Heyaaa!
OH MY GOD! This FF is amazing, actually amazing is an understatement! WOW! SOOO BLOODY PERFECT! I love all the characters and the whole story surrounding it!
I seriously Cant think straight, Ridhimma might have not literally blown Armaan's mind but your writing has blown mine lOl! WOooW the characterisation is immense! I love Ridhimma and her so called "wifely humor" LMAOOO and her one liners are amazing- I am seriously in love with this FF!
ahahaha suprisingly me and Ridhimma think along the same line's minus the muderous thoughts lmaooo I love how you have highlighted her character as strong headed and opionionated individual who doesnt need a men to make her happy- something I, myself strive to be ;)
You literally make me Laugh out loud like a minac with all the humor that has composed itself in your writing! The whole Armaan vs Ridhimma with the Wife vs Husband fact thing made me laugh like crazy- where do u come with stuff like that? and more importantly why havent you written earlier?
Okay Okay- The whole story And the touch of murder, uncertainty, betrayal and corruption that is surrounding Ridhimma and her life is written beautifully! I am glad you didnt g with all the happy dovey lovey shit that everyone else including myself chose to go with- the story is different and appealing. and the way you have written is the cherry on top of a perfcetly iced cake ;)
Sayyy WHAATTT? Armaan and his unlogical thinking! Seriously he restorted to such a level? and even if she did betray him and his "malik" company, he chose to humilate and revenge in such way? his own WIFE?- if i was in Ridhimma's position i would have probarbly shot him ( dont look at me wiered, i mean... I would have shot him in the leg or somefin, that would have taught him a lesson , a pretty good lesson ahahaha ) LOL! I like the whole scene, esp the part where she states " I was a virgin you know.." you portrayed the sadness and betrayal beautifully! It made me laugh and feel remorse.
I like how Padma's "situation" and the whole murder thing is highlighted in the updates, the story is sooo different and capatavating- I love it! Hope the whole murder thing is resulted to a happy finish, to be honest I couldnt care less if Shashank was eaten by a shark! he was such a jerk and if padma has killed him- then good on her! like come on she spent and devoted all her life to her husband and he sleeps around with s**ts ...argh! men! LOL!
and the second honeymoon on camp whatever- I agree with Armaan even the name sounds deadly LOL! Clearly I am in love with this FF, so please Update sooon! =)
Love Priyanka.
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