MG HISTORICAL FF:MYTH-AWALK INTO THE PAST~epilogue - Page 84

Originally posted by: arushi_05

hay madhu

the update was

i m sorry for not commenting for last part .

wo i thought , i will coment today , & when i logged in , i found that u updated the ff

now abt update

it was awesome & i was speechless by it ,

at the begining when maan was ferious , i was thinking what wil he do to make her remember

& then when they reached the cliff again , i was relifed that chalo maan did the very right thing

,she heard her own voice,'Maanavendra'

she started to remember a little , but when she again said to maan that she is not able to remember any thng

, i felt like what is going to happen now , if she dont then what ,

Maan smiled sadly.At the same place she had claimed him,their love,the symbol of their love their son! And today she is claiming it to be a myth!

i really felt bad for maan , as he was tring hard to make her remember , but all went in vein

He started beating the dhol.In the same way as before,

then i was thinking geet will remember every thing

& then they were soroundered by nt & abhya & force

the shool on the hand of the lord shiva fell on the rock breaking the termite shell !
Geet tripped on a stone and fell at the foot of the rock!

this was it now she know al the past , was soo happy aat that point

the scean of maaneet meeting was sooo gud it felt devine

& then this nt & abhya

both r really evil yaar

Arjun pointed the gun at Maan and then at Geet and finally at NT!

oye ye acchanak kya ho gaya ??????

ye arjun kabse nt ke khilaf hogaya ???????????

Tumhare jyotish ne tumhe sab kuch bataya sirf iske alawa ki tumhare veer Arjun Rathore hi Prithviraj Rathore he

oye hoye , me dancing now his is the best thing , all have taken re birth

yes yes yes nt shot dead by arjun

ismey nafrat ka zeher bhara hua tha.Ishwar isey agle janm me insaan bana de!

perfect lines to explain nt's character , in her both janams

wow abhya dead againg in same way

really tthats the best of all the parts

& now arjun did every thing for folks

& yeh yeh yeh maaneet got married , finally yehipeee

oye hoye maaneet romancing ,

thats sooo cute

dear i wrote what i was feling when i was reading this is diectlly from heart

yaar i m sooo much thanx full to u for making this ff

this ff made us sooo dear friend , & i rally loved itt

now i wil learn tamil & i will try watching this movie

love u dear

@harshdb

yaar i loved ur comments

succhi u rocks yarr

this is for u & madhu

just finished all rge 30 parts all together...simply loved it

Sorry to keep u all waiting...

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here is the final one!!!!!!!!!

EPILOGUE :

Seven years later,

Geet came back to home after one more tiring xpedition in Hyderabad.

Dadi:beta ap a gayi
Geet: ji dadima
Dadi: shukar he.2 weeks ap nhe thi aur Maan ne pura ghar sar pe uthake rakh diya
Geet (smiles): waise IG sahb ki khabar to me baad me le lungi.pata he dadima mujhe lene airport tak nhe aye.
Dadi: hmm..wo strike chal rhe he na.Pata nhe kab kuch unrest hoga.Aur unka press conference bhi tha thodi der pehle.
Geet: janti hu dadima.Me to bas mazak kar rhe thi.
Dadi(patted her cheek): Geet ap thak gayi he.Jaake aram kar lijiye.
Geet:ji dadima.

As she fell on the bed,she heard some 'hoo-haa' sounds from the gym.
Geet: lekin unka to press-conference he abhi.
She went to the gym and tried hard to suppress her laughter and amusement with the sight in front of her.
A cute young Devadutt,5 years old in his black track pants is sweating badly.His cheeks were red with rage and he kept on hitting the punching bag.

Geet:kya baat he Dev? Ap naraz ho?
Dev turned around his back facing her reminding her of her angry Maan!
Dev:mom,wo school me us Hattan ne mujhe challenge kiya he.
Geet: ab kya keh diya Hattan ne?
Dev: that he will defeat me in the duel tomorrow! Uski himat kaise hui ki wo Devadatt Singh Khurana ko challenge karey?
Geet(self-thot): babaji! Play school me duel!
Maan hugged her from back.
Maan: zyada mat socho mishty! Thats not his fault.
Geet:ha ye sab apki wajah se he.
Dev:mom,ap dad ko kyu blame kar rhe ho?Ap janti he na ki Devadutt Singh Khurana kabhi kisi se haar nhe manta.
Geet:hmm..yehi to problm he.Dekho Dev,apne gussey par kaabu rakho.
Maan: Geet tum to mere bete ko darpok bana dogi!
Devadutt immediately ran to hug his dad
Geet:aey lo ban gayi na papa aur bete ki team ab me ja rhe hu.

Dev cutely lukd at his dad.Maan blinkd his eyes assuring that 'me hu na'
Maan: acha Dev,tumne wo shot practise ki jo mene tumhe sikhaya

Dev excitedly moved his hand on air showing the shot.
Dad and son had a fair learning session.

Geet went back to their bedroom.
Geet(self-talk): yeha me naraz hu aur un logo ko apni maar peet ki padi he.Dev to phir bhi bacha he par ye Maan..ek to mujhe lene bhi nhe aye aur ab..
Maan came to the room and shut the door.
Maan:to meri mishty mujse naraz he?
Geet:apki meethi meethi batey ap apne paas rakhiye.
Maan pulled her to the bed.
Maan:ha..baato se me bhi bore ho gaya hu..
Geet: Maan,ap Devadutt ko samjhane ki jagah usey bigad rhe he..
Maan: cmon Geet,ab mene kya kiya?
Geet: He is only 5 aur abhi se he is learning tai-chi.wat if he gets hurt?
Maan kisses on her cute cheeks.
Maan: Darling he loves doin that.
Geet: Maan!
Maan:dekho Geet ab tum iske liye sirf mujhe blame nhe kar sakti.
Geet: kyu?ap hi ne usey..
Maan: ab agar uskey papa Maanavendra aur ma Rajput ki raani he to its quite natural na..
Geet blushd.Maan pulled off her sari and rested his head on her cleavage.
Maan: waise,we can do one thing.
Geet:kya?
Maan:lets have a little princess just like my mishty..
Geet blushed.She played with his shirt buttons unbuttoning them slowly...
Geet: u dont have to work on it.Wo..aj subah Dr.Preeti ne mere reports confirm kiye.
Maan(delightd): sach?
Geet nodded for a yes.

Maan pinned her down to the bed..
Geet: Maan Dev..
Maan: wo practice kar rha he. And i hav lockd the door.
He didnt let her utter a word more as they shed their barriers and he loved his queen as lovingly as ever...The passion was always the same or even more intense as time passd by...

Maan and Geet are together the epitome of true love...years or even centuries may pass...it would be out of the imaginations of people to believe that such true love ever existd in this world...This truth may be regarded as a myth but time and again they vl prove this myth to be true and adorn the world with their pure love!!!

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