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Yay! I'm first! It's been so long 😳This comment will be edited when the Chapter's done 😆xoxoAanya*EDITED*Finally, this part is being graced with my noble presence...LMFAO 🤣So I've got time today and you're gonna get to read one of my LONG comments! Say yay! :P <3"Shit I'm late!!" Riddhma muttered to herself as she hurried along the corridor, at 9.00am sharp.
"Sirf teen din huwe hai, and already late? Keerti aaj pakka tera khoon pee legi!" Armaan was mumbling to himself as he rushed into the hospital himself.Bahahaha this made me laugh out loud! Seriously! They're so in sync...even when they're not together! Which they need to do like, RIGHT NOW 😆They both ran towards the nurse station and collided with each other, to everyone's surprise.
"Ouch!!" Dekh ke nahin chal sakte kya?" Riddhima snapped, while Armaan replied in the same tone,
"Agar tu dekh ke chal rahi thi toh phir hum takraaye kyun?" Both rubbed their heads in frustration, before noticing the environment around them. Muskaan and Rahul were giggling at them openly, while Nikki was trying to subside her laughter along with Abhi. Anjali, however, just shook her head at them while Atul and Sid looked on, amused. However one person was not amused at all. With her eyebrows raised up, and a deadly look on her face, she glared at the watch, as though cursing it because it didn't go any faster.
"Just on time Doctors.." she stated. "Next time, I expect more mature behaviour. And, if you had been here 5 minutes earlier, this might not have happened."
"Sorry ma'am." They both mumbled with their heads down.Eeep! I loooveeed this! I could totally see a glimpse of the old AR <3 I miss them SO much! The fighting, the masti, their "moments", EVERYTHING <3 Seriously! This was so DMG and so Ar-ish I adored it! I've always loved their running into each other and then the snappy comebacks :D And sometimes we're even treated to an eye-lock, something that KaJen did the best, I think! [No offence to any fans of KaSu and KaSh! God, what has the world come to? Har comment mein likhna padta hai - "No offence" 😆] And Keerti! Haha she was so scary mahnn! Like her eyes and all...stuff of the nightmares, I tell you 🤣"Hold on..Punjab ki express! Itni jaldi kyun hai?" Armaan asked, making Muskaan skid on the floor.
"Jaldi nahin hai..sirf Ridzy ko kehna hai that she's going to Lonavla instead of me tomorrow..then I have duty in the general ward with Rahul.." She closed her eyes, putting her tongue between her teeth. "Kaisi garbar kardi.." she muttered to herself.
"Ohhh..now we see." Sid replied in a teasing tone. "Yaar, you're already married! Abh toh ek doosre se chipakna band karo!" Muskaan felt her cheeks turn hotter by the second.
"Sid, agar ek doosre se chipkenge nahin, toh tujhse chipkenge kya?" Armaan replied with a wink to Muskaan. If possible, Muskaan felt her self blush harder! Was everyone out to embarrass her today or something?
"Aap dono.. Jao bahar mein. Baad mein dekhlungi!" she shouted between an embarrassed and an angry tone.
"Oyy..Humme dekhegi toh Rahul humme maar daalega!" Armaan shouted back for the whole hospital to hear, while Muskaan's mouth dropped low and she literally ran further away from their sight and their guffawing laughter!Bahahahaha I freakin' loved this! Haha un dono ne toh Muskaan ki laga di 😆Armaan frowned as soon as Sid left. So Basket was going to Lonavla tomorrow with Sid? Sighing, he looked up trying to control his conflicting emotions. Was Sid actually good for her? But he was sure she loved him and Sid.Okay, SERIOUSLY???? Like HOW, just HOW can he be so darn thick! I mean, she loves him dude! It's for the whole WORLD to see :P Armaan is plain dumb right now :| But he's Armaan, can't stay gussa with him! The Armaan-obsessed person in me doesn't let me 😆She wanted to hide herself in someone's arms and feel their warmth embrace her. That would be the best cure for her headache. Well, not Anyone's arms. She'd probably run a mile if Jiggy offered to do that! Probably Armaan. Only Armaan, she thought to herself.Huh. She's on the same track as him. Plain DUMB. But I love them just the same <3 :D"What Armaan?! Maine kahaa na I'm fine! Just leave me alone! Like you did a few months back! Where was all that care then? All for Sasha? Now she's not here, you choose to care for me? I don't need your sympathy!"
Shocked wasn't even the word for what Armaan was going through, after that short, sharp, cutting speech, that directly wounded his heart and shred it into tiny pieces. Her eyes widened as she saw the hurt she had put him through. How could she throw all her anger for herself at him? His blue eyes dampened right in front of her, as she observed his face drop. Her mouth opened of its own accord, but words failed to come out. He just continued staring at her, with a pained expression, while she felt her guts squelch within her.
"I'm sorry.." he whispered, his voice breaking. Looking down, he turned and left the canteen, leaving her frozen frame there, staring at his back.
