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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: pihu_rocks

nice update dear...what will happen next please continue soon

cant wait to look forward...





thanks pihu...nice name
hope u liked my fff
i will upate soon dear
till then enjy tc...



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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Awesome start! I loved how we got Abhiya romance already in the first update! I'm really looking forward to how the story develops! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART-2


aranb raise a toast of champign...

"hey friends want to say something"

everyone looks at arnab...

"aaj mey bahut khush aur aap log bi bahut khush hogey...because aaj meri beti piya ki sagaayi hui hai...mainey kabhi bi misha aur piya mey koi farak nahi samjha...bhaley hi piya ka janam is ghar mey nahi hua lakin mey isey apni beti ki terha pyar karta hu...yeh ek aisa ehsaas hai jo shabdo mey bi explain nhi kiya ja sakta,,,,{😭😭😭} i think thoda emotional ho raha hai hu

misha: common papa...

aranab: yeah yeah i should not be toh abhay {a looks a arnab} mey janta hu ki tum piya ko bahut khush rakhogey..forever isliye pandit ji ney shaadi ki taarikh ek week decide ki

everyone claps...👏.. abhay and piya smiles..abhay takes piya in the corner of window...

piya: so abhay raichand you are mine and only mine...
abhay: really...aur agar koi aur mujhe tumsey chura kar le gaya toh?

piya with teary eyed turn her face...abhay gets worried...abhay piya ke pichey sey aakar usey apni baaho mey bhar leta hai...

abhay:hey hey piya mey toh bas...
piya: no abhay
abhay: so possisve about me...hmm abhi toh bas engagement hui hai...
piya: abhay mey bahut choti thi jab papa aur mummy mujhe akela chodh kar chale gaye...kuch dhundali is yaadein hai unki merey maan mey... i never get anyone love...phir misha aayi uski mummy papa ney woh kami bi puri kar di...lakin aisa lagta tha ki mey hamesha apney aap sey sawaal puchti hu ki piya aakhir tumari life ka motive kya hai...but i never got ans abhay...

abhay makes turn piya towards him..he hugs him tightly piya also hugs him...

abhay: mey aa gaya hu na tum akeli kaha ho...
piya: i know abhay...

haseena calls abhay...

abhay: mom bula rahi hai lagta hai we have to leave now but i will call you back ok sweetheart...common lets go {he kisses on piya lips gently, piya closes her eyes}

abhay holds piya hands goes from there...

Party ends arnab family see off raichand's family...they go and dobriyal family was happy eveb panchi also leave with sid...

panchi: papa hum ja rahey hai... actually sid ko kal kahi jaana hai..toh shaam mey i will come with my luggage...
arnab: yahi ruk jao sid yahi sey chala jaayega...
panchi: he had to take something from home...toh kal toh mey aa rahi hu...
aranab: okay beta aisa you wish...but kal pakka...
panchi: ya sure mom kaha hai...
aranab: yahi hogi i will see...
panchi: no papa its too late...
aranab: but...hmm meri panchi samjhadar toh thi but ab bahut badi hogayi hai...

panchi hugs aranab tightly...arnab kisses on her forehead...


Scene shifts... {raichand house}

haseena: abhay tum khush ho na mom...
abhay: mom aap janti hai ki mey piya sey kyu shaadi kar raha hu...
haseena: i know abhay lakin ek na ek din toh usey sachai pata chalegi na
abhay: mom jab tak pata chalegi tak tak piya puri terha sey meri ho chuki hogi..
haseena: dont say ki tum piya sey pyar karney lagey...
abhay: abhay raichand kisi sey pyar nahi karta...
chand: abhay jo bi kadam uthana soch samaj kar uthana..kisi ko bi khabar nahi honi chahiye...
abhay: dont worry dad i will handle it...

tabhi abhay ke phone ki sms tone sunai deti hai {beep beep}.. abhay checks it and smiles...abhay goes.. haseena and chand looks at abhay...

sms from piya: hey abhay wats up?
sms from abhay: nothing just taking shower...
sms from piya: shower itni raat ko...
sms from abhay: yeah mujhe garmi lag rahi hai...leave that tum kya kar rahi thi
piya smiles sms: thinking about you?
sms from abhay: hmm sounds interesting...kya soch rahi thi?
sms from piya: oh tum sawaal bahut puchtey ho
sms from abhay: tum jawab bahut kam deti ho...
sms from piya: ok gn love you
sms from abhay: okay gn...

piya goes to sleep..abhay sits on bed and thinks...

