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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hudzi

HEY KAJAL WAT A FF DEAR WONDERFUL M JST WAITING WAT WILL HAPPEN WEN VEDH N MISHA WILL INTERACT I THOT NOW MISHA WILL MINGLE WIT AJAY BUT I GUESS HER LOVE HAS REENTER IN HER LIFE PLZ UPDATE ASAP M WAITING ACTUALLY ADDICTED SO THNX FOR LUVLY FF'S U N RASHU ROCKS BUT UR CONCPT IS BIT DIFF


thanks dear, its very sweet of you
u liked my ff and yeah for this concept i have to think a lot
i just want like piya and abhay to be normal...
i mean yaar vampire vampire bahut hogaya that
and my all frnd like it so i write it further...
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Posted: 13 years ago
kajalll
plz update yaar waiting since long curious to noe wat will happen next so plz have mercy n update
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey KAAJAL DEAR... 😊
4 being TOOO LATE @ FEEDBACK...
I hope... U won't MIND...
DEAR !
d UPDATE...
is juz...
⭐️CORE CONCEPT of SONG SELECTION is juz AMAZING⭐️
DEAR... u hv done a...
WORK !
😳AADIL AUR PIYA ne tou JAAN hi le li
I LOVE THE FLASHBACK PART😳
uf ye tanhai ye masti'
jese toofan me kashti'
KAAJAL...
HATS OFF 2 U...
4 dis ADOREABLE n UN4GETABLE CREATION...
cz
u hv done a...
AWWW CANT WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE !!!
WARM n TIGHT...
4 U... KAAJAL...
as U made dis FF as a RAINING GIFT...
so a RAINING SUPPER 4 U...
😉COFFEE wid COFFEE CUPCAKE😉
though m late... but try 2 njoy...
SUMTHIN' 4 U...
THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE FF DEAR😉

take care
gud luk
keep smilin'
regards
(BUT YOU FORGOT TO PM ME DEAR😭)
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Posted: 13 years ago

its awesome kajal...hope u r fine now!
Wow, adil n piya got engaged !
Vedh is back . . OMG !
Wat will happen now
eagerly waiting 4 d next update
continue soon
thanks 4 d pm
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

hey KAAJAL DEAR... 😊

4 being TOOO LATE @ FEEDBACK...
I hope... U won't MIND...
DEAR !
d UPDATE...
is juz...
⭐️CORE CONCEPT of SONG SELECTION is juz AMAZING⭐️
DEAR... u hv done a...
WORK !
😳AADIL AUR PIYA ne tou JAAN hi le li
I LOVE THE FLASHBACK PART😳
uf ye tanhai ye masti'
jese toofan me kashti'
KAAJAL...
HATS OFF 2 U...
4 dis ADOREABLE n UN4GETABLE CREATION...
cz
u hv done a...
AWWW CANT WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE !!!
WARM n TIGHT...
4 U... KAAJAL...
as U made dis FF as a RAINING GIFT...
so a RAINING SUPPER 4 U...
😉COFFEE wid COFFEE CUPCAKE😉
though m late... but try 2 njoy...
SUMTHIN' 4 U...
THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE FF DEAR😉

take care
gud luk
keep smilin'
regards
(BUT YOU FORGOT TO PM ME DEAR😭)





its okay dear... and dont say sorry



thank you dear so much ...




u liked it...



i will update soon dear take care



Edited by stary_kajal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part-25

misha sees vedh and vedh sees misha.. both of them were shocked to see each other..



misha was having tears in her eyes...
vedh was seeing misha only.. the motions of feelings were attacking misha and vedh...

flashback:

when misha use to come see piya and abhay.
abeer and misha laughing...
misha and aaroo looking at vedh when he drops piya at college...

misha turns and goes from there...

rishab: mr raichand aaj project ke barey mey nahi discuss nahi kartey ... lets have a party...aaj merey betey ki engagment hui hai

vedh sees aadil and piya and gives a little smile... he goes with from there and piya sees him going... piya comes in a side and she wipes her tears... piya comes and put her hand on misha shoulder... misha turns and sees piya.. she hugs piya..

misha: piya woh yaha kyu aaya... apni zindagi ke jis hisey ko mey bhula chuki hu aaj phir woh merey saamney aa gaya hai...

piya makes misha sit and gives her a water to drink...

piya: aksar life mey kuch aisa ho jaata hai jo humhey accept karna hota hai aur phir tum toh vedh da sey pyar karti ho..zindagi sabko baar baar mauka nahi deti misha .. us samjho vedh da ka dubara wapas aana matlab kudrat ka ishara hai jo woh tumhey samjhana chahata hai... baki as u wish misha life toh tumari hai...

piya goes from there...

