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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: missglam

Great update!!! thanx hun...glad u liked it😊

u r a terrific writer...awww thankuuu so much hun for such warmong words😊
I loved so many elements in this post...but there was one thing that i loved the most & it was.. A woman's independence..😊
kabir is such a sweetheart.. flirty 😉 hehehe...he is a kind of light elment in this whole story,,, he is full of life!!
& i'm so grateful to Dr.david...he is such a nice man..i wanted him to b just like carlisle bt quite young😉
OMG!!! the baby is trying to connect with his dad...YUUPPEEE...hope,abhay finds out soon...wait till nxt part😉
i felt really bad for abhay..even he is suffering from so much pain...poor Abhay! somewhere he is also responsible for this pain..
eagerly waiting for the next part..continue soon..surely try to do!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: abhiora

awesome update thanx dear...😊 glad u liked it 😊!!!!can undestand abhiya pain..sad...don't b sad yaar.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: minibsp2007

Wow .. great update thanx hun, glad u liked it😊 , eagerly waiting for the moment when the child will connect to Abhayjust wait till nxt part and Abhay-piya came face to face. av some more patience then...😊😉

Thanks for the PM😊 ma pleasure

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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Selinapiya

Sorry for the late reply...dats completely fine😊...no need of sry dear😊

Awesome update..thanx n glad u liked it😊.I'm really sad...Piya and Abhay both are in pain..oh dear...this bad face wl come to an end😉 bt nt very soon😆
My blood is boiling because of this good for nothing Maithili... the i m sure after reading nxt ch u wl kill her😆
Update soon..😊😃😛 surely try to do so😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: minahil1997

owesom heena...👏 thanx alot mizz...glad dat u liked it😊


i m sorry heena , i didnt had any time to reply to ur last chapter bt that was truly amazing arey no need of sry swts...dats completely fine...😊, u wrote pia's feelings owesomly👏 thankuu so much, poor abhay he had no mean to hurt pia , he loved her dearly ... it was pia who missunderstood him bt it was nt pia's fault either , anyone could have missunderstood seeing his boyfriend hugging anyother girl....minz u wl come to knw abt this whole track in nxt part...just nt hug...there was much more than this b/w mathali n abhay!!

the new chapter was amazing and so long😳 ... i loved it awww thanx dear , pia as a mother was so protective to her child ... the child is trying to connect to her father , that is owesum... i hope abhay finds out soon and come to help pia av some patience dear...n abt hepling..i don't think so dat pia wl accept his ny help so easily..this is going to b tricky😉... jemey is such a great friend and kabir too ... i hope dr david proves to be great help and he stands by pia ..at preasent even i don't knw wat wl b d future of his character in ma ff😆. loved the both updates and continue soon..surely try to do so. love you🤗luv u tooo swts😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Gals_11

Awesome FF yaar..thanx dear...glad u r liking it😊 Do add me 2 ur pm list..wl surely do so Continue soon..try to do asap 😊lol.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zoozoo123

oh god...Im feeling sooo bad 4 Piya...😭😭😭...Piya...Ok i wnt call her brave...She is a mother...n Maa akhir maa hoti hai...Yaya ...I know its a filmy dialogue...bt kya karu films zyada dekhti thi...😆😆😆 hehehe...she is an independent gal...bt ofcourse she is a would mother n as u said ma to ma hoti n here to she is gng to become mom of abhay's child...to over protective hona to need hai 😆😆

I m J of ur writing...Lol itne saare acche ff writers hai ki ...me to ek post banane se bhi darti hu...😆😆😆...Seriously dude...U r really awesum writer.awww thanx alot hun...u r so damn sweet😊.😉.Dil ko chuuu liya...
Haila...baby ...apne daddy dearest se contact kar rhi hai...Daddy jaldi aao na...n Mommy ka BP control karo na...😆😆😆...BP...pia ka BP to high figh ho jjayega abhay ke aane se😆
I hope daddy dearest ko dekhkar mommy ka BP badh na jaye...😆😆😆. yahi hoga..wait n watch..Dr.David...Im thinking of Dr.Carislle...He is sooo Handsome...yup he is 😉😆
Wow...wonderful update...itni tareef ki hai...jaldi update kar dena...😆😆😆..omg...itni rishvat...😆😆.becoz if u get late thn I will star singing...😆😆😆...i would like to hear dat...bt surely i wl try to update soon😆😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
part-3



