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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

hey ridi... 😃

just read this FF...n its amazinggg...😳
u r just too gud...
👍🏼👏

i just died laughing reading the parts... where they ate maggie...n watched cartoons...n then the Biryani making...n cleaning the kitchen...🤣
gossshh they r mad...but wot a unique couple...BY GOD...😆😆
just luv reading it ...n enjoyed it lotsss...😳😆
well Love has its on ways...n it will struck them one Day...😉

plz do continue soon...n ya plz do pm me the next time u update...plzz..😳

Annu😃




its really great that u liked it...thank u so much...i'll surely pm u when i'll update it.😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Writer's note: hello friends...I'm back. sorry for being late but as you all know that how busy I'm now a days so I think all of you can understand...so here is today's update..I hope all of you'll like it...but before the update I want to tell you something...some of you asked me to start the love story of Mayur...but friends as I told you before when I started this ff that it's a complete madness...and you noticed that there were lots of question and exclamation marks on the title of this story...they also have some meaning ..In this story love will come in a very weird way...you already know this Mayank and Nupur...they don't believe in Love..for them Love is nothing...so how could you expect them to fall in love so easily...and if they fall how could you expect them to accept it so easily...so keep patience guys...you're going to get a weird story😉😆...I hope you'll enjoy that...now enjoy this update..

P.S. update on next page
Edited by -ridionasis- - 13 years ago
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07.




It seemed problems loved Mayank and Nupur. After giving so much effort they could manage a 'bai' but maximum day she didn't come….one day her daughter became sick…one day husband and one day she became sick….so bechara Mayank and Nupur still lived in Maggie. Today was one of those days when their bai didn't come…So after coming from work now they were eating their favorite food….yes you're right….they were eating Maggie….but their facial expression were telling as if they were eating the most bitter medicine of this world….

Nupur: aisa teri meri shakal maat bana. Tujhe dekke mere khane ka mood kharab ho rahi hey.

Mayank: meri chod tu apna shakal dekh.

Nupur: main khudki shakal nehi dekh sakti na isiliye koyi phadak nehi padhta ki main kaisi shakal bana rahi hoon..par main teri shakal dekh sakti hoon toh aisi shakal maat bana waisi hi main ye Maggie bahut mehnet se kha rahi hoon.

Mayank: aur main toh shokh se kha raha hoon na.

Nupur: ye sab teri galti hey…

Mayank: arre maine kya kya…….maine kaha tha bai ko na ane ke liye…

Nupur: nehi.par aagar tu meri baat manke shadi kar leti toh teri biwi toh aise nehi karti na…wo roj humhe khana banake khilati….humhe ye Maggie nehi khane parti..

Mayank: ha tere khane ke liye main apna zindegi barbaad karu..

Nupur: friend ke liye itna bhi nehi kar sakta!

Mayank: oye nautanki apna natak band kar…

Nupur: lo kar diya….par mere natak band karne se problem toh solve nehi hogi na.

Mayank: ha wo toh hey…..par main soch toh sakta hoon na…

Nupur: tu aur sochna..rehne de….pichle baar sochne beitha tha toh kya haal huya tha yaad hey…tu sochega toh main yaha bhuki maar jayungi…

Mayank: very funny…but for your kind information mane soch liya.

Nupur: assa…toh kya socha apne?

Mayank: hum ek shadi main ja rahe hey…

After hearing Mayank's words Nupur's mouth felt open…she knew that how much they both hated to attend any weeding and here Mayank was talking about to attend a weeding…it seemed Mayank lost his mind…b/w he had a mind? I didn't know that…rofl…

Nupur: wow socha toh socha kya idea socha….isse better hota aagar tu kehta chal Nupur hum gari ke niche kudh jate hey…fan se latak ne ko bhi kaun mana kar raha hey!

Mayank: meri puri baat toh sun….mujhe pata hey shadi attend karna kitna khatarnak idea hey…per tu bhul rahi hey shadi main ek cheez bahut assa hota hey.

Nupur: shadi aur assa…phir toh karela bhi sweet hote honge.

Mayank: tu itna hyper kyun ho rahi hey…..meri baat sun.

Nupur: suna….main bhi janna chahti hoon ki tu kitna pagal ho chukka hey.

Mayank: shadi ki khana…usko bhul gaya.

