MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140.

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Ally

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Posted: 14 years ago

#751

part 5 awww sope Nupz bothered when Mayu takezz cigarretez n sleeping pilllz n she even asked him dat n den da flashback !!😭 I waz about to cry 4 a sec sachi mein itz soo touching na u wrote it beautifully when Kanchi left him, he waz lonely n started smoking n when she came back she waz mad seeing him smoking, n den he sed he really lovez her n he wont ever smoke as long as shezz alwayzz with him !!
now she no longer with him, n he smoking 😭

n den Mayurzzz trying to get along with kidzz

Nupz drawing Rahul amazed seeing her artzz

n he kinda likez her better now !!
n Mayu telling Pranav dat he should go to skool

loved reading diz part na

kant wait to read more!

-Linu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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the best part. I love it. I hope more romantic parts to come. they are made for each other. I hope nupur accepts mayank fully, they confess their love

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Ally

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Posted: 14 years ago

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part 6
awww I feeling soo sad na

when kidzz talking about their parentzz

n Rahulzz like I love my mommy, she waz amazingg, n he haz a pic of her

n Praniv saying he too have picture of his daddy

n Nupz crying in corner😭

but Mayu there to help her feel better na !!
sachi mein I love Mayu too much !!!

sope Nupz made cake 4 kidzz, n made Mayu taste it,

n den he asked her if she tasted it, n she thought it waz horrible den tasted it, n den he told her she waz good cook

n later on Nupz decided to hide Mayu'zz pillzz

n he waz mad finding his sleeping pillz n he found out it waz Nupz who hide it, n he waz mad

n she begged him to sleep without it for one night n see...

n he listened to her 😳

I sachi mein kant wait to read next part sis

love ya 🤗

-Linu

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Ally

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Posted: 14 years ago

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reserved !! em gonna catch up with diz FF, no matter wat 😆 em ziddhi person 🤣, promise will continue reading after take little nap, my eyezz hurting sitting online for long time !! 😆

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Pradnya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#755

Part 16

Magician I m completely in aww of your writing ... fabulous update

The way your described Nupur, I can imagine her, looking like princess

She descended down from stairs all nervous and blushing and kids complemented her saying HOT and got scolded from her.

Its not easy to forget past and move on and I was expecting this past will peep in present but they will sort out that sure.

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Pradnya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 17

I am speechless after reading this update...BEAUTIFUL !!!!

I am running short of words to describe how beautiful update

Loved Mayank in this update, nupur fears can be understood but the way mayank explained her each and every line ….. just perfect

Kinza you are an amazing writer one of best and my favourite. jitni tareef karoon utni kam hai

God bless you

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Ally

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Posted: 14 years ago

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part seite !! awww in da night Nupur stroking hiz head n he couldn't go to sleep correctly but Nupz didnt give it to him n den next moring they were choo close 2 each other☺️waz blushing reading it na !
🤣 Rahul coloring in Mayu'z office paperzz 🤣 n hiz punishment waz adding mathzz paper twice 🤣 awww it waz choo cute da way Nupz offered him ice cream with spagatti 🤣

n den in da night, Pranuv n Rahul came to their room n asked them that dey wanted to share room together becuzz they want to talk with each other in the night

n den they sed yes, n den Nupz went to his room to find picture of Kanchi

n Mayu waz searching 4 his sleeping pills in Nupz cupboard

instead he found picture of Nitesh

awww kant wait to read what will happen next na

aamazizzzng part sis

love-d it !!!🤗

-Linu

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Ally

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Posted: 14 years ago

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part 8 awww this part waz shooo cute sachi mein sope Nupur went in the balcony n then it waz cold n den she waz shivering n she didn't wake up when Mayu tried to wake her up in the morning n then he took her to hospital n awww he carezz for her soo much n even the kidzz they were sad becuzz Nupur waz not home n den the last linez when Mayu iz like
take care Nupur

u r importanttt

OMGGG I loved thz part to core!!!! 😍

-Linu

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