She was still hurting! He thought to himself. She was still hurting a lot! Unknowingly, he had scarred her so much, that even if he wanted to, he wouldn't be able to refill the wounds that he'd given her! Maybe ever! He shut his eyes as he headed for the fire escape. How could he ever forgive himself? Not believing her was like blasphemy! It made his insides churn with self hatred. Why did she still love him so much? Even after the hurt? Her actions suggested all that very blatantly. But did he really deserve her? Like a nightmare, the question continued to hover over him. He could probably still tell her he loved her and she would come back to him. He needed her so much to live freely again! But why should he take advantage of her love like that for selfish reasons? He didn't deserve to live freely did he?Thank God I know what's gonna happen now, warna I'm ready to murder AR! [Okay, not really, love 'em too much to do that 😆] But they're SO stupid! Just confess already :| Okay, I'm being a little unfair here, what they've gone through is tough to forget, but see, I'm such a HUGE LOOC fan, I hate seeing AR apart </3 LMAO 🤣"She forgot it at home and I brought it to the hospital to give it back to her. But now, I'm sure someone else needs it more than she does!" Anjali got up and without a second glance, or hearing Armaan's protests, left the place.Muahh :* I loveee Anjy! She's the best! FINALLY, she made him realize it. God bless her, really 😆20th May 2010
He's back!!! Can you believe it? Armaan Mallik! Ufff..And he has not changed at all! Stupid, idiot, moron, jerk! And Keerti should go die as well! Hitler kahinki! She gave me duty with him for the rest of the week! And he's irritating me as though there's no tomorrow! Firstly, he followed me around the hospital..Can't he get it when he's not wanted?! Saala gadha!! What does he want?? Mann karta mere sandwich ke saath usse bhi kha loon! And he called me Jangli Billy! As though basket wasn't enough of a nickname at college! Why did he come back? Didn't the US suit him? It would have, after all that was all he was looking for wasn't he? Girls to time pass with. Lekin pyaar? Not even close! And to think there was a time I thought I was in love with him! Ewww'what did I see in him then? I hope if anything, that I can get along with him. Else how the hell am I supposed to spend the whole year of internship with him?LMFAO :D I loved this! Riddhima cursing him like that! I love it when girls curse boys! I mean, when they deserve it of course 🤣 She's just adorable with this entry in her diary <3Armaan I still love you. And I always will. Stupid, sad, soppy? Maybe. But I've given up trying to hide it from myself. The least I can do is face it myself. I just feel so..alone these days! It's not the same without him. I miss everything about him! His secretive winks across our lockers, his mischievous smile, him pulling me into random empty cabins or the fire escape! I miss everything about him! But does he even care? New Year and he hasn't even called! Arghh..he can be so infuriating! If he was in front of me, I would definitely wring his neck, shout at him, throw him the dustbin or better yet the gutter, slap him a good few times, and if he still doesn't get it bake his head in the oven! But if he was here, he wouldn't need to call would he? We'd be spending New Year the way I imagined us to be. Together. Maybe, we just weren't meant to be. Happy New Year Armaan!Awww this almost made me cry :| ALMOST. I love the way you've written this <3 All the feelings are perfectly expressed :) <3 Beautiful, Sanaa!Armaan gave her her ticket, and they both climbed onto the vehicle, their destination and their journey the same, but their seats apart. Riddhima sighed. Yupp, that was probably the story of her life now.I loved this last bit <3 Seriously! It's casually written, but it holds a lot of meaning!FINALLY I'm done quoting <3 I've given such a long comment after AGES! :DAnd YAYY! They've started for Lonavala! OMGee I'm SOOO happy! 🤗 I can't WAIT for the next part <3I freakin' love you for writing this FF, for making it so darn good and for...ermm everything 😆xoxoAanya
The first scene you quoted..I put it in because I missed DMG sooo much as well..!! The old..happy go lucky days..before the whole problem called Sid ..(no offence guys..) jaane kahan se tapak pada..!! Yeah..Kajen eye-locks in my opinion were the best as both have beautiful, expressive eyes. As for Keerti, do you know her signature music in DMG?? I was just imagining that when I was re-reading..!! LOL!!! Hilarious now I come back to it..!! But even the signature music has you thinking.."eeekkss..I'm so dead now.." lolx..!!
Haww..bechara Armaan..he's a very sweet..awesome guy..!!😆 Why doesn't anyone understand the emotional turmoil he's going through..He's still in that guilt feeling..but realized he loves her..and realized she loves him..but maybe she might learn to love Sid if he had stayed away..so basically him coming back just made it worse for Riddhima..(MAYYBE)
As for Riddhima..she's a girl..she doesn't take a first step..and even if she did..she knows Armaan's in that guilt mode and he might refuse to accept her again..and as much as she loves him she doesn't want that feeling of being rejected again..coz it'll break her apart..and she's not sure how to help him get over that guilt trip of his..because frankly, she herself still needs to completley let go of all that happened...which will happen when they talk it all out..😆 (I gave away some parts of the future chapters..)
Heehee..you love Anjy now..everyone does..!! 😆
I think the first segment of the diary was the best too..!! and the next one you quoted..thank youu..😊 I didn't think it was all that..but if you say it was..😃😃
Mercii beaucoup!!! I'm tonnes flushed and feeling all good about myself now..Next chapter installment will be up in like half an hour..one hour?? 😕
Love,
Sanaa
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