Nupur: arre ha yaar…shadi ka khana bahut assa hota hey…main toh bhul hi gayi….tu pehle nehi keh sakti thi…bekar main itna tension de raha tha.

Mayank: ha ye bhi meri hi galti hey na jo tu puri baat nehi sunti…

Nupur: thik hey thik hey itna bhau maat kha…chaal tayar hoke chalte hey khana khane.

Mayank: maine kab mana kiya…chal na.

They both stood up and going to their room to get ready when Mayank remembered something and he called Nupur…

Mayank: Nupur…

Nupur: kya huya?

Mayank: tere pass saree hey?

Nupur: kya?

Mayank: saree.wo jo aurte pehente hey…

Nupur: ha mujhe pata hey saree kya hey…par yaha saree kaha se a gayi.

Mayank: tere pass koyi assi saree hey pehle tu ye bata?

Nupur: kyun tu pehnega!

Mayank: very funny…main nehi tu pehnegi.

Nupur: kya? Tu pagal ho gaya kya…..main aur saree..main shadi main ja rahi hoon iska matlab ye nehi hey ki main bhi apni dimag kho chuki hoon..

Mayank: phirse hyper ho rahi hey..puri baat toh sun.

Nupur: tu aj baat hi aisa kar raha hey ki na chahte huye bhi hyper ho jati hoon.

Mayank: I know ki kuch ajib hey par yaar tujhe saree pehne padhegi.

Nupur: kyun? Saree pehenke nehi jayungi toh wo log khane nehi denge kya.

Mayank: exactly.

Nupur: kya?

Mayank: actually iss shadi ka dress code saree hey..women are wearing saree and men are wearing sherwani….

Nupur: kiss gadhe ne ye dress code decide kiya?

Mayank: uss gadhe ne jo shadi kar rahe hey..

Nupur: phir toh inse hum aur kya expect kar sakte hey…assa hum kiske shadi main ja rahe hey?

Mayank: mere ek senior doctor ki…

Nupur: hm…thik hey dekhti hoon kuch dang ka saree hey ki nehi….iss papi pet ke liye kya kya karna padhta hey yaar.

Mayank: hm…assa chal ready ho jate hey.

They both went to get ready. After one hour Mayank was ready in a cream color sherwani with white embroidery on it but there was no sign of Nupur…Mayank was waiting for her impatiently in living room…

Mayank: Nupur aur kitna waqt lagega?

Nupur answered him from her room…..

Nupur: rukh ho gaya….main a rahi hoon.

After almost ten minutes Nupur came out from her room. Mayank was surprised…no no not surprised….he was shocked to see Nupur.. It couldn't be Nupur…Nupur was like him.. and this Nupur…she was looking like a…..like a…. girl…ya it was right that Nupur was a girl but Mayank never noticed her as a girl. She was his best buddy man.. And this who was standing before him right now was a totally different person….she was a very beautiful girl. Actually the most beautiful girl he had ever seen… Nupur was wearing a white saree with matching silver ear rings and bangles. Her hair was open. She applied some make up. She was looking so different from the usual Nupur.

Nupur noticed that Mayank was staring at her…it seemed he was shocked…Nupur called him by his name which brought him back to the world…

Nupur: Mayank…

Mayank: ha…

Nupur: kya huya?

Mayank: ap kaun hey?

Nupur: kya?

Mayank: ap kaun hey? Aur Nupur kaha hey?

Nupur: Mayank majak maat kar…main waise bhi freaked out ho rahi hoon. b/w how do I look? Sab thik thak hey na?

Mayank: Nupur you're looking so different.

Nupur: asse wala different ya bura wala.

Mayank: of course asse wala.par!

Nupur: I know..kuch ajib lag rahi hoon na.

Mayank: ha yaar…Nupur jaisa bilkul nehi lag rahi hey.

Nupur: isiliye main ye saree nehi pehna chahti..kitna ajib lagta hey.aur iske sath jewelry bhi pehni padhti hey aur thori make up bhi karni padhti hey…so disgusting!

Mayank: hm..poor you.

Nupur: ya poor me.b/w tu is sherwani main bhi kafi assa lag raha hey.

Mayank: kya assa mera dam ghut raha hey.

Nupur: mujhe toh iss saree main bahut maja a raha hey na..

Mayank: assa chal jaldi jake khana khake ate hey.

Nupur: ha chal..