Scene shifts:

vedh was talking on phone ... he was speaking to abeer...

vedh: u were right... tum sahi keh rahey they...

song starts:

Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
{vedh turns, it was misha who was singing}
Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
{misha goes to panchi and sings this lines}
Jhoot Bole Jo Use Kaat Khaaye Bichoowa
Rab Di Kasam Sach Bole Mere Mitwa
Haan Raab Di Kasam Sach Bole Mere Mitwa
{she looks at vedh and vedh looks left}
Jhoot Bole Jo Use Kaat Khaaye Bichoowa
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
{girls starts dancing}
Haan Jaldi Meri Doli Mangwade
Aage Meri Chaahne Wale
{she comes to piya}
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
{aadil and ajay smiles}


Saare Panchi Ud Jaate Hai
Saab Pardesi Mud Jaate Hai
{piya start drinking, ajay sees this, he comes to misha, misha holds him}
Haan Saare Panchi Ud Jaate Hai
Sab Pardesi Mud Jaate Hai
{misha start loosing her sensed, and points out at vedh}
Dekh Zara Tu Kya Hota Hai
Pyaar Mein Jaab Dil Jud Jaate Hai
{misha puts both of her hands on ajay shoulder}
Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
Haan Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
Jhoot Bole Jo Use Kaat Khaaye Bichoowa
{misha leaves ajay and takes another drink, vedh looks at misha}
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul

{misha imagines vedh coming to her and they have dance, one girl
pulls her and she comes to her senses, she sees piya and aadil}

Tum Ko Mubarak Ho Yeh Shaadi
Yeh Band Baaja Ghode Haathi
{misha comes to aadil and piya holds their hands together}
Tum Ko Mubarak Ho Yeh Shaadi
Yeh Band Baja Ghode Haathi
{misha turns from bck of piya and hugs her and sings}
Dulha Dulhan Jeevan Saathi
Apna Kya Hum Khaali Baaraati
{misha tears rolls down and drops on piya shoulder, looking at vedh}
Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
Haan Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
{piya turns and sings this line}
Jhoot Bole Jo Use Kaat Khaaye Bichoowa
Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
misha sings and dance, piya was in tears and sees misha}
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Haan Jaldi Meri Doli Mangwade
Aage Meri Chaahne Wale
Jaldi Meri Doli Mangwade
Aage Meri Chaahne Wale
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
{all the girls sing this line chorus, everyone claps}


vedh goes from there ... piya sees misha and vedh.. vedh was in tears..
piya calls vedh...

piya: vedh da
vedh wipes her tears and turns...he sees piya... vedh trys to leave... but piya hold his hand...vedh looks at piya
piya: vedh da apni behan sey bina miley hi chale jogey..
vedh: aisi koi baat nahi hai piya mey bas
piya: mey toh kya vedh da...
vedh:{ fake smiles} kaisi ho tum...
piya: apney vedh da ke bina piya kaisey ho sakti... jab sey abhay gaya hai tab se sab badal gaya... aap badal gaye ... kya yahi rishta tha humara...
vedh: nahi piya aisi koi baat nahi hai...

some claps from there side...

misha: kaun keh raha hai yeh piya... mr vedh raichand...
piya: mishaa..tumm
vedh stops piys saying
misha: kyu rok rahey usey bolney sey kehney do wat she wants to say? uska right banta hai bolney ka...
vedh: {serious} tum kehna kya chahti ho... woh meru behan
misha: rishto ka matlab bi samjhtey ho tum...
vedh: see misha... tum kyu purani baatein ko phir sey start kar rahi ho.. hum miley... u liked me thats it... its all over..
misha looks at vedh and piya also...
vedh: waisey bi i am in relationship with someone.. so carry on ...{he turns} koi acha sa boyfrnd dhundo aur shaadi kar lo.. merey aur piya ke bich mat aao...