Next morning:

piya wakes up late...she takes shower and get ready...she comes down for breakfast...every one is sitiing there...abhay is also there...piya gets surprise..
she feels shy...piya comes and sits opposite to abhay...they see each other..misha looks at them...

misha: abhay tum yaha kaisey
abhay: misha bataya toh tha abhi kyu aaya hu...she has to go with mom...
madhu: lakin mujhe kaha janna hai misha
misha: oh mom common aap bulakad ho gaye ho..you have to select bridal dress for piya...
madhu: really mainey aisa kaha tha...😕

arnab smiles and misha also...everyone laughs...

madhu: misha tum kab sudhrogi...jhooth bolney ki aadat kab jaayegi tumari...piya kahi nahi jaana hai humhey tum abhay ke sath shopping pe ja sakti ho...
misha: so mrs raichand aaj toh jeejz ki pocket fully khalli karney waali ho...
piya: shhh u just stop it ok...
misha: ha ha ab toh bolo gi...kuch kuch hota hai misha tum nahi samjhogi...
piya: do your breakfast now...

abhay takes leaves with piya...misha arnab and madhu smiles...piya and abhay sits in a car...abhay was usually in white shirt, grey jacket and black jaeans.. piya in white sleves less top, with dark green skirt with light scarf on her with starighten hair...having one hand bag...abhay starts car...piya looks at abhay..

piya: abhay
abhay: hmmm
piya: you are so silent today...kya hua? mood theek nahi hai...
abhay: no aisi baat nahi hai..i was just thinking...
piya: what? batao na abhay...
abhay: nothing piya just like that...
piya: abhay you have to tell me... {abhay stops car}
abhay 😡: {shouts} stop it piya ek baar kaha na kuch baat nahi hai...why are you irritating me?
piya: am i irritating you abhay {she start crying 😭}

abhay starts car again he is driving and piya is weeping she wipes her tears..abahy sees it form front mirror...abhay puts his hands on piya hands... {BG music starts mahiyaa}

abhay: i am sorry piya mujhe tum par chilana nahi chahiye tha...
piya: no abhay i am sorry mujhe itna over react nahi karna chahiye tha...
abhay: its okay piya some time it happens now dont cry...

piya puts his head on abhay shoulder while abhay is driving>

piya: i am sorry abhay...
abhay: its ok...
piya: i love you so much...
abhay: (slowly. looks at piya): I love you too...

abhay and piya reaches at shopping mall...abhay saw T there and he stares at her...

so firends here i stop ...hope you will like it...







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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Awesome update! OMG so Abhay is using Piya for something! I'm so curious to know what for! So Abhay has a motive behind this marriage! But I'm sure in the process Abhay will fall in love with Piya! I'm so excited that Abhiya's marriage is in a week! I hope T doesn't start any drama at the mall. Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Awesome start! I loved how we got Abhiya romance already in the first update! I'm really looking forward to how the story develops! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊



thanks dear u appreciated my first part
yeah as i mentioned that my story begins with the marriage sp romance hona hi chahiye
aur groom agar abhay jaisa hot aur handsome ho toh bride toh obviously will be involved
i will update soon dear...


yeah thanks for the part-2 compliment...
i will update soon dear...
i m happy u liked the story...





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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
awesome update
so abhay has his ownselfish reasons to marry pia
i hate it when he shouted at pia and make her😭
i hope he will eventually fall in love with her
what is the scene with t?
update soon and plzzz plzzz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Nice concept, so abhay is using Piya for some motive seems intersting, update soon.
Please PM me when you update😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
IEZ NICE UPDATE ABHIYAMARRIAGE WOW YAAR AND PLZ PM ME
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Nice story dr loved both ur updates. ad me to ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
wow!its lovely...plz pm me when u update

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