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kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

AWESOME PART ...

WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE UPDATE SOON...

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saam123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

valli so awesome update

just everything so amazing

poor geet how she will handle

everything.just so superb.

please update other one to

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ambbiha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#363

loved geets innocence

precap seems interesting

continue soon

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TanuDDian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#364

awesome part dear...

its wonderful... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

precap is so funny🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

geet bak bak🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

waiting😍😍😍😍😍😍

update soon.😃😃😃😃

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#365

Ahhh...just came across your FF...read till the 21st part

I loved it 👏👏..It's too good ,very well written⭐️⭐️

Geet is choo chweet .cute and innocent.🤗🤗

even Maan's charecter is also very good. 😃

Not unnecessarily rude, very helpful.

The backdrop is too good and lovely and I also liked the Police investigation part. I'm glad you concentrated on the Investigation part😊

and Nakul's self thoughts were damn funny😆😆😆

This ff is really very good.😊

Awww...all the village people are so caring and lovely and I even loved Geet's innocent answers 😍when Maan accused her of chori ...It reflected the relationship she shared with the whole village

and pls add me to your PM list😊

and I'll soon read the other parts.

Take care :)

-Namratha-

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#366

awesome update dear
loved it waiting to see their SR
dear i didnt get the pm for this update

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Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#367

Loved your F/F

please update soon and pm me

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#368

awesome...

aww..the innocent bacchi...she does not know anything...

poor maan...he has to control himself n make her understand also...😆

continue soon...

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: abinash079
awesome update dear
loved it waiting to see their SR
dear i didnt get the pm for this update

My pc is not in form...so ,i've not pm-ed any one this time...

I apologise to all my buddies for this inconvenience...

will pm next time with another update...sorry buddies...🤗

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#370

U, ME,AUR...?

PART 39

Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'😊I love you all.

Maan walked slowly...no no..hesitatingly towards the bed..He sat opposit to geet keeping a safe distance.He lifted up her gunghatt ,that was covering her face and placed it over her head.He was lost in her beauty.how innocent she looks.He was starring at her.

Ufff...You made me wait for a long time..
What is she saying?.was she expecting me..?He was confused..
Do you know,i can't see anything covering my face.Mama said I must not remove the gunghat.you must only lift it.
He sighed in relief.she didn't mean that way

He looked at her.she looked at him.Mahi..Mahi..She winked at him.😉

Why are you looking at me like this.?(Will any girl ask her hubby like this in their SR.But,this is our chidish Geet..She can ask..lol:)😆

But what can a husband say..
You are looking Gorgeous geet..You look like a princess.
She moved on her knees on the bed and sat next to him.
hei na.All the people who came today said this only repeatedly.They said my dress is nice,my jewel is nice,my hairstyle is nice..n...She was going on with the stuffs,which all had said to her today.She was going on with her bak bak..But Maan was not hearing anything that she was saying.She unknowingly touched him few times ,which was awakening his desires.,

Maan was already having a hard time to control his emotions.Their loneliness was affecting him.The decorated room ,the bed n the sweet aroma present there was making his feelings wake up.And here his childish wifey cutie little princess is driving him more insane.
.He was starring at the rosy lips,which parted n twisted during her chat.He had a sudden urge of kissing her on her lips,which are tempting him.He want to have her in his embrace and make love with her that minute.He want to make this day more memorable...His mind and heart started to fight with each other.One said to proceed with his thoughts,as she is his wife n he has the right to do anything to her.The other warned him,if he proceeds,he will regret it later.as she is unaware of the relation that has blossomed today.His mind ordered him to go away from there.But he felt like he was tied up there.He was not able to move.

The one he was doing was drooling her for a long time.
Atlast the mind asked him..You said you will maintain distance.But I think you will not be able to do so?you are going to complicate your relation..
Maan shook his head in no...No..I'll keep my words.I'll not do anything that will bring trouble to our relation.I will stay away from her,till she accepts me as her husband n understand our relationship.
Maan got up from bed.Its getting too late .I think we should sleep.(lol)..You must also be tired..You change here.I'll fresh up n come.
Hmm.Ok.
He took his night dress from the wardrobe.
Geet stood on the bed to get down.She stamped on the lehenga.She was about to fall,when maan caught her in time.She hugged him tightly in fear.Their body was glued with each other.Her duppatta flew on the air and fell covering them both.She tried to take it.but it was not that easy.her every attempt made them move closer.Both felt electricity passing their bodies.Maan understood what it was.But,geet took it as a symptom of fear.Maan made her stand straight. He freed the duppatta over him n placed it over her head.

What are you trying to do?
Aap buddhu ho kya?
What?
How can I change without getting down from bed.?
Hmm..What if you get hurt. ...He shouted..but the reason was he cared for her.
koi bed pe chaltha hai kya.you must be careful.samji..
Hmm.Ok..She said making a puppy face.
He was about to move when his eyes fell on the mirror.He held her shoulders and moved towards it.
Maan showed their reflection in the mirror to her.
she cant understand,kya?
See how are you looking.she saw her reflection with mangal sutr n mang filled with sindoor n maan standing near her.
touching her sindoor n mangalsutr..she said I'm looking like my mama na..she always wears this.(oh..Maan wants to bang his head )
I'm not pointing that ..see how angelic you are!
ji..You are also looking good today...(wa...she complimented him)
May be.But noone can compete you.This dress,jewels ,makeups are nothing before your natural beauty.
oh
Tell me.how do we both look as a pair.(What a question he is asking n to whom?).
nice.
sirf nice.
aur kya kahoon.
I expected a answer like.made for each other.
(geet ke saath maan bi buddhu hogaya..Does she know the meaning of it)
He was disappointed.
Maan took a step back fom her.her duppatta sticked in his sherwani.He neared her and slowly removed her dupatta from his dress ..he removed her pin that was joining choli n duppatta.he dropped the duppatta on the floor.Her face was fully visible now.He removed her mang tika..He cupped her face n kissed her forehead.(maan what are you doing..his mind asked him?).He made her sit before the dressing table.
Remove your jewels and change your dress..I'll fresh up.
If i stood here more...i'll not be able to control myself.
ok
He walked to the washroom.He stood under the shower .Hechanged to his tracks n vest.He waited there for somemore time...giving her time to change.it was nearly half an hour.He stepped outside the wash room.He was shocked to see her.😲

precap:raath ab bhi bakhi hai...geet ki bak bak has started a little only...more on next part with
maneet...part only..

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next update..i will take time guys...

Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago