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Posted: 14 years ago

Hai sana, as i promised i am back to comment from prt 6. i just luvd it to the core. it was awesome . i just luv the prt that ridz doesnt need any ones help rather than that of armaan . superbly written. and when keerti announced armaan is joining once again the thing ridz felt was superbly written

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey..!! Firstly, Belated happy birthday..!! Couldnt wish you on ur bday so thought of doing it today itself..!! better late than never..😉😉
Now let me come to the part..
One words came into my mind while reading that part was, BEAUTIFUL..!!!! It was lovely..!! Poor armaan just becoz of his one mistake has to suffer sooo much..!!! I feel sad how he still feels guilty of one mistake which he did unknowingly..!! But love the care anjie has for ridzi.. Its sooo sweet..!! Thouh she is not ready to listen to ridz much, its still really nice to see how much she cares for her li'l sis..!!😊😊
Thank god anjie is ready to speak to amy once..!! N im sure, amy's charm will work perfectly with Anjie too just the way it works on the rest..!!😊😊
Continue sooon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hii everyone..!!!

I'll try updating Who Knew today..and LOOC tomorrow..!!! =D
I just want to say MEGA BIG Thank you to Everyone, late or not, who wished me for my birthday!! You guys honestly made my day..!! I mean, signing in on regular intervals and seeing the hordes of wishes REALLLYYY brought a huge smile on my face..!! Thank you LOADZZ!! I can't say indiviudal Thank you to everyone, because, hah, that would mean later updates for you guys which I don't want either! Thank you so much all of you! You made my day extra special =)
Love you all lotts,
xxx
Sanaa
P.S - There are a couple of reserves..please do edit them before I post the next chapter..😊 if you've commented further along and forgotten about it..then no stress..I'm quite like that myself..😃😆
Edited by Sanaa629 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
*EDITED*

Just saw your post up there ^^ 😆

I love you 🤣

xoxo
Aanya
Edited by Aanya_taanu4evr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b

Nicely written!

I thought Anji's part was very logical and well written. As an elder sister, her concern is perfectly legitimate. After 2 months of thinking that maybe the decision to separate was mutual, she has just disovered that Armaan was responsible for the break-up and for what a horrific reason! 😲 Frankly if I were in her place, I wouldn't trust Armaan with a barge pole! 😒
I think, as a concerned sister, she is right in being worried about how Armaan would hold up in the long run, esp when he seems to have a history of hurting Ridhima, but the thing is that everyone has to live their own lives, and learn through their own experiences. So no matter how much she wants to protect Ridhima she needs to respect Ridhima's decisions and let her make her own choices and live with the consequences. 😔
I have a coupel of freinds who have had love marriages - the ride is not all smooth. There are rocky patches incl an instance of the guy cheating, but we women are strange - its either an unwillingness to give up, or immense emotional commitment or maybe the sheer fear of being alone (I suspect a large dose of this one) that drives us to doggedly hold on on and try and make a relationship work.
I dunno if I was in Ridhima's place what would I have done? ? I dunno if its because she is very much in love with Armaan or a habbit that she cant do without, or a fear of not being able to love someone again, or the memories of the time that they had together - but thats not important. If he makes her happy now and she is willing to take her chances, they are hers to take. The only thing she needs to remember is that people's basic nature does not ever change. So this will not be the last time that Armaan will hurt her - its just whether she is strong enough to weather those instances and still continue to love him!
Maybe in the patches that he is normal 😛 the love and care that he obviously has for her would be more than enough to see her through the bad times.. and lets face it - all relationships go through rough times! Thats what makes the good times even better 😉

