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that was really good! c'mon continue soon! 👏

awesum 👏 👏 cont soooon
himani

sallam....namestay.....hellooo...
iam back with my fictionz new part...........hope u r aal like ittt 😊
RECAP:- fight between angad and kripa....
START
reharsal haul....
D M:- chaloo kripa jaldii say tum loog apna reharsal khatam karoo....bcz aaj tum logon ko GOA k leay nikalna hay........
they both r finshed thier reharsal..
IN SK HOME
kripa inter the home... and says
kripa:- mommmmmmmmmmmmmm plzzzzzzz muuhgay bohat bhook lagi hay kuch lay aao na plzzzzzzz abhi nikalna hay GOA k leay.....
now AALIA come and says angad bhya bhi sath ja rahay hain
kripa:-han 😕
ALLIA:-wowwwwwww phir to bohat maza aey ga aap ko bcz jab bhi angad bhaya k sath koi bhi safar karta hay kabhi bore nahin hota 😊
kripa:- magar mujhay koi shoke nhain hay tumharay bhya k sath janay ka main apni car main jaa rahi hon
NOW ANGAD INTER
angad:-kia baat hay aalia kion apna time west kar rahi hoo... 😛
AALIA:-angad bhaya plzzzzzzzzz 😕 😕 ....main to sirf kripa ko kah rahi thi k aap k sath journy main bohat maza ata ahy....
angad:- soo what 🤔
ALLIA:-magar kripa aap k sath nahin ja rahi who apni car main aey gii...
angad:- 😡 mujhay bhi koi shoke nahin hay kisi k sath janay ka..
kripa:- 😡 han to ja bhi kon raha ahy
NOW DADI COMEs
dadi:-bacho kion lar rahay hoo😔
AAlia :- dadii who ....sab kuch bata daytii hay
dadii:- 😊 kripa baita itni rat ko tum akaili nahin jao gii.....or angad bachay agar tum any zeada pareshan kia na kripa ko too acha nahin hoo ga 😊
kripa:-magar dadi whoo main
SURIBHAN COME
suribhan:-kripa mom sahi kah rahi hai hain....tum dono ko aik sath hi jan ahy....got it
kripa:- 😡 and she leave
angad:- 😆 okz dadi and uncle jo aap ka hukum..
suribhan:-thats like my child.... 😊 GOD bless u ..
dadi and suribhan leave
angad:-pata nahin khud ko kia samjhti hay....khair aalia aaj josh aa raha hay...tum usay laynay time pay pohanch jana
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AALLIA:-okz broo
IN CAR
angad and kripa in car.....
angad uss ka hit song lagata hay jo kripa ko bhi bohat pasanad hay and acoording to kripa....maira mood jitna bhi khrab ho yah song sun k gusa gayab ho jata hay
kripa:-angad iss song amin aik female voice hoti an to yah orr bhi zeada hit hota 😊 😊 😊
angad:- 😕 😕 g aap nay mujh say kuch kaha ...kya kaha main nay suna nahin.......... 😆
kripa:-kuch nahin 😕
car aik dam say ruk jati hay
angad ohh **** yah safar to lamba hi hota ja raha hay....think apni unfavrout larki k sath asafar karna kia hota hay 😆
kripa:- 😡 😡 😡 same here
angad:-main daikhta hon....angad daikhta hay and say:-lagta hay pani ki zarorat ghay tum yahan tahroo main abhi
aya..
kripa:- plz mujhay dar lag raha hay
angad:-come onn ab main tumhain sath lay kar janay say to raha or agar phir bhi tumhain dar lag raha hay to iam sorry main kuch nahin kar sakta.
kripa:-look at him wid tears and say ok jao 😭
angad leave
kripa is alone in the car...kripa car say bahir aa kar khari ho jati hay..some boys are come and says kya hoa madem kahan ja rahiihoo itni raat ko kaho to hum aap ko chor dain......
kripa scared and says:- plz jao yahan say leave me alone.....
boys:-ary aap ko akaila kaisay chor dain maim...aik larka uss ka hath paker layta hay....and she is shouting...angaddddddddddddddddd angaddddddddddddddd
angad:-comes and watch aal the scene and he come near of her and says:- thnx bhai loog tum loog mairi mushkil assan karna chah rahay hooo...ajj kal aisay loog kahan miltay hain...thnxx alots ....magar aik prob ahy mairii dadi mujhay nahin choray gi agar main nay isay chor dea too......soo plz aap log mujh par or is kripa par kripa farma kar chlay jain
aik larka agay ata hay and hit on his face..
angad:- 😡 aryyyyyyy mujhay mara tum nay angad kahna koo ab tum logon ko kon bachay gaa.....and he is fightin wid them....
after that he says...chaloo warana inn ksathii aa jain gay.....magar when he was trunn....kripa iss not there....barish shoroo hoo jati hay
angad:- 😲 kripaaaaaa kahan hoo plz kripa ans me kahan hoooo..............
to be continude....
precap:-in one room of hotle.....they both are alone..angad think main pyar par wishwas nahin rakhta magar mujhay kia ho raha hay.........plzzzzzzz dont miss itt .....hope u love it
LOVE U ALLL..........NOSHEEN 😛

Moderator's Note: Edited to remove inappropriate language.

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hey just read ur ff its awesome pls cont soon 😃

tnx but mujhay lagta ahy yah fanfic aap logon ko bore kar rahi hay 😭

Originally posted by: sweet_isha_110

tnx but mujhay lagta ahy yah fanfic aap logon ko bore kar rahi hay 😭

arrey aisa nahin bolte😳

i love it but pls cont soon😃

thnx i am continuing my fan fic tomorrow inshallah 😛

yeh plzzzzzzzzzzzz dear dont be dishard 😛 ........ur fan fic is awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...........plz plz plz continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn


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plz plz plz plz plz plz plz i beg you continue soon!! i LOVE this fan-fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MEAN it!!!