Thread 2: Surrogate Relations part 19 (17/8)

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

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Posted: 14 years ago

#441

I'm loving their slowlydeveloping trust and love.

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Nandita5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#442

Gosh that was really beautiful. Wow u have expressed Geet's feelings in such a beautiful way. I was lost in the two of them as I was reading it. Waiting anxiously for next part. Thanx for the pm.

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#443

wonderful part...👏you have explained each situation so simply and expressed their emotions wonderfully...Right from their waking up to Geet's realisation to Dadi's observations - everything has been portrayed beautifully...While in last few updates we had seen Maan's restlessness,protectiveness and caring...Geet's innocent mind's musings are apparent now...

You have been writing exceedingly well...please continue soon😃

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Supriya

@priyanka86

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Posted: 14 years ago

#444

Beautiful Update..

Loved the way how Geet realized her love for Maan..

Maan wants to be present for scan...

cant wait for that..

Thanks for the PM..

Continue soon

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

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Posted: 14 years ago

#445

Hmmm... so the confusion started for Geet...now time to realize her inner feelings...

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

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Posted: 14 years ago

#446

Amazing...
Loving their closeness...

Updt soon.

Thanks for the pm.

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: rockin_gal
Awww poor geet is upset over her past but tht makes me wonder wat is her past?? did someone rape her or wat?? but i feel sad for her 😔... and aww again cuz maan wants to be there with her to c the baby.. thts just 2 cute 😳 it was a lovely and awsoommee chap...👍🏼 i just loveddd ittt but i found it very short... can u plz try to make it a little longer next time 😲 and update soon and nt make me wait.. i no im being greedy but i just love ur ff 😛.. so plzz update asap and make it longer... thanxx.. 😃

u'll get to know abt geet's past in small doses...in the coming updates...abt the length, i don't knw yaar...always what i need to put forth ends at a particular length...then i'm in a hurry to get it to u...to find ur reaction😉...i'll try to give a longer one

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: undisclosed
bindu i loved the way you showed geet's thoughts...it was so cute her heart battling her brain...and i love the way maan loves the way geet's cheeks get rosy...i like that he is going to see the baby with geet...can't wait for the next update...btw i love it when maan gets angry that geet avoids looking at him😉

poor guy how can he stand it...when all he can think abt is her...she is trying to avoid him😆
the credit for the idea of heart battling with head goes to Harshita (Mrs.MSKForever)👏...she wanted me to include such a scene...

Edited by bangalores - 14 years ago

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: anupamachem
It was beautiful but very short! Hope the baby she is carrying is Dev & Naintara's and not anybody Else's.

the baby is Dev's ...conceived by artificial insemination...there is no confusion there😊

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: Mehek25
Superb update Bindu. i particularly liked the morning scene. i mean the feelings in Geet when she just woke up. Amazingly expressed. U are superb in ur writing. I wonder how u do it. U are extremely telentd. Pls update soon. The suspense about Geet's past is now getting me more and more concerned.

thank u ...
u'll get another glimpse of her past in the coming updates

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