flash back
abhay's pov

she left me...widout listening 2 me...i never wanted this pia...i never wanted to hurt u like this...i never wanted to come into ur life...even though i knew... u gt feelings for me frm d very starting of this whole journey...bt pia i always wanted u 2 b happy bt i knw watever i av done i cn't undo it...i m sry pia..i m sorry
wen he suddenly felt someone's hand on his shoulder...
he looked at d person frm those teary eyes...n just stood frm his place n holding dat gal frm her both shoulder...mathali...luk wat v av done to this innocent gal...i wl nt b able to forgive myself ever...
mathali- abhay stop it...y r u behaving like a fragile human...u knw very well v need dat gal...v need her baby for our clan...v planned out this ...this was our plan...coz being my doppelganger...she hasn't gt ny powers bt i knew dat her and a vampire's child(means ur) wl become d most powerful vampire of our whole clan..(a hybrid child)...u agreed this...then y this regret nw
abhay(just stop it mathali)- i knw dat i agreed coz of our clan bt frm d very starting of all this i decided dat i wl tell her d whole truth n i never thought of going so close to her...after knwing her for few days...i decided dat i cn't play wid her life just coz of our clan...bt i don't knw y this all happened...
mathali- wat r u saying abhay, v need her baby...
abhay(who was at d urge of slapping mathali...just controlled himself)- mathali r u just out of ur mind...listen to me mathali...there is no point in talking abt ma n pia's baby...forget it...
mathali(now angry)- wat d hell r usaying abhay i want dat child at ny cost...
abhay- mathali pls try to understand...its abt her life...v cn't play wid someone's life...v av already done an hindous crime by playing wid d emotions n life of an innocent soul..
mathali-...v r dead abhay, v don't av ny feelings ...n i just knw one thing i need dat gal n i need her baby...n i wl get her frm ny corner of this universe
abhay(was shocked at mathali's words...he has never seen her like this)- mathali don't u dare think of touching her...i m going to erase each n every moment she spent wid me frm her memory...n v r going 2 leave this place asap...
mathali(now out of control)- wat d hell is wrong wid u abhay...r u out of ur mind??...i m nt going nywhere...i want her n her baby at ny cost...i was waiting for this whole thing frm so many years...n nw u r saying this... u r good for nthing abhay...i want her child coz only then i cn become d most powerfull vampire of this whole clan...only d scarifice of dat child wl give me immense powers which no one cn have
abhay was hell shocked...watever mathali said like a bolt frm blue for him)...wat r u saying mathali...u ...i mean...u wanted me to do this coz of our clan...n scarifing her child ...frm where did this come...wat powers mathali...
mathali- (frustrated)- abhay i m nt an emotional fool like u ...u r a big blot on whole vampire clan...u knw abhay there r only few lucky vampire's who got this chance once in 1000 of yrs to get this power...n i m d one...pia has taken birth just for me...n her child wl take birth also for me...for making me d most powrful vampire of this whole clan...
abhay( he was feeling like someone has stabbed him n helplessely he said... n wat abt our love mathali-
mathali(like did't care at all)- i love u abhay bt nt more than those powers which i cn get by scarificing dat child of dat stupid, idotic gal...
abhay( eyes full of anger)- he slapped mathali...how dare u...u used me...u knw wat u r disgusting mathali...i cn't believe u played wid ur love...n i played wid pia's life coz of u...how cn u do this mathali...u proved it mathali dat u r a vampire...who doesn't av heart...u used ur own love...how shamefull is dat
mathali(couldn't believe dat abhay slapped her for dat gal)...nw u wl see abhay...what wl i do to her
abhay(trying nt to kill her at dat only moment)- mathali u wl never able to reach her...u cn't even touch her shadow...so its completely useless thinking of hurting her..
mathali(brining back her cunning smile)- u knw wat abhay...i cn find her anywhere in this whole universe ...just coz of u...coz u knw she is connected to u n i cn connect myself to u nytime...
abhay(couldn't believe dat mathali cn do all this)-nt so easily mathali...till i m here u cn't even think of touching her...n he suddenly closed his eys n broke his connection wid piya at dat moment nly...
abhay(pain was visible in his eyes)- look mathali nw i av broken ma all connections wid pia...n nw she is d only one who connect me to her...bt she wl never do so..coz she hates me n dats coz of u...
mathali while holding her collars..u cn't do this to me abhay...u cheated me.. for dat b*****h
abhay(while pushing her far away frm him)- if u don't want me to kill u ...then just leave...coz i cn't kill u...coz i loved u ...bt u knw wat mathali..i av realised one thing dat watever was b/w us was nt true...coz if it would av been den ofcourse i wouldn't av fallen for pia...u knw wat watever happened b/w us last night was nt coz u planned it...it happened coz i loved her...i love her mathali...n i m thankfull to u...coz of u i av fallen for such an innocent pure n beautiful soul...i felt alive mathali after 100 of years coz of her presence in ma life...ma heart again started betting...it never happened wen i was wid u mathali...so thanx to u (he said dat wid a praise in his voice n pain of mathali's betrayal n wat happened coz of dat)
mathali( was nw hell shocked at abhay's words)-abhay wat
abhay(cutting her in b/w) leave mathali...i don't want to hurt u...
mathali- abhay i wl find her one day n dats my promise...i wl not leave her...she wl av to pay for al this n she left dat place while huffing...