I was waiting for you comment..!!! Didn't realize it would be this big though..!!! 😃
Yeah, that's what I thought..Riddhima had to fight for her love and know that she would have to face the consequences if anything worse happens. I mean, heyy, we're humans..that's how we learn..😆
I personally have not been in relationships..(heck I just turned 18..I wouldn't know) but then I always knew that when it came to love and stuff, women in general..(I mean you always get the rebellious types too) are very emotionally attatched to the person they love. So emotionally attatched that they sometimes give themselves fake hope of a person really loving them. I agree with what you said but I also think emotional commitment holds a large place too because in my opinion, and from what I've seen, women are the stronger ones in a relationship. If they really had to let go, they would and no matter how much it hurts they wouldn't look back - BTW that's talking from visual experience..😆
Since I've put myself in RIddhima's shoes quite often that would be how i react..now call me an emotional fool..😆 but yeah..if he was worth it I'd do everything to save the realtionship..
Hmmm..people's basic nature maybe doesn't change but their attitude towards things certainly do..😃 so if Armaan continued to hurt her..(even though I'm the one writing the story..😆 - As you see I take my characters very realistically..) I would start hating him to the core..!! So I guess you can expect him to be normal most of the times now if not all the time..!! 😆
Thanks Loadz..!! And for the birthday wishes too..!! 😊
Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zephyrr

Thank you so much for all the PMs Sanaa.. I get them regularly.. But I'm sorry I just couldn't keep up with the flood of updates that came from you over the last month.. I shall catch up with your story and leave my comments when I do.. Very impressed with the speed of updating though I cant read all of it.. I'm out of that habit now.. Writing wise and reading wise.. LOL!! Will drop in soon.. You keep up the good work! 👍🏼


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I just realized everyone is wishing you a Happy Birthday! Is it today? Even if I'm late..
Happy Birthday!! 🤗 I hope you have/had a wonderful day.. And have a wonderful year too.. 😊

Hahaha...my updates are gonna be less regular as I'm on two fanfictions..and the previous chapters..sans chp 11..were all already written up..and just needed editing..!! Please do catch up when you can..your opinions would mean a lot to me.😊
Thanks sooo much for your wishes..!!! 😃🤗
Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: niknavyu

hi sanaa

first of all wish u many happy returns of the day,have a nice day,lol i cant say that thogh because the day is almost done,atleast in india
now coming to ur update its too good dear,nikki and sid are such a big mouth yaar,anjali ko sab pata chal gaya and now she doesnt trust armaan at all,anyways u have shown anjalis concern as a sister very well,reading the talk between anji and ridzi i had tears in my eyes and my sister caught me crying now she is surely going to tease me atleast till she forgets about it,but main kya kar sakti hoon any senti person would cry reading it afterall u have written it so well.
first when i read that armaan heard eveything i was like shit now he is again goin to leave ridzi,but then by reading further i felt that maybe he wouldnt,and finally they have poured out their feelings to each other and that all part was very well written and ouch forgot to tell u that armaan ka ouch wala part was to good hehee..and i am waiting for the convo between armaan and anji
love
nikki

Awhh..Thank loadzz..!!! Hahahahaha..That's what sisters are for..!! teasing and annoying till you go away from them (or vice versa) and you miss them like CRAZIII!!! 😆
At first..I thought to make Armaan run away from the room as well instead of defend Riddhima..but then I thought..well he's promised to be by her side..so he has to keep that promise no matter how he feels..!! 😕 So i had him go and defend Riddhima there..!!
Thanks sooo much once again..!!!
love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Hahaha...my updates are gonna be less regular as I'm on two fanfictions..and the previous chapters..sans chp 11..were all already written up..and just needed editing..!! Please do catch up when you can..your opinions would mean a lot to me.😊
Thanks sooo much for your wishes..!!! 😃🤗
Love,
Sanaa


Sometimes I wish your FF was a movie so I wouldn't have to wait so much to see how it ends! I'm sure you ain't going to update, you've become way too lazy since your exams got over! Hmph!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Sometimes I wish your FF was a movie so I wouldn't have to wait so much to see how it ends! I'm sure you ain't going to update, you've become way too lazy since your exams got over! Hmph!


Haha I TOTALLY agree! 😆

Summers mein toh I was expecting loads of updates because umm just in case you haven't noticed yet, your exams are OVER :P

Oh well, at least you're updating Who Knew! Update sooon or Imma get real angry.
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Okay I'm not gonna get angry, I'm in too much of a good mood...because school was freakin' amazing 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

Hey Sanaa 🤗 🤗 🤗

Happy Bday Once Again ! Hope it was a rocking day today =D

I finally completed reading all the missed out chapters including the latest one. And boy, m i speechless?!!! The journey of 2 months and the aftermath has been really worth watching. AR seem to have come a long way ..

From the time, Armaan broke off everything and spoilt his life with his own hands to now, things have taken a turn for them , ofcourse for good ! It seems their relation has all of a sudden grown up more , matured and has risen to a new level all together. Its a blissful feeling to see them back together but whats more attractive and awe-ing factor is, that they seem to have developed a bond which is much more stronger than before. The way they have been trying to pour out their feelings since the confession (or should i say after the convo with Vidya aunty) seems so imperfectly perfect. Though the idea of giving Ridz's diary to Armaan wasn't like an acceptable act (in the beginning... as ofcourse, its embarrassing to encroach on such personal stuff ) but somehow it feels so apt. It was a connection to Ridz's feelings which were not accessible to Armaan at that point of time. He was so into his act of staying-away-from-her-to-not-hurt-her again that somewhere he was just overlooking the strong urge and desire she had for him. Had it not been her diary, he would not know so soon what she felt in his absence. Seems like everything around them coupled together finally led them pour out their heart and confess to each other - the awaited moment.

Confession - was beautiful , straight from the heart , mushy and touching. Their tears of happiness were infectious. They cried. I cried. Out of happiness. They were together. AR back. Mr Superkool and Miss Basket back to themselves. It felt awesome. Lonavala Trip turned out to be a relief finally.

And now, m loving this whole of lovey-dovey AR romance even with its including emotional draining stuff like the Anji's one. Anjali seems to be no where wrong as such. She is right at her point. 3 times! Its not a Joke !! She is bound to feel that way being an amazing sis , that she is. But then I feel she failed to notice where Ridz's happiness lies. Right now, she's thinking that Ridz is acting stubborn but does she realize that she's fighting to save her life! Its NO life without Armaan for her, right? Anjali needs to act sensible right now and not act impulsive. What she did seemed impulsive and an unthoughtful act. And moreover, she had even read Ridz's diary na so shouldn't she understand what Armaan has given her? Its certainly NOT one-sided thing. Seems like her sisterly-love took over her sensibility. Hope Atul helps here.

As for the convo in the basement, that was one of the best ever. IT is the one that makes me realize that AR have surely come a long way in their relationship. I was kinda speechless after it. Just admiring them and smiling like fools. lol
It took my heart away. And, I fell in love with AR all over again !

Cant wait to read more. Update !!!

Btw, I really hope the length of this comment compensates atleast a bit for not commenting since soo long. Well yeah, dont evn ask me at all what i have written above (
i mean this Mahabharat .. ) in case it doesnt make sense .. M too sleepy to think anything properly right now 😆 All i hope is i dont mess you up with it .. lol

Anyways, m off now. Thanks for all your pms. =D

Love
Vini

P.S: Aanya and Shru , thanks to you guys ..its coz of you we all know its her bday today!! 😃

P.S.S: Sanaa! Can we expect some bday treat in the form of early update now? *looks hopefully*

Thank you sooo much..!!!
That was what Iw anted to show..!! I"m sooo glad you mentioned it..!!! 😊 Coz by far you're the only one who has..!!! 😃 Hahaha..yeah..giving the diary bit was not suitable but I couldn't think of any other way that Armaan would know the Riddhima was incomplete without him..!! So even though he denied it..Anjy forcefully gave it to him..so blame Anjy..!! 😉
Yeah..I purposley got ehr to do that..coz she's the very dominant bossy sort of person..VERYYY protective of her smaller sis..and always has been..but don't worry..she'll realize soon enuf..!! 😊 And yupp she has read RIdz's diary..but I think because she loves her sister soo much..and has always protected her..she over looked all of that..!!
And don't worry.ur comment put a huge smile on my face..!! It really was lengthy and full of juicy details that I love..!! And as for the birthday treat..!! Chapter 11 was the birthday treat...!!! 😆 I updated on my birthday..!! I'll try writing down chapter 12 tomorrow..I'm not guaranteeing to complete it..but atleast an installemnt..!!😊
Thanks laodz once again..!!
Love,
Sanaa

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