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abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
when r u updating the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

when r u updating the next part





not today
restless and tired dear
tommrow pucca

love,
abi
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I M SO SORRY...SORRY SORRY SORRY...4R REPLYNG LATE...BUT I M LIL BUSY WID MY STUDIES N WORK...BUT ONE THING I MISSED ALL...SOOO SORRY ONCE AGAIN...N YES ONE THING PART 44 IS BRILLIANT N PART 45...HNMMM I HAVENT READ IT YET BUT 4R SURE AT MORNG GNG TO READ IT AS SOON AS I WAKE UP...SOOO CONGO ABI 4R SUCH A HIGH UPDATE...LUKING FRWRD WID HIGH DEMAND...HAHAHAHA...KEEP UPDATING LKE DIS...MISS U N UR UPDATE...
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Posted: 14 years ago
KK .. Wow..was shocked to know Geet's past ... Wonderful update .. thanks continue soon :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u for the all the PMs nice to read they are together now, will her dad be back now?
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART:46
geet is too happy today she did not no why bu today she is in love...she can think about that she is in true love...she is not getting the sleep also
she want to be in the mann's arms but dont no how she want to be in arms forever she is so happy she felt this happiness should not leave her and go...she close her eyes in happiness and smile on her face
that is the precious morning to the geet starting of a new life she dont no why but she want to dance and say to everyone that she is in love with mann...eventhough she is in fear but she want to be out of that fear...she want to share this first with her bai so she ran to meet him...he is with all in the hall...even mann is present there...he saw geet and just stare at her
he saw some spark in her eyes that was never there when she saw mann she automatically blushing her cheeks are turning in pink mann had seen that and he gives a smile to geet
het geet !!!!!!! why are standing com here said nikhil !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
bai pls come i should say onething to u
what !!!!!!! say na
no bai pls come with me bai she draged him...mann wnat to know but he thought that is sister & brother matter...

bai u know today i m so happy !
why ?
becoz yesterday night i said mann everything bai about my past and all
he accpeted me bai
u mean u said i love u to him...no bai still not but yes i said him offcially that i am his
wow geet !!!!!!!!!!! u are becoming bold u not even said me ha ...why to say bai?
really !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
he want to catch the geet ...she is running and pls bai leave me not again
all are seeing them running here and there and karan & dadimaa had tears seeing the happiness in geet life...
pls bai...finally they got him so what u say?
u are the best !!!!!!!!!!
love u geet...me too bai
oh even we are there here not only u both says dev!!!!!!!!!!!!
nikhil hug her half and geet too and all laugh whole heartedly
i know ok then shall we have breakfast pls...all moved to the table this time nikhil gave place to beside geet to mann so that they ll be close to eachother...
mann took that advance...and he catch her hand put his leg on her feet ...
she suddenly chuckles with his act she dont no how to react?
she gives mann a glare but he no where to listen she pleads him but he says i have the right !!!!!!
at that moment dev mobile fall down and while he is going topick up he sees what mann is doing?
he reallt feel to fall becoz the great MSK is in romantic mood so he want to take the advantage...

bro i think u should check once to the eye doctor!!!!!!!
eye doc why dev!!!!!
becoz u are catching geet hand instead ur hand bro so i thought u may need a doctor ...everyone gaze moves to mann at once and he feels embrace at ...
ha...woh actually i did not seen
geet u know na why u did not sat bro!!!!!!!!
shirt up dev spat mann...ok bro we ll but i f u want w can go for doc...
i said shirt up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
everyone are laughing keeping there head now mann can see that and he also smile with everyone
but seeing dev he want to leave from there
seeing that geet ran behind him and say behalf of dev i m sorry pls have the breakfast catching her ears she say
he smiles seeing the childish ness of geet
see bro my babi is the best !!!!!!!!
babi says geet ?
yes geet see now u are taking such care of my bro and i can see the love in ur faces then why not?
what u say dadi?
yes beta karan if u dont mind i want to arrange the marriage soon...geet get tensed by the word marriage
mann can see that and say we want some time dadimaa pls not now only...but beta !!!
mann shows dadimaa geet face with the help of his eyes and she understood and say ok beta as u wish !!!!!!!!
geet feel relaxed and she says thanx to mann with her eyes only
that day geet is very happy how she is thinking life is going like that after many days
she had a family now...and soon she l be going to another family whom she knew
dev her best mate and dadimaa and meera
she is veryhappy...she dont no how to say that happiness and whom to say but she is happy
mann comes from back and say what r u thinking mishti!!!!!!!!!!
mishti who is she ?
u ...geet i never been so much happy before but today i m so happy
yes mann not only u even me myself is happy today...
at that moment snow is falling...mann u know u love the snow and rainfall...
ya i do
it ll be great in snow mann u dont no how the time passess in this
i like to make snow bears a lot...me and bai use to make
mann is lost in her childishness and innocent way she is talking he feels that still she is a kid
suddenly he pulls her back and hold her in his arms
she dont no what to say but she loved it...
she is in his arms
i want to be like this forever...hearing that he says u ll be geet but i think i cant get snow in delhi but i ll try for u...
i want to say something ...yes u may on
she is still in his arms
i love u mann...
i love u more than my life...my breath...my happiness...everything mann...
i love u
mann is just staring at her he dont no how much happy he is now
he just see him to say him those words he can understand what she wants and he also say
i love u geet...than me
they both close there eyes in the love embrace they are...they dont no how much they are in that way hours are passing but they are like that
they can hear some giggles near them
when they opned there eyes they can see nikhil & meera & dev are smiling seeing them
they came out of the embrace and says nothing is going on...
trio says yes we know nothing is going on...
wowww bro u are so romantic and geet too yaar
mann u and geet are perfect dude !!!!!!!
yes jijaji ...
they all feel happy but geet is in little embrace mann can notice that but he is also in that
they says this is late night so pls we all go for sleep now
mann and geet dot want to be away from eachother...but still they should
they say good night with eyes and they left


precap:first kiss


sorry for mistakes hope this is long update
sorry i said na i m suffering from asthama so i cant update yesterday
hope u all love it

pls do comment
press like button...pls do comment



Edited by abisamratgunjan - 14 years ago
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part waiting 4 their first kiss
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww superb story nice
great work
thanks keenu
😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome update...
loved it...
atlast they confessed their love with those magical words...
continue soon dear...:)
precap first kiss.. wow very much excited...


jyothi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothinajo

wow awesome update...
loved it...
atlast they confessed their love with those magical words...
continue soon dear...:)
precap first kiss.. wow very much excited...


jyothi




mee too exited dear

love,
abi

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