abhay went all into tears...i love u pia...pls come back...i knw pia u wl never forgive me...bt plss come bck ...i love u...i cn't think f my life wid u..watever happened b/w us was true, was pure, dat was just out of love nthing else...he said while again falling on his knees there in d jungle only...he was completely heart broken...

..................

time was flying for piya...although everything was normal xcept her abnormal pregnancy syndromes ..bt now she understood dat these syndromes r normal in her case...bt one thing she was reli worried abt was abhay's connection wid her daughter...although she knew dat it doesn't matter even if abhay wl come to knw abt this coz acc to her abhay never loved her he used her...bt somewhere in her heart she knew dat watever she is thinking...everything wl go opposite of it or may b she wants everything to go opposite of her thoughts for abhay n on d other side time has stopped for abhay there only where pia left her
...
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almost after 1 month


pia(talking to herself)- i don't knw bt i think david was wrong abt dat connection thing coz if it would av been ,then abhay must tried to contact me...sudddenly coming out of her thoughts wat d hell r u thinking pia...even if ma daughter has got connected wid him, y d hell he wl come here to meet me by leaving HER!!! ( n again d picture of abhay n mathali's hug came infront of her big brown eyes n she just closed her eyes for once)
pia stood frm her place n coming out of her room...oh GOD(while placing her soft hands delicately on her stomach)- oh angel y u always feel hungry at al d odd times...u knw its 2 a.m...n above this nw u want to have pasta ...n jamey is also sleeping otherwise she must av cooked it for us...
pia moved towards kitchen...
...
in india

abhay was sitting near d window of his room...it was raining outside n a beautiful n light weather .. bt somewhere abhay's life was full of darkness...this darkness was nt coz of him being a vampire ...it was coz of d guilt his heart filled wid
...
abhay's eyes were closed when again he heard d same voice...ummm
abhay opened his eyes wid a jerk n again he heard...ah um oh um um...kinda sounds
abhay this time tried to connect wid d voice...he closed his eyes slowly...n started feeling someone's presence...
i cn feel u...pls tel me who r u abhay said while keeping his voice soft n low...
n again he heard something bt this time quite clear...its me... ( in a baby's voice)
abhay couldn't believe on his ears...he heard a baby's sound...he was sure of it bt who's???
abhay again (politely)...k bt y r u trying to connect me n how do u knw me...
there was no reply this time...on d other side pia was feeling something inside her...bt she was aving her pasta n she thought this could b her angel's new supernatural activity...
...
abhay on d other hand trying to connect to dat voice...getting impatient...thousands of questions were running in his mind
then again he heard dat voice... me...me...its me...ma mom's angel...her daughter...
abhay (trying best nt to scare her)- ok angel...bt where r u ??
voice- i m inside ma mom
abhay(gt a shock)- wat a baby in a someone's womb is trying to connect wid him bt y??
abhay(sgain politely) k n how cn u connect urself wid me?
voice- coz u r ma DAD...u r angel's dad...
abhay opened his eyes in horror ... wat DAD???

Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Nice concept
Poor Abhay and Piya
I know Abhay is not bad and he loves Piya
Nicely written I could feel Piya's pain
And the baby is a girl
How many updates are left for her birth sorry but I am really excited for the baby
Continue soon
Please add me to your PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: pari_smart

Nice concept thanx dear...glad u liked it😊
Poor Abhay and Piya
I know Abhay is not bad and he loves Piya ya he loves...bt ofcourse he has done some mistakes also
Nicely written I could feel Piya's pain thanx 😊
And the baby is a girl ya..u knw this is all kinda supernatural stuff
How many updates are left for her birth sorry but I am really excited for the baby ok ...bt cn't say nthing at present...bt ofcourse it wl nt take so long!!😉
Continue soon
Please add me to your PM list sure😊

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