his son'then we'll arrest him.

.He nodded his head in acceptance.

we will take leave then.we will arrest him soon..He cant go far away from us..and take care of Geet,she is the main witness.If needed I will give her police protection.

One minute sir.make sure the girls name or her familys name..never come out'If you want to talk to higher officials also I'll talk to them..

Don't worry sir.. I understand...I'll take care of it.

The police left..

Dayalnath was still standing there in thought ,what should he do now to save his son..

The villagers thanked Maan for his support for calling police and handling the situation..and for helping to keep the name of chunni's family..

No need to thank me..bcoz of me they spilled the truth.So,its my duty to keep the pride of their family atleast outside this HP.He said in a guilty tone.

Dayalnaths anger turned to Maan.Bcoz of this man police came here and all came to know the truth..If it is upto Panchayat I would have done something.but now police is involved.It is out of my hand.I will go to any extent to save my son.

The people have started to disperse.Dayalnath came to Maan.You must not have done this making me u my enemy.you will realize it very soon.i will kill you and that Geet, if any thing happens to my son.

Maan had a cunning smirky smile on his face.


So,I have one more who has added me to their list..Do you know what will happen messing with Maan Singh Khurana ..

He crossed his arms across his chest.

Common.I'm in front of you.Dont waste your time .kill me..

He was so cooland confident.that irritated and hurt dayalnath's ego..He took a knife (he usually has it with him) in angry to kill Maan.The next minute he was at the gun point of Maans securities.,who surrounded him.The sound of the cars door opening and the tapping of shoes made the people to see whats happening.They understood what happened.Dayalnath dropped his knife in fear.


Maan in his attitude ,Killing maan singh khurana is not that much easy'For the thought itself I will make your life hell..Do you want to see.


The villagers surrounded them.The sarpanch started to speak..You tried to kill this man.So,You will no longer live in this village.bcoz of you and ur sons deed.We are giving you two days time.You should leave Hp ..and make your son surrender to police..This is the justice of this Panchayat. Do you all agree with me.

He asked the villagers..

Yes..

Maan left the place..But he could hear Dayalnath roaring.bcoz of you the villagers also turned against me.You are not half my age and experience Maan singh khurana'I will show you who I am. I will kill you both and save my son..

Precap:bohut hogaya emotional.next part little emotional plus a little ...I leave it to ur imagination...he..he..he..


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PART 14 _ Page 13

Edited by alamuabi - 13 years ago

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