Life Out Of Control #2 - Page 44

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGee you're reaching 50 Pages 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part...finally they confessed again ...hope nthng goes wrng this time...lovveeed it...
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Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

OMGee you're reaching 50 Pages 🤗


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WOW!! I am aren't I?? and that too in 4 or 5 updates..??!! 😃😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
wat an awsm confession...
wow...loved it to the core...
ridz was soo embarrassed abt her diary...😆
plzzz update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Hahahahaha..Riddhima is a replica of me..so her diary would be the way I'd react to such situations..though admittedly..I don't have a diary..but I'm starting to keep one..esp now that I'm turning 18.!! Everytym i used to havea diary it always used to get invaded thanks to my bro and sis..!! 😭😆 But none are around now..so fingers crossed this one won't be peeked into..!! lolxx
Take care with you back.!! And no problem about the late comment..At least u commented..I wondering where you were..! When are you updating "you broke my heart" btw?? I'm waiting for soo longg..!!!😊

woho me 2 turning 18:)) yeah I can understand what u mean I also want to start a diary, but then I don't want anybody to read it...so never gor longet than the first page.
tnx you I just hope it gets better soon and that is also one of the reasons that I haven't written any updates on my ff.
PS: I will read ch9 and then comment:)
take care
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Yepp that too in 4-5 updates! AWESOMEEE 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
saana!!! am sooo sorry for the late comment...i ws outta town...but awesome part...such a heartfelt confession...i ws glued to the screeen while reading it...it ws so cute!! *sigh* i ws actually starting to get irritated with these two for not telling each other bout their feelings and this came at the perfect time 😛 update soon...!:D
cheers!
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg yayy i loved it!!
im so happy dere back!!
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wohooo...
yaaay...dey confesssed...looobed it...
lobed da way armaan told about the diary and riddhima's reaction...
looobed it cmpltly...
lobe u 4 dis...
thx alooot...
thx 4 da pm n sorry 4 l8 cmnt...ws nt feelng well...
AMOON

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sanaa,sorry details batana hai to mai hindi mein comments deti hun,its easy for me ...pahli baat hai mai late hun but mai abhi ghar se bahar hun to time nikalna muskil ho jata hai. and tumhare ff padhne mein mujhe thora jyada time lagta hai...mai kisi bhi ff mein agar khud ko kho deti hun to wo tumhara ff hai...isliye english meaning ke liye google translate use karna parta hai...but i love it...

actually tum jab ff likhti ho,i think completely khud ko usme duba(sink) deti ho,burna itni achchi ff likha hi nahi ja sakta.mano koi dhaga (thread )ho,jo kahin bhi bilkul loose nahi hai,tuti hui nahi hai...ek line si bani hui chalti ja rahi hai...

riddhima aur arman ka bus journey ke scene,arman ka riddhima ko apna ahsaas dilana...mental support banakar rakhna..its amazing!

riddhima aur arman ka confess,har ek baat ko,misunderstanding ko dheere dheere clear karna,ek dusre ko unki jarurat ko batana..really nice!...

aur riddhima ki diary padhne se riddhima ka fake and sweet anger..actually aisa hi hota hai,hum jo apno se kah nahi pate or apna dard,khushi sab diary mein share karte hain aur wo koi apna padh le to aisa hi mahsoos hota hai...
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saare ff mein mujhe as riddhima jenny yaad aati rahi but last mein confess mein meri angel shilpa,unka confess scene bahut yaad aaya...loved the whole part...and love u too...

punam

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