misha in tears run from there... piya looks at vedh..she also goes from there...

vedh thinks

"misha mey jo kuch bi kar rahi hu ...sahi kar raha hu,,, meu janta hu tum mujse bahut pyar karti ho lakin ek vampire aur insaan kabhi sath nahi re saktey.. apni aankho ke saamney abhay da aur piya ko alag hotey dekha hai... piya kis halat mey hai mehsoos kiya hai mainey.. aur mey nahi chahta hai ki tum is dard aur takleef sey guzaro"


scene shift:

ajay and aadil was siting and ajay was thinking...
aadil: kya hua kya soch raha hai...
ajay: boss bahut bada locha lag raha hai ...sochna padega {ajay was in thinking mode, aadil sees ajay}
aadil hits ajay...
aadil: bol na kya hua tujhe... kya soch raha hai.
ajay: abey kya hai yaar mey kuch soch raha hu tu bas abhi piya bhabi pe concentrate karo samjhey
aadil: dekh bata kya chal raha hai terey dimag mey...waisey bi i knw u terey pet mey koi baat nahi pachti...
ajay: kya matlab
aadil: tu mujse baat kiye bina reh nhi sakta i knw u...
ajay: yaar tune misha ko dekha hai...
aadil: oey kahi tujhe misha toh pasand nhi aa gayi
ajay: abey kya bol raha hai tu... tujse na baat hi karna bekaar hai... dekh piya bhabi aa rahi hai...

scene shift:

piya: a,, aadil can u please drop me home?
aadil: kyu kya hua?
piya: nahi i am not feeling okay...
ajay: bhabi agar tabiyat jayada kharab hai toh yahi rest kar lijye...
aadil: ha piya ajay theek keh raha hai...
piya: nahi woh
ajay comes and holds her shoulder...
ajay: arey woh woh kya chaliye aap ...
ajay goes with piya and aadil sees them and smiles...


scene shift:

ajay takes piya in aadil room..piya sees aadil room.. it was quite big and in one corner they were having family pics ...ajay and aadil pic, megha , aadil and ajay pic, then nani pulling ajay ears pic... , rishab-aadil- megha- ajay and nani pic...piya looks around...

ajay: bhabi
piya looks at ajay
ajay: abhi toh yeh room mey aur aadil share kartey hai...is ghar mey bahut rooms hai lakin i love to be with him...
piya smile a little bit...aadil comes there and ajay winks and goes from there...

piya looks at aadil... here abhay shadow comes piya just seeing aadil

"abhay was shining and he was in black, the glow was shinging"

abhay: piya yeh dekho mey aa gaya tumare pass abhay bankar nahi lakin aadil bankar tumare pass hu... abhay tumari aakho sey bahut dur hai piya lakin aadil bankar tumare pass hai, isey hamesha sambhal kar rakhna

after saying this abhay disappears...



so friends here i end hope u will like it...




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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome part kajal 👏 ye vedh mein pkyek ke abhay ki atma ghus gayi hai kya ?😡😆 i hope pia accepts aadil soon . n what was ajay thinking ? n when r u updating next part of ek ajnabee ? thanks for the pm n continue soon 😳
take care 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update kajal,
OMG ! Vedh broke misha's heart!
I'm glad to see adil n piya together
thanks 4 d pm
continue soon
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey nyc dr!!!!! so vedh broke misha heart!!!!! but he also loves her na!!!!!

i hope staw away act shuru na hi jaye!!!!
n i m glad 2 see pia n aadil togather!!!!
cont soon n u didnt pm me dis tym!!!!
plzz pm me next tym u update!!!!
Edited by Akshi0019 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update!

Poor Misha.😔 Vedh is hurting her. Hope that Pia will accept Aadil soon. What's disturbing Ajay? Continue soon. Thanks a lot for Pm. Take care.😊
Edited by prerna26 - 13 years ago

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