Maneet FF - GEETIKA (OLD THREAD 2 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 140 - Page 32

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update.
Cannot wait for the SLAP.
Maan deserves the SLAP...sowwy to say it but he deserves it to the last T.
THanks for updating...cannot wait...
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh god maan is so rude. poor geet. really feel sorry for her. precap is very interesting but i dont think 1 slap is enough for him
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update..
oh poor geet...
precap interesting...maan deserves a slap...
nw its maan's turn to tell sorry..
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Posted: 14 years ago
CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE 😡.
After how he has behaved today, he truely deserves a tight slap.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update dear :) pls continue soon dear:
eagerly waiting for next part
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PART 45:

ANNIE...Come to Daadi's room...I need to talk to you something important.

Annie is surprised to see her bhai talking a bit rudely...Geet has got used to it by now.

Annie...Your brother is calling for you...You carry on...She hugs Annie and leaves from there...and both leave towards different direction.

Simultaneously at Daadi's room...

Daadi calls for help

Nakul rushes to her and holds her.

Nakul...You were standing outside right..Please tell me what happened.

Nakul bends his head down...unable to say anything...

Kuch tho Boliye

Nakul tells...how Maan behaved with Geet.

Daadi is loosing it...She is controlling herself to the maximum so that she doesn't fall down.

Nakul...please go out to that girl...may be she would need some help.

Ji Daadi

Nakul goes out to see Geet was walking very slowly...she seems to be completely lost.

Beta..

Geet is looking at him blankly...unable to comment...she closes her eyes with both her hands and starts crying.

Beta...please control yourself. I really don't know how to console you...I'll arrange to get water for you.

NO Nakulji...I dont want to drink water here...Please...please help me to get out of this place. I have lost my way.

Nakul helps her out till the exit gate.

Annie and Maan walk into Daadi's room. Daadi is now fuming with anger with what ever happened.

Annie hold's Maan's hand. Bhai...Geetdidi kyon challi gayi? Aap ne unhen kuch kaha? (Why did Geet didi go out? Did you tell her anything?

Why are you so much interested in that characterless girl? She just came with some planning here. And you...you are talking to a stranger ? Since when? You will go and talk to anybody just like that? You need to treat such people in such a way...I sent her out and told her not to come here again.

Annie drops the certificates which she has been holding in her hand and it gets dropped down...and also her hold on Maan's hand loosens and she moves back and starts crying. Bhai...mujhe aap se yeh bil kul umeed nahin thi (I never expected this out of you) ...I hate you...I hate you Bhai. She runs towards her room crying.

What happened to this Annie...she's behaving so strange?

Daadi comes forward and gives him one tight slap.

Its not Annie...Its you who is behaving strangely.

Maan couldnt believe...his Daadi actually slapped him...he's holding his hand on his cheek...DAADIMA..You slapped me...You have never done this till today.

Mat kahiye mujhe Daadima (Dont call me Daadima) ...Ghar aaye huye mehman se koi is tarah pesh aata hain? (Does anyone behave like this with a guest who's come all the way home)

So, you slapped me for that cheap girl?

Maan...I am warning you...mind your words.

Daadima...aap ko maloom nahin hain is ladki ke bare main. She is working in my office...and she is trying her level best to play tricks with me.

Play tricks?

Haan daadima, just the day before I left from delhi to attend this conference, I get this date-invitation email from her to meet at Sushi Delight

What did you say? She invited you to Sushi Delight?

Haan Daadima...look at the guts of this girl...I scholded her for that email and she has come all her way here to play another dirty tricks...yahan tak us ne aap ko aur Annie ko bhi nahin choda. (And she didnt spare you and Annie)

Daadi holds Maan's shirt collar with anger.

MAAN...you are no longer a human being...you are an animal.

Maan is looking at Daadima with a blank note. Daadima has never been so angry on him...and moreover, she's calling him an animal.

Geet inviting you to SUSHI Delight? She is a vegetarian for heaven sake. And leaves his collar and moves away from him.

Maan is taken back. How could he forget this? She was hesitant and feeling puky to get into that fish restaurant the other day. That's the day he learnt that she was a pure vegetarian.

She will never even keep her feet in such a place. In fact, that poor girl may not even know what this place is all about or even where it is located.

He remembers how hesitant she was to get into that restaurant...why...why didn't I realise it when I read Sushi Delight in that email. He closes his eyes in disgust

Coming for today...Geet didn't know its your home and I'm your Dadima till the time you walked into my room.

