HELP!! Opinion Rqd on Potential Story for Book

"Life is a complicated web of strange emotions and relationships. We try to steal things way from it but actually no one can. Ultimately truth comes and stares in your face. At that stage you realize from that point on there is no looking back. Buying time brings only pain, deferring the inevitable only makes you more miserable."

Plain facts stated on paper... They look simple and straightforward... Someone might say, 'Read it and lead a good life.'... They lie because as humans we do have the power of logic but with that we have the habit to err as well... I erred by wanting what I could not have... And that's where all the trouble started...

Please let me know whether it sounds interesting to you. After reading this would you read the coming chapters. I am relying on your expertise and know that I wont be disappointed. Waiting for your responses.