They both left their house and went to the weeding. Whole journey they were normal. They were talking to each other like they talked to each other normally. Mayank overcame those strange feeling which was arose when he saw Nupur in saree. Now they became the best buddy again. They both reached the weeding hall. There were lots of noises… lots of people…lots of hungama…. Which they both didn't like…actually its better to say they hated it…

Nupur: yaar…kitna hungama hey?

Myank:hm…chal jaldi khana khake bhagte hey.

Nupur: hm…chal.

Then they both entered the hall. First half an hour they talked to the people. They wished the couple. After sometimes Myank was going to talk to his colleagues when Nupur was talking with some other people. Suddenly Mayank's eyes caught Nupur and those strange feeling came again….he was staring at Nupur…but suddenly he realized what he was doing…he kicked himself in mind….

Mayank: Mayank tu ye kya kar raha hey…wo Nupur hey koyi tandoori chicken nehi ki tu usse aisa gurta rahega…jis kam ke liya aya hey wo pura kar…

Then Mayank went to Nupur.

Nupur: tu kaha chala gaya tha.

Mayank: main toh yehi tha. Assa chal khana khate hey.

Nupur: ha chal.main iss saree main jaida der nehi reh sakti..

Mayank (under his breathe) aur main tujhe iss saree main jaida der nehi dekh sakta.

Nupur: oye kya barbara raha hey?

Mayank: kuch nehi..chal khana khate hey.

Then they both went to the food and enjoyed their food. After taking their food they left that place as soon as possible. They reached their house.

Nupur: thank God ye hungama khatam huyi.

Mayank: ha yaar…itna ajib lag raha tha.

Nupur: hm…shadi hey ajib toh lagegi.assa chal good night…

Mayank: good night.

After wishing each other they went to their respective room. Nupur went her room and changed her saree and directly went to sleep. Mayank did the same but he couldn't go to sleep directly. Something was bothering him. So he was sorting out that problem by talking with himself.

Mayank: Mayank sab kuch thik hey…kuch nehi huya…actually tujhe ajib iss liye laga kyunki Nupur aj bahut ajib lag rahi thi…ab Nupur saree pehnegi toh ajib hi lagegi na…isme badhi baat kya hey…..par hey toh wo Nupur hi hey na…teri best buddy….aur aisa ajib tu kabhi aur feel nehi karega kyunki Nupur kabhi aur saree pehnegi nehi…so chill dude…..aur so ja. Kal subah uthna hey.

Then Mayank went to sleep. According to himself he was alright and everything was alright. Let's see he was right or wrong….


Love
Ridi

Edited by -ridionasis- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
At last!!!!!!!!
u updated!!!!!!!!
love u...

awesome update...
loved it lodsss...
By God...khane ke liye weeding attend karne gaye the yeh dono...hehe😆
sooo akhir Mayank ko kuch kuch ajib ho hi gaya...By God!!!!!!!!
dis is gonna b most strangest love story of d most strangest MayUr...
loved it lodsss...
do continue soon...
love u sis...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
He he he Nupur "ajeeb" in saree... He doesn't want to use the word beautiful...
Loved it 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update ridi.,
loved it...
shaadi me khaana khaane gaye dono.lolzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago

lovely... update...

WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY DIWALI
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Posted: 13 years ago
lol...loved da update
ajib si saree ajib si nupur lol
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Posted: 13 years ago

wo Nupur hey koyi tandoori chicken nehi

ur this dialogue craked me yaar…to good

it was a wonderful update..

bechari magie…kitni kahay gay….

Hmm so kcuh kuch hota hai..

But ya ii agree with u evne I donot want it to be conventional eyelock tyoe love story…pls go like this

Its going so masti filled

Wah wah kiya consolation tha mayank ka…

Amazing update ridi…

PS: ek cheez donot mind..assa nhi hota acha hota hai..i know tu bengli hai islayn asa bolti hai…

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Posted: 13 years ago
hilarious update dear.
mayur r total hatke...n their bai was also hatke ...LOL
they were still eating maggie.
poor souls...LOL
so, mayur went to a marriage just for food ...OMG!!!! hilarious
i was ROFLing when mayank compared nupur with tanduri chicken...ye nupur hai koi tanduri chicken nahi ...ROFL ROFL
so nupur ko sareee me dekh kar mayank ko kuch kuch hota hai ...nice
waiting for weird loved story.
continue soon
thanks for the pm.

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