Par Daadima how is it possible...

I met Geet her for the first time at a Ganesh Temple. She was upset with her career life and I gave her few advices to follow. That's it and we are good friends since then...when I asked her about her company she told me that she works for KC...I didn't tell her that that my Grandson is the MD to whom Geet is currently reporting. Simply because I didn't want her approach towards me changes. She never knew this fact till this time.

Maan is not able to stand neither stable nor able to utter a single word.

Yesterday, We both happen to meet in the temple again. The temple was over crowded yesterday and someone happen to push me to the floor and I fainted. It was Geet who accompanied me to the family doctor...

Maan comes to hold Daadi's shoulder...Daadi gives him a stare... My BP increased that's it and doctor recommended me to take rest...I'll not die that easily

DAADIMA

Today...Geet came to check my health as she was unable to reach me over the mobile...and see what she got in return for the good gesture and care.

DAADIMA...please...

And coming to Annie...Annie knows Geet for the last 3 years. Geet is the one who helped Annie with her studies when Annie had to stay in Bangalore...and Today, Annie met her after long time...

Maan is shaking..he remembers he had a very brief talk with this girl over the phone. Also she and her family helped without expecting anything in return...they didnt even take any tuition fees for Annie. How could I...I should have atleast listened to Annie for once...why it didnt strike to me that Annie was actually reffering to Geet when she told me her tutor friend is waiting at Daadi's room...He closes his eyes...not able to hear anything further.

Aanie doesnt make friendship with anybody just like that but once she makes a friend, she takes that relationship personally...she can never bare anyone hurting or insulting that friend. Geet is very close to her...you have broken Annie's heart into pieces today. She will never talk to you again...never.

Geet used to always tell me that I remind her of her own Daadima who passed away recently as she suffered from severe Blood Cancer. I really don't know how am I going to face this girl again and how am I going to make up to her for what ever happened today. All this happened because of me. I never knew that hiding this small fact of being your daadima at the cost of loosing that friendship.

Now...just leave from here...I dont want to see your face even.

DAADIMA...I'm really sorry...please forgive me once...

Maan...what you've done today has put me into shame...I am Ashamed to relate you as my Grandson...I have never felt so low in my life. You know how much trust and respect Geet had for you...you washed away everything with your own bare hands. Now please leave me alone.

DAADIMA...Please relax...you have not been keeping well...I will sort it out...

Its too late Maan...its too late...Can you really imagine what you have gone and done today?

Maan closes his eyes...understanding the deapth of his own deeds

I want to see Geet...but how will I? Have you left me capable of even facing her? Get out...Get out before I loose patience.

Please Daadima...Let me stay with you for sometime.

OK...I will move from here

Daadima...please I'm leaving from here.

Maan collects all those certificates which were dropped down by Annie and he walks out of the room heading towards Annie's room. He reaches there to find the doors are locked from inside.

Annie...Annie please open the door.

She's not answering.

Annie...I have done a big mistake...punish me but dont stop talking to me...I cant take it.

There's no answer.

Annie..please listen to me once...

He had to leave and gets back to his room...places Annie's certificates in his cupboard.

He tried calling Geet on her mobile...he just wants to hear her...But she's not answering.

He tries to reach her on her land line. And Pinky picks the call.

Hello

Hello May I speak with Geet

Pinky's munching apple and all tensed...she's not at home...I am waiting for her for such a long time...we are suppose to go out...Oh why am I telling you all this? Who's this?

Pinky...Maan here

She gets nervous and didn't understand what to comment...Oh...hello sir...sorry sir...Geet is not come home yet. I even tried calling her on her mobile but no answer.

OK then...will call you back after sometime.

What shall I do? Where she would have gone at this time...I shouldn't have behaved with her this way. Something tells him that she would have gone back to that Ganesh Temple...may be that's the reason she has put her mobile in silence.

Maan was right at least this time...she did go back to Ganesh Temple...It was Nearing 8:00 PM...

Geet was at a state of shock...she didnt know why she's getting punished...She is looking at the Ganesh Idol with a blank note...She was just looking at the idol and tears starts welling her eyes...today even her mind is not talking to the god...but still she has some hopes to find some peace...Panditji came to her. She immediately covers her hand.

Geet bitiya...did you manage to find Savitri Devi's home?

Hmm...

Kaisi hain woh? (How's she?)

Geet answers in low voice...she's better

Bitiya..what happened to you? You sound a bit low.

Nothing Nothing Panditji...just wondering why God is putting me into tough situation.

Pandit keeps his hand on her head...Bitiya...God puts good people like you in tough situation but never betray them...You told me today is your Birthday right? Don't take any worries...leave it to Ganeshji.

Geet gives a weak smile wiping her tears and leaves from there.

She walks down the hill...it starts raining...she is standing in the same place where Maan helped her from falling down and how he lifted her...She closes her eyes to feel that every moment...Poi...Ellame Poi...(Lie...Everything is a lie). She doesn't want to know anything about it. She is feeling some kind of a suffocation surrounding her...she immediately calls for the taxi that's passing by and got in to it.

Just then Maan arrives there...he parks his car and reaches the temple top. His eyes desperately looking out for Geet. He's going to every corner of the temple hoping to find her.

Someone pats on his back...he turns to look at the Panditji

Beta...are you searching someone?

Ji...There's a girl who regularly comes to this temple.

May I know her name?

Geetika..I mean, Geet

Oh...yah...she was here sometime back

You are?

You must be knowing Savithri Devi...

Oh yes...I do...she regularly comes to our temple.

I am her Grandson...Maan.

Arre beta...Savithri Devi has told a lot about you...Also she keeps telling me that you dont visit temples. I am happy to see you here today.

Maan remains quite.

By the way Geet came to your home today right?

Ji...but how did you know?

She wanted to meet Savithri Devi ji but she didnt have the address...she took it from me.

Maan is speechless for the nth number of time...How he insulted her today by accusing she has been planning this for long time to come to his home. If it was true, she wouldnt have taken the adress from here today.

Poor Girl..she was really worried for Savithri ji...she didnt care about her birthday...all she was bothered is to meet Savithri ji

BIRTHDAY?

Haan beta...today is Geet's Birthday...She had taken my blessings.

He just walks back and slowly turns around...

Maan beta...

Pandit has been calling for his name

Maan beta...take Prasad...

but he doesn't turn around to see...he keeps walking towards the stairs that take him downhill. He's walking down slowly like a blind man.

TODAY IS HER BIRTHDAY...AND...How could I...She came to the manscion to check Daadi's health even on her birthday...Daadi didnt tell me this...that means, Daadi doesnt know that its Geet's birthday today...Oh No...He bangs his right hand on one of the wall...

He walks towards his car...The rain has started catching its speed...He dials Geet's mobile again...but still no answer.

At Pinky-Geet res...

Geet walks in hiding her scars in her hand. Pinky runs to her...

GEET...GEET...Where were you? I have been trying to reach you for almost one hour.

Geet remains quite...Pinky pats Geet on her Shoulder...

GEEET...Kya hua?

I am sorry Pinky...I will not be able to take you for a treat today.

Woh...daadi forced me to have dinner at her place...I dint want to disappoint her as she wasn't keeping well. Sorry dear...I didnt get a chance to keep you informed about this. I promise to take you for a treat some other day.

Arre Geet...its ok yaar. How's Daadi?

She's feeling better now.

But Geet...why are you so low?

Nothing Pinky

No...there's something wrong..please tell me.

Geet's breaks down crying...

Geet...kya hua? Pinky rests her hand on Geet's shoulder

Geet hugs Pinky...Nothing...I am missing my family. You know verywell...this is the first Birthday without them being around.

Pinky breaks the hug and wipes Geet's tears...I can understand dear...but you were so happy since morning...you were so excited about your Birthday...Why am I feeling there's some other reason behind it? Geet...please don't hide anything from me...did anyone hurt you?

NO...NO Pinky...I have given you true reason. I am once again sorry...I am not able to treat you today...what will you do for dinner?

Don't worry about me yaar...My Machine is on all the time...I will order something ...Are you sure you don't want to have anything now?

I am done with my dinner...In fact...I am feeling so heavy on my tummy...she gives a fake smile.

Geet helps herself with a glass of water. Only she knew that she was about to sip water when Maan came there and...she closes her eyes with pain.

Pinky...I am really tired...It was a real busy day for me...

Pinky hugs her ...Good Night Geet...I really wish you had enjoyed your Birthday to the fullest. Geet's is not able to control her tears falling down her cheeks...she wipes her tears before breaking the hug. Good Night Pinky...and she gets into her room and locks it.

Pinky smiles at her...somewhere she know that Geet is not herself...something has happened and she is trying to hide it. Just then the home phone rings again.

Hello

Hello Pinky...did Geet come back home?

Sir..she just reachec home...I am really sorry...I missed to inform her that you had called. She has got into her room. Please wait...I will call her.

NO...Please dont disturb her..I will speak to her tomorrow.

Sir..Are you sure? You might have called her for some important work.

No...I had called her casually...

Oh...I guess you had called her to wish on her Birthday...Am I correct?

Maan is tensed...not able to understand what to comment.

You know sir...how much she wished that her boss will call her and wish her today...

Maan closes his eyes with pain...

Please wait...I will call her...she will be so happy to know that you called her to wish her..

PINKY...PINKY...Please...I will meet her tomorrow...Did she have anything for dinner?

Woh Sir...Geet told me that she had her dinner in the place where she had been...

He's going restless now...She didn't tell Pinky about what ever happened...Dinner? I am so cruel to have not allowed her to even have that glass of water she was holding...What a Birtday treat I have given her...Oh no..what have I gone and done.

Hmm...I have a request...

Yes sir

Dont tell her that I had called...Let her take rest.

Sure sir

At Geet's room...

Geet doesn't even change her dress which was soaked in rain water. She is sitting in one corner of the floor crying endlessly...She is angry on herself to have such a blind faith on someone who doesn't even deserve it. Mr. Maan Singh Khurana...I had so much respect for you...why did I ever trust you so much? I wouldn't disagree to myself that I did have a soft corner for you...but I never knew you are such a big shot who values everything in terms of money...YES...if at all I was a rich girl, you would have welcomed me to your house...You proved yourself to be yet another rich guy who would care only for money. I remembered you when my Paati (Grandmother) in her death bed had asked me if I like some one...Why did I? At that time, I never knew your name even. Today for the first time, I am angry on my God...Why did I get to meet you again? Why? Just to know that you hate me...you disrespect me and my family...What did I do to get this hatred from you? Please tell me. I hate my self to have trusted you...to have ever liked you.

She didnt want to look at Maan's face again in her life... She takes a notepad and starts writing her resignation letter...She stops half a way... Appa Ammavuku enna badil solven? (What will I tell my parents?) I will need to look out for another job and I know I will not get it that easily...I have only two months experience. I can't tell Appa-Amma about what all happened here...If they ever come to know, they will never allow me to stay back here in Delhi... she closes her eyes with disgust... Ippodhaiku ennala indha velaiyai vida mudiyaadhu (I cannot leave this job for now). I will change from this job only when I have another job in my hand...If this ruthless person wants to kick me out of my job, let him do so. I will not be surprised with this act any ways.

Maan is relieved to have known that Geet has reached back home safely. He comes back to his Mansion. The entire Mansion seems to be deserted...Today for the first time he hated this place. He hated everything...He remembers the first time he had been to Geet's home...how she treated him with respect...how she forced him to at least have a cup of coffee...and she visited my home for the first time...and...He's really ashamed of what he's gone and done. Daadi is correct...I am not a human being..I am an animal. How will I ever face her? I know after all this happened, she may not wish to even look at me...Why Why did I behave like this? Just to control my feelings? And why did I bother so much seeing her with Yash...without knowing the other side of the story...I didn't even allow her to speak...

Precap: Maan knowing more truths

Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome Di !!!!!!!!!! i am speechless. Maan desrves this.

When he will come 2 knw abt Yash n Meera story n also abt d Bank lone story then he will surely hate himself. Poor Geet . Will wait 4 d next part eagerly. Thnx 4 updating quickly.😊.🤗
Edited by maanluvsgeet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awsome yaar ..
maan deserves this ..
i wish he got some more of left & right ..
paavam yaar geet .. let her be in peace for sometime ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
gosh what a mindblowing update lakshmi...
maan deserves this and many more slaps...
he loves jumping to conclusions...
this is just the beginning of the torment he is going to face...
when yash and meera story and the bank loan story will unfold, he will hate himself to the core...but i guess by the time it will be too late to mend anything...
i want maan to do some papad belofying and try to woo geet back...
i love this ff very much
keep writing sweetie
love u and ur ffs loads

reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
super plzzz update another one if possible by today plzzz

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